Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Hi guys.

I know, maine kuch comments pe reply nahi kiya. Actually, I decided to do that first and then post UD...but mujhe dhamkiya milni shuru hogayi thi πŸ˜† πŸ˜† , so I decided to post UD first and then continue with replyn comments....I hope you wont mind.( Jinki comment pe reply karna baaki hai, I'm sorry aur main jald hi kar dungi...)

so guys...

Here you go!!!

I'm done with UD!!!

Now it's your turn....please read and give your comments...

And silent readers, please press "like" button!


Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Awesum!!! Raj doesnt blv in Naina sumhow....but am glad he cud place his trust on Naveen n Abhi....n got sum frnds in them.

Actually Mana....main kya kahu....mujhe na ye bahut interesting lagi.....they r in junior college....and I luv this youthful thing!!! (Raaz ki baat ye hai meri next fic bhi touthful hai...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†)....Raj always annoys Naina....but he is equaly concerned abt her.....thats the sweetest thing!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

And yes....tum meri ore se nishchint raho.....mujhe to ye war hi pasand hai....jab tak takrar na ho....pyaar me maza nahi ata na...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

And Aalekh's entry is gud....I always luv him if he is like Naina's bro...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....and he also admits....Raj me baat hai...😳😳😳....usme sirf baat hi nai aur bhi bahut kuch hai...😳....

Waise main line marna yehi stop karti hu....lekin haan....mujhe janna hai Raj aisa kya karega jisse Aalekh wil not like sitting there till long...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....

And yes....Mana....tumhe pata hona chahiye na....mere paas itna dimag nahi hai...that I take offense n mind karu....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Chalo....abhi jaldi se UD karo....mujeh ye fic padne me bahuuuuuuuuuut maza aa raha hai....πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ....pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj Naina ko kitna torture karta hai magar in front of the adults he acts as her best friend!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Kitna bada nautanki hai yeh!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj met Naveen and Abhimanyu and became best friends with them!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats good!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Raj allowed them to have the fun of teasing Naina but never lets them physically harm her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Chalo kam se kam itni parwaah toh karta hai Naina ki!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

They are now in junior college!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne Naina ko football phek ke maara and gave her a bruise on her heard!!!!!! Thats very bad of him!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

So Raj also has a name for Naina which only he calls her and that is Naina!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab yeh 3 idiots milkar Naina ka mazak uda rahe hai aur usse pareshan kar rahe hai!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Naveen aur Abhi Naina ko bhabhiji bulate hai and Raj does not have any problem with that!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Lagta hai yeh dono abhi se practise kar rahe hai, akhir aage chalke Raj aur Naina ki shaadi toh honi hi hai na!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina gussa ho gayi and said I hate you to Raj but Raj smiled and said she doesn't!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is hoping Raj who acts like he is the King of the school gets kicked off his throne!!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

She is imagining herself strangling Raj!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Bechari aur kar bhi kya sakti hai??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

She should have changed her school jab Raj ne usse tang karna shuru kiya tha!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Naina bumped into Aalekh who was new there and thought he was cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh was Junior Martial Arts Champion at his school!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Naina is happy to see Aalekh has four classes with her and is hoping Aalekh will kick Raj during Martial Arts!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is becoming impatient when Naina is late in coming to class!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

His friends are singing to tease him!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†He ordered them ke jaao jaake dekho Naina kaha hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He is scared also when it was a long time before Naina came!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is very sweet to Naina and she thinks of him as her brother!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh ne sahi kahake Raj mein baat toh hai aur Junior college mein hokar bhi G.S.!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina had shown Aalekh her bruises!!!!! Wakai how can Raj hit her like that??😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina is right Raj is a Monster!!!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Aalekh promised Naina that he will protect her from Raj and Naina is confident that he will teach Raj a lesson!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naveen actually told Aalekh to move as he is sitting with his friend Raj's wife!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj doesn't want Aalekh to sit with Naina and challenged Aalekh he will see how long Aalekh likes sitting there!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh promised that he will do his best to stop Raj from torturing Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally maine teeno parts padh liye...and all i can say is...."it's different boss!!!!!!!"πŸ˜‰......to jahan maine socha tha ki bachpan ki dosti dikhne waali hai...par yahan to bachpan ki dushmani dekhne ko mil rahi haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...huda ne ya raj ke sarr par kuch maar diya tha kya???????bechaara pagal ho gaya hai..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....accha khaasa banda tha...ab gunda bann gaya hai aur saath mein do namune bhi rakhe hain assist karne ke liye..abhi aur naveen......well dono hi poore useless hain par ek baat baar baar sahi bolte hain..."bhabhiji"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†......to ab aalekh the bhai ki entry bhi ho gayi hai...aur hamesha ki tarah naina ka aate hi bodyguard bann gaya hai...but the difference is iss baar vo naina ko raj se bacha raha haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†but inn sab ke beech bhi lagta hai ki raj cares for naina...vo khud to jo marzi kare aur kisi ko kuch nhn karne deta naina ko......welll pyaar ki shuruwaat aise hi hota hai bhaai😳😳......and now i m eagerly waiting for the next update dear😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
damn cool
awesome
superb
can't wait for next part
update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
Superb update dear.
I loved it.Still,raj blamed naina and till tortures her.
Wow,raj ne friendship kia naveen aur abhi ke sath.
Good see alekh there for helping naina.
I loved their ,Raj and naina's sweet jhagra.
Continue soon dear.
Thanks for the lovely update
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
Great part Mana...πŸ‘ This fic is something....!!!! ⭐️

The leap is nice....College times are always fun....But doesnt seem so to Naina...!!!

Ab Aalekh aa gaya hai toh no tension....!!!!! πŸ˜›

Hopefully Rajveer will get some sense...But usko zyaada maar vaar mat padwana...itne chikne chehre ki band baj jayegi...!!!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Can't wait for the next part.....update sooooooooooon.....!!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
wow
nice update
too good
loved it
awsome
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Hi Manali
How r u???
Update was gud..
Raj is still torturing Naina ..After all pyaar ki starting larai ke sath hi hoti haiπŸ˜‰..Naveen n Abhi r Raj's friend..They call Naina bhabhijiπŸ˜‰..Abhi se hi itni respect.
Alekh is new in school n he is a karate champion..Naina is happy to b with him..She thinks of him as her brother...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Wat will happen now??
Update soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
wowww...read ur fic..compltly diff frm others...luved it.....just requestin u to updt it more regularly...luved ur concept...:) :)

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