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Laila.N

@Laila.N

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

WOW! Love so much mysterious aspects of those last parts, really enjoyed it!!

And the last sentence when you mentioned the dimples, woow can't stop but think of Karan's handsome face lol

Can't wait for another part 😃

Thanks for the pm

Laila

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Laila.N
WOW! Love so much mysterious aspects of those last parts, really enjoyed it!!
And the last sentence when you mentioned the dimples, woow can't stop but think of Karan's handsome face lol

Can't wait for another part 😃

Thanks for the pm

Laila

Thank you for commenting Laila. Glad you enjoyed the piece.
Will post something soon

😊
A

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srihari_phoenix

@srihari_phoenix

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

heyy aria...
the devilish charm is truly amazing...😉
as for the spark..i loved the way u xpressd their dance, her emotions etc...😃
i njoyed reading these two parts..😊
love to read more 4m u...
thnxxx 4 the pm and sorry 4 late reply....😉

\m/
sri

Edited by srihari_phoenix - 15 years ago

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix
heyy aria...
the devilish charm is truly amazing...😉
as for the spark..i loved the way u xpressd their dance, her emotions etc...😃
i njoyed reading these two parts..😊
love to read more 4m u...
thnxxx 4 the pm and sorry 4 late reply....😉

\m/
sri

Thank you Sri. Glad you enjoyed the parts.
Will post more soon
😊

A

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Devil with Ice maiden...how unusually classy :P i visualized all of it..befitting as it was...! i like!

Be back after reading the continued part..:)

*edit*

Oooohhh!! Devil with dimples....thats a rarity in itself...or maybe just my mind set that's shaking heavily...!
It makes me think...of many such dreams i must have had with known and stranger disguises...a desire to be with the someone with a caliber of being different from the rest in the eyes of the beholder only...a want so strong...that it seems real...and in those incredible times...they are..! hmm..much interesting...i liked this one tons...yes!

A mirror it is that reflects us
While in one, i miss seeing you
By my side, you stand real
Yet to the world you be unseen.

It is me, i take, the sold holder
there could be just, of miracles
ever touched, one known to all.

I seek pleasure, the same
as you convey, due me
Strangely, my world blurs
black and white, wiz their
wand, them like you
distinct masked strangers...

well...another of my reaction i guess you can say! :)

cheers,

nijaL

ps: would love to read your response to my request on me 2 u game ...pretty please! 😍

Edited by missypatel - 15 years ago

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

Loved it! your writing always leaves me wanting more! thanks for the pm!

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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

i was thinking reading each word of para one, why the deju vu was much too familiar to be simply deja vu... and i knew when u said, mask upon masks later... when he smiled his dimples ... have u read gone with the wind? it reminded me of the time he bids for her, and her her alone over and over and she goes dancing... with her DEVIL indeed, giving in each time... with all that looms as a consequence indeed!!! :) no sacrifice of course, as neither was ridhima's here, lol! ... ps: i did wonder, and almost really did not care about reading the RM bit... and meant to ask u why it was there???

aite! as for ur speed, aren't enough people telling u already,???!!!

cheers,
nj

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

@nij

i am smiling so blissfully i dont know why!....just read your comment...and no this is not my reply to it..but you say your request? as in this one -

Theme: Wine tasting party
Genre: Casual - entertaining
Couple: PriDa (Prithvi-Damini)

and why the smile?...i had gone through the list...before...and guess which title stuck the most...tempting me to pen....except..i don't know the couple in mention..and so let it be...can i change that around..to some other couple i know? by now you must have guessed...that means a yes unless it has to remain PriDa (who are they?)

A

Edited by olive_green - 15 years ago

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pickytg

@pickytg

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Posted: 15 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: olive_green
@nij

i am smiling so blissfully i dont know why!....just read your comment...and no this is not my reply to it..but you say your request? as in this one -

Theme: Wine tasting party
Genre: Casual - entertaining
Couple: PriDa (Prithvi-Damini)

and why the smile?...i had gone through the list...before...and guess which title stuck the most...tempting me to pen....except..i don't know the couple in mention..and so let it be...can i change that around..to some other couple i know? by now you must have guessed...that means a yes unless it has to remain PriDa (who are they?)

A

haha aria! PriDa are from this other show on starone - Love Ne Mila Di Jodi (starring three couples but i only like PriDa aka Gaurav Khanna-Chandana Sharma..they are fab! :D) ...and if you watch them you'll know why wine tasting fits them more than ANY other couple..! But as per hinaz instructions....it says "preferred couple" so writers are allowed to change it with their convenience...:P It was nj actually who pointed out that you'd do this one much good ....(for obvious reasons, and why she won't! :D)...so lets see how you bring out a new touch to our common fav couple! ...can't wait to read it! 😎 (again i wish u'd know PriDa..they are fantab aria...maybe i cud fwd u some of their scenes....if you like....you know! ..no pressure :D ...its just!)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#120

@nij now don't plan on getting me hooked to any other couple...
one has messed up my life for good ;)

and it was nj's idea huh!...its tempting...lets see if i can surprise you guys!

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