'Confused about the numb pain'(Part VI) ends - Page 2

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

oh my god di!

aapne ek nayi story start bhi kar di???????

Hi Mahak,

Yup i told u na i would post another one soon...

yipee!!!!!!!!

and u forgot to pm me?????

kyun???

Areey yeh Pm karna na i usualy forget... lagta hai after i remembered i missed to clik ur id.. warna janbujhkar nahi karti aisa... Glad dear u read still and with such a warm way commenting.. I absolutely loved the thing u made.. the wordings touched me so much... so sweetly written.. u like my work and u appreciate it so much means so much to me..thanks for giving me so much affection its one of the best plesant gifts i got from any reader of mine.. i will cherish these moemtns completely... thanks a ton dear... luv u loads..

chalo koi nahi.........

meri kismat achi hai jo aaj hi maine ff section check karne ki sochi.......

thank god!

aur aaj main pehli baar padhte padhte comment karoongi........

to show my exact feelings......

Good to know that u r reading and commenting live as u read.. lol😆

that's bad with swarna

how can a girl tolerate this much?

and she had been tolerating since 7 yrs!

by god.....

itna wait karti hai woh?

aur uski nando ke paas khud ka ghar nahi hai kya jo uski life mein enter karti rehti hain?????

and why did virat wanted her to consult his sisters rather than a doctor?

are they doctors? didn't he cared abt the child?

hey i loved the poetic lines! u have written them beautifully.........

u r simply mind blowing.

Thanks dear for feelgin that the poetic liens were nice..and yes woman like her cant easily leave they cant let mind rule..their heart rules all through.. and in family as husband wife u want to give every chance and every try in life... to be together.. if ur ego istn that big...

but i think that somewhere swarna was wrong.....

virat was a brother too.........

he had to invest for is sisters.......

it was not that he wasnt doing anything for her and his child.......

but he wanted to secure his niece's future too........

what was bad in that?

I am agreeign with u .. the only things i guess was blown that she wanted him to discuss with her.. take her views and decide to take such a step of investign such a big amount.. its like life partners so when fianncial instablity is gogin to hapen nothign wrong in askign and takgin decisons as Swarna will run the household with the money he will give ehr.. there is nothin wrong what Virat did but wife's opinions shoudl also come along.. may be thats what she felt..

but yes virat was wrong......

he didnt cared abt vedika's future........

and the answer he gave was extremely rude.......

yes the anseers sums up that his money is his and she doestn have any reason to question or advice him.. sharign ur income with ur wife is common in most household many give the whoel salary to wife...

and a girl's life is hell if u dont get the support of ur husband......

she comes into another family for him........

if he isn't there then what's the use of her sacrifices?

i mean her husband should take the responsibility of asking her her wish for their future.....

what do u think?

yes she is new to the family but make her not feel that.. tellgin her this again n again will make her isolated and some times too much questioning nad too much adjustment just break the paitnce level and witho husbadns suport no one will even want to do those adjsutment..

is another child a grt thing to do when a woman is not at all mentally prepared for it?

their relationship was on the verge of breaking......

and what he was doing?

pressurizing her for another child?

this is absolutely ridiculous.......

she should stand for herself........

and di ur poetic lines add flavour to ur story........

loved them.........

good to know u loved them.. i guess he planned evrythign for future and idnt consider abotu present..adn in these seven years he really felt more fr chidren and the wya they shoudl be brought up but not abt these 7 year show much Swarna shoudl be given care love or whatver what and how she needs them...

virat should support her.........

she left her family for him!!!!!!!

atleast have some respect for that sacrifice........

thank god!!!!

atlast virat was loving her.......

but i think it was just physical intimacy........

and not the actual love.........

love which is not physical but emotional.........

see.......

i thought that..........

virat was not understanding her views.........

and then ur poetic lines when swarna was ill..........

they were the best........

it was true........

for the fist time swarna spoke up.........

she had to.........

they were saying as if they never wasted the money........

