Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sania_58
awsome update
plz continue soon

plz send me a PM

Thank you so much sania!!

and yes, i'll pm u...

can u add me to your buddy list?

That way i won't fail in informin u....😊

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Aww...how cute is that...??? Thanks dhara! Well..i too find fights or rather tiffs more cute than sweet talks 😉

Poor Rajveer...taking out everything on Naina...!!! haan...ab apno pe hi toh gussa nikaalte hai!😉 Aur Raj ka dil toh Naina ko kabse apna maan chuka hai na!😛

His mom liking Naina is going to make him all the more angry...!!! yeah...aag mein tel ka kaam kiya uss cheez ne...😆 😆

Bina wajah Naina ko chot lagi...!!!!

This is one of the cutest RN fics, I have come across...!!! Continue soon...!!! Thanks a ton again sweetie...😃

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

thanks for the update You're most welcome dear ! 😊

I was very surprised to read that raj behaved so rudely with naina. He believes that naina is just like huda and his friends. Hmmm....he had a very bad experience with them, so he thought so.

I am sure that naina will give her a proper answer. let's see 😉 Raj ko jawab dena itna aasaan bhi nahi 😛

Raj's mom likes naina very much and wants raj to be her friend so that they can play together. Even naina likes Gayatri....but she is very angry with raj.

waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon. I will....

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was really good
but why Raj is behaving like this with Naina
plz continue soon

Thanks for liking it Prerna...😊

Well...Raj ka problem jaldihi pata chal jaayega!😊

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiiiii Mana, Hi Yogitha!! 😃

Lovely update 👏 👏 👏 👏Thanks a ton !!😊

Naina apne dadu ke saath rehthi hain'.n she miss her parents'..u know some thing this reminded me of my child hood'..i also used to live with my grand parents( long time for two years) the reasons also same'..n they used to pamper me sooo much......but afsoas ki baat ye hain ki raj jaisa cute ladkha mera neighbour nahi hain jiske saath main jaghda karsaku. he he he!! 😆 😆 😆 Well sad for you !! but are you sure, Raj jaise cute ladke ke saath tumhe jhagda karna hai??? 😉

Naina to bahut well mannered child hain '.she is ready to become a friend of raj '..parrrrrrr raj to is baat ke liye tayyar nahi hain'..usne naina ko ugly kaisa kaha yaar'. Arey yaar janaab gusse mein hai! Ab Raj ka gussa!! 😳 Aur phir APNO pe gussa nahi honge toh kispe honge??? 😛

naina kitni sweet hain''usne kaha ki raj galthi se gira diya.jab asal mein wo jaanthi hain ki raj ne ye jaan bhoochke kiya''. Raj ne koi option nahi choda na 😆 Uske maa ke saamne usne jhoot toh bola hi aur uparse innocent si shakal banake Naina ko bhi sorry bola...😆

n u know what''.i loved this type of beginning of a not so beautiful friend ship''kyunki i know baadh mein this will turn in to the most wonderful n beautiful relation ship........ me too !! And yes, it'll turn into most wonderful and beautiful relationship!😃

I am not all disappointed with this'..mujhe to ab in donon ke bichmein cute fights dekhna hain''... Ohk !! Your wish, my command, dear !!😃

'n raj naina ko jaldi bada kardo yaar. Arey yaar!! Sab ke sab ek jaise hai! hamesha har waqt Raj pe line maarni hoti hai tum logoko...par tum phir bhi alag ho! Tumne DONO KO bada karne ki demand ki hai, jabki baaki sab sirf RAJ ko bada dekhna chahte hai! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I really liked this update but ek baath mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga'..wo hain tumhari update ki length''don't u think ye bahutttttttttttt short hain. Nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn !!! Kitna bada toh hai !! Aur main toh kitniiiii good girl hoon! Tumhe kabhi mujhe dhamki deneki zaroorat padi hai aaj tak??? Toh plzzzzzzzz isse chota matt kaho...waise bhi woh Priya mera dimaag khati rehti hai font ki size aur UD ki length ko leke!

The update is awesome'''n plz try to update fast n that too long one. Ohk boss!!!😛

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali Hi di !!

How r u??? kaisi lag rahi hoon? Dekho toh....😃 !!

This title is really cute n romantic... Thank you !!

