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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: aarmaniia
good attempt eagerly waiting for next part

thnx😊

Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sjain
nice ..!!!!!!

thnx😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: mrs.sharma
👏 good attempt.keep writing.waiting for the next part.

thnx...😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

😊................................6th epi starts....................................................😊

[muskaan...lookz...at ridzzzi.........ridzzi upset..]

muskaan-kiya hua...madam uthi..ki nehi....arey tujhe kiya hua....tu itni udas kiu hai...uss shilpa ne tujhe kuch kaha........ther mein abhi usse thik karti hu....[very angrily..]

ridz- kiya muskaan..humesha usse anap shanap bolti rehti hai...usne mujhse kuch nehi kaha....woh toh bechari soo rahi hai...

muskaan- acha...toh usne tujhse kuch nehi kaha...tu jhut kiu bol rahi hai..ridhimma...[reallly annoyed]

ridz- mein tujhse jhoot kiu bolungi....[really tensed]

muskaan- phir tu roo kiu rahi thi....itni udas kiu hai...

ridz- woh kia hai na..woh...aaj mujhe maa aur baba ki bohot yaad a rahi hai..[then hugged muskaan and started crying]

muskaan- ridhimma maat roo..yaar..tu yaha uncle aur aunty ka naam roshan karne ayi hai na...agar tu ase royegi..toh uncle aunty ko bura lagega..and woh log kahenge ki kia muskaan tumne humari beti ka khayal nehi rakha..aur mein hu na..teri muskaan..mere hote hua tujhe tension lene ki kia zaroorat huh..chal college chalte hai.....[both smilez]

[muskaan and ridzzii..both enterzz d a college...and goes to the class..]

ridz- arey class toh bilkul khali hai...sab kaha hai...

muskaan- arey yaar hai...sab kaha hai...[just then muskaan grabz a boy by his bag]..arey ye bhai..ruko zara...aaj professor ghunru ki class hone wali thi na...kaha hai sab....

boy- [really scared]...ummmm ummm...aaj sir nehi aye...isiliye..unka class nehi hoga..sab cafeteria mein hai..shayad...mein ab jao..

muskaan- hai jao na...khali peli mera time waste kar diya..[said sarcasticaly]

ridz-[laughing]muskaan tu bhi na...chal cafateria mein chalte hai..shaiyad anjali bhi wohi hogi...

muskaan- chal..

[ridhimma and muskaan just started walking when anjali called them..ridhimma and muskaan turned and saw atul and anjali cuming togeather]

atul- hi ridhimma..[then at muskaan]..hello muskaan..how r u..?..i missed u a lot..[and winked at her]

ridhimma-[laughed]..hi atul...

muskaan- [digusted expression]..hi...

anjali- hi ridhimma..hi muskaan...[at ridz]..hey tera chera itna utra hua kiu hai..kisi ne kuch kaha kiya...

ridz- nehi anjali..i am ok..kuch nehi hua..

muskaan- woh kiya hai na..ridhimma ko apni mom aur dad ki bohot yaad arahi hai aaj..

anjali- awww poor baby..so sorry yaar..chal cafateria mein chalte hai...u will feel better..and we can talk there..

atul- ridhimma..i can understand how u feel...don't worry sab kuch thik ho jaye ga..[then at muskaan]..hai na muskaan..[and smiled]

muskaan- anjali..tum apne friend ko samhalo..yea na mujhse bohot pitega..

atul- kab bolo na..banda hazir hai..[and smiled]

[ridhimma and anjali laughing..they all went to the cafateria..and sat at da table]

[they all were talking...just then rahul and armaan entered..and sat on da table beside them]

rahul- kiu armaan tu toh keh raha tha yea anjali tere hogi...lekin yaha se..toh woh atul ki dikh rahi hai..[and laughed]

armaan- abhi tak college khatam nehi hua...aur tujhe agar apna jaan pyara hai toh chup bat..samjha na..

rahul- [sarcastically]..arey yaha kuch ziada hi garmi hai..[laughed]

