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radhika

@Radhika_ksgian

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

awesome dear

thanx vaish 4 pming

very well written

luv 2 read it more

do pm me dear

bydway tarin i m radhika ..radz here

v all r frendz here

n wen it iz abt r old gang i luv 2 read it specially AR

so u urself can pm me

vl alwayz read ........

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: alekfan
@tarin tu itne chote parts kyun likhti hai itni jaldi khatm ho jaate hai n this tim the jodi's r criss cross.............muski wid atul, ammy wid anji (nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh nahi ho sakta.......mai teri jaan lellungi) n ridzi wid pata nahi n rahul wid kirti he hehe.................n eways do upd8 soon

thnx....😊..yaar studiez..i barely get da tym sorry....
lolzz...arey abhi toh story shuru huyi hai wait kaar...loadz of confusion still 2 come..lolzzz...😛😃

Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: radz_ksg_armaan
awesome dear
thanx vaish 4 pming

very well written

luv 2 read it more

do pm me dear

bydway tarin i m radhika ..radz here

v all r frendz here

n wen it iz abt r old gang i luv 2 read it specially AR

so u urself can pm me

vl alwayz read ........

aww thnx...😊
hii radhika...sure..yaar will do.....😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

😊...................................9th episode startz.............................😊
armaan- chal..rahul upar jake setttingz karte hai...aur yea samaal atul leayega na..after all...he iz ready to help anyone.. [smugly smilez]..

rahul- par armaan..[confused and tensed]..

armaan- chal...[@atul]..have fun..[smilez]..

atul-[smilez and lookz at armaan]..

[armaan and rahul..goes to der flat leaving atul behind..]
[armaan and rahul enterz der flat]

rahul- yea tune kia kiya....how will atul bring all da stuff upstairs..

armaan- tujhe itna tension kiu ho raha hai....tu uske side ha..ke mere..[wid anger looks at him]

rahul- kia..phooo..mein kiu tension lu...mein tere side hu ofcourse..[then silently tells himself]..mujhe mera jaan jo piyaara hai...

[armaan and rahul startz setting da stuffz..afterz 15 minz der door bell rings..]

[RAHUL OPENZ DA DOOR..AND REALLY SHOCKED]..

ARMAAN- [CONFUSED]..KIYA HUA..AISE MU KHOL KE KIYA DEKH RAHA HAI...[HE GOES INFRONT OF DA DOOR]..
KIYA HUA..YEA..[ARMAAN ALSO SHOCKED]

[ALL OF DA STUFF WAS INFRONT OF DA DOOR]

RAHUL- [CONFUSED AND SHOCKED]..ITNI JALDI..HUM DONO..INHE LANE MEIN BARSSO LAGA DIYE YAAR...AUR ISNE TOH..15 MINz BHI NEHI LAGE..

ARMAAN -[IRRITATED]..JANE DE NA..KISI SE..MADAT LI HOGI..ISNE...

RAHUL - [IMPRESSED @ ATUL]..JO BHI HO YAAR..BANDE MEIN DUM TOH HAI..

ARMAAN-[ANGRY AND REALLY ANNOYED LUKZ @ RAHUL]

RAHUL - [TENSED AND SCARED]..DUM..DUM HAI..NA..DUMB HAI..KITNA DUMB HAI NA ATUL...

ARMAAN - [ANNOYED]..CHAL SAMAL UTHA KE UNDAR RAKHTE HAI..

RAHUL - PHEWW..!!..HAI BHAGWAN THANK U TUNE MUJHE BACHA LIYA..NEHI TOH AAJ MEIN TERE PAAS ANEHI WALA THA...

ARMAAN - KIYA..!!

RAHUL - KUCH NEHI..KUCH NEHI..CHAL SAMAL UTHA KAR UNDAR RAKHTE HAI..KITNA MAZA AYEGA NA..[FAKE SMILE]

[AND HERE ANJI KE APARTMENT PE..SAB LARKIYA..APNE..ROOM THIK KAR RAHI THI.AUR GAPPE MAAR RAHI THI]..

ANJALI- [LAUGHS]..SACHI MUSKAAN TU BHI NA...NEWAYZ..GUYZ..BATO BATo MEIN HUM BHUL GAYE..AJJ KIYA KHANA HAI..KUCH ORDER KARE KIYA..KUCH KHANE KO BHI TOH CHAHIYE..

ridz- kiya zaroorat hai...mein kuch bana deti hu...[smilez]

muskaan- kiya humesha kaam wali bai..ban ke firti hai....kuch order karte hai na...

ridz- par..

