Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 4

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when arjun, bhoomi, shaku & manasvi goto the shopping baisa calls them &say
baisa: arjun-bhoomi dekho to ye invitation card ke samples hain , mujhe to ye wala bahut pasand hai,tum batao tumhain kaunsa pasand hai?aur ye shaadi ke programmes ki list pahale ring ceremony, fir sangeet aur uske baad shaadi,theek hai ya kuch change karna hai?

a&b:baisa aapka select kiya hua card bahut hi pyaara hai, aur programmes ki list bhi bilkul sahi hai,hamein kuch change nahin karana hai.

b:theek hai beta ab tum shopping ke liye jao.

now they are going

in shopping mol all of them looking for the bridal dress of bhoomi,shaku select a meroon coloured dress;

shaku: dekho bhoomi ye kaisi hai.

b: achhi hai maanji.

s: tumhein kaisi lagi arjun .

a:achhi hai," but its so common" waise bhi meroon colour ki dress to bhavwari pahle bhi pahan chuki hai."i want some unique &different"

manasvi: theek hai arjun fir tum hi select karo.

a:ok bhabhi.

then arjun select a megenta lehanga dress( which stuff is net with silk base) with light blue(firoji) border with a beutiful silvor coloured work with blue & megenta stones & diamonds.

a:ye dhekhiye bhabhi ye dress kaisi hai?

m; marvouls! in sab cheejon main tumahaari choice itni acchi hai main nahin jaanti thi.

a: thanks bhabhi.

m;bhoomi tum batao.

b: (blushes) main kya boloon, arjun ne select kii hai to acchi hi hogi na bhabhi.

m; oho! to ye baat hai,theek hai fir yahi dress final kar dete hain.

then they buy many other dresses & matching jwellry,
&a very pretty cream colour sherwani with golden ambroydery with meroon coloured jorjut duppata for arjun.

it's the arjun's ring ceremony,
all the friends & relative gathers, heritage house is decorated very well.

baisa: manasvi jara arjun aur bhoomi ko to bula lao , saare mehamaan aa chuke hain.

m:ji baisa.

manasvi infront of arjun's room;

m; aur kitni der lagagi haamere dulhe raja ko , kab se gate band karke bathe ho ,jaldi karo baisa bula rahin hain.

then arjun come outside in a blue sherwani style kurta & cream colour choodidar with cream silk net duppata.

m: kya baat hai arjun , bade jach rahe ho.

a; thankyou bhabhi , bhanwari tyaar ho gayi?

m: chalo dekhatein hain.

infront of mansvi's room.

m: bhoomi , kya hum ander aa saktein hain.

b: aajaiye bhabhi.

bhoomi wears pink coloured lehanga dress & her hairs are down.she looks so pretty.

arjun shocked to see her & look at her cont. without giving any movement of his eyes & eyelashes.

m: oho! oho! aise kya dekh rahe ho, ye tumhaari
bhanwari hi hai .

arjun & bhoomi both feel embressed.

m: achha ab jaldi neeche chalo.

now they are coming to the hall , everyone looks so happy execpt mansen& family.

now arjun taking bhoomi's hand & wear her a beautiful diamond ring & kissed gentely on her hand. bhoomi also wore a beautiful ring to arjun
.
now everyone gives their best wishes to the couple . all the guests take their dinner & party was over.

at night

m; bhoomi , main khushi ko leker aati hoon wo baisa ke paas hai.

b: ji bhabhi.

now manswi gone & arjun comes to her room.

b: arjun tum yahaan ! jaao yahan se plz.

a; main tumhein goodnight bolne aaya hoon.

b: bol to diya,ab jao na arjun.

a: aise nahin.

b: to phir?

arjun take her face in his hand &going towards to kiss her, suddenly mansvi comes .

m: to tum manoge nahin.

a: kya bhabhi aap hamesha galat time par hi kyon aati ho.

m:main to sahi time par hoon lekin tum galat time par ,galat room main aa gaye ho.(push him to outside)

a; bhabhi!!!!!!!!

m; goodnight arjun, sweet dreams.

then he go & bhoomi laugh.


next day in sangeet bhoomi wears a light blue lahanga dress(net stuff silvor diamond work on it) & matching bangles and jwellry& arjun wears white sherwani style kurta with black jacket & a very beautiful ambroyedri on the neck &jacket of it with choodidaar.

now everyone is danced in sangeet .

then mansvi calls arjun & bhoomi for dance. arjun agreed but bhoomi feel shy.atlast both are come &they danced on "aaja maahive" (from kal ho na ho).every one enjoy it.