[just then..everyone...eyez stopped at da cafateria door..shilpa entered....armaan stood up and walked towards her]

armaan-[@ shilpa]wohhoo..soo the bitch iz back...looking hot[winked]

shilpa-i am alwayzz hot..whatz new..and hell yeah..da bitch iz back...tumhare hosh urane..[laughed and hugged armaan][then turned at rahul and hugged him]..missed u guyzz yaar....really..

armaan- chal bat te hai..

muskaan- lo yea bhi agayi...ase logo ki toh aisi hi dost honge...akdum perfect match...[irritated]

ridz- muskaan..tu bhi na chup bat..

anjali- tum dono janteho isse...kiya hua aisi..ke muskaan tu itni irritated hai...

atul- she iz shilpa one of armaanz best budz..but tum log isse kaise jante ho...[confused]

[then muskaan told them the whole story]

anjali- what..?[angrily]..thatz really very mean...

atul- she iz like that...don't let her bother u..

shilpa- [@ ridz]..oo..miss alarm clock bhi hai yaha...kia yaha sab ko uthane ayi ho..

armaan-[laughed]..kia..baat kar rahi hai...

shilpa- arey yaar maat puch..dad se bachne ke liye mein hostle..ayi..aur hostle ake mujhe yea alarm clock..miss chasmish ke saath room share karni par rahi hai....

muskaan- tumhe itni prob hai toh...tum room change kiu nehi karti..yea toh sirf tumhari madat kar rahi thi...

[atul and anjali..really pissed..have no idea what to say]

ridhimma- muskaan yaar..chup kar......chal yaha se chal te hai...

armaan- oh..shitt..!!...tumhe iss chasmish..mis behenji ke saath room share karna par raha hai..agar mein hota toh sharam ke mare suicide kar leta...how unlucky..thank god i am a boy...feel sorry for u..shilzz...

rahul- sach kaha..yaar...look at her..isse dekhkar toh ak achi bhali insaan bemaar ho jaye...bilkul..virous jaisi dikhti hai..bhago...nehi toh vacination le lo...[laughz nd high fivez shilpa nd armaan]

shilpa- nehi rahul usse bhi kaam nehi chale ga...she iz uncurable...

[armaan..rahul..shilpa..laughing]

[ridzz really upset]

muskaan-tum log..khud kuch kar nehi sakhte...college time pass ke liye ate ho...and dusro ki mazaak urate ho...

shilpa-[laughs.]..wow miss.meow..bhi gussa ho gayi...aur apne...behenji dost ko bachane agayi..catwomen..!!

[just then ridhimma livez da cafateria..running..and muskaan followz her]

atul- armaan u..jerk..stay in ur limitz.....tujhe dusro ko chota dikhane mein bohot maza ata hai na.....kabhi yea socha hai..tu kitna gira hua hai..aur dusro ko tujhse kitna..ghutan hota hoga....leave it..tujhse kon mu larna chata hai...don't say a word to her again samjha na...

armaan- wuuu..i am scared...[laughed]..kiya karega...[and poked atul]..bol na big shot kiya karega..

[atul was just about to punch armaan..and armaan was just about to do the same..tabhi]

anjali- atul....stop...diz guyz are not even worth it....digusting..letz go...[really pissed]

[atul and anjali leavez to find ridhimma and muskaan]

rahul- good armaan..tune toh apna impresssion...anjali ke samne fuss kar diya...abhi kaise banegi..woh teri gf....[and laughs]

shilpa- kiya..???..did i miss sumthing...

rahul- armaan has a crush on anjali...[laughs]...aur uska toh abhi patank cut gaya....

shilpa- [laughz]..aww..so sorry..armaan ab toh tera charm bhi nehi chalega....cut cut cut..

armaan- i can make her mine whenever i want..i am armaan ok...[really pissed]

shilpa- really..letz make it interesting...ak bet ho jaye...u have to win her over..with in 1 month..chal..since i luv ya soo much...tere liye..3 months..make her fall in luv wid u...and mein maan jayungi..armaan can do anything...armaan iz armaan...

armaan- u r on...and da bet startz today...[devil smile]

rahul- koi bara tuphan ane wala hai..[sayz to himself][worried]

[armaan and shilpa shook hands]

[on the field ridhimma was sitting alone...really upset...muskaan approached her]

muskaan-[holds rishimmaz shoulder]...tu roo rahi hai...un logo ki bato se ro rahi hai....jo tere in ansu ke kabil nehi hai....

ridzz- muskaan tu nehi samjhe gi....un logo ne jo bhi bola sach hi toh hai..

muskaan- tu aisa kiu kehrahi hai..woh sab bakwaas tha...ther mein abhi unhe sabak sikhati hu..

