SaJan FF Together Forever!Promo page 29!!! Do read - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
hey .. that was an awesome part as per usual .. he finally called her chashmish but she fainted .. hope this jogs her memory a little =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG i just finished reading all the parts! i have no words to describe how much i loved it!!! You wrote all the parts simply brilliantly! I loved the connection between Samrat and Gunjan-the way you describe is just so sweet...SaJan:Together Forever ofcourse..!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNN.CAN'T WAIT.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi guys! Here's the next part updated! I really hope u guys like it!! And thx once again for commenting!! I love to read all of ur comments!

Gunjan's POV:

Pain. An unimaginable wave washed over me. My head was pounding violently. I was drowning in a sea of darkness. I had lost all of my sensation. I couldn't feel anything. All I knew at the time was that I shouldn't be experiencing this pain. It wasn't normal. I tried to speak. My voice wasn't working. It hurt. Everything hurt. I tried to break free of the darkness. I struggled. I tried to push my way through. To try to open my eyes. It was all in vain. My eyes felt heavy. I wasn't in control of myself any longer. I was tired. Tired of trying. Tired of life. Tired of everything. I just wanted to…sleep. To sleep…forever. Hmmm. Dying…? It didn't seem so bad. It didn't seem so hard! Living seemed more difficult. The funny thing was…that I wasn't afraid of death. I relaxed. My breathing was slower. It was less of a struggle. Was this how it felt? To…to die? Yes…yes…I needed to sleep. I wanted to sleep. Suddenly, I felt some force pulling me. Warm hands touching me. Samrat? Yes. It was him no doubt. How did I know? I knew his touch. Something inside of me knew it. I felt a drop of water land on my hand. Tears. Samrat's tears. My heart started beating faster. It hurt. Not the pain this time. What was that pain compared to that of being the reason for Samrat's tears?? Nothing. Just then, I knew… I knew that I had to live…for him. I had to keep breathing. Keep fighting…for Samrat. I pushed my way through the darkness. I moved my hand, and clutched his hand. Clutched it as tightly as I could possibly manage. I wanted him. I needed him.

:::::SAMRAT'S POV:::::

I was holding her hand tightly. I couldn't let anything happen to my Chashmish. If something happened to her… . I didn't even want to think of that possibility. I was unable to believe it. Once again, because of my extreme stupidity, Gunjan was laying on the hospital bed. I was ready to kill myself. I didn't mind. A life without Gunjan wasn't worth living. That much I knew. I brought her hand to my lips and kissed it.

'Please Chashmish! Mere paas waapis aa jao! Main tumhaare bigair nahi jee sakta. Tum tho jaanti ho na?'

I didn't stop the tears that forced their way out.

'Mujhe pata hai Chashmish…ke main tumhe bilkul nahi deserve karta. Par please mujhe iss tarha saza mat dena. Plz Chashmish! I know I deserve everything that I get…but u? U don't deserve half of what ur getting. Main Tumhe aise nahi dekh sakta!'

I cried so hard that my eyes had become red and swollen. A tear landed on Gunjan's arm. Suddenly, I felt her hand tightly grasp mine. She was wincing, like she was in so much pain! I grabbed her hand equally tightly. I looked up.

'Thx dude! Meri Chashmish ko lautaane ke liye. Love u god!'

I smiled. What had I done to deserve an angel like Gunjan? I leaned over and hugged her tightly. It felt good to have her wrapped in my arms again. I buried my face in her hair. I wished that I could hold her in my arms forever… , I wished life was so easy.

But life wasn't a fairytale. And my life? Would probably never be a fairytale. I closed my eyes and lived the moment. I would probably never get to relive it again.

End.

Well, that was the update guys! I hope u enjoyed it! If u did, plz press the 'like' button! Thx a bunch and I loved all ur comments! Thnank u once again for reading my FF!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
Great Update
i hope Gunjan gets her memory back
its sad to see both of them without each other =(
PLZZZ CONTINUE SOON!!!
THANKS for the PM!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
heyy!!
i knew you wouldn't disappoint me...
i loved the part!!
especially the gunjan part..
how she wanted to die.. but then thought of samrat.. nd got the urge to live..
it was very well written.. and beautifully described!!
next update jaldii!!!
for meee =D
awsum part..
keep it up !!
love,
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
awesomeeeeee update..
it ws mindblowing..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
AWESOMEEEEE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ur update was just WOW
XD
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
wow great update ;D
continue soon and thanx for the PM

Ravie.x ;D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
Thanx for such an awesome update !! 😳

If possible, add up more twists and turns..create a completely romantic situation, a situation where Samrat makes Gunjan feel that she is the only girl for him !! And Gunjan falls for Samrat all over again.. 😳

Update soooooooooooooooon !! 😆

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