Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey Sookie!

the unsaid moments of fear, hurt, solace and unknown trust has been so well penned by you. not everyone has this way of expressing it as Mayur. an amazingly simple and sweet one. thanks for the pm and very happy to se you in full form.

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mayaas

@mayaas

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

Very thoughtful piece of work. I haven't really followed MJHT but I like the way how you take a scene from it and pepper it with your own musings and reflections.

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

sookie u knwww whtt wwhenn i readd thruu this..

i wass likee dudee.. thiss is awesuumm..

initiallyy ur stylee of writtingg made me go insane...

noww thtt ive got used to it.. thee wayy uve put in evrythingg...

gngg frm the veryy beginingg widd ur own littlee sparkk into it..

pluss the songs... theyy got me sighingg tryingg to decipher the meaning..

the hiddenn meaaningg thtt u addedd in to the wordsss.. the songss.. wowww i wass amazeddd...

serioussllyyy~!!!

thhisss is the firstt timee ive got so insanely intimidated to an FF!!!

MAGINE THAT!!

awshhhhh i justt canttt believe i readd this ff justt noww!!

ur reallyy gooodd sookiee!!!

andd uve got an amazingg talent rightt therree....

ndd no one noticedd!!

*smacks herself*

andd yaa sookiee... plzzz do pm mee whenn u update nextt yaarr...

im dyingg to knoww wht happenss nexxtt!!

huggss

sindhya

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thenarcissist

@thenarcissist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

please PM me your next update!
I loved the FF!

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430105

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Sookie...you're simply brilliant. I had seen your post on MJHT Forum, about the characterization of MayUr, and was thoroughly impressed. And I also read half of your AR FF, Infinity..one..I am no big fan of AR, but I loved that FF of yours. And with this MayUr FF, it just couldn't get better. I love the way you've described everthing with such accuracy. And the concept is refreshing as well. I'm looking forward to more such brilliant FFs from you. I don't mind on whoever it may be, cause your writing style is just captivating. Do continue soon and do pm me.

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

this is a very interesting ff, i love it!
i love ur style of writing
i can't wait to read more from u
continue soon
n do add me to ur pm list

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: nikki028
Sookie...............finally u updated............uff......thnxxxxxxx a ton for tht alone............

wht an awesome rockin update dear............lovd it vry much to d core.......plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooon

Hey Nikki,

Yep, I finally did. Thanks so much for liking it.
Yeah, will continue but its gonna take a while. This weekend I think. :-)

Sookie

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: aish_punk
hey sookie..nice part..

Nupur was ragged or bullied again in college..thats bad..just because they're small-town girls..dusnt mean that they do this to em..

n Mayank saved her from the men's washroom..thats so cool..n reminded me of the intial epi's..!..

MaYur;s poetry is just awesome..they describe their feelings so well in form of poems..

Mayank seems intimidated by the poetry gal n the washroom one..but he dusnt noe they're d same..!..aww..

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

Hey Aish!

Bingo on the summary! You have given exact plot for this chapter.
I think Mayank is not intimidated but has a kind of cosmic attraction towards this small town girl.

Sookie

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Sookie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: zoya_me
aweseom update...wen i saw ur pm i was like YAY!!! ok dnt mind my moments of craziness......but awesome update......it was so amazing...they met and how........te way they convey their thoughts to each other true poetries is really amazing.....plzzzzzz continue soon....

Hey Zoya,

Thanks :-) Nah, I wont mind. I kinda dig it when people actually anticipate to what I write. Thanks for your comments!

Sookie

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic
Hey Sookie. :) Loved it, the thing that draws me to the FF is that your going through the initial meeting of MN with your own bits of panache and the extra umph. Your writing is equisitte.. and the song lyrics you've used always fit in. :D thanks for the PM xSonia

Hey! You are right. I am borrowing the initial meeting from the series itself and I think borrowing is going to stop here itself. Well, they are not exactly song lyrics. :-)
Thanks Sonia.

Sookie

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