Saarrathi Fan Fic by pakhi joshi - Page 10

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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was great
i wonder what shefali is upto 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
Where is Arjun???? 😭 .Pls bring him back in the story soon 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
ohhh god where is arjun ?
plzz pakhi bring him back otherwise I shall die 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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bhoomi looking for arjun but she don't find him,she sits in hall and suraj comes.

s: are bhoomi, tum to kafi pareshaan lag rahi ho, kya hua?

b: bhaiya arjun(and she start crying)

s: arjun ??? kya hua use?????

b: pata nahin wo kahaan hai?

s: yahin- kahin hoga aa jaayega, tum itni dukhi kyon ho rahi ho.

b: aisa pahli baar hua hai kii wo kisi ko bina bataaye gaya hai, mujhe uski bahut fikra ho rahi hai.

manasvi comes and say: kuch der wait kar lo, agar phir bhi arjun nahi naaya, to suraj use doondhne chala ,jaayega.

s: haan bhoomi manasvi theek kaha rahi hai.


suddenly our hero enters(now all of u happy"diya, mona don't worry i can't imagine my story w/o arjun")

arjun: are bhabhi ,aap sab yahaan kyon khade hain.

manasvi: lo bhoomi aa gaye aapke arjunji.

bhoomi run towards him and hug him and start crying;
manasvi and suraj smile and leave.

b(still crying and hug him and speak nonstop): kahaan chale jaate ho bina bataaye, pata hai mujhe kitni fikra ho rahi thi, kam se kam kisi ko kahkar to jaana chaahiye tha na.

arjun put his finger on her lips and say: shhhhhhh itne saare sawaal ek saath, ok baba i am sorry , ab se kahakar jaaonga.ok.
waise agar bina bataaye jaane ka itna faayada hota hai to, bina bataaye jaana achha hai na.

b: faayada?????? kaisa faayada???? 😕

a(in naughty way): jaise tumne mujhe abhi hug kiya. 😉

bhoomi gives a slow punch on his chest.and blushes:😳 arjun tum bhi na, waise tum gaye kahaan the.

a: surpriseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
then he close her eyes and take her outside.

b: kahaan le ja rahe ho mujhe??????
now he open her eyes .

b: waah !!!!! arjun nayi car kiske liye hai??

a: meri bhanwari ke liye.

b: kyaaaaaa mere liye ?????????

a: haaan bhanwari, ab tum apni khud kii gaadi se office jaaogi aur haan kal se driving seekhne ke liye tyaar ho jaana.

b:(laugh) main aur driving!!!!!!!!! rahane do arjun ,ye mujhse nahin hoga.

a: kyon nahin hoga"beleive in yourself bhanwari" tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho. 😛

achha ab jaldi se khana laga do, main fresh ho kar aata hoon.

then both of them take dinner.

in their room;

a: achaa ye to bataao kaisa raha aaj ka din.

b: achha tha arjn, wo naina hai na meri PA, bahut achhi hai, pata hai usne mujhe laptop par kaam karna sikhaaya, par mujhe achhe se samajh nahin aaya. 😕

a: koi bhi kaam ek din mein nahin sikha jaata , bhanwari.
aur rahi tumhaare project kii baat, to main hoon na , tumhaari help ke liye. 😊

b: sachhi arjun , tum meri help karoge.

a: haan , haan kyon nhain.chalo abhi se shuru karte hain.

then arjun teach to bhoomi dat how to work on laptop and other skills of dat project.

precap: shefali makes plan for ruining the arjun, bhoomi learn driving.
Edited by pakhi joshi - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
excllent part di
can't wait for bhoomi's driving lesson it will be fun
plz write soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
Hey continue soon.. 👏 👏 👏

Wonderful update.. 😉 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
Really nice pakhi! 😊 I enjoyed it all. please write some more when you get the time 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 wow pooh too gud re 👏 👏 👏 i lubd it yaar plz cnt soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
WOw i just read the entire Story its really good Palki joshi.
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG! all of u are sooooooooooo sweet, justchill, shazy welcome here and thanks a bunch for ur lovely reply.
and thankyou sooooooooo much to my all dear friends for ur wonderful response.

next part

shefali to his father: dad, main kisi bhi tarah se arjun ko barbaad karna chahaati hoon. chaahe mujhe iske liye kuch bhi karna pade.

her dad: main jaanata hoon beta , lekin hum kya kar sakte hain?

s: main sabse pahle arjun ko professionally weak karna chahati hoon, fir personally.
iske liye kuch plan hain mere paas.

d: kaise plan beta?

s: dad main chaati hoon kii, hum yahaan kii badi- badi companiyon se deal kar lein, aur unhein apni side kar lein ,jisse wo sab arjun kii rivals ho jaayein.

d: idea achha hai shefali, hum jaroor aisa hi kuch kareinge.


in the morning at heritage house

a: jaldi karo bhanwari , office ke liye late ho jaaogi.

b: bas abhi ayee.then she comes outside.

a: aaj hum tumhaari car se jaayeinge, aur waapas aate waqt main tumhein driving sikhaonga.

b:(making face) driving sikhna jaroory hai.

a: ji haan bilkul jaroori hai, main nahin chahta kii tum kissi par bhi depend raho.

b: ok, lekin tumhaari car kahaan hai arjun?

a; wo, wo , repair ke liye gayi hai, uski headlights main kuch problem thi .

b: achha theek hai, chalo chalte hain.

then arjun dropped her to her office.

in the office bhoomi call naina, in her cabin;

b: naina jara dekho to maine is project ka praposal tyaar kiya hai, kaisa hai?

naina: exellent mem, bahut achha hai, aap to kahati thi aapko kaam nahin aata?

b: actually mere pati ne ismein meri help ki hai, bas ab is par kaam shuru karna hai, hamaare paas jyaada waqt nahin hai.

n: ji mem, main sab logon ko iske baare mein samjha doongi.

in the evening, arjun comes her office and see dat bhoomi is busy in her work , he become happy to see dat.

a: may i come in mem?

b: are arjun tum aa gaye, aur ye kya , tumhein andar aane ke liye mujhse poochne ki jarrorat kabse padne lagi?

a(come closer to her,in funny way): apni bhanwari se naa sahi par roy indus. kii MD se poochne kii jaroorat to hai na.

b: koi md wam-md nahin hai, main tumhaare liye sirf tumhaari bhanwari hoon bas.

a: ok, ab chalein.

b(making face): ab tum mujhe driving sikhaoge?

a: ji MD sahiiba.aur koi excuse nahi , ok.

then he bring her to a place where traffic is very less.

a:chalo bhanwari aa jao driving seat par.

b: arjun mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai.

a: darne kii koi baat nahin hai bhanwari , yahaan traffic bhi bahut kam hai.aur fir tumhaara arjun hai na tumhaare saath.

then she start to drive the car but her hands are just shivering.arjun holds her hand, after some time arjun just remove his hand .

bhoomi see a man who bring a fruit hand-trolly towards them, when the men see their car, he just run behind , but the car stikes to dat hand-trolly.and all the fruits are fall here and there.

b: start crying ; maine kaha tha na, mujhse nahin hoga arjun.

a: koi baat nahin bhanwari ,jab maine pahli baar car sikhi thi to isse bhi bada accident kiya tha.

b: lekin bechaara wo fruit wala.

a: main abhi uske paise de deta hoon, then he gives money to dat man.

a: chalo ab ghar chalein baaki kal sikheinge and don't worry its ur first day.

precap; arjun gives a flower bouquet to bhoomi, but after some time he is getting angry and all the family members gathered there.

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