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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

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Posted: 16 years ago

In da middle of dehli there lived a girl named ridhimma...she iz a sweet chubuli girl who'z dream is too make it through dis big bad world and make her parents proud...to her parents she was da most beautiful girl in da world and she cud do anything she want'z...and since childhoood she believed in dis too...but she didn't now when she growz up everything will change....

the real truth about ridhimma in da eyez of others was dat she was a big tym nerd...alwayzz first in class really naive...and not da best gf material....she is da girl wid big spec's....long sleeves salwar kamij..lose fit..n all....

Away from dehli in mumbai...lived armaan....perfect in everyway....really rich..cool..handsome...hot..basically a total perfection....he had everything since he was little..money..girls..luks..cars...gud sense of humour..and blah blah....

da negetive side about him....is that he never cared about anyone..nobody's feelings mattered to him...he wants what he wants and gets it by hook or by crook....A COMPLETE SPOILT BRAT...

NOW THE STORY STARTS-

one week later college start hoga....in dehli ridhimma was getting ready to go to college in mumbai...just packing her bags and ready to go....her parents really upset that she was leaving and comes to drop her off in the station..

ridz- maa kiya ajj bhi yea karna zaroori hai..sab log dekhrahe hai..dad kuch boliye na..

mom-(crying) tu chup rah meri beti mumbai jarahi hai parne..nazaar utar rahi hu..agar kuch hogaya toh..

dad-ridz tu toh jaanti hai na maa kaise hai...usse jo karna hai karne de..nehi toh ajj nehi ja sake gi college..(laughing)

ridz-ha pata hai..kaise rohahi hai jaise meye border pe larne ja rahi hu...(laughing)

mom-(still crying)ha urao urao aur mazak urao..meri beti mujhse itna dur ja rahi hai..aur tum meri mazak ura rahe ho..

ridz-ok no mazak...sry maa..tumhari beti parne ja rahi ha..kuch banne ja rahi ha...usse ashirwad ke saath vida karo...rokar nehi..

mom-thik hai..khub paar bohot agey ja....chal aur mane jo bag mei khana diya hai usse khale na...aur phn karna..kuch zaroorat hui toh..

dad-agar phn nehi karegi toh bhi chalega mom jo hogi...har ek din phn karegi..aur mera bill barayegi..(laughing)

ridz-(laughing)

mom-app bhi na..hamesha mere peche pare rehteho...

ridz-ok bas app dono bas karo meri train miss ho jaye gi..bye..

mom-dad- ok thik thak se jana aur jate hi phn karna...

ridz mumbai pohochti hai..or clg ke girls hostle mein jakar uthti hai.....she was very happy nd excited to live on her own for da first tym...got admitted to such a good college...abb kuch galat nehi ho sakta lekin usse kiya pata tha...uski zindegi ase u-turn legi ke sab change hojaye ga...

In mubai armaan was getting ready for college too...but his getting ready was little different....tomorrow iz first day of college..so he was worried about..which car he will take..which perfume...which outfit...will best attract the ladies...

DA BIG DAY FINALLY CUMZ..FIRST DAY OF COLLEGE...

@ARMAAN'Z PLCE DA ALARM RINGS BUT ARMAAN TURNS IT OFF GOES BACK TO SLEEP...
ENTERZ RAHUL..DA SECOND SPOILT BRAT..ARMAAN'Z PARTNER IN CRIME...HIS RIGHT HAND..BACHPAN SE EK SAATH BARE HUe...AUR SAB KUCH EK SAATH HI KIA...

rahul-dude..what da hell..tu abhi tak soo raha hai...chal utja...nehi toh ache impression nehi bana payenge..u knw first impression iz da last impression..

armaan-(yawn's)tu kabse professor ka pet ban gaiya...bachpan se toh ek bhi homework complete nehi kiya aur abb impression ki baat kar raha hai..(laughs)

rahul-what professor...noo mere munna..mein unki upar impression ki baat nehi kar raha hu..mein toh hamesha unki impression down karta hu..mein yea kaise soch sakta hu...chii...

armaan-toh phir kiya keh raha hai...

rahul-arey mere pappu..mein toh girlzz ki baat kar raha tha..lambi girlz..skinny girlz..hot girlz..short girlzz...jaldi chal nehi toh sab booked ho jayenge..

armaan-tu bhi..humesha 0 hi sochega..hero se sun..hum dono college ke studz hai hum larkiyo ke paas nehi larkiya humare paas ayengi...

rahul- yeah [confused].....yeah..right on...(devil smile)

AUR UDHAR HOSTLE MEIN AK ALAG HI DRAMA CHAL RAHA THA...
RIDZZ WAS GETTING READY......FOR HER FIRST DAY...

ridz-(praying)hey bhagwan plzzz ajj shab kuch thik ho..plzz meri rakhsa karna bhagwan...mere sare professors mujhe pasand kare mujhse unhe koi shikayat naho..plzz...

