hum app dosti aur pyaar..11th epi posted 10th pg - Page 4

he,he i loved the rules that the principal gave. good one. but please ,please make this ff a happy one.kahin to sukoon mileg AR ke baare mein padhkar........

Originally posted by: arluver15

hey

that was gr8 part

thnxs for the PM

loved it very much

cont soon

nruti

awwwww thnk u...😊
nd u r welcum..as soon as i finish i wll post it....😊

hey hi tarin

Originally posted by: mrs.sharma

he,he i loved the rules that the principal gave. good one. but please ,please make this ff a happy one.kahin to sukoon mileg AR ke baare mein padhkar........

aww..i am really glad...😃
i will try my hardest.....thanx...😊

Originally posted by: siya_sharma

hey hi tarin

i m new here , i just read all your parts , and i really liked your ff a lot ,it was great ,specially muskaan and her character , and atul was the best , i really liked this a lot

would love to read ahead from you , please doo couninue soon

and please add me to your pm list , if possible

love

siya

hello..siya....aww..i am really happy u liked it...😊..as soon as i finish i will post it...
nd sure...i will pm..u....hun...😊

..............................fifth episode start's................

[enterz shilpa..a cool..confident girl....she iz beautiful...confident..hot..bitchy..popular...she iz the bestest friend to her friendz..alwayz der for help..only for her frendz..very protective and defensive for da ppl she love's..but..she iz da biggest enemy to her enemies and otherz...holds a grudge..and never forgives anyone for anything..take's revege..thats da only option for her...and more about her as we go along da episodes..u will get to know..p.s all shilpa anand fan..plzz don't get angry..diz iz not shilpa..itz one of my characterz..and she iz not negetive..u will get to now as da episode goes by...she iz a important character in my story..and u will know her trueself..as we go along..plzz if i offended anyone sorry..plzz don't get mad..she iz one of my character..]

[here armaan and rahul enter'z armaan house..and see's armaan'z mom..dad..and lil sis..all gathered in da living room..looking very seriouz...]

[armaan'z dad...vijay mallik...a bussiness tycoon...alwayz thinkz in a business point of view...a true business man...luvz his family...willing to do anything..and everything..to protect them...alwayz fulfilz there wish and needz...doesn't take no for an answer....and very strict about his honour..pride..dignity..and status..armaan and him doesn't get along and seem to get into a fight..about every thing..cuz they are both stubborn..[:p]..lolzz..and more about him as we go along wid da story..]

[armaanz mom..anandita kishwar mallik ..a typical house wife....very sweet innocent..nice and an adorable human being....armaanz life..and da only person who can control armaan..more about her as we go along..]

[armaanz lil sis.....naina mallik...a spoilt brat...luved dearly by every single person in der family..getz whatever she wantz..getz out safely no matter whatever she does.....she iz in school...in class 8....and more on her as we go along...]

ar-dad - agaye janab...college toh 3 hour pehle khatam hogaya tha.....itni der lagi ane mein..kaha ase aa rahe ho....

armaan- app se matlab...waise app toh kabhi bhi iz time ghar pe nehin hote ho..hamesha meeting yea na jane kia kia....hume toh usse prob nehi hota..toh appko kiu itna farak par raha hai..

ar-dad - armaaaaan...(shouting)..shayad tum bhul rahe ho ke mein tumhara baap hu...aur yea mera ghar hai...mujhse puch ne wale tum kaun hote ho....

armaan - ha...yea toh mein bhul gaya..apke age bolne..ka toh..kisika haq nehi hai..kiu ke appp..vijay mallik jo tehre...
duniya ka sabse ghamandi insaan....[pissed]

rahul- armaan baas kar...(worried)

ar-mom - armaan baas ab chup bhi ho jao....[and then at armaans dad]..app bhi kiu piche pare hai...aaj jagra na karke bol dijiye na kia baat hai....

ar-dad - ha...aur apne bete ka side lo...tumhari waje se hi toh..iska yea rawaiya hai...[then turning to rahul]...rahul yea ek family meeting hai...tum baad mein aao...

armaan- kiu..???..dad..shayad app bhul rahe hai rahul iss ghar ka hissa hai...mera bhai hai...

rahul- [slowly at armaan] armaan jake bat ja....koi tamasha maat kar...uncle ki baat sunle...plzz..mere liye...acha mere liye na sahi aunty ke liya...aur mein chalta hu...kaal college mein milenge...and u..chill dude...[rahul at everyone]..bye aunty..bye uncle..bye naina...tc...

