Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 16

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awwwwwwwww all of u r really very-very-very sweet. 😳😳
thanks 4 encouraging me.i love u all. 😃😃😊

a: maan, papa, dadaji,bhabhi, baisa sab log jaldi se aayiye.

manasvi: kya hua arjun, kya baat hai.

a: bhabhi bhanwari ko wo project mil gaya hai, and also a check of a very big amount.

bd: achha badi khushi kii baat hai.aaj to bhoomi ne saabit kar diya hai kii sachhi lagan aur mehanat se koi bhi kaam kiya jaaye to namumkin kuch bhi nahin.

m: iss khushi mein to party honi chahiye, kyon baisa?

ba: haan! haan! kyon nahin, aaj shaam ko hi hum ek bahut badi party denge.

m: main sabhi ko phone karti hoon.

a-b in their room.

a: to aaj se meri sidi-saadi bhanwari bahut important ho gayi hai, ab to tumhein bade-bade logon se deal karni hogi,bahut kuch sikhna hoga.

b: ab kya sikhana hoga,????????? 😕

a: computers , english,banking.

b: (making faces) kyaaaaaaa???? ye sab main nahin sikhoogi.

a: are waah kyon nahin sikhogi, ye sab jaroori hai bhanwari,(put his hands around her neck)aur fir main sikhaoonga na tumhein. 😛



b:(blushes)tum sikhaooge!!!!!!! to fir theek hai. 😳

suraj in yuv's room;

s: yuvraaj neeche party shuru hone waali hai aur tum abhi tak tyaar bhi nahin hue?

yuv: wah suraj wah , kya dosti nibhai hai tumne,pahle sankaraant ke din us arjun ke saath milker tumne sabke saamne meri insult kii aur ab uss naukraani kii party ka invitation dene aaye ho. 😡😡

s: yuv tum galat samajh rahe ho , main to tumhaari insult karne ke baare main soch bhi nahin sakta,wo to main arjun kii team mein tha isiliye-------

y: (intrrupt him ) kyon the tum arjun kii team mein mana bhi to kar sakte unko.

lk: lo, ek khel mein suraj ne arjun ka saath kya de diya , yuvraaj ko itna bura lag raha hai. 😆

s: aisi baat nahin hai yuv wo to arjun ke paas mere naam kii slip ayee thi isiliye main unkii team mein tha . 😊

lk: baat to sahi kahi tumne suraj-kiran. yahaan tumne itihaas(history) ko badal diya,verna karna aur paandvon ke saath, per ye to ek khel tha ab dekhna to ye hai kii antim ladaai(fight) mein tum kiska saath dete ho?kya tab badal paaoge tum itihaas ko. 😛

s: yuv plz mujhe samjhne kii koshish karo, tumhaari dosti mere liye bahut maayane rakhti hai,aur ab plz jaldi neeche chalo nahin to dadaji ko bura lagega.

y: theek hai suraj, lekin sirf tumhaare liye main uss party mein jaa raha hoon. 😊

in the hall

guest: shakuntala tumhaari bahu ne to kamaal kar diya, yakeen nahin hota kii ye wahi ladaki hai jo kal tak-----

shaku(intrrupt her): kal kii baat kal beet gayi, aaj bhoomi jiss mukaam per hai,usse mujhe uss per garv hai.

then music is start and everyone start dance;

arjun and bhoomi dance together;

kushaal: dekh rahe ho jija iss ladaki ko, kya thi aur kya ho gayi.

maansen :dekh raha hoon kushaal , iss ladaki ko hamne jitna kamjor samjhaa tha utni ye hai nahin, aur ab to ye arjua bhi iske saath hai.

yuv look a-b and remember those days when he danced wid shefaali;

yuv(tears in his eyes)(to himself) tumne aisa kyon kiya shefaali. 😭

mansen hear it and become very upset and say: mere bete ko dukh dekar ye log chain se nahin jee sakte.

bhoomi look at manasvi and who is stands in a corner and think about satya; 😭
she go towards her;

b: are bhabhi aap yahaan kyon khadi hain, chaliye dance karte hain.

m: nahin bhoomi plz mera man nahin hai,aur fir main kiske saath----- 😭

a:(intrrupt her) kyon bhabhi kya main itna bura hoon kii aap mere saath dance bhi nahin kar sakti. 😛

m: nahin arjun aisi koi baat nahin hai,wo kya hai ki--

a: kuch nahin sunana mujhe aap chaliye mere saath. 😃

then arjun and manasvi dance together ,and bhoomi becomes very happy.then she see suraj;

bhoomi to suraj: bhaiya ye kya baat hui , sab dance kar rahein hain aur aap yahaan khade hain.

s: are bhoomi wo--

b:aap aaiye mere saath--

arjun go to take juice, then bhhomi comes there;

b: bhabhi aap surajji ke saath dance kijiye naa.

m: nahin bhoomi ,bilkul nahin.

shaku: are bhai kyon nahin sabhi dance kar rahe hain,to tum kyon nahin,chalo suraj manasvi ke saath dance karo.

then suraj holds manasvi wid hesitation and start dancing😳,😳suddenly arjunji comes there and his face becomes red wid anger to see this.

a: bhanwari iss suraj kii himmat kaise hui manasvi bhabhi ke saath dance karne kii. 😡😡

b:(holds arjun) : arjun maanji ne khud kaha hai bhabhi ko surajji ke saath dance karne ke liye, aur aaj to tum kam-se kam maaraj mat ho plz(look in his eyes) 😊

a(smiles) ok and they stars dance. 😊

👏 as always......tooooo good!!! 👍🏼 I luv your style of writing pakhi....keep it up 🤗

wow....pakhi...i liked that......i really liked the scene between suraj and yuv....keep it up......and jaldi sey update karo.... 👏

i wish the show has such party too....arjun-bhumi hasnt been like this since their reception.....please continue 👏

