'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12 - Page 4

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sry 4 d l8 reply dear...
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Hi pari,

Very very nice update.

It was really very nice one.

Loved sayank convo.

Awwwww Mayur share the same flat.

Hmmm It seems really very interesting.

Loved our shy Nupur.

U made her little bit different in this FF.

Great part.

Keep updating.

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hey pari....
really nice update!!! mayur are really good!
gunjan's line - salwar kameez waalon pe tax was funny!!!
continue soon and thanks for the pm!
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thank you so much guys for yur comments...... i m not able tto reply you individually but look i have read them and presed the like button..................

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gr8 start...
ur jus 14...
i'm 16...gr8 imaginasan. i luvd ff:mayuy the luvin birds..
u no wht i hv neva found my self crazy 4 any jodi..but arti...i jus always pray 2 god dat dey bcom real lyf coupl
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part 2

and the next day nupur was working in the kitchen ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

mayank came,,,,
n: wat you want in breakfast??
m: yur making for me too??
n: i was making mine.. and i dont mind making for you too....
m: so... wat abt cereals...
n: cereals??? are you crazzy......... alloo ka paratha.......
m: its too heavy...
n: eat less than.........
mayank was speechless...........
m: f 9...
nupur made alloo pratha......
on the dining table......
mayank ate the first bite of the paratha with curd..
m: yummy....... nupur you are a great cook.....
n: thank you........ and i wont mind kyuki cereals bhi rakhe hai tum wo bhi khaa sakte ho.......
m: nahi its okk..
n: nahi mayank (teasing him),,,, parathas are too heavy..........
m: okkk fine....... you were right its better than cereals...........
after the breakfast..
nupur took all the plates and went to the kitchen to wash..... mayank felt to follow her as it was not fair that she only wud wash all the plates......
suddenly a plate fell from nupur's hand and broke into pieces.............
n: ouch...........
mayank came and saw that a piece of glass stuck to her toe.. and was paining her........
m: wait there,,,,, m coming.....
he came there.......
m: dont move....... and by the way why are you not wearing the slippers??
n: we dont wear slippers in the kitchen........ aah.........
m: dont move..
he moved forward and made her sit on the platform......... he brought the first aid kit and dressed her toe........
now she moved down and tried to move......... but was unable...........
m: i will take you..
saying this he took nupur into his arms and took her to her bed room..............
he settled her on her bed........
they were too close......
big eyelock........ nupur's arm was still round mayank''s neck and mayank's arm still round her waist.......
then they came into their senses and broke apart.....
it was total silence.............
finally mayank spoke..
m: heyy nice room.... i came her first tymm
n: so wats so good in it,,
m: i dont know...... its a little a little comfortable..
n: oh really....
m: no seriously....... this soft smell...... it smells gret.... nyways which room freshner.....
n: not a single.... its the smell of the flowers... look,,,,,, i have planted roses over in the balcony....
m: really....
he went to the balcny.......... and came back.......
m: you are so creative..........
n: creative???
m: i mean from where the thought of planting came to yur mind..........
n: it was just...
ting tong...
the door bel rang....
mayank went to open the door as nupur cant move......
n: whos it mayank??
m: samrat...
samrat and mayank talked for sumtym and then samrat came to nupur.........
s: you fine??
n: yupp..
s: so i m throwing a party and you have to attend it,,,,,,,
n: for wat??
s: its a secret..
n: okk....
s: so you both are coming tomorrow for the party... and by then yur toe will recover...
n: ya sure.....
s: kk bye... gotta give more invitations,,,,,,,,,
the day went as ususal......
next day,,,,,,
m: nupur.... wat do you think i shud wear in the party???
n: hmm,,, this one.... (taking out a black shirt with a denim jeans....)
m: u sure??
n: absolutely...
m: okk... and wat will you wear??
n: umm,, pair of salwaar kameez....
m: shall i ask you a question...
n: ya sure..
m: why you wear salwaar kameez ..... i mean..
n: kyu ye videshi jab india aate hai to sarree pehente hai kya??
m: no.. but we shud live according to our surroundings...... adaptations are necessary for living...........
n: hmm......... but i dont have western clothes.............
m: come lets buy them.....
n: wat??
m: imean you must have completed some cases ..... lets submit them and buy clothes.......
