'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Pari

Awwsome update dear

loved it

hate RV he deserved the punch

loved the way Mayank consoled Nupur

do continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy pari
really nice update
nupur is so sweet so innocent
really liked her
plzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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its beautiful! seriously awesome!! update soon cant wai for the next part
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great idea......... mayur rock............. thx for the pm
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awesome update

loved it

do continue soon.....
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awwwwwwwwwwwwesome prt
update next prt
sooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Hey Pari...
I'm waiting!!!!! where is the update! kitna time ho gaya yaar!
Pls jaldi update kar! Eager to read the next part!
Love
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heyy guys this is the next part..... i know i made you wait long,,, but i hope you will lyk it and do comment plz........

the next morning.............

mayank woke up and found nupur sleeping in his arms....... he quitely adjusted her on the bed and went to get fershened,,,,,,
he came again with two mgs of coffee in his hand.......
m: nupur...... wake up...... its 8 now......
n: (half asleep) good morning......
m: coffee.... (forwarding her the mug)
n: thanx............
he sat on the bed and they were enjoying the coffee....
n: you make worlds best coffee.....
m: ohh..... and i blush......
n: thank you mayank./..
m: for the coffee or for me blushing......
n: no for yesterday.........
silence.
m: dont worry nupur..... i m yur best frnd and it was my duty to...... to help you...
silence,,
m: well ..... you dont need to worry..
n: he will not leave me...... from mumbai i settled in london to get rid of him and here too.....
m: sh... now i m with you..... he can do nothing wen we are together.......
n: hmm.......
and they hugged..........
m: wese nupur mujhe coffee ke alaawa kuch banaana nahi aata..... aur itne dino se tumhaare haatho ka tasty food khaa raha hoon to khaana to tumhe hi banaana hai,.,
n: sure...... (and she went)
in the kitchen.....
m: wese nupur tumhe khaana banaana kisne sikhaaya??? mummy ne???
n: haan mummy ne sikhaaya tha wen i was 14...... phir mom dad ki car accident mein death ho gyi aur tab se mein hi khaana banaati hoon.... dia aur uday to 10 saal ke hi the.... to unko bhi mene hi sambhaala........
m: ab wo kahaan hai?
n: mumbai....... college mein hai....
m: hey mere mom dad bhi mumbai mein hi hai,,,,,, mera bhai bhi............
n: tumhaara bhai??
m: benji..... wo bhi college mein hai.........
n: benji?????????? benjaarth sharma......
m: right ........ but he hates to being callled by that,,,,, but how do you know abt him????
n: ahem...... wo dia ka brand new boy friend hai,,,,,,,
m: wat???
n: hmm..... kal hi dia se baat hui thi usne bataaya ki benji ne usse propose kiya,,,,,, aur usne haan kar di......... and they are going on a date.....
m: really............ benji bada ho gya,,,,,,
n: obviously.............
tring tring...
n: heyy its dia........
n: hello.......
mayank puts it on speaker.......
d: hey di...........
n: hii dia....... to date kesi rahi.....
d: twas awesome di..... benji is a very niice guy,,,,,,, he wants to talk to you......
n: me?????
d: yupp.......
b: hello......
n: hey....... benji??
b: yes........ so you are nupur di...... dia aapke baare mein bahut bataatee hai.....
n: really????
b: yes........ bataati hai aap uski mom ho.......
n: wat....
b: yess jitna wo aapke baare mein bataati hai na sab meri mom hai na unse milti hai..... aap humesha kehti ho tym se ghar aa jaana meri maa bhi kehti hai. aap accha khaana banati ho mom bhi banati hai....... aur aapke haath ke ladoo khaaye to mujhe mom ke haath ke ladoo khaane ki iccha ho gyi......... itne dino se nahi khaaye na........