anjali- par waar kuch nehi..tu bat..mein..kuch order karti hu...[smilez at ridz]

ridz- thik hai..[smilez]

muskaan- thik hi toh keh rahi hai anji...thoda aram sharam karte hai..waise bhi na..woh do bandar ka mu dekh ke..mood off ho gaya..aur woh atull..demaag ka dahi bana diya..[annoyed]

anji-[laughs]...atul ka toh pata nehi..sirf tere liye hoga..lekin ha..woh dono ko..dekhkar mood zaroor off hogaya[makez a irritated face]

ridz- dono itne bhi bure nehi the..ek chance dena chahiye un logo ko..[smilez]

[anji and muskaan shocked looks at ridz]

muskaan-[irritated] kiya...tu un dono ko chance dena chati hai...itna pyaar agaya unke upar..bhul gayi kiya kia un dono ne...

anjali-[angry]...honestly ridz..tu kiu undono ki side le rahi hai..

ridz- [confused and nervous]..mein to sirf...ok nehi lungi..

anjali- better...mein jake order karti hu..[still annoyed]

[anjali leaves to make a call]

muskaan- tu bhi na ridz..strong ban...

ridz-[nodz her head..and say silently]...yea bhagwan..pata nehi kia toofan ane wali hai...

[anjali comez back]

anjali- guyz..maine call kar diya hai...khana ata hi hoga..ziada dur nehi hai..yaha se..[smilez]

ridz- khana ate ate..hum yea sab thik kar lete hai...

muskaan- tum dono thik karlo..mein supervise karungi..

anjali- kumbhakarna..ki ladli..lazy bum..[laughs]..maharani..app..behte rahiye..mein aur ridzi hai na sab kar lenge..[smugly smilez]

ridz- [laughz]..ha muskaan..tu chinta maat kar..

muskaan- gud..zara..waha bhi saaf kar lena..aur..mere kapre..cupboard mein rakh dena..[smilez smugly and..lukz at ridzi and anjali]

[anjali then takez a pillow and beatz muskaan...ridz..muskaan..and anjali..startz laughing..and have pillow fightz]

[after 30 minz here back in ammyz place]

rahul-[really tired] bas yaar..ab aur..nehi..abhi na..mera jo last petrol tha body mein wo bhi khatam hogaya hai...kuch petrol bharlu..apne undar...tabhi..kuch..kar sakunga...

armaan- bas kiya..itne mein hi...[laughs]...ghar pe toh abb kuch nehi hai...chal bahar jake kuch..khake ate hai...

rahul- kiya..abhi..niche jana parega..woh bhi chalke..nehi yaar..kuch order karte hai..

armaan- [irritated but still manages to laugh]..ok...mera moblie kaha hai...

[he startz luking for his mobile aur tab hi...door bell bajti hai...armaan openz da door]

delivery guy- delivery..!!

[rahul comez infront of da door..armaan and rahul confused]

rahul- [confused]..yaar tu toh abhi..mobile dhund raha tha na...yea phn karne se pehle agaye...

armaan- [confused and irritated]..mujhe kaise pata hoga yaar...[@delivery guy]..but humne toh abhi order kiya hi nehi..phir..yea...

delivery boy- ji sir apne order kiya tha..miss anjali ne phn kia tha..unho ne..credit card number se pay bhi kar liya..

[armaan and rahul lukz at eachother and givez a devilish smile]

armaan-[devilish smile]..ooh toh miss anjali ne order kiya tha...

rahul- [devilish smile]..aur unho ne pay bhi kar liya...

armaan- [devil smile]..thank u poucha ne ke liye...ab bye bye...

[armaan and rahul closes da door and startz laughing]

rahul- ab karenge hum pet puja..woh bhi free mein..

armaan- kon kehta hai..free ka khana acha nehi hota..free ka khana bohot acha hota hai..bechari larkiya..[devilish smile]

[rahul and armaan laughing and eating]

[after 20 minz..yaha anjali ke..apartment mein]

anjali-[irritated] kiya yaar..humne pura ghar..thik karliya...abhi tak..khana deliver nehi hui..

ridz- kuch prob hoga shayad..

muskaan-[annoyed] kuch prob nehi hai..yea na...irresponsible hai...aur kuch nehi..anji tu abhi phn laga..aur kuch baate suna..dekhna..kaise deliver hoti hai...

anjali- tu akdum thik keh rahi hai mein abhi phn laga ti hu...

ridz- thodi der wait karlo shayad ajaye..

muskaan- ridzii..tuna..chaddo...[annoyed]

anji[on da phn]-[angry] hello...mein anjali bol rahi hu..maine kahana order kia tha...aur 50 minz ho gaye abhi tak khana aya nehi...aplog itne irresponsible kaise ho sakhte ho............kiya..[confused and shocked]...apne khana poucha dia..hume toh nehi mili..kiya 4b...maine kaha tha 4a...ap logo ko na sue kar dena chahiye...[and hangs up da phn]

muskan- kiya hua..[confused]

ridz-[worried]..lukz at anjali]

anjali-[angry and irritated]..un stupid logo ne..khana...4b mein deliver kar diya...jaha armaan and rahul rehne aye hai..

ridz and muskaan-[shocked]..kiya...!!!!