[rahul leaves]

[armaan pissed..goes and sits in da sofa..]

ar-dad- mein apni saari business london mein shift kar raha hu..next month se..since mera head office waha hai...
india mein bhi kuch business rehenge..woh mein once or twice a year ake dekhlunga...i want to settle in london wid da whole family...maine tumhare mom...naina and dadi se baat ki...tumhari dadi waha settle nehi hongi woh punjab ke ghar mein hi rehengi..kiu ke waha tumhare dada ji ki makan hai..aur tumhari dadi..dada ji ki yaadein lekar hi rahna chati hai...
lekin tumhare mom aur naina ko koi problem nehi hai..aur mujhe lagta hai ke tumhara aur naina ki studiz waha ache honge...waha education acha hai..aur tum business mein bhi thoda invole ho sakhte ho..after all iss business ko toh tumhe hi handle karna hai...yaha yea medical ki parai...u r just wasting ur time...what u d think..???....

armaan- kitni asani se apne yea decide karlia......mujhe aisa nehi lagta dad..ki yea parai...waste of time hai...apko lagta hoga mujhe nehi lagta....mein yaha se kahi nehi jayunga...and thats it...

ar-dad- tum zaroor jaoge jab koi nehi hoga tumhara dekhbhal karne ke liye..newayzz...tum yaha raho...yaha apartment mein..lekin i wanna see resultz..armaan...agar tum 6 months ke ander mujhe prove kar sake ke yea waste of time nehi hai then...tum jo chahe karsakte ho...mein kuch nehi kahunga..lekin nehi prove karsake then u r cuming to london..
meri meeting hai..mein ja raha hu...amandita..aur naina...i want everything done..by..next two week..hum next month shift karenge....

[armaanz dad leavez]

ar-mom- kiu hamesha jagra karta hai..ha...dad ka gussa toh malum hai na....aur kiu nehi jayega..yaha kon tera dekhbhal karega ...zeed nehi karte.....mein nehi hungi yaha...tere saath kon rahega....

armaan - mom mein bhi ana chata hu apke saath...but mein dad ko dikhna bhi chata hu ke..i am not wasting my time..aur mom mein abb bacha nehi hu..app chinta maat karo..i can handle myself...

naina - handle myself..kiya dialog hai..aaj kitni pari dad se..bhaiya...[irritating way]

armaan - dikhyu kitni pari...

[both running in da living room..armaan trying to beat naina]

naina - mom dekho na....[laughing]


[yaha hostle mein]

shilpa- hi i am shilpa and u guyzz r...

ridz- namaste...mein ridhimma..aur yea mere friend muskaan...

muskaan-[wid pissed face] hiii....

shilpa- [looking at them wid disgrace and smiled..]hmm...soo..mein yea window wali side leh rahi hu...jiska bhi samal mere side pe hai plzz...take it away....

muskaan- hello...yea tumhare baap ka hostle hai kiya..??..jo tum..jo side logi woh tumhara..hum pehle aye the..samjhi na...yea ridhimma ki seat hai...

ridhimma-[slowly at muskaan] rehne de na..kia farak parta hai..mein toh kahi bhi rehlungi..shayad shilpa ko woh side ki zaroorat hai...

shilpa- actually mujhe zaroorat nehi..hai..i want it...

muskaan- well..tumhe yea nehi milega..kiu ke..snob are alwayzz late..like u...and when u r late..tumhe toh kuch lose karna parega na...