n: kyu mom ne ladoo banaana band kar diya kya???
b: haan........
m: kya?? (whispering)
n to benji : kyu??
b: wo..... mere bhaiya ko laddoo bahut pasand the.... ab bhai chala gya to mom laddoo nahi banaati....
tears in mayank's eyes..
n to benji: kyu tumhaare liya nahi banaati?
b: jab bhi mom banaane lagti hai unhe bhai ki yaad aati hai phir wo roke nahi banaati,,,,,,,
mayank crying...
n: tumhaara bhai hai kahaa??
b: pata nahi...... he is live or dead yeh bhi nahi pata..... but mom kehti hai he is alive..... she can feel.............
mayank cuts the phone,,,,,,,,
now he is crying.....................
nupr consoling him.........
after a week.......
n: mayank mumbai chaloge??
m: kyu?
n: tumhaari mom se baat hui thi.... dia aur benji ki engagement fix ho gyi hai....
m: wat??
n: right she is a really very sweet lady..........
m: kab hai engagement,,,,
n: after a week....... tum chaloge kya????
m: mein.......
n: plz........
m: but......
n: plz......... plz plz plz plz...........
m: par mein wahaa...... koi kuch kahega to......
n: koi kuch nahi kahega......... trut me .......
m: okk..
they went to dia's engagement,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
everything was ready ,,,, mm knew abt nupur so arranged everything so that tthere shud be less stress on the poor girl...
nupur thanked her for that..........
one nght...... she called mm home........
mm: haan beta kuch kaam tha......
n: aunty aapko kisise milaana tha......
mm: kissee???
n: isse......
and mayank comes in the hall......
mm: mayank................
m: maa........
and they hugged....... cried.......
n: you guys talk and i will be back soon,.,,
and she went...........
they talked...........
m: bye maa....... mein waapis aaunga apne peron pe khadaa hoke aur aapko mujhpe proud hoga........
mm: hmm,,,,,,,,, aall the best...............
mayur left from there...... back to london..........
mayur and sajan decided to go on a fun tour...... as it was there holiday times,,,,,,,,
g: chalein........
n: chalo......... mayank..........
m: haan.......
n: chalo......
m: aaya,......,,
s: its awesome na guys..... hum kitne dino baad kisee picnic pe jaa rahe hai ..... wo bhi poore 2 weeks ke liye......... its great........
n: haan....... par drive kon karega......
s: nupur ji raasta poore 4 ghante ka hai..... sabko chance milega............
g: cool.......
s: pehle mein drive karunga..........
g: second.......
m: third..........
n: ???? mere pass koi option hai???
all three together: sorry........
n: ok.......
they move to the car and enjoy...........
jab gunjan ki chance aati hai tab gaadi beeh mein hi band ho jaati hai..........
n: yeh kya.... fuel khatam ho gya kya??
g: nahi fuel to hai........
s: phir........
m: let me check.........
he opens the front elevator.....
m: shit.......
n: wat?
m: the engine damaged........
n: now wat....
m: i donno.....
g: ab hum kya karenge,,,,,,,, yeh raasta kitna sunsaan hai.............
s: oh really..... tum darr rahi ho??
g: shut up....
s: kyu gunjan..............
g: samrat...... raat hone waali hai isliye soch rahi hoon ki hum rahenge kahaan??
s: sher ke pet mein.......
g: wat......
s: ya koi bada aadi manav aake humme khaa jaayega,,,,, raat ke andher mein,,,,,,
m: guys stop it...... think abt wat we r gonna do......
s: dekh mayank...... aaj to humme koi help milne se rahi.... to kal hi kuch sochenge abhi thoda rest kar lete hai....
m: thik hai..... kyu nupur......
no response..
m: nupur.....
n: hmm.....
mayank cud see that she was scared.... obviously bcoz of samrat... wo gunjan ko darana chahta tha aur nupur darr gyi...
m: everything is fine nupur......
n: yupp..........
suddenly it starts raining,,,,,,
they all shift to the car....
mayank on drivers seat...... nupur next to him.... sajan behind........
soon sajan were sleeping in each others arms..... after all they were engaged.......it was cold...... both mayank and nupur were awake........
the rain stopped and mayank moved out of the car.... he was just walking next to the car........