n: not a bad idea...........
they go to their office and get money and mayank too submits his cases and gets money.....
they go on shopping and buy some western pieces for nupur.........
at night.......
nupur came wearing a brown colored hot short top and ble narrow botton jeans,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, flowing hair ....
and mayank was gazing her,,,,, she blushed without knowing why???
n: chale..
m: yur looking gorgeous..
n: thanx................
they went to the party.....
every body was present there including gunjan... and samrat proposed gunjan and this was the reason behind the huge party.. gunjan said yes.........
s: so guys lets dance..........
samrat was dancing with gunjan,,,,,,,
mayur were standing by and just looking at others.........
s: heyy mayank why are you not dancing?
m: no partner.........
meanwhile gunjan comes..
g: find a partner for nupur.... she has no partner and so she's not dancing................
s: heyy mayank with dance with nupur............
m: but/...
s: come on........
mayur started dancing...
it was slow music now.... romantic one,,,,,,
both were looking into each others eyes.........
lost...........
just flowing with music..............
mayank's hand moving thru her waist which was a little visible,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
nupur was just feeling him..................
suddenly the music stopped....................
they got back to the real world.....
they looked around and aw no body except sajan who were having a small nap (shot sleep)
m: samrat??
s: finally..... you both are done....... byee,,,,,,,
he said so moving them out of his house,,
m: wat??
s: god we were waitng for you both to stop. its 2am..............
m @ n" wat?????
s: yes.......
m: why did not you stop us.....
s: coz you were looking too cute,,,,,,,,,
n: i m feeling bit sleepy......
m:ya.... we shall move.... bye..
in the car..
mayank was driving...
m: nupur...
he looked at her and saw her sleeping...........
m: (thinking) she is so beautiful...
the ome arrived,,,,,,,,,
m: nupur utho ghar aa gya,,,,,,,,,,,,
no response.... she was asleep.........
he took her into his arms and moved to her room and made her sleep on the bed..... gazed her for sumtym then moved to his room and slept.....
next day..
nupur woke up and saw herself on the bed... she understood mayank wud hav shifted her.........
so she moved towards mayank's room to thank him.......
she knocked the door.........
once...... twice ,,,,,,, thrice...............
n: mayank??????
then she opened the door and found him asleep.........
he was looking choooooooooooooooooo cuteeee............. shirt less........
she quitely closed the door......
after sumtym,,,,,,
nupur was ready and was preparing breakfast.......
mayank came out moving his fingers thru his hair...... still in half sleep..
m: gud morning nupur,,,,,
n: gud morning..... tum tayyaar nahi hue...
m: kisliye???
n: aaj samrat gunjan ki engagement hai......
m: oh haan,,,,, i will be back soon,.......
n: be quick,,,,,
after sumtym....
mayank called nupur from his room....
m: nupur..... idhar aana zara...
n: aayi,.,,
she goes to his room.....
when she enters..
m: mere paas kapde nahi hai sagaai mein pehenne ke liye...
n: wat??
wen she enters she sees the whole almirah's clothes were spread on mayank's bed....... and there were so many clothes... uncountable... and this guy was saying he has no clothes....
n: mayank are you crazzy???????
m: wat...
n: wat hav you done!!!!!!
m: nahi wo kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha to.....
n: to????
m: plz tum meri madad karne ki bajaay meri problems bada rahi ho...
n: haan ,,,, ummm...... take these and wear them in the bathroom.....
m: in bathroom???
n: goooooo............. (she ordered)
m: okkk,,,
he went to the bathroom...... wen he came out,,,,, his mouth was left wide open.... his room was as perfect as anything..... not only his clothes were well set in almirah but his files.. his book shelf....... his bed was made......... his whole room was shining.....
m: nupur,,,,,,,, yeh sab...
n: dont worry,, pehle socha tumhaare kapde almirah mein rakh doon.... phir bed itna ganda ho raha tha to saaf kar diya.... phir yeh gandaa room bed ke saath match nahi ho raha to,.......
m: you are great,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, tumhaare per (legs) kahaa hai............ (and he started to mave towards her legs)
n: mayank kya kar rahe ho??????
m: jis kaam ko karne ke liye kamse kam mujhe 15 din lag jaate wo tumne 15 min mein kar diya,,,,,,
n: thank you........ ab chalein,,,,,,
m: sure...........
and they went to the engagement venue,,,,,,,,,
in the car
m: nupur tumne mujhe apne baare mein kuch nahi bataaya...
n: mein..... bataaya to tha,,,,,
m: f9 agar nahi bataana chaahti.....
n: nahi aisee koi baat.......
m: okkk,,, nupur,,,, koi baat nahi,,,,,,, lo aa gye hum.....
they get down from the car........