Update was cute..Raj n Naina r kids..Raj must b so cute na.. ** getting excited**** Yeah..... !!! verrrry cute !!! *** grinning broadly ****

Raj has no friends n stupid Huda n Shantunu r teasing him..Poor chap!!! Hmm....but maine kisiko toh bhej diya hai Raj keliye ! 😛

Naina saved him but he is fighting with her..I think he is scared of making friends.. True....coz he became friends with those two jerks and faced the consequences...So,he is bit scared and there is something more to it !😉

he is teasing Naina n even she is fighting him back..

But I think gradually they'll become best of friends...Dosti ki shuruat ladai swehi hoti hai😊😛 Arey nahi Di...!!! Yaha dushmani hai !! Par yeh dushmani kya rang layegi, yeh toh waqt hi batayega!!

U made me nostalgic...bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye...😊😊 Thanks again... Hold on !!! Aapka bhi koi Raj jaisa neighbour tha kya? 😲 Aur aapse issitarah ladta tha??? 😛

Continue soon

Bye Byeeee!!!

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Wonderful part.But,iye kaya rajveer aur naina ka dosti ke wajay war suru hogaya.
But ,I loved this part.

Continue soon dear.

Thank you so much Rakhi, for liking the Update !

Aur haan...yaha dosti nahi War hai 😉

par yeh war kya rang lata hai, yeh toh waqt hi batayega!😛

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: vvdn
wonderful update....SO the war is began...😉😆

luved it...plzzzzzzz continue soon

Thanks dear! 😊

may i know your name??

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Mana, Hi guglu!

Hmmm..... Not fair. I mean Raj taking out everything on Naina. Naina ne to usse bachaya tha yaar. Aur Raj ne usi se jhagda kar liya Naina se. Naina ne kitne ache se baat ki thi usse aur usne Shantanu aur Huda ka badla Naina par nikal liya. hmmm...I know it's not fair...but yeh Raj hai...kuch hatke hi karega na?? 😉 par lagta hai iss baar yeh khud hi poora 'hatt' gaya hai...😆 Ab kya kare, mere dimaag ki idea hai...kuch toh ulta pulta hona hi hai! 😆 😆 😆

But then kisi par to gussa nikalega hi. Being the best is difficult-either you have chamchas around you ar else enemies. I can understand his condition. After allhe is only a child. Aur ab to Naina bhi badla lene wali hai. I'm eagerly waiting for the next part. Arey waah ! Saare ke saare Raj ko kitnaaaaaaaaa achchese samajhte hai! Woh 100 gunaah kare toh bhi maaf ! Uske gussa nikalne ke chakkar mein bechari Naina ko chot lagi yeh kisine nahi dekha na?😆 Ab Naina badla leti hai ya nahi woh toh agle UD mein pata chalega na?

Update soon.

Love

Guglu.

Luv,

mana.😊

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manali

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Heloo guys!!!! yeh kya aap sab gussa ho, ke UD ko late hogaya??? Actually aap sab ki POPULAR demand pe Raj ko jaldi bada karna tha! Ab bada karne mein itna waqt toh lagta hai na???

Well...but aap sab dosti ki umeed kar rahe the...woh hogi ya nahi, I can't guarantee now....

Anyways....enjoy!!!

Part 3

Few years later'

During these years Rajveer and Naina went to school together everyday. Naina was the target of Rajveer's tortures every single day. He would call her names and hit her. He would push her around in school but in front of adults, he would act like he was her best friend. It was a nightmare for Naina because Rajveer requested to sit besides her everyday even in every single extra class and he was her partner in every single project. What's worse was Rajveer became the most popular boy in school so she couldn't get anyone on her side to help her avoid him. Also during this time, Rajveer met Naveen and Abhimanyu. It took them a while before Rajveer would trust them. Eventually they became Rajveer's best friends as they hang out together more often. He let them in on the fun of teasing Naina but he would never let them physically harm her.

And so it begins'Junior college'

"Heads up!"

Naina glanced up and saw a blurry object headed her way. Before she could block it, it hit her right smack on the head and gave her a bruise.

"Aahhhhh!" she yelled and began to rub the spot where it hit her head. Rajveer began to walk towards her. He was the one who threw the football.

" oh ! Nain...", he said faking concern.

" Shut up! Don't call me by that name!"

"Aww'tumhe lagi toh nahi,Nain?"

Naina glared at him but he just smiled at her.