😊.........................................9th epi endz.....................................😊

preview- jagra jagra nd more khit pit...lolzz😛😆

i really hope u guyz lyk it......do comment ok...😊

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

hey tarin.thanx for upd8ing so soon love u dare for this...................n aage aur confusion nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii bt lets wat does the creative give her readers

@rads.u r welcum .yaar as of now we all r sailing in same boat so thot of being together thru ff's

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radhika

@Radhika_ksgian

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#66

@vaish..u ryt yr

ab in sab se hi unko dekh lete he

tarin ...nice 1 dear

bt han mere ammy ridz ko pair bna dena

lolz

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#67

😊.......................................10 epi........................................😊
[ridz anji..and..muskaan..really shocked..and angry...]

muskaan- kiya..!!..kaise..kiu..kab...i mean...why..[:O]

anji- muskaan tu bhi na...mujhe kaise pata hoga....maine thori na kaha tha..unlogo ko khana dene ke liye...[irritated]

[ridz worried]

muskaan- lekin tujhe unlogo ke saath toh clear karna tha na..abhi dekh kiya ho gaya..[irritated and angry]

anji- kiya...tu bhi toh kar sakhti thi..na..nehi bait bait ke..sirf order..de rahi thi..[angry and irritated]

muskaan- kiya maine..sirf orderz..mare..abey tera demaag toh thik hai..[angry and irritated]

ridz- guyz..bhul unlogo ne ki..khana 4b walo ke paas hai..tum log kiu lar rahi ho..plzz..shant ho jao..or socho kiya kare...[and smilez]

anji- [snapz out] yeah..hum kiu lar rahe hai...sorry muskaan...[smilez]

muskaan- koi baat nehi yaar...waise sorry toh mujhe kehna chahiye..maine start..kiya...woh kiya hai na..mujhe bina soch ke..baat karne ki bimaari hai...[and grinz]

ridz- [smilez]..thank god..peace..

anji- [laughz]..woh toh hai..actually thanx toh hume ridhimma ka karna chahiye...jis..ne..jagra band karwaiya..thank u ridhimma..[smilez]

muskaan- woh toh aisi hai...[@ridhimma]...jagra kitna mazedar ho raha tha..kiu band kiya...ridhimma tere saath toh nehi kar pati...anji ke saath toh karne de[and laughs]

ridz- [laughz]..agli bar mere se karna...try karungi..jagra karne ki...

anji- [laughz] muskaan tu bhi na..and guyz..tum bhul gaye kia..band bajana hai..un do...bandaro ka...jin logo ne..humara khana wapaas nehi kiya...aur maybe khake...so gaye honge...[angry]

muskaan- [angry]..ha..bhukar kahi ke...chal abhi jake unhe forte hai..[she picks up hanger..and a jharu..]..anji tu yea hanger le..aur mein yea jharu leti hu...aur ridz..tu humari mother teressa..humare support ke liye chal..

ridz- guyz..mujhe nehi lagta hume aisa karna chahiye..shayad..unko nehi pata tha..unhe maaf kardete hai..

anji- maaf aur unhe...muskaan thik keh rahi hai..tujse kuch nehi hoga..tu khud sorry bolke chali ayegi..unhe thik karne ke baad..hum yaha ayenge..tujhe achi banne k bimaari se chutkara denge...abhi chal...muskaan aur mein unke daat torenge aur tu..woh daat count karna....[angry]

muskaan- aur tang bhi..[angry]

[anji wid hanger..muskaan wid jharu..and ridz...goes to there apartment and keeps banging on da door...here..inside da apartment armaan and rahul..keepz..playing loud muzic..and keepz dancing]

armaan- [dancing and laughing]..darwaje pe koi hai kia...

rahul- [dancing and grining]..nehi mujhe toh kuch sunai nehi de raha...

muskaan- [angry]abey oo bhukar ki aullad..darwaja khol[keepz banging da door]

anji- [angry]shameless..hoggish pigz..open da door...[keepz banging]

ridz- [really worried]..aa bhagwan...plzz...sab thik ho jaye...

armaan- koi kuch keh raha hai...shayad kisi ko bhuk lagi hai...khana lene aye honge...chal unhe yea khane ke packetz de dete hai..[devil smile]

rahul- tu..kitna..dayalu hai..humesha daan karta rehta hai..chal..[grining]

[armaan and rahul stops da muzic and opens da door..]

armaan- yes..kuch chahiye apko...

muskaan- humara khana kaha hai...