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that was such a great part 😛

wowwwwww pakhi
really gr8 part 👏
plzz post soon
I'm anxiously waiting 4 your part 😊 👏

luv
MONA

thanks a bunch to my all dear frnds 4 ur response

a: suno bhanwari ,aaj mujhe bank jaakar, kuch cash withdrawal karana hai, tum mere saath chalana, main tumhein bhi saara process sikha doonga.

b: kya karana hai tumhein bank mein.

a; cash withdrawal aur kya?

b: (confused)whichdrraaaa kya kaha rahe ho tum? 😕

a(put his both hand on her shoulder and say) : mein tumhein enlgish sikhane ke liye kaha raha tha na,chalo aaj pahala word sikho-------bolo ----withdrawal. 😉

b: whhichhh dra--drier-----

a(laugh) : bahnwari drier nahin , drier to hair drier hota hai na---achha bolo with---- 😆

b: with

a: good! ab bolo drawal. 😉

b: drawal-----withdrawal-----maine bol diya-----maine bol diya.(becomes very happy and clapping) 😃

a: wow very good , aise hi seekhti rahogi to jaladi hi sab seekh jaaogi.😉

b:confused: achha arjunnnnnnnnnn ,ye to batao jise bolne mein maine itni mehanat kii ,uska matlab kya hota hai? 😕

a: ummmmmmmmm iska matlab hai ,bank se paise nikalwaana.

b:(suprised)kyaaaaaaaaaa, to sidhe-sidhe nahin bol sakte the kii tumhein bank se paise niklwaane hain, kya ye cash(close her eyes and speak hardely) withdrawal -cash withdrawal laga rakha tha. 😡

a:laugh and puts his hands around her neck: kyonkii bhanwari aise hi bola jaata hai, aur ab jo tum itne bade auhade per ho to tumko to aise bolna hi hoga. 😉

b:(making face) kya arjun ,ye sab .

achha chodo ye sab , ab hamein bank bhi chalana hai aur fir office bhi to jana hai tumhein bhool gayin aaj to khandelwaal gr. of inus. se koi tumse milne aane waala hai.
then both of them go to the bank and arjun teach her dat how is process of banking.

they reach office ;arjun see shefaali's car there;

a: bhanwari shefaali aayee hai kya khandel waal gr. of indus. kii taraf se, dekho uskii car yahaan khadi hai.chalo main bhi ander chalata hoon tumhaare saath. 😊

inside;

naina: mem khandel waal gr. of inus se miss shefaali khandelwaal ayeen hai aapse milne ke liye.

b: unhein 5 min. baad mere cabin mein bhej dena.

then shefaali knock at bhoomi's cabin's door but bhoomi's chair in opposite direction of the door.

s: may i cime in mem.

b:(still her chair is in opposite direction.) yes.

s: mem i m so glad ke aapne hamein appointment diya, its vey nice dat we start our business relationship, plz mem we want to deal wid ur companay.

bhoomi turns her chair and stands up:------- to shefaali khandelwaal aaj mujhe plz bol rahi hai????

s(shocked)tum yahaan !!!!!!!!!!! tum yahaan kya kar ho ???

b: (smiles) shefaali bhabhi !!! ye cabin kiska hai ?yahaan ki MD ka, jis chair per main bethi thi wo chair kiskii thi?? yahaan ke MD kii.itna to pata hona chahiye na aapko, aap to ek bahut bade businessmen kii beti hain to kya inana bhi nahin jaanati. 😆😆😆

s(getting very angry) lagata hai roy indus. kii owner ka dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai, jo tum jaisi naukraani ko is comp. ka MD bana diya.

then arjun comes there.

a: maine tuhein pahale bhi kaha tha shefaali aur aaj bhi kaha raha hoon bhanwari se tameej se baat kiya karo, verna tum mera gussa bhi dekh logi. 😡

s: o to tum bhi yahin ho, kya baat hai goenka indus. aur tumhaari cop. mein koi kaam nahin hai kya jo yahaan roy inus. mein bethe ho.

a: mein to yahaan apni patni ka saath dene aaya tha, kyonkii her mukaam meri patni ke saath uskaa pati rahega, lekin tumhaare saath to koi bhi nahin hai-(smiles)---tumhaara pati bhi nahin. 😆😆

s: maine galti kar di jo main yahaan aa gayi, ab mujhe ek pal bhi yahaan nahin rukana---then she is going---but bhoomi stops her;

b:(in a commenting way) shefaali bhabhi!!!!!! jab yahaan tak aa hi gayi hain to ye bhi leti jaayiye. 😉

s: kya hai ye??????? 😕😕

b: aapke wo paise jo maine aapse liye the aur haan poore byaaj( intrest)samet hain, balki usse bhi kahin jyaada, ----smiles--aur haan ye paise maine arjun se nahin liye, ye mera pehala check hai bhabhi. 😛

shefaali feel so insulted ,she take the check and leaves;

a: bahut achha laga bhanwari mujhe ,jaise aaj tumne shefaali ko jawaab diya, she deserves it. 😉

then both of them smiles to each-other. 😃😊


precap; khushi crying and suraj comes there.

wow...that was really gud pakhi...especially the way bhoomi insulted shefali...woooo-hoooooo keep it up 👏

its awesome i read it from the beginning its simply great when r posting the next part?? i luv it when bhumi insults shefali..keep up the good work yaar 👏 👏