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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: armaankideewani
Great AWESOME part yet again! :D Loved it :D hehe.."Yeh Morena Log Itne Sensitive kyun hote hain?" LOL haha true said :P

Can't wait for the next :D

Thx Sneha! I always luv reading ur comments! Keep reading cause there are a lot more gud parts coming up!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: sana866

omg the last broke me into 10 piceases

awesomeeeee update as usal

Thank u so much Sana! I will update soon so I hope u like the nxt part as well! Try my hardest to make it somewhat gud!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: lucario
Nice parts.....story is going really well....i lost some parts as i was not on forum for some time....and you shifted your ff so didnt got it for some time.....continue soon

Thx lucario!! Ya, my FF shifted so it was a lil confusing at first...but I hope u like it! I'm trying hard to please everyone!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20
awesomeeeeeeee update..
itt ws really fabulous..
luved it to d core..
pllzzzzzzzz continue soon..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

Hey Jyothika! Thx for ur gr8 comments! U know, it's ur guys's comments that keep me writing otherwise I would have abandoned this FF a long time ago! I'm feeling really happy that so many people are liking my work! Will update! Do read and comment on it! Would love it if u did so!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: maisha.hossain7
please continueee

Will continue reall soon Maisha! So plz keep reading, commenting and enjoying!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ---ishita---
awesome part
continue soon

thanx for the pm

Will continue soon ishita! Plz do read and comment on it as well! N' no probs for the PM!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Ravie101
loving the story so far =D but want sajan back together <3

do continue and thanks for the PM
Raviie.x ;D

Thx Ravie for reading and commenting! I really appreciate it! Don't worry! SaJan will be back together soon enough! Until then, plz enjoy some of their cute and romantic scenes! Lol! (I sound like a person on an advertisement!) ANyways, gtg! Will PM u again when the update is done!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: aahana86
hon that was so sweet yet sad in a way aww poor Sammy
pls i dont midn Gunji not regaining her memory but mke her fall 4 Samrat again soon ( i know she's already smitten by him 😳 but again pls more romantic scenes

Hmmm. I'm not sure which track I wanna use yet. Maybe Gunjan will regain her memory...maybe she won't. But there'll be loads more romantic parts! That's a promise that I can make! So do continue to read and comment! Thx a lot aahana! Btw, plz continue ur SS as well! Still eagerly waiting!

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#59

Hi everybody! Finally finished replying to all ur comments! Once again, I'm really thankfull to all of u, for liking my FF and reading it! Here is the next part Updated! Plz do write whether or not u enjoyed it! I'll be waiting! Thx everybody!

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Samrat's POV:

We had reached the library in silence. There wasn't much that we could talk about in the first place.

'Tho...main books lekar aati hoon. Tum ander aoge?'

I laughed in spite of yself.

'Gunjan! Tumhe shayad pata nahi hai par Samrat and books are miles apart. Tum jao main tumse baadme milta hoon. Ok?'

Gunjan smiled at me.

'Ok, Samrat. Bye!'

She was just about to enter the library when Ranvijay apperaed from behind.

'Wow! Samrat, mere jail jaane se yahaan pe buhot kuch badal gayya hai! Not bad!'

He sneered. I subconciously stood in front of Gunjan blocking her from RV's view.

'Tumhe jo kehne hai, jaldi se kaho aur yahan se challe jao.'

Rv let out an irritating laugh that made me want to rip his hair out.

'Woah Samrat! Relax dude!'

He slapped his hand on my shoulder.

'Lagta hai tumhe abhi tak meri baat samajh me nahi ayyi. Main tumhe akhri baar bataata hoon. Rv apne marzi se aata hai aur apni marzi se jaata hai. Got it?'

I narrowed my eyes.

'Tumhaara aakhir problem kya hai dude?'

Ranvijay tightened his grip on my shoulder.

'Tum. Tum mera problem ho. Tho lagta hai ke mujhe hi iss problem ko nickaalne ke liye kuch karna padega. Like always.'

Gunjan peered out from behind me. Her eyes were frightened.

'Samrat? Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?'

I clenched my fists.

'Chashmish. Tum ander jao aur books lekar aao.'

'par-'

'Chashamish maine kaha na? Ander jao!'

Gunjan looked scared. I wasn't. I was more confident than I should have been. In my confidence, I failed to realize that I had made one mistake. I had called her Chashmish. That would cost me greatly.

I turned back to Rv. He was staring at me and Gunjan.

'Wow Samrat! Guess I was wrong! Lagta hai sab kuch nahi badla! Tum abhi bhi iss behenji ke saat friends ho?'

I lost control right then. Nobody called Gunjan a behenji. Nobody. And especially not this RV!

'RANVIJAY!!!!'

I screamed, my heart racing and my blood boiling.

Rv laughed, unaffected by my anger.

Suddenly, Mayank heard my scream and marched up to us.

'Samrat! Plz relax. Apne gussa ko kaboo me rakho.'

He turned to Rv.

'Lagta hai kuch log samajhte hi nahi hai.'

He glared at him.

'Maine tumhe pehle bhi ek baar jail bhijwaaya tha. Dubaara bhi kar sakta hoon. Iss liye, apne limit ko thoda dimaag me rakh ke, yahaan se nickall jao. Warna yehi attitude, tumhe buhot bhaari padegi. Samajh gayye na? Get out.'

I was impressed to say the least. How was it that Mayank could deal with situations so easily without using force or anger?

Rv stared at both of us with pure anger and hatred.

'Main apna badla zaroor loonga. Kissi bhi keemat pe.'

He turned at pushed his way through the crowd and out of the college.

Mayank smiled at me.

'Ab tumhe Gunjan ke paas rehne chahiye. Abhi abhi woh buhot pareshaan lag rahi thi. JAo aur usse samjhaa kar aao.'

I didn't have to go far. I saw Gunjan standing right behind me.

'Samrat...yeh sab kya ho raha tha?'

I looked at her nervously. I had always hated lying to Gunjan.

'Woh...umm...kuch nahi Gunjan. Mere aur Ranvijay ke ladai hoti rehti hai! Tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.'

She looked at me suspiciously.

'Achcha? Dekhkar tho aise nahi lag raha tha. Sach sach batao Samrat.'

I turned towards Mayank, my eyes pleading for him to help me.

Mayank nodded.

'Woh, actually kya hai na Gunjan? Samrat aur Rv ke kabhi baat nahi banni. Woh ek dusre se nafrat karte hai. Kabhi friends nahi ban paaye. Aur iss liye woh hamesha jhagad te rehte hain. Sach me. Tumhe tense hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai.'

Gunjan gave us a reluctant smile...as if she wasn't sure whether or not to believe us.

'Chalein?'

I asked her.

'Nupur bhi tumhaari wait kar rahi hogi bechaari.'

We started walking along to the cafeteria when Gunjan stopped abruptly.

'Kya hua Gunjan?'

She turned towards me.

'Tumne mujhe kya bulaaya tha?'

I was confused.

'Kya matlab?'

Her eyes grew wide as realization struck her.

'Tumne mujhe Chashmish bulaya tha... Chashmish... . '

Gunjan's POV:

I had just remembered. Samrat had called wme Chashmish! Chashmish...why did that name sound so familier???!! There was a throbbing sensation in my head. I felt so dizzy all of a sudden. What was happening to me? I could hear Samrat's panicked voice before darkness filled my vision, and I felt myself fall... ... .

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Hope u guys liked it! I will probably only update on Monday so plz read this and enjoy! Thx!