rahul- khana..kaun sa khana kis ka khana..kab..kaha..kaise..kiu..[grining]

anji- [she takez da hanger and cumz infront of rahul]..dekho...hum jante hai..ke humara khana tumhare yaha deliver hui hai...jaldi se dete ho..ke...nehi...

rahul- omg..!!..[@armaan]..yaar..tujhse upar mulaqat hogi..mereko na iz hanger ke saath mera future dikh raha hai...

armaan- [lukz at rahul..annoyed][@anji]hai ap kahe toh hum apni jaan dede..yea khana kiya cheez hai...

anji- oh shutup...just give us da food...

armaan- kiu..apke yaha khana nehi hai...aww...thik hai..akhir neighbours hote kis liye hai..jab bhi kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho..tu be jhijhak humse manglena...

muskaan- kiya..ziada..smart maat bano..samjhe na...warna aisa haal karungi...ke apni shakal tak bhul jayoge...

ridz- anji..muskaan choro na...khamaka jhagra maat bara...i am sure they didn't mean it...

rahul- thik keh rahi hai yea..iski baat sunlo...hum bechare..kismaat ke mare..aisa ghino na kaam nehi kar sakhte..hai..

armaan- ha..hume toh pata hi nehi tha..yea khana kiska hai...humne..khana rakh diya...yea lo..aur sorry..[innocent smile]

ridz- dekha..abhi chalo..in logo ne de diya na..khana...

[muskaan and anji..still irritated and angry..goes to da apartment wid da boxes]

ridzi- sorry..[smilez]

armaan and rahul- ok hai ji..[devil smile]

[ridz goes to da apartment]

armaan and rahul- 5..4..3..2..1......0..

muskaan and anji- aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa[shouting]

armaan- thatz da way..aha aha..[grining]

rahul- we like it..[grining]

[armaan and rahul comes infront of da galz apartment..place der earz..and keepz listening to..da galz convo]

[here in da galz apartment]

muskaan- dekh ridz..teri waje se..un ullu ki aullad ne..hume bewakuf banaya..

[der was nuthing inside..da packetz..except trash]

ridz-[looking down..kinda upset]

anji- isme ridz ki koi galti nehi hai...in larko ko toh sabak sikhana hi hoga..

muskaan- sach hi keh rahi hai...[takes a broom]...abhi sikha ke ati hu...salle..gadhe kahi ke...

anji- uff muskaan tu bhi na..tujhe..yea sab ke ilawa..kuch ata nehi kiya...abhi..physical nehi..mental torture karna hai..r u guyz wid me.?..[devil smile]

muskaan- arey waah..jhakaas yaar..i am in..waise mera idea bhi bura nehi tha..[laughz]

anji- ridz..?..[starez at her]

RIDZII- UMM..KUCH AUR NEHI KAR SAKHTE..

MUSKAAN- NEHI..TU BOL..TU HUMARE SAATH HAI..KE UNKE..

ridz- tum logo ke saath hu..i am in..

anji- gr8 then..mission..AR mental torture..startz tomorrow..

[here armaan and rahul]

armaan- bechaari larkiya..humse panga..mental torture...chu chu chu..war..has started..toh piche kaise rahe..we start..at dawn...

rahul- thatz da way..aha aha..

armaan- we like it..muahahahahaha..[laughz]

[rahul and armaan goes to der apartment]

[next day..@5:00am]
[da girlz were sleeping..suddenly..da intercome phn in der apartment startz ringing..ridz wakez up and answerz it]

ridz- hello...

sum guy- [wid a weird voice..sounding really scared]..hello..iz building..mein aag lagi hai..aag fail ne se pehle..aplog niche ajaiye..jaldi..and hangs up]

ridzi- [really scared]..hello..hello..oh my god..anjali..muskaan...jaldi bahar aao aag lagi hai..[shouting]..

[anji and muskaan wakes up in a hurry and comes out]

anji- kiya..aag kaha...[scared and tensed]

muskaan- ridz yea kiya keh rahi hai...[scared and tensed]

ridz- [scared]..haa..abhi phn aya tha..intecom mein..ke aag lagi hai...jaldi building se bahar nikalna hoga...

anji- jaldi..chalo..phir...[scared]

muskaan- chal..[scared]

[da galz..hurriez it down..out of breath...and seez..no onez out..they getz confused..when suddenly..they hear..]

😊.................................10th epi finished.................................😊

hope u guyzz lyked it....doo comment....😊

Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#68

awwwwww awesom yaar mai toh has has k pagal ho gayi n i m nt able to digest ridz being so sweet

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#69

hey

lovely parts

dint know that this ff exist also

thanks 4 the pm

i hope AR will be together in this ff and AA and RM

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: naureen_aly
hey

lovely parts

dint know that this ff exist also

thanks 4 the pm

i hope AR will be together in this ff and AA and RM

ur welcum😊
hope so dekhte hai age kiya hota hai...lol..😃