'mayur' the temptation....page 44 part 12 - Page 8

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lovely update
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confession was also great
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heyyy pari
amazing update
mayur r long lost friends
n they even confessed
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heyy i read ur ff its really gud! please update it soon! and do PM me! =)
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Hey Pari...
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hey superb update
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when r u continuing pari.... i'm waiting!
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part - 4

they took a lift and reached their farm house,,,,,

s: finally........ iti takleefon ke baad hum yahaan pahunch hi gye....
g: hmm,,,,,, its so beautiful...............
m: so beautiful......... (looking at nupur) nupur blushed
samrat noticed it..
s: ahem.......
m: umm.. wo mein,,,
s: koi baat nahi hota hai kabhi kabhi.....
n: umm,.,,, guys....... thoda fresh ho lein..... i mean itni door se aaye hai to....
g: haan.. chalo nupur......
s: hey naha dhoke pool mein aa jaana hum wait karenge.......
g: sure............
gunur waha se chalein jaati hai.....
s: kyu dude ,,,,,,,,,, aaj kal to tu bhi......
m: abb,,, samrat ,,,,,,,,,,, tu wo......
s; dont worry,,,,,,,
m: kya...
after some tym girls arrive wearing their swimming costumes......
mayank and samrat were already in the pool........... gunjan moves inside the pool with the help of samrat.......
g: nupur aaja na.....
n: nahi wo mein......
G: kya yaar aaja.....
n: mujhe swimming nahi aati........
g: koi baat nahi pool itna deep nahi hai......
n: par..
m: aa jaao nupur........
n: okk...
and she moves inside..
s: ahem.... gunjan ne kaha tab to nahi aayi aur mayank ne keval ek baar kaha aur,,,,,,,,
m: samrat,,,,,,
they then enjoy in the pool...............
after some tym they get out of the pool...... and have their dinner..........
all the four were just sitting in the hall and discussing ....... and nupur called dia....
n: hey dia....
d: hii di..
n: kaha tha na teko roz baat kar liya kar.... tum dono wahaa ho.... meko tension ho jaati hai,,,
d: sorry di,, wo mein thodi busy thi,,,,,,,
n: accha aur khaana khaa liya..
d: haan di
n: aur uday ne??
d: haan uski tabbiyat thodi kharaab hai
n: tabbiyat kharaab hai zaroor kuch ulta seedha khaa liya hoga.. accha bata yeh sab kes..
and she continued talking to dia.....
mayank was listening to the convo and was lovingly looking at nupur,,,,, how caring she was.......... how sweet............
there were four rooms and all were sleeping in different rooms...
it was 12:00 midnight now.....
mayank went to nupur's room....
it was raining aur bijli kadak rahi thi....
nupur was not at all asleep.... she was scared and had nearly started crying..
he entered her room...
n: mayank tum yahaa??
m: hmm... mujhe pata tha tum jag rahi hogi...
n: tumhe kese pata?
m: kyuki ......... wait,, tum ro rahi ho..
n: mein kahaan ro rahi hoo... (wiping her tears)
m: oh bush.....
he went near here and sat on the bed
m:offo nupur......... tum bhi na....
saying this he got seated on the bed next to nupur and started consoling her.....
wen suddenly the lightning occured and there was a great noise.......
and nupur hugged mayank...... and tightened her grip as she was totally frightened....
mayank was in a shock but he then put his hand on nupur's sholder and
m: nupur.....
he noticed that she is cring bitterly....
m: shhh...... dont cry kiddo.... look i m here.......... yur mayank is here........ dont cry ........ trust me........
nupur slowly looked at him
n: hmm......
m: now stop crying... (wiping her tears)
soon she was peacefully smiling in mayank's arms.....
m: nupur... ek baat poochoon....
n: hmm.....
m: abhi agar mein nahi aata to tum abhi tak ro rahi hoti??
n: haan....
m: to to tumhe aur darr lagta.
n: pata nahi..... mene akele khud ko sambhaal lene ki aadat daal li hai........
m: par ab nahi.... mein hoon tumhaare saath........
n: i love you mayank.......
m: love you too..........
after a few minutes,,
m: nupur i think mujhe chalna chahiye,,,, samrat ko pata chala to.....
n: haan.......
m: bye,,,,,,,,,,,, (getting up) aur kuch ho to mein paas waale room mein hi hoon.......
n: hmm.......
m: take care......
and he went and slept in his room......
next day...........
every one was having breakfast..........
m: hey guys aaj ka kya plan hai?
s: kya plan hai yaar.. sab paani mein mill gya..... sab is baarish ki wajah se ..... kal raat kitni tez aandhi toofaan aaye the........ aur abhi bhi baarish ho rahi hai kisi outing pe bhi nahi jaa sakte.... sheah..
mayur had a smile as they remembered the previous night..
n: so wat.. hum chaaron to saath hai na........ aur hum ghar par hi kuch decide kar lenge....
g: not a bad idea...... lets see.......
after the break fast.........
they all were sitting in the hall......
g: so kya khele,,,,,,,
s: umm.. truth and dare...
g: hide and seek
m: blind man's buff...... (aankh michoni)
n: truth n dare aur hide and seek baad mein khelenge ,,,,,, abhi blind man's buff khelte hai......
g: cool..... to tum pehle aankhon pe patti baandho.....
n: kyu mein??
g: kyuki tum hi ne kaha.....
n: par..
s: come on nupur.... chalo baandho....
and they tie a scarf on nupur's eyes.. (hope you know how to play the game) ......
nupur was just roaming and trying to catch sumone........
samrat chased nupur by claping and gunjan by clicking.,,,,,,,,,
wen suddenly nupur's leg got stuck into something and she slipped ,,,,,, mayank held her by her waist but cud no longer balance himself and both fell on the sofa.....