n: mayank thand hai... andar aa jaao.....
m: thand ka hi to ilaaj karna hai.....
and soon mayank put on fire nearby.....
m: aaa jaao........ yahaan garmi hai.....
n: hmm.......
she went and sat in front of mayank...... and startes feeling the warmth..... it was lyk mayank then fire then nupur....... mayank was ggazing nupur .... she was looking more beautiful in the light of fire..... nupur was blushing............
n: mayank......
m: hmm.......
n: tumne aise fire lagaana kahaan sikhaa?
m: actually hum jab school se tour pe gye the tab....... bahut mazaa aaya tha uss waqt........... sab aisaa hi tha...... hum sab frnds the......... aur bahut masti ki thi........ tum nahi gyi khabhi.....
n: nahi.......... wo fees bahut high rehti thi........
m: nupur ek baat poochun,,,,,,
n: haan.....
m: tumne sab manage kese kiya??? i mean tum keval 14 thi aur....... tum bachpan se hi itni sincere thi.......
nupur laughed.....
n: nahi...... infact mom to mujhe sabse shetaan kehti thi........ mujhe yaad hai teeachers mom se itni shikaayat karti thi...... mujhe bahut daat pit ti thi......... mom kehti thi mein kuch nahi kar sakti...... wo mere dad se kehti thi ki mein sapne dekhne ilaawa aur kuch nahi kar sakti hoon,.,,,
m: dont tell me tum sapne bhi dekhti thi???? tumhaara koi dream tha??
n: koi dream??? mere bahut saare dreams the........ mein ek pakki day dreamer thi.........
m: really?????? i cant believe it........
n: really....... its the truth........ my frnds used to say ki thoda mein sincere ho jaaoon..... dad kehte the thoda responsible ban jaaoo....... sab kehte the mein bahut irresponsible hoon........
m: aur aaj to tum bilkul badal gyi ho.........
n: sach mein.... sab badal gya hai..... mera naam bhi......
m: tumhaara naam????? mera bhi naam 15 years ka jab mein tha tab badal diyaa......
n: mera naam to jab mom dad ki death ho gyi tab badalna pada........
m @ n: tumhaara naam kya tha??
m @ n: raj @ simran.......
n: raj sharma......
m: simran bhushan.........
n: tum kahiin.....
m: tum kahiin.......
n: to wo tum the,,,,,, mere phone frnd,,,,,,,,
m: seriously mujhe lag hi raha tha........
n: idiot..... phone karna band kyu kar diya tha??
m: tumahara phone hi nahi lagta tha.....
n: shit.... mein bill hi nahi bharti thi,.,,
m: tum to phone kar sakti thi.........
n: tumhaara number koi aur uthaata tha,,,,,,
m: damn...... wo number chacha ji le gye the..............
n: to finally tum me thodi samajh aa gyi.....
m: haan,,,, tumhi ne to kahaa tha... ki...
n: ki apne papa ke paison ko udaao mat aur kuch khud karo.......
m: correct......
n: aur tumne kahaa tha na ki.
m: ki himmat aur concentration se life ki har battle jeeti jaa sakti hai.......
n: isiliye to aaj mein zindaa hoon..........
m: isiliye to aaj mein life ko jee raha hoon.......
n: you know agar tumhaari baatein nahi hoti na mere saath to mein aaj kuch nahi kar paati.....
m: aur agar tum meri life mein nahi aati to mein apna har ek moment kahiin waste kar raha hota.........
n: i cant believe tum mujhe mil gye.........
m: seriously tum bahut badal gyi ho........ tum kitni badi nautanki thi......... har baat mein mazaak....... itni sharaarat to koi ladka bhi nahi karta tha jitni tum karti thi,,,,,,
n: aur tum..... tum kitne mazaakiya ban gye ho.... pehle kitne rude the..... padaakoo kahiin ke.... sadu ek number ke.........
m: shut up hn.......... ek baat kahu mein tumhaari tarah ban gya hoon... aur tum meri tarah.......
n: mujhe to tumhaare jesa banna pada......... agar uss waqt mein kamzor pad jaati to mein kahiin foot path pe bheek maang rahi hoti.......
m: aur mein....... great,,,,,,, tumhaari baatein itni chubti thi na ki mein ek alien hoon.... sach mein tumhe mein alien kyu lagta tha......
n: isliye kyuki tum bahut hi serious the....... bahut zyaada responsible the.....
m: that means ki ab tum alien ho........
n: come on...... aur bataao...... tum ne naam kyu badlaa.??
m: tumne kyu badla.??
n: pehle tum
m: nahiin tum..