[just then anjali and atul comes]

anjali- muskaan tu bat ja..larne se koi fida nehi..hai..

atul- ridhimma..woh log ne tumhe kiu yea sab kaha pata hai...kiu ke they are insecure about themselves..aur isliye woh dusro ko chota dikha kar..khud bare hona chate hai...woh sab bakwaas hai..don't listen to that..u knw..mere life mein jitni bhi larki se..mein..mila na...usme se tum sabse sweet aur samajdar ho...honestly...tum un ullu ke patho ke liye..apne ansu barbad maat karo...

anjali- he iz right ridhimma...plzz smile...

muskaan- arey hasde na kiu bhao kha rahi hai...

atul-[at muskaan]..wow..kia aadaye hai apke..mein toh maar gaye....kitni soni ho app..[and winkz at her]..

muskaan-[in fumes]...anjali..tu rokh de..warna isse na mein..ulta lat ka ke itna marungi..ke isse nani yaad ajayegi...

[just then ridhimma started laughing]

ridz- muskaan tu bhi na..ak dum..pagal hai...[laughing]

atul- pagal toh hai..par mere liya perfect hai..

anjali-[laughs]...thank god..ridhimma muskurai toh sahi..u have a very pretty smile....chalo..aaj toh class hone se rahi..tum logo ko kuch dikhana hai...

muskaan- [irritated at atul]...really kiya bol na..

anjali- not now..bolungi nehi...dikhayungi...letz go..

[anjali..muskaan..atul..and ridhimma..leaves college]

[and in da cafeteria]

armaan- chalo me going..aaj class karne ka mood nehi hai..kal chutti hai..parso milte hai...

rahul- wow yaar kal toh party hi party..maza ayega...

armaan- ziada urr maat..kaal agar ziada energy waste ho gaye..toh parso couch shashank ke samne achi tarha perform nehi kar sake ga..aur teri band baje gi...

rahul- omg...kon party karega kon party karega...mein toh kal..ful time practice karunga...

shilpa- [laughz]..tu bhi na rahul ak dum phattu hai...nikamma...

rahul- tu choach shashank se mil..phir mujhe batana...

shilpa- whateva..chalo guyzz...aaj mera first day hai..classes check karleti hu..addios...

armaan- bye...best of luck...[smilez]

rahul- bhagwan teri rakhsha kare..[and laughs]

[armaan and rahul leavez college and cumz home...when armaan cumz home..a surprize awaitz him]

armaan-[really..stunned..]..yea mera saare samal bahar kiu hai...[worried]

rahul- lagta hai kuch gabar hone wala hai..[in his mind]..armaan tu yahi rukh mein chalta hu thik hai..bye...

armaan- [grabz rahul by hiz shoulder]..abey tu kaha ja raha hai..if i am going down..u cuming wid me..

rahul- [really tensed]..arey kaha phaas gaya rahull..

armaan- [startz shouting]..mom..mom...mom...

[armaanz dad and mom[really have a tense expression on her face] comez to da living room..]

armaan- mom yea sab kiya ho raha hai..mera samal bahar kiu hai..[really angry]

rahul- [bit shakey]..hello uncle..hello aunty..

ammy'z mom- armaan..bete woh kiya hai na...

ammy'z dad- tum rehne do mein bata ta hu....

armaan- ofcourse...app hi toh batayenge..yea apke ilawa aur kon karega..

ammy'z dad- tum ne kaha u can stay..alone...when we leave...so here u go...maine tumhare liye aparment book ki hai..tumhara khana..banana..kapre dhona...and other stuff..ajj se tum khud karoge..ur apartment iz ready..and u r shifting today...