She clenched her teeth and answered, "NO!!"

Right behind Rajveer were Naveen and Abhi.

They were laughing.

"Yeh kya veeru? aapne aaj phir inhe rula diya?" , Abhi asked.

" Aree nahi Abhi....her head has too many bones in it!", Naveen added laughing.

"Maybe that's why they call her 'BoneHead!'" yelled Rajveer.

All three of them bursted out laughing and gave each other high-fives.

Naina stood up.

"You idiots! There are no bones in the head!
You don't know anything! No wonder all of you are so dumb to make that stupid joke.
I hope all three of you fail and junior college me hi sadte raho!"

" Arey Bhabhijee aap mazak kar rahi hai....hai na?" , Abhi asked slyly.

" Bilkul Abhi....warna yeh pehle graduate ho jayegi...", Naveen added.

" Aur tum apne Veeru ko kaise peeche chod sakti ho? You don't want to leave your Rajveer,do you?", Abhi said smirking.

Naina's face turned red.

"Shut up Abhi! Rajveer mera koi nahi lagta!"

She points a finger at rajveer,. " Aur tum ! Ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna....I hate you!"

Rajveer just gave her a smile and said, "No , you don't."

"Ahhh!" she screamed and then stomped off to class.

' Those jerks,' Naina thought. 'Damn you Rajveer. Acting like you're King of the school. I hope you get kicked off your throne, Your Majesty!'

She began to imagine herself choking Rajveer and she wasn't watching where she was going. Then she felt herself bump into someone.

"Ow!" said a voice.

"Oh my gosh. I'm so sorry. I wasn't watching where I was going.Here let me help you up."

Naina bent down to help the guy up. She noticed he had a long neck and really beautiful eyes. Then she cursed herself for staring at him. He was cute!

"Sorry about that."

"It's okay."

He gave her a really sweet smile. "By the way, my name is Aalekh Sharma. And you are?"

"I'm Naina....Naina Singh. Nice to meet you Aalekh.
Are you new here?"

"Yeah. First day.Aur pata hai apunko apunke saare projects bhi de diye gaye hain....infact woh start ho chuke hai, ab apunko apunke project partners ko dhundna hai..."

"Let me see your schedule.Tumne kaunse subjects liye hain? And don't you worry buddy...main hoon na? I'll help you find your project partners."

Naina looked at the list Aalekh gave her.

" Hey , tum bhi Martial arts ki special class me ho?"

"Yeah. I was the Junior Champion back at my school.So do we have any projects or classes together?"

"Really? That's great! Hmm'we have four classes together. And you are my partner in 3 projects..."

'He has four out of six classes with me,' she thought,

'Damn !!! And that monster Rajveer....huh...us shaitaan ke saath toh poora din bitana padhta hai...Saare ke saare mere subjects liye hai!! Maybe Aalekh will be the only guy here who won't listen to Rajveer and help me. Who knows? He might even kick Rajveer during Martial Arts class!' Just the thought of Rajveer getting beat up made Naina yell out, "Yay!"

Aalekh looked at her surprised. "Why are you so happy? Yedi hogayi hai kya?"

"Oh nothing. Come on buddy,Let me take you to your first class with me."

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Rajveer tapped his foot impatiently against his desk and was constantly drumming his fingers.

'Where the hell is Naina?' , he thought.

He looked at his watch and the door umpteenth number of time.

Abhi and Naveen, very well knowing the situation, began singing,

" Aaja aaja...main hoon pyaar tera, allah allah.."

Rajveer gave them a look and they stopped instantly.

" Jaao jaake dekho Naina kaha hai?"

" Okay boss! " they said in unison and left.

" Yeh Naina kaha reh gayi?" , Raj said now getting utterly impatient , " Usse toh mere aur baaki sab ke pehle yaha hona chahiye tha!"

It was a long time he sent Abhi and Naveen to go out and find her. Now he was scared.... but then he heard Naina's voice. He watched her talking to a strange guy. They both sat down in a corner and then that guy handed Naina back her back pack.

'Yeh Naina ke saath kaun hai?This does not look good,' thought Rajveer.

Naina looked over Aalekh's shoulder and saw Rajveer looking at them.

'Ab tumhe batati hoon Rajveer !Ab tu mujhe tang karna toh dur mere aas paas bhi nahi bhatak sakte!'

Aalekh had been so sweet to her.