now mayank was on nupur.....
nupur quickly removed the scarf in order to get wat was happening...... and soon she met with the deep brown eyes.....
they were toooo close..... inches gap between their lips....
and we all know that wen those chocolate brown eyes meet the deep brown eyes their is a long long eyelock.....
mayank wanted to remove the distance between their lips.......... and he came more closer ,,, nupur's heart beat increasing....
wen..
s: ahem ahem........
they got back dere senses..... nupur tried to get up.... but fell again (bcoz she was beneath mayank) .... coming more closer she cud feel mayank's hands on her waist moving slightly.... then mayank sighned her to stop trying to get up and first he will get up.....
he got up and then nupur got up......... full red.... mayank straightened his shirt and nupur settled her dress....... not able to meet the constant gaze of sajan they moved quickly to their rooms........
s: gunjan,,,,,
g: hmm??
s: in dono ke beesh zaroor kuch hai.....
g: kuch nahi bahut kuch hai............
in the evening.......
g: to ab truth and dare khele.........
s: haan,.,, kyu mayank
m: sure.............
so they twisted the bottle and it came on nupur,,,,,
n: umm..... truth.........
s: do you and mayank love each other???? (seemed thta he was waiting to ask))
mayur's jaw dropped........
n: kya?
s: answer yes or no....
n: abb....... wo.....
s: really??
n/: wat?
s: you guys love each other?? (asking in full excitement)
n: mayank...... (asking as you speak)
m: fine....... yes.... we are in a relation ship.......
s: congo guys,,,,,,,,,, muaah........ really happy for both of you
g: i cant believe it...... congrats.......
m: shall we continue the game?? (as if to change the topic)
and they twisted the bottle and it came on samrat..
s: truth.......
m: umm..... who was yur first girl frnd ....
s: dude......
m: say say.........
s: umm..... sheena.....
g: wat??
s: yes she was...... but yur my last girl frnd..... and you will be my last girl frnd i promise..
m & n: aweee...........
and they twisted the bottle again it came on gunjan......
g: truth....
n: umm...... is there any secrets of yurs from samrat??
g: nupsi.....
n: bata bhi de....
g: kk.... meine tumse chupaaya ki i had a crush on you since 8th standard.....
s: 8th standard???!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
g: ya come on...... ab tha to tha..... ok next........
and it came on mayank.......
m: truth,.......
s: wat yaar sab truth hi loge kya??
m: kk dare//////
s: yes....... give a lip kiss to nupur......
mayur flushed........
m & n: wat??
s: wat? you are in a affair..... and a dare is a dare........
m: but.....
s: no ifs no buts.......
n: samrat.....
s: come on nupur.......
m: samrat this is not done.......
g: you have to mayank its a dare........
m: lekin gunjan mein kese.......
g: mayank........
mayank looked at nupur...... he just wanted her approval after he wanted to know if she was ready....... but wen nupur gave him a sign of yes he confidently moved forward....
mayank was coming forward and nupur was going weak,....... heart beats increasing.....
and mayank came closer a gave a sweet little gentle peck on her lips and dispersed.......
a tingling sensation felt down both there spines ..... both wanted to continue but mayank pulled back so quickly.... just a fraction of second....... their lips just brushed........
s: yeh kya tha?
m: hey you just asked for a kiss.... not a deep deep kiss.........
g: fine... lets go i m tired.....
nupur who still blushing.... tried to face others.......
wen mayank slowly whispered in her ears " tum blush karte huye aur bhi khoobsurat lagti ho"
and nupur was blushing badly..... totally and completely red.........
next day..
g: guys to aaj hide and seek khele.......
s: haan...... chalo ..........
g: par dan kon dega?
n: tum...
g: kyu mein?
n: kyu tumne hi to suggest kiya hai......
g: thik hai,,,,,, mein dan de rahi hoon........ sab chup jaao........
samrat hid behind the curtains and mayur hid in mayank's room.......
gunjan came........
she saw the shoes of samrat which were visible becoz the curtain were a little upwrds......
g: samrat yur caught behind the curtains........
s: ahhaaa......... f9...... now where are mayur,,,,,,,,,,
g: lets find them out..
while on other hand mayur..
m: nupur,,, (coming forward)
n: hmm,,,
m: wo mein.. .(coming closer to nupur) wo actually....
n: (lost) mayank........
m: nupur..........
n: mayank.......
m: nupur........
mayank was coming forward...... and nupur a step backward,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wen nupur's cell rings................
mayank cursing the caller..
n: hello......... wat,.,,,
nupur was in a great shock....... it cud be seen on her face................
m: kya hua nupur..........
soon a tear escaped from nupur's eyes..............

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heyy guys its since long i had not updated....... and this one is boring but trust me i had to create this part a little boring to create circumstances to make the further parts more interesting......... plz understand........ and try to co operate becoz the next part will include emotion excitement fun crying surprises all together,.,, just wait........ and plz do comment and press the like tab...... i m ready for chappals and sandals for making such a boring part...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb update.loved it. continue soon dear.
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awesome update
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