[armaan and rahul really shocked..and really tensed]

[here anjali and atul..takez ridhimma and muskaan to anjali'z apartment..]

anjali- come in..plzz..isse apna hi ghar samjho...

muskaan- wow anjali teri toh ash hai...akele itne bare ghar mein...kitna maja ata hoga na..

atul- tumhare ilawa...kiya koi maja ho sakhta hei bhala..[and laughz]..

muskaan- [irritated at atul sayz to anji]....u r very lucky..bohot maje mein hai..

anjali- [suddenly realize ridz iz really upset..and kuch soch rahi hai]..ridhimma tumhe kiya hua..tum inti chup kiu ho..abhi bhi usse bare mein soch rahi ho...

ridhimma- nehi toh..waise hum yaha kiu ayehai...

anjali- good question...ok here goes..kiu ke i have two extra roomz..and atul toh mere saath nehi reh sakhta..issiliye..u will share my apartment wid me...

[ridz and muskaan shocked..]

muskaan- kiya...plzz bolde tu mazak kar rahi hai...i mean i can't afford it yaar..

ridhimma- yea tum kiya keh rahi ho anjali..hum yaha kaise reh sakhte hai...tumhe problem hogi aur phir..

anjali- aur phir kuch nehi..yea meri si jij ki apartment hai..unki family us shift hogayi..aur jate waqt usse yea apartment degaiye...waise bhi mein akeli rehti hu...mujhe daar lagta hai..aur isse bari khushi ki baat kiya hogi..ki mein apne do dosto ke saath reh rahi hu....

ridhimma- par anjali...

anjali- par war kuch nehi..maine keh diya toh keh diya...aur waise tum uss shilpa ke saath reh sakhte ho mere saath nehi...

muskaan- aise baat nehi hai anji...

anjali- asi hi baat hai...agar nehi hai toh plzz maan jao..plzzz...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...

muskaan- thik hai..mujhe toh koi prob nehi hai...aur yaha rahungi toh maza toh bohot ayaegi..lekin agar ridhimma chahe toh..[and then lookz and ridhimma wid puppy eyez]

anjali- plzzz...ridhimma..plzzz..man jao...plzzzzzzzzzzz...

muskaan- [wid a frown]..plzzzz...ridhimma plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..[frown disappearz]..abey maan ja na kiu bhav khati hai...

atul- plzzz...ridhimma...dekho muskaan bhi maan gayi..aur agar woh yaha rahegi toh hamara ghar jaldi bas jayega...aur bache bhi ho jayenge..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...[sayz wid a grin]

[muskaan wid a irritated smile and beatz atul]

ridhimma- [smilez]ok....mein hargayi...

muskaan..atul..anjali- yiiiiipppiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......

😊............................................6th epi endz........................................😊

pre-view- ARMAAN SHIFTS TO AN APARTMENT WID RAHUL....JUST WHEN THEY ARE TAKING IN DER STUFF...THEY SAW ATUL CUMING OUT...FROM DER NEIGHBOURS FLAT....[IS ATUL..ARMAANZ NEIGHBOUR..OR IS IT SIMPLY A COINCIDENT]..😛..loadz of masti nd madness coming up...wait nd watch..😆😛

do comment i hope u guyzz lyk my ff....😊

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Farzana

@FarzuIrani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

it very beautiful

keep writing your love is full showeerd on this

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Radhika Shah

@Radhi12

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Great part!!

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!!!

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a.vaishnavi

@SankiPagal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

aww tarin it was superb.well i m toatlly pissed off at rahul ammy n shilpz rite nw but i knoow ammy is good at heart frm the 5tnh epui.n eways watever he is doing wid ridz is wrong....but hope to c love blosom soon b/w ammy ridz .n atul n muski are funny..............

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: farzanairani
it very beautiful

keep writing your love is full showeerd on this

awww thnk u sooo much..soo cute..muahz..😊

Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Great part!!

Thanks for the PM..

Continue soon!!!

thnx alot....😊...i will...INSHALLAH..😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: alekfan
aww tarin it was superb.well i m toatlly pissed off at rahul ammy n shilpz rite nw but i knoow ammy is good at heart frm the 5tnh epui.n eways watever he is doing wid ridz is wrong....but hope to c love blosom soon b/w ammy ridz .n atul n muski are funny..............

thnx soo much....muah..😊..awww..u hv to wait nd see..😃