Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: mayur_fan
hey sookie,
the upd8 was osssum, the was they both understand each other evn without meeting each other, through poems was wonderful...

plzzzz add me 2 ur pm list & upd8 soooon.😃

lotsa luv, 😃

jigi.

Hey, Thanks for your comments. I will definitely PM you next time I update.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: mayaas
Very thoughtful piece of work. I haven't really followed MJHT but I like the way how you take a scene from it and pepper it with your own musings and reflections.

Thanks maam...btw, where the heck are you these days??

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Posted: 15 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
sookie u knwww whtt wwhenn i readd thruu this..

i wass likee dudee.. thiss is awesuumm..

initiallyy ur stylee of writtingg made me go insane...

noww thtt ive got used to it.. thee wayy uve put in evrythingg...

gngg frm the veryy beginingg widd ur own littlee sparkk into it..

pluss the songs... theyy got me sighingg tryingg to decipher the meaning..

the hiddenn meaaningg thtt u addedd in to the wordsss.. the songss.. wowww i wass amazeddd...

serioussllyyy~!!!

thhisss is the firstt timee ive got so insanely intimidated to an FF!!!

I

MAGINE THAT!!

awshhhhh i justt canttt believe i readd this ff justt noww!!

ur reallyy gooodd sookiee!!!

andd uve got an amazingg talent rightt therree....

ndd no one noticedd!!

*smacks herself*

andd yaa sookiee... plzzz do pm mee whenn u update nextt yaarr...

im dyingg to knoww wht happenss nexxtt!!

huggss

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sindhya

Hey Sindhya,
Thanks for your comment. I will definitely PM you when I update next.
And you are very generous with your comments. :-)
Thanks a lot again.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: SaJanmayUrKaSh
please PM me your next update!
I loved the FF!

Thanks very much for your comments. :-)

I will PM you when I update next.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: utfracks
Sookie...you're simply brilliant. I had seen your post on MJHT Forum, about the characterization of MayUr, and was thoroughly impressed. And I also read half of your AR FF, Infinity..one..I am no big fan of AR, but I loved that FF of yours. And with this MayUr FF, it just couldn't get better. I love the way you've described everthing with such accuracy. And the concept is refreshing as well. I'm looking forward to more such brilliant FFs from you. I don't mind on whoever it may be, cause your writing style is just captivating. Do continue soon and do pm me.

Hello,
Thank you for your comment. And first of all, you should not have broached Infinity...here. Its one topic I can talk endless about. Many people on this forum will vouch for that. :-)
This one is my regular style of writing but I introduced writing verses and stuff and am struggling to write more which are apt for the story line. Thank you very much for liking this (and Infinity too..)
I will PM you next time I update.
(BTW, I did read few of your comments MJHT forum last month. I like what you write and I liked the assertive tone your posts portrayed. )
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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
this is a very interesting ff, i love it!
i love ur style of writing
i can't wait to read more from u
continue soon
n do add me to ur pm list

Hello Mishu,

Thank you for your comment. I will definitely continue and will PM you.

Thanks again.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

hey sookie*

hm..loved this mayur stuff and its so different ..blog and posts..nice concept to understand the feeling of mayur towards eachothr..

how wud both react seeing each othr is way long to know..

anyways loved it..loved the poems and u r way of writing in this one..actually easy for me to understand!!hehe!!

i knw its been a long time u updates it may be u r busy or seeing the current status of MJHT..whatever,,

can u please PM me when u update..

ok then take care,,

sri:-)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Hellosss Sookie!!! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Mai yaha bhi pahuch gai...u will soon be getting sick of me..:)

although I dont read Mayur(this is first time), I liked it. ur beautiful writing skills combined with the opposite characters with a hint of common interests is surely going to blend up in a great story.

poems are incredible

plz pm me wen u update

Sur