'Kash mera koi Aalekh jaisa bhaai hota,' she thought, ' toh woh mujhe uss junglee jaanwar Rajveer se jaroor bachata...woh shaitaan mere aas paas aane ki himmat bhi nahi karta phir !'

And just then Rajveer walked up to them.

"Hi. I'm Rajveer Singh Shekhawat, the G.S. And you are?"

He looked at Aalekh.

Aalekh started to analyze Rajveer.

'Toh yeh saala Naina ko pareshaan kar raha hai....Junior college mein hokar bhi G.S.??? baat toh hai saale mein !'

Then Naina's words came back to him.

FLASHBACK

Naina sighed quiet audibly.

Aalekh looked at her.

" what's the sigh for?" ,he asked.

Naina looked at him quite amused. When he speaks Hindi, mostly his lingo is Tapori kinds...and then he speaks such a fluent english! This boy is somewhat...different !

She looked down at the floor.

"Kuch nahi."

"Come on Naina. If you called me buddy, that means you can tell me anything."

"Well'I'm afraid I'm going to get beaten up today."

"Huh? What do you mean?"

Naina lifted up the sleeve of her Tee.

"Take a look at this."

Aalekh glanced at her arms. Both of them had dark purple bruises.

"And this too," she added and pointed to her head. There was also a dark purple bruise there.

Aalekh looked at her in shock.

"Who did this to you?"

"A psycho... by the name of Rajveer Singh Shekhawat."

"Why? Doesn't he know guys aren't supposed to hit girls?"

Naina glanced up at Aalekh.

"Human guys don't hit girls. Rajveer is a...", she paused not finding appropriate word, " is a...is a...MONSTER !!!"

She sighed again.

"But it's okay'I'm used to it by now."

Aalekh squeezed her shoulder

"Well stop getting use to it. This torture is going to end today."

"What do you mean?"

"I mean, I'm going to teach this Rajveer a lesson."

Naina grabbed and hugged him immediately.

"Really?", she asked quite unsure....

He nodded.

"Yess!" she screamed," Thank you, thank u thank u soooooo much Aalekh ! Tum nahi jaante tum mujhpar kitna bada ehsaan kar rahe ho!"

" Naina, agar tune phir aisi baat kahi toh,teri meri dosti khatam!"

"Oh Sorry! Well tum uss Rajveer ko martial arts ke class mein sabak sikha sakte ho! His Highness is the champion here but not anymore now that you're here buddy.."

Aalekh gave her a smile and nodded.

"Let's get to class before we're late."

FLASHBACK ENDS

Aalekh looked at Rajveer who had just approached him.

"Apun Aalekh Sharma. And I know who you are."

Rajveer looked at Naina.

'Must have told him about me,' he thought.

Rajveer shrugged his shoulders, "Fame spreads."

Aalekh looked at him.

'Naina sahi bol rahi thi....saala kameena!"

Rajveer let out a fake cough.

"Ahem ahem....Excuse me, Mr. Sharma. I believe you're in my seat."

Aalekh gave him a look.

"I don't think so."

Rajveer gave Aalekh a glare that could freeze an entire ocean.

Just then Abhi and Naveen came in.

Rajveer waved for them to come over.

"Hey guys come over here and meet my new friend."

and as they come,"Hey guys," said Rajveer, "This is Aalekh Sharma. Apparently, he doesn't know where he's sitting."

Abhimanyu gave a little smirk. "Bechara naya hai Rajveer. He don't know that he's sitting in your place."

Naveen nodded and told Aalekh, "You better move boy.Tum meri bhabhijee ke saath kaise baith sakte ho? yaha toh Rajveer hi baithega...You're sitting with my friend's wife."

Naina opened her mouth in shock. "Chup karo tum dono!"

Aalekh looked at all of them. He turned around to face Rajveer.

"No I don't want to move. I like sitting here."

Rajveer was ticked but didn't say anything.

He had to stop his both friends from confronting Aalekh.

Rajveer just gave a tight smile and said, "I'll see how long you will like sitting there."

Then he and the boys left.

Naina let out a sigh of relief.

"Thanks Aalekh.Har roz woh Rajveer aur uske namune dost mere saath baithte hai...taaki mera mazak uda sake aur mujhe torture kar sake... But now that you're here, they can't do it anymore."

"It's nothing," said Aalekh, "I'll try my best to stop him from torturing you."

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