n: accha thik hai.... mene to isliye badla kyuki simran naam se mujhe maa ki yaad aati thi aur mein kamzor ban jaati thi......... aur koi mujhe simran ki bajaay simmo bulaadeta tha to mein to rone hi lag jaati thi.. to uncle ne suggest kiya naam badal lo,,,,,,,,
m: aur nupur kyu rakha?
n: tumhi ne to kahaa tha...... tumhaari agar koi girl friend hogi to uska naam n se shuru hoga.........
m: to tum meri g/f banana chahti thi,,,
n: tum ne naam kyu change kiya?? aur mayank kyu rakhaa??? wait mayank to .... mayank to uss waqt mere dream boy kaa naam tha...... mujhe yaad hai mein uss waqt sochti thi ki mayank naam best hai aur mein mayank naam ke ladke se shaadi karungi......... mene tumhe bhi yeh baat bataayi thi,,,,,,,, to tum mujhse shaadi karna chaahte the........
m: actually raj naam mere mom ko pasand nahi tha...... to unhone change karne ko kaha aur mene kahaa mayank.......
n: pata hai........ ab meri life mein simran ki koi jagah nahi wo keval ek kamzor ladki thi jo mere andar thi.... aur bcoz of you wo ab mar gyi hai aur he great nupur jee rahi hai.......
m: aur raj bhi ab waapis nahi aayega,,,,,,,, kyuki mayank bahut smart hai............ sach mein tumhaare dreams uss waqt kitne ajeeb hote the,,,,,,, mayank naam ke ladke se shaadi karungi...... yeh kya baat hui.......
n: pata nahi,,,,,, mein to bhool bhi gyi thi uss baat ko........ aaj tumne yaad dilaaya.........
m: pata hai tum meri teenage life ka first crush thi aur........
n: aur.....
m: aakhiri bhi......
nupur blushed,,,,,,,,
n: aur mein to tumhe bahut pasand karti thi........
m: sach.....
n: hmm..........
m: wese dheere dheere mein apni phone frnd ko bhoolne lag gya tha.......
n: kyu..
m: kyuki mein tumse baat karta tha.......
n: mein bhi.............
m: nupur............ i love you....
nupur was shocked.....
n: kya..
m: mein tumhe kabse kehnaa chaahta tha bas ek hi problem aa rahi thi,,,,, simran....... ab wo bhi tumhi ho to....... wese tumhaara answer,,,,,,
n: wo...... abb......
m: hn?
n: haan......
mayank had a smile....
m: wat haan??poora sentence bolo........
n: abb,,,,,,
m: pehle to itna nahi sahrmaati thi,,,,,,,
n: accha baba thik hai.... haan i love you too.....
they hugged...............
n: mujhe to abhi bhi yeh sapna hi lag raha hai........ pehle mujhe tum mil gye jise milne ki koi hope baaki nahi rahi thi.... aur ab hum saath hai,,,,,, tumne mujhe itni jaldi propose bhi kar diya...
m: itni jaldi?? pehle to simran ko propose karne ke liye itne saal wait kiya,,,,,,, phir nupur ko propose karne ke liye itne din,,,,, aur tum keh rahi ho,,, itni jaldi?
n: accha thik hai...... tumne bahut accha kiya jo aaj hi keh diya,,,,,,,
m: wese......... (moving towards nupur)
n: kya,,,, (moving backward)
m: mene jitna socha tha tum usse bhi jyaada khoobsurat ho......... (still movig towards her....)
n: mayank.... tum... tum,,,,,,,,, mujhse door raho..... (and she pushed him and ran)
mayank behind her.......
they were running.....
m: ruko nupur............
n: pakad ke dikhaao,.,,
m: yeh baat hai........
mayank ran and caught hold of her waist from back..........
m: pakad liya..... ab..
n: ab......
m: ab..... (moving towards her lips)
n: ab...... (lost...)
m: ab.. (inches away from her lips)
bang........
the cars gates opened,,,,,,,,, sajan were awake and were coming down the car.........
they dispersed....
s: guys why are you out,,,,, its very cold............
m: no. we were just feeling the warmth of the fire....
s: but where is the fire..
m: here..............
he saw the fire had already gone........
g: ab chalo ,.,, koi help dhoondte hai,,,, subah ho gyi hai.........

n: haan.....



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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
thanx for pm
do update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
awesome update pari

thank you for making my day

loved it

such a straight forward proposal man

keep it

u deserve 3 claps man👏

ok they are much more than 3

but u deserve themm

update soon

and pm me

love pebo

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