I guess bro n sister get too attched with the thigns they did for eahc other from childhood but their 20 years of realtionship and ehre 4-5 years relationship .. spce they shodul have given n not try to influence on him antyhing.. when he is amrried... why they shoudl speack on his behalf when he himself shoudl have be it not gogin to the hospital and staygin or antyhign else ..

what??????????

virat felt bad for his sisters????

i take my words back now......

all he cared abt was his family........

and i think h fogot that swarna is a part of his family too..........

the only one to be with him always.........

his life partner.........

and he just thought of a divorce????

just due to this minute issue.........

he is disgusting...........

he doesnt cares abt swarna, vedika or his future child..........

virat didnt cared for his baby boy?

and he asked her for a divorce........

how disgusting!

he wanted that child.......

and now he wants to leave her with them alone........

how immature!

yes he is immature who thinks Swarna is imature. i guess he feel shis children will learn from her to disrepsect his family and thts why want a divorce so that she knows better when she stays away.. for him his financial stabilty given to hsi children will go logn way he thinks..he is certianly been misguided by his family who cant understnad they r openign wide spce for both Virat and swarna to fall into a pit where no one wil come otu but fall deeper inside... with no light to show them the way ahead in life..

he didnt even bothered to bear her expenses too?

she was the lady from which hi so called children took birth........

" Life for me and u is not the same,
U want to end this and have me to blame,
I still can't find this to be the end,
I still love u and wants things to be the same?"

why does she still wants a person like him back in her life?????

why?????

but well i guess.........

woman who have been in marriage and dont have otehr goals btu have alwyas thoguht abt marriage husbadn and dreamt of children their growing up process lovign caring relationship r to broken ..r hrut but certianly they never can stop themselves from loving the other.. as they can never hate the person with whom they shared life ...

she i doing all this for her children...........

she will never want to deprive the children of their father........

i wonder why a woman has to suffer this much????

woman tend to become vocal after a lot of happengins instead of slowly in the begiining tryn to sort what all they can take and they cant take.. serial films make sacrificing woman to be godees and idol which is weird... been selfish is nto at all abnormal but normal and a must for a human being..woman rnt superfecial.. they r human..

"Prabha: Yes, he may ask why you both cant stay together, why u don't ? I will be happy to hear that and answer him with love and a lot of care towards his feelings. But I think if I had stayed with my ex husband and seeing us fighting and seeing us reacting the way we did to each other during arguments and my child then would surely ask , why u both cant stop fighting and at that time I would not be able to answer him at all. Feel myself in pain stress and my child getting his share of that too."

i think prabha is right........

i think like prabha.......

why was she to bear all the pain?????

their children would be more severly affected if they see them fighting.........

prabha is a very strong lady......

i wish all the ladies in our society is same as hers.........

atleast prabha's point of view made her realise.......

for sure vedika was suffering........

yes Prabha is a strogn ehaded woman..and Swarna has understood not to cry and fight btu to do soemthign relevant with peaceful means soemwhere in the direction which will help her to do what she wants in the end ..

"I have now decided what's to be done,
I have come to terms with what time has undone,
I am going to do this,
Try to be clear whether I want or not to be your wife
It's my life and I will show
My stand and my side in mine and in your life?

these lines r perfect.......

atleast swarna realised the importance........

now she could stand up for herself........

for her children...........

for a woman's right........

loved it to the core!

the way u show their feelings is simply awesome........

do continue soon........

and plz be sure to pm me........

i will be waiting........

and waiting and waiting.........

i loved ur story.........

its marvellous.........

plzzz continue sooner.........

Originally posted by: sri_4

hey bhoomi..

yeah i was still in process of reading u r stories..

but u cud have PMed me..

anyways will read it and then comment though i knw it wud be one of u r best..

good wishes..

sri:-)

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wonderful concept Bhoomi......another very touchy aspect of lyf. Its all so realistic.....luved the way u put it.....n u definitely knw I luv ur writing style....its like sum1 is softly kncking the ideas in my head.....its really very lovely. To be honest.....I donno how to prevent the situation Swarna is in now....may be bcoz not everything can be prevented....sum things need to be faced.....however I liked teh way Prabha stood for herself....Swarna's talk wid her definitely was useful...wud love to read further....pls continue soon Bhoomi.....n thnx for teh PM.

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

bhoomi awesome fic and an awesome theme loved it