wen they enter in the hall they see that it was beautifully decorated.......
wen a boy comes near them,,,
person: heyy nupur,,,,,, new boyfreind hn???
n: tum,,, yahaa,,,,,,, (moving to the back of mayank)
person: arre tum to darr rahi ho,,,,, aur iske peeche kyu jaa rahi ho??? yeh tumhaara body guard hai kya???
mayank was confused,,,,,,,,,,,,
m: yeh kon hai nupur??
person: ohh,,,, rathore,,, ranvijay rathore.......
m: aap kon...
rv: nupur tum hi bataao mein kon hoon,,,,,
wen gunjan comes,,,
g: ranviijay,,,,,,,,,, (in anger)
rv: heyy babes,,,,,,,
g: shut up.......... out of here now....... who called you???
rv: actually tum ne poore college ko invite karne ko kahaa tha na peon ko to mein bhi to college mein hi padta tha na..... to usne mujhe bhi invitation de diya.......
g: get out......
rv: jaa rahe hai... wese bhi jisse dekhne aaye the (looking at nupur... mayank notices this) usse to dekh hi liya,,,,,,,,
g: out,,,,,,,,,,,,
rv: bye,....
he goes...
g: sorry nupur..... seriously mene yeh jaan booch kar..
n: koi baat nahi gunji,,, its okk....... (she goes from there)
m: gunjan yeh kon tha?????
g: actually ranvijay college se nupur ko pareshaan karta tha.... aur ek baa to,........
s: hey gunjan yeh ladka kon tha?????
g: wo........
s: anyways lets enjoy,,,,,,,, tum mujhe baad mein bataa dena......
g: chalo......
they enjoy and they find that nupur was missing.............
m: gunjan nupur kaafi der se nahi dikh rahi hai,,
g: haan..... usse dhoondte hai....
gunjan moves to the wash room to find her.....
g: nupur you inn.......
n: hmm...........
g: yur crying????/
n: nahi to.....
g: you are crying....... plz open the door............
m: gunjan nupur mili kya??
g: yupp she's in....
m: she is crying?????
g: i think so.....
m: nupur....... open the door.,,,
she opens the door.......
m: everything's okk......
n: hmm.... (wiping her tears)
m: i think we shud go now......... chalein nupur......
n: hmm.........
in the car..
m: nupur wo ladka kon tha????
n: ranvijay...
m: tum usse darr kyu rahi thi..
n: mein kaha....
m: jhoot mat bolo...... mene dekha tha.......
n: wo college mein mujhe pareshaan karta tha isliye,,,,,
m: aur,,,,,, koi aur baat to nahi hai na,,,,,....
tring tring... his mobile rings....... its samrat,,,,,,
m: hello samrat...
s: mayank.... nupur se ranvijay ke baare mein mat poochna........
m: kyu??
s: baad mein bataata hoon........
m: okk .... bye,,,
he cuts,,,,
at their house...........
m: gud night nupur,,,,
n: gud night,,,,,,
wen nupur goes to her room mayank calls samrat..
m: haan samrat bolo,.,,
s: wo actually........ ranvijay ne nupur ka rape karne ki koshish ki thi.....
m: wat????
s: haan..... gunjan bata rahi thi.... iske baad nupur kaafi depression mein aa gyi thi.... ur agar phir e rv ke baare mein wo sochne lag gyi to....... look mayank gunjan ke hisaab se still nupur is scared of rv........ so plz...
m: haan....
s: okk bye.....
m: bye,,,,
mayank thinking abt nupur sleeps then,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
next day..
its 8.00 pm.......
nupur is returning from gunjan's house as she went there to help gunjan to clean up the house.......
rv: hii nupur...
nupur listens and moves more fast..........
rv: (coming in front of nupur) humme bhool to nahi gyi na,,,,,,,,,
tears start flowing from nupur's eyes.......... and she tries to move ahead.......
rv: arre kahaan jaa rahi ho....... humaare saath chalo..
he says this and holds her by her waist........
n: ranvijay chodo.. its hurting..... (while crying)
rv: oh really......... is it??? (pulling her more)
n: plz...............
rv takes off her duppatta.............. and pulls her hair........
wen somedy punches him..........
it was mayank.......
nupur moves towards mayank ......... and shifts to his back..........
m: how dare you,.,,,,,,,,
rv: oh...... to ab tumhaara body guard tumhe bachaayega........
m: shut up........... (giving him a nice punch....... )
he falls on the ground and blod starts flowing from his head.......
m: dont even again dare to touch her,.,,,,
he looks behind where nupu was crying.... her kurtas sleeves were torn...... he lends her his shirt.........
he takes her to the flat.........
in nupur's room......
mayank makes her sit on the bed................
she was still crying,,,,,,,
he was going to his room wen nupur holds his hand.......
n: plz dont go,....... (still crying)
m: dont cry nupur........ (while sitting next to her..)

he moves his hand round nupur's shouldeers............ and he consoles her,,,,,,,,,, soon she falls asleep in his arms and mayank too sleeps there,.......

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heyy guys...... sorry for the late update but i have posted pitty long part..... hope you lyk it,,,, plz press the like tab and comment if you lyk to,,,,,,,,, thanx for yur support.........


Edited by pari.theprinces - 15 years ago

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