JUST THEN...THERE IZ A BIG BANG ON DA DOOR...ENTERZ MUSKAAN....RIDZZ ROOM MATE..SHE IZ A MISCHIEF CREATOR...REALLLY TRUE OF HEART A GUD FRND...BUT REALLY CLUMSY AND A TOTAL pagli....

muskaan-acha toh yea hai mera room...thoda chota hai par manage karlenge....

ridz-hi..i am ridhimma aur app..

muskaan- kon mein..mein toh ji jhaasi ki rani hu...abhi abhi larke a rahi hu...uss stupid taxi driver se jisne mujhse double paise liye..pata hai..usne samjha mein chote seher se ayi hu isliye mein kuch nehi jante...uski toh mein...:@

ridz- mein app ki liya pani lau...

muskaan- app pani kiu laoge hmm...maine kiya pani panga hai..chalo chado...abi intro shintro karlete hai..hii i am muskaan..aur app...

ridz- mein ridhimma...

muskaan- ridhimma..its so very nice to see u...

AND THEY SHAKE HANDS....

....FIRST EPISODE COMPLETE...

i hope u ppl like my ff....😊...do comment..if u liked it😊

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Edited by tarin ahmed - 15 years ago

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sanjana25

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Posted: 16 years ago

it was really nice
loved the way you introduced them
feel sad that rids is a nerd
but waiting to see does she change

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25
it was really nice
loved the way you introduced them
feel sad that rids is a nerd
but waiting to see does she change

aww..thnx..i am glad u liked it..😊...
well u have to wait nd watch...😃

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

..(2ND EPISODE)..HUM APP DOSTI AUR PYAAR..

...second episode...

After shaking hands...

muskaan- oji ridhimma humne toh abhi shake wake kar liya toh abhi toh hum dost hai na....?..

ridhimma- ha ha hum dost hai.....yea bhi koi puch ne ki baat hai....

muskaan- are waah!..toh phir thik hai...toh mein bhi boldeti hu...mujhe na bachpan se khirki ke paas sone ki adat hai..uske bina mujhe neend nehi ati....lekin tum ne woh khirki wali jaga pehle leli...toh abb mujhe yea jaga leni paregi...mujhe saari raat neend nehi ayegi...(very sadly said that...and looked at ridhimma..)

ridhimma- are toh pehle kiu nehi bola....hum dost hai na....thik hai tum khirki ke paas waali jaga le lo...mein woh wali jaga lelungi...(then smiled)..

muskaan- sachi...bhai waah...thanx yaar...
are yea bilkul mushkil nehi tha yaar...(devilish smile)..maja ayega..(saying in her mind)...

Muskaan and ridhimma arrives at college and goes to class...

ridhimma took her seat...aur jabhi usne apne seat pe behtha..uske paas se sabhi uthke chale gaye...
ridhimma very upset...muskaan see's her and gets angry at otherz..ridz..uthne waali hi hoti hai apne seat se..tab hi...

muskaan- chalo acha hua...hume itni respect di..ke humare liya seat chor ke chalegaye...aur hum do dost ak saath nehi bahtenge toh kiya do dushman ek saath behtenge....tu uth kiu rahi hai..bhet ja...

ridhimma- thank u..muskaan..(smiled at muskaan)

muskaan- thank u..kis liya..tu na thank u maat bol....hum dost hai..aur i am alwayz here for u...dekh yaar tu na bari hi bholi aur sweet kisam ki hai..jo ki achi baat nehi hai...tujhe strong banna parega..nehi toh koi bhi tere saath kuch bhi kar ke chala jaye ga...aur ha..ek or baat..woh khirki wali side tera hai..ok...ab se kisi ko apna haq ki cheez maat dena...

ridhimma- yea kia kehrahi ho..mujhe kuch samaj nehi araha....aur kiu woh side mujhe phirse kiu di...(ridz confused)

muskaan- are bhagwan.....sach mein na tu bari woh hai...uff..chal rehne de..tere se kuch nehi hoga..frm now tu mujhe hamesha tere piche payegi...(and smiled at ridz)...chal abhi class shuru hone wali hai...

...FROM THAT TIME RIDZ AND MUSKAAN BECAME DA BESTEST FRIEND...

after 5 minz...professor.ghunru class mein entry leti upps sry leta hai....

[professor.ghunru ak ajib kisam ke insaan hai jabhi kuch parahte hai..sare intro deke pahrate hai..college ke chemistry teacher hai...aur physical aur chemical chemistry ke baare mein sab jante hai...aur ak aur baat hai...professor ghunru ko..boyz kuch ziada hi pasand hai...soo boyzz bachke rehna re baba bach ke rehna re...]