finally its the marrige day.

in morning every one was busy & two girls hold bhoomi's hand & decorate her hand with mehandi.
in evening there is a beautiful mandap & wonderful decoration of lights & flowers .

then arjun reaches at the mandap in his cream sherwani with golden work & choodidaar with meroon jorjut duptta.he wears traditional rajasthani jooties in his feet & meroon safa on his head .he looks so handsome.

after some time panditji calls bhoomi,& manasvi go to the bring bhoomi.

bhoomi :(infront of lk) aaj mere saare sapne poore ho jaayenge bhagwan .main hamesha ke liye apne arjun ki ho jaaongi.maine is pal ka bahut intzaar kiya tha.

lk: tumhaari prateeksha samaapt hui bhoomi,arjun ke liye tumne bahut kasht sahe,tumhein ye ghar chodna pada, kyonki wo tumnhaara prarabdh(luck) tha.
lekin ab arjun sadev ke liye tumhaara hoga, kyonki yahi vidhi ka vidhan hai.

now manasvi comes&say;
m; are wah bhoomi tum to badi pyaari lag rahi ho iss dreess main. manana padega arjun ki choice ko(bhoomi wears megenta & blue dress as i describe before),ab chalo bhoomi mahurat ka samay ho gaya pandiji bula rahein hai,

now they reach at the mandap & complete the pheras.


now its the time to welcoming to new bride at the home

arjun &bhoomi at the door & shaku do the aarti of them , now bhoomi hit the rice pot gently & they enters to the home .

its their first night.



friends i write the describtion of arjun &bhoomi dresses according my imagination. but believe me its too difficult for me to convert my imagination in words. if you don't like it plz forgive me

that was such lovely and sweet part!
like your imaganiation it looked really
please add a comdey romance to arjun and bhoomi's suhagat raat!
keep up the great work

hi paki ayr main to tumharii fan ho gai........urz story iz 2 good .intresting n many many more God u r just 2 good ok byeee n plz plz plz cont it soon 👏

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thankyou friends all of you are so sweet, wow i have a new fan thanks sumn for your lovely comments & all my dear friends who always encouraging me from their reply.

oh my god !!!!!!!! plz save me .now i write the most -most difficult part of my fan fict. kya likhoon????????? i feel so shy, becoz i never ever write all these things.ummmmmmmmmm.


bhoomi & arjun take the blessing of everyone , now all the members go to their rooms. arjun &bhoomi stand in the hall. now bhoomi is going suddenly arjun asked "kahaan ja rahi ho bhanwari"

b: uper, room me.

a: ruko aise nahin, is special din ki shuruat bhi to kuch special honi chahiya na!

then he pick her in his arms & going to upstairs.
he let her free gently infront of his room & then close her eyes, now he open the door of his room & also open the bhoomi's eyes. bhoomi surprised to see the room.

whole room is decorated with flowers & there are many beautiful & aromatic candels around their bed, a light music was rung there .the atmosphere of room is very romantic & enchanting by the lovely smell of flowers ,aroma of candels &by sweet & light music.

b: arjun ye room------, ye sab------tum----ne.

a: (holding her hand & looks in her eyes) haan bhanwari maine, aaj hamaari nayi jindgi ki shuruat jo hone wali hai.

then bhoomi go close to the window & see to the moon & say.

b: arjun dekho, poora chand(full moon night).yaad hai arjun bhachpan main hum poora chand dekhkar kitna khush hote the.

arjun stands back to her & put his hand around her west & put his chin on bhoomi's shoulder &say;

a; yaad hai, lekin aaj mere paas uss chand se bhi jyada khoobsoorat chand hai.

b: achha , kaun?

a:tum, aur kaun! then he holds bhoomi's face in his hand& sing a song ---" ae chand teri chandni ki kasam, mere pass bhi ek chaand hai. tujhmein to phir bhi daag hai, mera chaand to bedaag hai."


bhoomi becomes shy & sit on the bed.

arjun : bhanwari main tumhaare liye kuch laya hoon.then he open a box, a very beautiful diamond set in it.kaisa hai.

b; bahut pyaara hai arjun , lekin iski kya jaroorat thi .

a: jaroorat thi bhanvari shaadi ke baaad ye tumhaari pahli gift hai meri taraf say.

b: arjun ! tum mere paas ho, isse badi gift duniya main mere liye koi ho hi nahin sakti.

