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@spln

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

ooh! the devil charms indeed, far more than the saints could anways... (on a contrary thought, unless they were the boondocks!) ... the flow was easy, effortless... as was the carefully blithe dialogue... i did wonder though... the ice maiden in red? did i miss a point???

cheers, till ur back, glad that u are for this beginning!

~nj

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Sookie*
Hmm....devil's charm huh? I am thinking Neil Gaiman's perception of Devil or Lucifer and somehow your words fits accurately. The charming man with words like honey can take any woman into a dizzying spiral of desire and excitement.

Be back later!

Sookie.

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Oh how I love your last sentence ' he charming man with words like honey can take any woman into a dizzying spiral of desire and excitement."

You know, I was not at all thinking about Neil Gaiman's perception of Devil or Lucifer but rather...a strange mixture...of Van Helsing and the devil in disguise as far as he looked...and now that you mention it..Lucifer fits to the T. as I can see😉😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007
heyyyyyyy aria !!!....

interesting title... the ice maiden and the devil...hmmm...charming...

this was such a beautiful read aria :) her desperation abt getting inside and then the charming devil-in-disguise coming to her rescue... he really has me intrigued ;)

the description of the dance, their co-ordinated, almost perfect movements had a poetic touch to it... ur amazing at writing at such descriptions.... loved reading that part loads !! :D

n again would love to read its continued part...if any..

thanks for the pm...

and awesome penning hun :) *hugs*

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Thanks Sunaina. Yes there is something very charming about a devil..and he did come to her rescue and she chose him over the other three...😉 I've already posted the next ' the spark' my lips are sealed...I want to read what you guys think of this...and how...😊

A

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Laila.N
Hey I told you I would love it! 😃 I love the way you write all the parts but I think the last one is the more interesting !!
I would love to read the newt part. Please do pm me ^^

Thanks

Laila

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Thank you commenting here Laila. and glad you enjoyed this. This is not a ff but just a compilation of random thoughts but with AR as central characters.
I've posted the next part to this, too 'the spark'

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: spln
ooh! the devil charms indeed, far more than the saints could anways... (on a contrary thought, unless they were the boondocks!) ... the flow was easy, effortless... as was the carefully blithe dialogue... i did wonder though... the ice maiden in red? did i miss a point???

cheers, till ur back, glad that u are for this beginning!

~nj

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No my love(precisely for pointing that out) you did not miss a point...i know exactly why that appreared red even while it was a different color in my head..as I visualised her. and yup devils def. charm far more than saints...oh how true that holds😉

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Edited.

chorified from nij's response! ...in her words-

A mirror it is that reflects us
While in one, i miss seeing you
By my side, you stand real
Yet to the world you be unseen.

It is me, i take, the sold holder
there could be just, of miracles
ever touched, one known to all.

I seek pleasure, the same
as you convey, due me
Strangely, my world blurs
black and white, wiz their
wand, them like you
distinct masked strangers..

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Your update speed is making me dizzy now :-)

How come each of your story come in parts of two? Not sure if this is a continuous trend but I felt so; either there is a change in perspective or there is a closure to the prelude.

Coming back to the piece. I don't know why but I remembered a scene from God Father III where Al Pacino dances.

He is as charming as before; dimples and devilish charm.

Nicely done..

Sookie

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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

You have two new updates in less than 24 hours....hmmm :D you might wanna keep both dates and pages in the title!

i shall be back soon..!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: missypatel

You have two new updates in less than 24 hours....hmmm :D you might wanna keep both dates and pages in the title!

i shall be back soon..!

thanks for pointing that out nij! made the changes
😊

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Sookie*
Your update speed is making me dizzy now :-)

How come each of your story come in parts of two? Not sure if this is a continuous trend but I felt so; either there is a change in perspective or there is a closure to the prelude.

Coming back to the piece. I don't know why but I remembered a scene from God Father III where Al Pacino dances.

He is as charming as before; dimples and devilish charm.

Nicely done..

Sookie

dizzy eh?😆 well you showed me the light...why stop? it was such a simple qs..but so true..

The two part thing is not some trend. infact this is three parts, if you consider illusion as part 1.😉

i will have to refresh my memory with that dance..to see the connection..

Thanks for commenting
😊

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