Professor.ghunru enter's the class..and everybody stands up..and says gud morning sir..

p.ghunru- plzz bhet jaiye bhet jaiye...gud morning...ajj college ka pehla din hai..aur hum aaj..chemistry k sabse basic aur important chapter se shuru karenge..attraction (very passionately)..

usi waqt piche se ek larka...

boy- sir konsa attraction...(laughs)

p.ghunru- chup..badmash..i mean molecular attraction...solid kaise liquid hota hai..aur liquid kaise gas....samjhe...

everyone laughing....

then armaan and rahul arrives at college...

rahul- dude..aaj late hogaye teri waje se..tune toh kaha tha...jab hum ayenge...sari larkiya humare paas ayengi...yaha toh koi nehi hai..aur class bhi shuru ho gayi...ajj toh maar paregi...pehle din hi maar...are yaar mere impression ka kia hoga...(worried)

armaan- are ha yaar..yea toh sab garbar hogaya...maine toh socha tha aaj first day hai class der se shuru hogi...mujhe kiya pata tha...time pe hi shuru ho jaye gi...

rahul- kiya..tune guess kiya..kutte...abhi tere liya...mujhe bhi punishment paregi..

armaan- kuch nehi hoga chal class chalte he...wohi pe kuch bahana bana lenge...

armaan and rahul comes to da class...

p.ghunru- tum log kon ho...aur itni derse kiu ayeho...class toh abhi khatam ho jaye gi...

armaan- woh..woh..kiya hai na sir...ajj na..ummmmm...i mean..ajj hum...woh..kiya hai na sir..humne apke bare mein inti baat suni...aur hum itna excited the apke class mein aneke liya..ke puri raat hum so nehi sake..aur isliye subha utne mein der ho gayi....sry sir..(wid a sad face)

rahul- (nodding his head) ha..sir app itne mahan ho ke..kiya bolu apke bare mein kia kia suna...

armaan- abe ullu ki aulad...ziada maat bol warna...sach mein puri raat nehi so sakenge...

rahul- we r sry..sir..(wid a sad face)..

p.ghunru- ok..kitne ache larke hai..itne sundar..aur kitne aweet...koi baat nehi jao jake apne sit pe batho..

armaan and rahul apne sit pe jake beht ne hi wale the tabhi..

p.ghunru- tum..!! tum ruko..idhar ayo..

armaan- mein...sir..

p.ghunru- ha..tum..tumhara naam kiya hai..

armaan- armaan sir..armaan mallik..

p.ghunru- armaan..yaha aao mere paas...(looking at armaan in a weird way)

muskaan- ridz..aaj toh izz notunki ki pant utar ne waali hai...

ridhimma- (giggles)..bechara toh aaj shuli pe charne wala hai..ALLAH uski rakhsha karna...

muskaan and ridhimma laughs...

p.ghunru- see class..(rubbing armaan'z shoulder)..mein abb iski shoulder rub kar raha hu toh ek heat produce ho raha..kiu armaan ho raha hai na heat produce..

armaan- omg..ha sir ho raha hai..
a bhagwan mujhe bacha lo..plzzz..(in his mind)..

tabhi bell rings...class finished...

armaan-thanx bhagwan...(exhales deeply)

p.ghunru-abhi toh shuru kiya tha....class khatam hogaya...uff....ok class...ajj ke liye itna hi...tum sab next class chemistry book ke first chapter parke ana...ok..

armaan- omg..sir mein jau....

p.ghunru- ha jao...lekin agar tumhe koi bhi problem ho..mujhe batana yea phir milne chale ana..kabhi bhi...

armaan- omg..ji..sir...(worried)

p.ghunru leaves da class...

rahul- (laughing) yaar tu toh keh raha tha college ayega tere piche larkiya par jayengi....tujhe toh boyfriend mill gayaa..woh bhi professor ghunru..wow yaar tu kitna lucky hai..(laughing continuously)

armaan- (angry) ha ha hasle...kutte..kamine....mera waha kia haal ho raha tha sirf mein hi janta hu...(phhheww)

rahul- jo bhi ho...tera chera dekh kar mujhe toh bohot maja agaiya...(laughing)

At that time sumone enter's the classroom..armaan and rahul shocked..mouth wide open...everyone looking at da door....muskaan(making faces)..and looked at da door...

....second episode finished....

i hope u ppl like it..😊

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sanjana25

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Posted: 15 years ago

loved the part
armaan and gungro were soo funny
waiting to see who came
so sad for rids
loved how muski helped her
thanx for pm
plz contd soon

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Nruti

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey

that was gr8 ff

i realy enjoyed reading this ff

interesting consept

PM me when u updat

updat soon

nruti

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Radhika Shah

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey

Just read it!!

It's really intresting and both of the parts were Really nice!!!

Please PM me when you Continue!!!

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjana25
loved the part
armaan and gungro were soo funny
waiting to see who came
so sad for rids
loved how muski helped her
thanx for pm
plz contd soon

aww...i am glad...u liked it....nd ur welcum...
will post it soon......😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Riddss
heyyy dear,
nice FF.

love
Riddss

thanx u...so much...😊

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Tarin Rawshan Ahmed Tonni

@tarin ahmed

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Posted: 15 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah
Hey
Just read it!!

It's really intresting and both of the parts were Really nice!!!

Please PM me when you Continue!!!

thank u...😊...
i will sure pm u...when i post da new epi...😊
thanx again..😊