a; main to hamesha tumhaare saath rahooga bhanwari, are haan ek aur bhi gift hai.ye lo.

b: ye kya hai .

a; newzealand ki tickets.

b: newzealand ki tickets .lekin kyon?

a; hamaare honeymoon ke liye ,aur kyon.

b: gaye to the hum honeymoon par , ab dobarra jayenge kya?

a; wo(smiles) ! wo honeymoon tha? waise bhi bhanvari main apna honeymoon hamesha se newzealand me manana chahta tha.

b: lekin itni door hum akele jaayenge kya.

a: na na, bilkul nahin, kakasaheb , baisa, dadaji, mom ,dad aur haan hamaare padosiyon ka dogi, sabko leke jayenge.

b: sachhi, achha theek hai.

a: kya theek hai , homemoon tumhaara aur mera hai to hum hi jayenga na.

b: theek hai , naaraj kyon hote ho.

a; naraj kaun hona chahta hai, wo bhi aaj ki raat!
then he gets close to bhoomi's face to kiss her but bhoomi's rakhadi(jwellary which is wear on head inplace of teeka which bhoomi already wears in her first marrige)) slightly strike on his head.

a: aouch! ye kya pahan rakha hai tumne, dekho na mujhe yahaan sir (forhead) pe laga.

b: kahaan ,yahaan (touch his forhead& kissed him on forhead).

then arjun put out her jwellary & open her hairs & hold her face , going to kiss her.[scene is cut , (is bar director ne cut bol diya)]


next morning

bhoomi gets up , remember last night &feel shy. then she take a shower & wears very beautiful meroon semi- transparent saree with beautiful ambroydri. her hair was wet & drpos of water drop from her hairs;

b: arjun utho na subhah ho gayi, then she put her hairs on arjun's face. water drops on arjun arjun's face & he wake up , bhoomi run towards mirror.

arjun stand back of bhoomi , put his hand aroun her west , remove hair from her neck & kiss her on neck &say;

a: bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho aaj.

b: arjun chodo, mujhe tyaar hona hai, time dekho jara sab log kya sochenge?

a: kya sochenge ? sochenge ki --------even kuch nahin sochenge. hamaari nayi - nayi shadi hui hai , ye baat sab jaante hain ,to ismein sochna kya hai.

suddenly knock at the door

a;offo, ab kaun aa gaya?

he open the door ,manasvi comes ;

m: bhoomi tum tyaar ho ,kya baat hai badi pyaari lag rahi ho, chalo sab breakfast ke liye tumhaara intzaar kar rahein hain, arjun tum bhi jaldi tyaar hoker neeche aa jaao.

a( in slow voice): ji bhabhi,

after complition there breakfast arjun calls bhoomi in thr room & say

a; samaan pack kar lo, hum kal hi newzealand ja rahe hain.

b: itni jaldi! kyon arjun?

a: jaldi, tumhein jaldi lag raha hai . dekh rahi ho na iss ghar mein kitni privacy hai.

b: arjun , tum bhi na.

a: kya , tum bhi na.

b: achha theek hai, main samaan pack karti hoon.



friends finally i write this most difficult part, but all time i holding my breath. i don't know how it is?
i am a soft romantic type of person so i wrote it according my imagination . plz tell me you like it or not.

Originally posted by: pakhi joshi

b: lekin itni door hum akele jaayenge kya.

a: na na, bilkul nahin, kakasaheb , baisa, dadaji, mom ,dad aur haan hamaare padosiyon ka dogi, sabko leke jayenge.

b: sachhi, achha theek hai.

a: kya theek hai , homemoon tumhaara aur mera hai to hum hi jayenga na.

pahki that was so romantic wonderful, nice and sweet and funny like the part about going to honeymoon with all the family members

keep up the great job!

👏 pakhi too gud re i lubd dis..plz cnt soon u rok sweeto 😊

Originally posted by: ziddi

pahki that was so romantic wonderful, nice and sweet and funny like the part about going to honeymoon with all the family members

keep up the great job!

I agree with ziddi!!! pakhi good work.

hi paki ......yar kiya bataon mera dil ker raha hay kay main real saarrthi dekhna chor don aur tumharii story ka saarrthi banaon yar aysa reall main kyun nahin hota 😭 lykin kuch bhi kahoo yar u r 2 good....scene creat kerna koi tum say sikhay ........ ok cont it sooonn plzzzzzzzzzz 👏 urz fan sumn 😃 😃 😃
luvz u byeeeeeeee 😛