[ridz getting worried]

shilpa- honey..mein tumhare mu lagna nehi chati..waise u sud knw mere dad..clg ke ek trusty hai..aur mein agar chahu na toh tum dono ko nikaal kar..yea room mere liye lesakti hu...phir tumhe..3..4...weeks tak shayad koi bhi room nehi mile..abb tum yeh soch rahi ho...agar iske dad trusty hai toh yea yaha kiu reh rahi hai...well babe..i luv my freedom..aur ghar rehke mein usse khona nehi chati...[devil smile]

ridhimma- muskaan chal gussa maat kar...aur isse woh side le le ne de..plzzz..

muskaan- [really pissed..stormz out of da room]

ridhimma- tum woh side lelo..mein apna samal hata deti hu....

shilpa- clever girl..[devil smile]..

[ridz shiftz her stuff..and goes out to find muskaan]
[RIDZ FINDZ MUSKAAN AND GOES TO HER]

ridz- kiya hua muskaan...

muskaan- tu na mujhse baat maat kar...tujhe maine bola tha na ke..apna haq kisi ko maat dena..phir tune usse woh jaga kiu di...

ridz- muskaan tu na bilkul bacho jaisi zeed karti hai..dekh agar mein usse woh side nehi deti..toh woh hume room se nikaal diti....kiu nehi samaj ti hai..mujhe apne papa aur mama ka sapna pura karna hai..aur agar room se nikaal deti...aur shayad 2..3..hafte lagte room pane mein..humari paarai mein bhi toh asar hota na...

muskaan- mujhe kuch nehi sunna...[pissed]

ridz- chal sone chalte hai..kal subha class bhi toh hai..

[ridz and muskaan goes to sleep]

[nxt morning]
[alarm ringz]
[ridz and muskaan wakez up..and gets ready for college]


ridz- muskaan..shilpa toh nehi uthe abtak..woh toh college ki liye late ho jaye gi na..usse utha du....

muskaan- [getz mad] tune kiya sab ki theka le raakhi hai..koi zaroorat nehi hai iski...yea iska problem hai college jana hai ki nehi jana....

ridz- uff muskaan tu bhi na..tu chal mein arahi hu....

muskaan- tujhe jo karna hai tu kar....

[ridz goes infront of shilpaz bed]

ridz- shilpa..shilpa...mein aur muskaan college ja rahe hai....tumhe der jo jaye gi..shilpa...[just when she touches her..shilpa wakez up..]

shilpa- [shoutz at ridz]..tumhe dikhaye nehi deta..andhi ho...koi decency hai ke nehi..jab koi sou raha hota hai usse uthana nehi chahiye...

ridz- woh mein..mein toh bas...yea kehrahi thi ki college ke liye der ho jayegi...

shilpa- [irritated]...that iz my problem..tumhari nehi....bas yea hi problem hai tum middle class logo ki..apne kaam se kaam nehi rakh sakhti...just...leave me alone..and get lost...

[ridzzz really upset...room se bhar nikal nehi wali hoti hai...when she seez muskaan standing outside...ridzz getz really scared...]

😊....................................................4th episode ends...............................................😊


PRE-VIEW-
SHILPA GOES TO COLLEGE...

ARMAAN- [AT SHILPA]..WOOHOO..SO DA BICH IZ BACK...LOOKING HOT...[SMILED]

SHILPA- [GAVE A DEVIL SMILE TO ARMAAN]


ARMAAN SHIFTS TO AN APARTMENT WID RAHUL....JUST WHEN THEY ARE TAKING IN DER STUFF...THEY SAW ATUL CUMING OUT...FROM DER NEIGHBOURS FLAT....[IS ATUL..ARMAANZ NEIGHBOUR..OR IS IT SIMPLY A COINCIDENT]..😛..wait and watch..😆

i really hope u guyzz lyk it...if u do..plzz do comment..😊...

👏 good attempt.keep writing.waiting for the next part.

good attempt eagerly waiting for next part

@tarin good one yaar sry for the late reply..wais eab tak toh muje shilpa pe bahut gussa aaraha hai n seems lik ammy knows her pehle se hi.. soubnds intersting lets c wat happens do upd8 soon.............

Originally posted by: alekfan

@tarin good one yaar sry for the late reply..wais eab tak toh muje shilpa pe bahut gussa aaraha hai n seems lik ammy knows her pehle se hi.. soubnds intersting lets c wat happens do upd8 soon.............

thnx...😊