Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 5

pakhi di please continue soon 😭 😭 😭

WOW!!!! pakhi!!!! thats all i can say WOW!!!!!

*Khushi*

sorry for the delay friends.
oh my god !!!!!! how sweet all of you, i must say i am so so so happy to read you replies.

nesha wrote that " i become a story writer , dress designer, thanks for the compliments but it's not possible because i am the student of software engg."but thanks for your lovely comments.

i am also glad to see my two new fans khushi & nesha , welcome to my fan fict . & thanks alot for your gr8 comments.keep replying.sumn so sweet of you , i like your sweet reply.

now i came to my regular fanz . what could i say about you as i write before that all of you the inspiration of my fan fict. b\c i never wrote anything before it but all of you realize me that i can write. thankssssssssssssss.



next part

arjun & bhoomi reach at newzealand . in the hotel's room;

a: bhanwari kaisa laga room?

b: bahut pyaara hai arjun. ek baat batao , ye do suitcase to maine pack kiye the , lekin iss teesare main kya hai?

a: khud dekh lo, bhanvari.

then bhoomi opens the suitcase & surprised to see all the things.

b: ye sab kya hai , arjun?

a: ye tumahaare liye jeans , jackets , evening gaouns , bathing gaouns hain bhanwari.

b; lekin maine pahale ye sab kabhi nahin pahana arjun.

a: to ab pahan lena.

next morning bhoomi take a bath & wears a royal blue bathing gaoun, she stands infront of mirror & watch herself & hesitate , suddenly arjun getup , he see bhoomi & become shocked to see her.

bhoomi feel so shy & try to hide herself behind the bed

a: bhanvari wahaan kahaan chup rahi ho.

b: arjun mujhe sharm aa rahi hai.

a; (holding her hand & pulls her towards him , remove her wet hairs from her face & kiss her)you are looking gorgeous bhanwari. chalo jaldi se tyaar ho jao main abhi aata hoon.aur haan wahi pahana jo mane kaha tha.

then arjun take shower & see to bhoomi.
bhoomi wears black jeans, black highneck sweter& brown jacket, her hairs was down.

a: i can't believe it , bhanwari you are looking so hot.

b: arjun main saree nahin pahan sakti kya? mujhe bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hai.


a; bhanwari tum bahut achhi lag rahi ho,ab jaldi chalo varna saara time yahin lag jaayega.

b: arjun hum kahaan ja rahein hain?

a: aaj main tumhein newzealand ke glashier dikhane le jaaonga.

b: wo kya hota hai arjun?

a: bhanvari glashier means "sea of ice" matlab----

b; matlab burf ka samandar , hai na?

a: right, ab chalein.

then they go the glasheir ;

b; arjun itti saari barf, kitni achhi lag rahi hai na& (she run towards ice & makes ice - balls, arjun shoot all this.) wahaan kya camera leke khade ho , yahaan aao na dekho kitna maja aa raa hai.

then both of them play with the ice - balls & arjun write their name at the ice"arjun loves bhanwari "
after al this arjun take bhoomi for gliding.

a: bhanwari chalo na gliding kartein hain.

b: na baba na, mujhe unchai se dar lagta hai.

a; jab tumhaara arjun tumhaare saath hai, to phir kis baat ka dar.

then both of them go towards to glider & enjoy it.

b; arjun chalo na shopping kartein hain.

a: ab shopping ! main bahut thak gaya hoon bhanvari.

b:(in sad voice) theek hai hotel chalo.

a; ok mem , chaliye shopping kartein hain.they do shopping there.

finally they reaches at hotel

b: arjun main bahut thak gayi .

a: theek hai, tum so jaao.goodnight (kissed at her forhead)

next morning when bhoomi wake up she didn't find arjun there , she can't understand anything & getted tensed .



where is arjun? frnds read next part tomarrow. tell me you like it or not.

you area great story writer i must say plz cont. it is very intersting

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that was a wonderful part pakhi di
please add some romantic sences between arjun and bhoomi
please write soon

this is the 1st time i read ur fan fic its lovely plz continue 👏 👏

👏 👏 👏 aww pakhi...was missing ur story a lot re...thnx u cnt it...its juzz too gud i cant wait to read d next part hney 😊

welcome to my fan fict. ranveer & thanks a lot for ur sweet response.hope you will cont. wid it.
& thanks a bunch to my dear all friends.
mamta ,my little sis don't worry i will write some more romantic part.

next part

bhoomi looks for arjun, she look in bathroom but he is not there. then she comes out from the room & shout arjun ! arjun! she walked in the cooridoor , suddenly next door of her room is open & someone pulls her in the room , there was so dark , so she can't see anything. suddenly light is on & she surprised;

b; arjun tum yahaan ho aur main tumhain ----. lekin ye kiska room hai? aur itni sajawat kyon hai yahaan(all the room is decorated with flowers& ballons)

a: batata hoon ,pahale tum ye dress pahan kar aao(gives her a packet)

b; lekin kyon ?kya hai ismein?

a; jao na plz.

then bhoomi wears the dress which arjun gives her, it is holter neck meroon silk gaoun wid work of rubies on its neck.her hairs was open .arjun see her , & he can't beleive on his eyes.

a: bhanwari you looks so beautiful.

b:thankyou arjun ,ab to batao ye sab kya hai.

a: aaj kya date hai?

b: kyon?

a;kyonki aaj tumhaara b'day hai bhanvari.

b: sachhi arjun, main to bhool hi gayi thi.

a: lekin mujhe to yaad hai, ye dekho(then he shows her a heartshape cake which is put on table behind him)

b; o arjun , ye sab tumne kab kiya.

a; subhah 4 baje se kar raha hoon ye sab, jab tum so rahi thi.chalo ab cake kato.

then she cut the cake & after that arjun starts the music system & invites bhoomi for dance.

b; arjun mujhe dance kahaan aata hai,aur ye wala to bilkul bhi nahin.

a; ye to sabse aasaan dance hai, dekho(then he put his one hand around her west & put bhoomi's one hand on his shoulder & take her other hand in his hand, both of them look in each- other's eyes )

then they dance on canazy music.after this both of them go for a long drive.they comes in evening.
at night when bhoomi sits infront of mirror & brush her hairs, arjun comes & take her hand & kiss her.

b; arjun chodo mujhe neend aa rahi hai.

a: bhanvari??(surprised)

b: arjun plz ab tum bhi so jao.

then he go & sleep, after sleeping of arjun bhoomi gets up ,take a bath & wears a very beautiful royal blue two piece gaoun , which is sleevless & upper jacket of gaoun has transparent sleeves(which arjun bring for her).

then she sits next two the arjun,& touch his face, he wake up & just shocked to see bhoomi, he looks her wid his passionate look.

a: bhanwari tum to kah rahi thi ki tumhein neend aa rahi hai?

b: haan ,wo tum mujhe kabse kah rahe the na, ye gaoun pahan kar dikhane ke liye , to maine socha ki tumhein surprise de doon.

a: oh to ye baat hai! well, i like your surprise.i can't explain in words," kii tum kitni achhi lag rahi ho."

then he go towards her , hold her hand in his hand, removes her hair from her face & kiss her

friends i write all this but i don't know that you like it or not but i can't feel comfortable to write all this.give me your views plz.

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that was so sweet and romantic pakhi di 😳
please write soon

i m loving it i swear i m loving it its just great!!!!!!!! plz continue