an AR experiment [DMG] - Page 11

Originally posted by: Sookie*

Hmm....devil's charm huh? I am thinking Neil Gaiman's perception of Devil or Lucifer and somehow your words fits accurately. The charming man with words like honey can take any woman into a dizzying spiral of desire and excitement.

Be back later!

Sookie.

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyyyyyyy aria !!!....

interesting title... the ice maiden and the devil...hmmm...charming...

this was such a beautiful read aria :) her desperation abt getting inside and then the charming devil-in-disguise coming to her rescue... he really has me intrigued ;)

the description of the dance, their co-ordinated, almost perfect movements had a poetic touch to it... ur amazing at writing at such descriptions.... loved reading that part loads !! :D

n again would love to read its continued part...if any..

thanks for the pm...

and awesome penning hun :) *hugs*

Originally posted by: Laila.N

Hey I told you I would love it! 😃 I love the way you write all the parts but I think the last one is the more interesting !!

I would love to read the newt part. Please do pm me ^^

Thanks

Laila

Originally posted by: spln

ooh! the devil charms indeed, far more than the saints could anways... (on a contrary thought, unless they were the boondocks!) ... the flow was easy, effortless... as was the carefully blithe dialogue... i did wonder though... the ice maiden in red? did i miss a point???

cheers, till ur back, glad that u are for this beginning!

~nj

chorified from nij's response! ...in her words-

A mirror it is that reflects us
While in one, i miss seeing you
By my side, you stand real
Yet to the world you be unseen.

It is me, i take, the sold holder
there could be just, of miracles
ever touched, one known to all.

I seek pleasure, the same
as you convey, due me
Strangely, my world blurs
black and white, wiz their
wand, them like you
distinct masked strangers..

Originally posted by: missypatel

You have two new updates in less than 24 hours....hmmm :D you might wanna keep both dates and pages in the title!

i shall be back soon..!

Originally posted by: Sookie*

Your update speed is making me dizzy now :-)

How come each of your story come in parts of two? Not sure if this is a continuous trend but I felt so; either there is a change in perspective or there is a closure to the prelude.

Coming back to the piece. I don't know why but I remembered a scene from God Father III where Al Pacino dances.

He is as charming as before; dimples and devilish charm.

Nicely done..

Sookie