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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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UPDATE YR
i loved it
plese cont soon aur tu gunjan ki memory kyun nai wapis larahi, mein bohot gussa 😡 hon tujhse, jaldie se gunjan ki memory wapis la
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
nice update......pls gunjan get ur memory bac yaar!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
omgggggggggggg awesome and fabulassssssssssssssss update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
wow yaar what an emotional update loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Wow! That was a very intense part! Liked it loads tho! =D Continue soon! See u!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Lovely Part!👏👏 Please Please continue soon and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank u so much guys for replying!! Here's the next part!! I hope u enjoy it!!

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Gunjan's POV:

A bright light flashed into my eyes. I winced and struggled to see. Slowly, I opened my eyes. Samrat. He was staring at me, sobbing.

'Gunjan! Tum theek ho!'

He wiped his tears. Before I knew it, he was wrapped in my arms, hugging me tightly.
I smiled and hugged him back. A sudden electricity ran through us. I shivered and grabbe on to him tighter. He didn't flinch. I inhaled his smell. It was heavenly. I loved every bit of him. I pushed my face into his chest. I felt a tear land on my head. I peered into his face. There was sheer happiness. My eyes were glued to his. they were so beautiful. Enchanting. I sighed in content. He smiled. Without realizing it, I ran my finger down his cheek. He didn't seem to mind. I moved my finger over to his lips. My finger paused there. I had no intention of moving it. Samrat slowly touched my hand. He held on to it tightly. We didn't know how long we were staring at each other.

'Samrat...? Tum...rahe ho?'

I asked.

I wiped away his tears.

'pata hai maa kya kehti thi?'

I paused.

'woh kehti thi ke aansoon buhot keemti hota hain. Kamse kam mere upar tho Inhe waste mat karo. I'm not worth it Samrat.'

He lifted my chin up.

'gunjan. Main tumhe apni zindagi bhi de Sakta hoon... Tho yeh aansoo kya cheez? Tumhe khud nahi pata ke tum mereliye kya ho.'

'tho phir batao na?'

I asked. I needed to know what Samrat felt for me. Did he feel the same way that I did?

He looked uncomfortable with the way the discussion was heading.

'Woh...'

'Rukh kyun gayye? Bolo na?'

I urged. He didn't respond.

'gunjan. Tumhaari tabyat poori tarha theek nahi hui hai. Tum araam karo'

End ( for now) I'll edit later on! Gtg!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
wowwwww....
it ws grr8888888...
awesomeeeeee...
luved it to d core...
pllzzzzzzz continue soon..

love
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
I was waiting for your PM..and so thought of checking the SS..
No PM..

Update soon..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Hi guys! I'm so so sorry that I didn't PM u!! Actually, I have exams going on, so I was lucky to have even written that small update! So plz bare with me!!! I may not PM even for the next wk. But plz do check on the FF nowadays!! Thx!!

Here's another update!!

Pl do read, comment and enjoy! And don't forget to press the like button if u enjoyed the update!!

'Samrat...meri tabyat bilkul theek hai. Tum batao! Tum kya kehe rahe the?'

Samrat looked uncomfortable everytime I brought the topic up. I sighed and squeezed his hand.

'Samrat…mujhe nahi bataoge?'

I held his hand, my thoughts wandering. Wouldn't it be nice if we could be together forever? Samrat and I…together forever…I liked it…a lot! But would Samrat like it? A smile creased my lips as I ran that though across my head. But…were these strange feelings normal?? Should I be feeling like this? But then again…who said that my life was normal? Who said that I was normal? I had never felt such overwhelming desire for a guy… and that too for a guy I've known all of two days. Nope…that was definitely not normal. Then, I finally realized it. Something was seriously wrong with my brain. How could I think of Samrat as…as…as my boyfriend???! I could feel my face grow hot with embarrassment. What would Samrat think of me if I confessed my feelings to him??! Actually, I knew the answer to that. He'd consider me to be a total lunatic!!! I tried to push those abnormal feelings out of my head and concentrate on what he was saying.

'Gunjan… plz…mujhe abhi kuch mat pooch. Main batane ke liye tayaar nahi hoon.'

I nodded.

'Ok Samrat. Main tumse kuch nahi poochoongi…par agar tumhe koi problem hai tho tum mujhe bataoge na?'

I asked him…feeling slightly upset. He didn't trust me enough to tell me what was bothering him.

Samrat's POV:

My heart felt like a sunken rock at the bottom of a sea. It hurt to see her so worried about me. I hated myself. Because of me, she was getting hurt. I didn't deserve the love that she was giving to me. I wasn't worth it. I cupped her face in my hands.

'Tumhaare sivai mere paas aur kaun hai gunjan? Main tumhe nahi bataonga tho aur kisse bataonga?'

She smiled, looking a little reassured.

'Main abhi sabko bata ke aata hoon ke tum bilkul theek ho.'

I rubbed my hand across her cheek. She immediately closed her eyes and smiled. I gazed at her face. Her sweet eyes…that could never hide her worry… . Her cherry red lips…her soft black hair. I went crazy all over again. I wanted to wrap her in my arms and never let go. Hold her. Support her give her the strength. I wanted us to be together forever. I neared her…my hand caressing her lips. She was more beautiful than I ever remembered. I could feel her nervous breath. I edged closer…so that my lips almost met with her. Should I? Could I?

'Samrat…'

She whispered.

'Shh. Kuch mat bolo.'

I closed the remaining distance around us. It was like I was in a trance. Gunjan was beckoning me…closer…closer. I ran my hand down her arm and touched her hand. A static ran through me. Suddenly, I realized how close we had come. I couldn't believe what I had almost done!! I had nearly kissed her! I stood up, abruptly, knocking the chair over. My hands were shaking. I moved back.

'M-mujhe aisa nahi karma chahiye tha. I'm sorry Gunjan. I'm so sorry.'

I felt dizzy. I walked out of the door, my head spinning.

Gunjan's POV:

My mouth was still open in shock. We had almost kissed!! That meant…hat meant that we both felt the same way about each other. I smiled. This was the best day of my life.

He had said he was sorry…but I wasn't . I wasn't sorry one bit.

End.

Sorry. I know that it was a short part again…but as I said, I have exams… . But thax for reading! Plz do comment and press the like button if u liked the update!!

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