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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

for chap3

awesome again...!!!👏 👏 👏

kuch mysteries hain...n quite interesting...

naina ka backgroud thoda Dhoom2 k Suneheri se milta julta hai...bas thoda sa...lekin baki sab kuch bilkul alag hai ...aur tum ne naina ko bhi baht hi alag tarik se cast kiya hai...👏 👏 👏!!! aur jaise tum ne devraj k place, room aur bodyguards ka xplaine kiya hai...dat was mindblowing. bt ek req hai plz Raj ya Naina in me se kisi ko bhi villain mat bana na...!!!

ok...now abt dat nightmare...

who is she...aur voh Raj se kaise realated hai...??? n akhirkar raj ko Naina chaiye aur us ne use hasil kar liya...!!!

ek ques...Raj k opposite Naina hi hai na...???

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Priya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

For chap 4

ok Raj is nt a gud guy...n voh sab se jyada bharosha karta hai karan par...!!!sach kahun toh mujhe yeh fic ek hollywood action movie ki tarah lagta hai...aur mere yeh😃 😃 😛 😛 😉 😉 xpressions dekh kar tum samajh hi gayi hogi ki mujhe yeh kitna achha lagta hai...!!! actually mere dimag me bhi hamesha action hi ghumta rahta hai...!!! do din pahle maine apna action dikhane k liye ek pillow phaad diya...mom apna action dikhati...papa ne hero ban kar entry li aur main bach gayi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...!!!

by d way ab no bakwas...

naina apne haar ek kaam me perfect hai...lekin mujhe us par thoda shaq bhi hai...!!! voh Raj k diye hue kaam ko bhi ek dam perfectlly pura karegi...yeh mera dil kahta hai...!!! karan ka sawal bilkul sahi tha...'naina par shaq kar rahe ho ya phir chinta...???" 👏 👏 👏

very nice ud.👏 👏 👏

cont soon.

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-serenity-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Hi sur,

Interesting concept 👏

Really good 👏

Finished reading all the parts

to raj i mean devraj is a don.............handsome don 😉

Why do I feel the guy who betrayed the girl in the prologue is devraj,n is naina in any way related to that girl?…………..i know it's a weird guess 😆

U described the characthers of naina n raj very well

The description of Rajs house n room is so beautiful 😊

Though raj knows well that beauty always conceals danger,he couldnot stop himself from getting attracted to naina 😳

Karan is a true friend for devraj n he is concerned about him, I think he is right that raj naina par thoda jaldi he bharosa kar raha hai

Naina told that she does not want any one to follow her n when karan asked whats the problem if the man is from the gang whom she is working for ,nainas answer is she hate distractions………some thing is fishy

I hope jaldi karan naina ke bare me pata lagaye……………akhir kaun hai ye naina roy

waiting eagerly for the next part

please do update soon

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Hey nice part dear.hiii thnqqqq But seriously I dont want Devraj to be so much involved in Naina.hmmm An Karan ko to main ashirwaad dungi ki wo jaldi se pata lagaye iss Naina ka raaz....jite raho beta!I just dont want Devraj to be in any trouble.okkkk I hope Karan can do sumthing ot may be u let him do anything.yeah...wait n watch😆

And Sur....I understand it must be really difficult for u to UD amidst the xams.lol roz sochti hu aaj no if but everyday kam se kam 2 ghante waste krti hu.. So take ur tym dear. An thank u even for this sweet short part. 😃always welcome dear

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
for chap 1

beautiful n awesome work Sur.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanqqqq glad u liked it!

d way u portrayed Rajeev as Devraj...awesome...!!!thanqq again!

thanks so much fr commenting!

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

chap2

naina ki entry ek dam dhamakedar thi...thanks glad u liked it aur voh kisi aur ki BG hai...well,for nowbt now i just wish ki voh abhi Raj (main Devraj ko Raj hi kahungi...hope ki tumhe bura nahin lagega)arre mujhe bhala kyu bura lagne laga! the name Raj suits him alot, doesnt it?? k liye kaam kare...!!! ab toh raj bhi us ki chanbin karne laga hai...!!!yeah ye uski hobby hai tumhe pata hai mujhe sab se jyada koun sa part achha laga...jab naina ne raj ko bachaya n all d stuff btwn RN...again thanks k u liked it...mujhe bahut sochna pada tha uske liye...took a long time!dats really gr888...!!! Priyanka n Rajeev in a new avtaar...!!!yeah completely new...ye humare sweet raj naina nahi hai!

awesome work Sur...for u👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏thanqqq again

thanx a bunch fr commenting, u really made my day!😊😊

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya
For chap 4

ok Raj is nt a gud guy...finally u realise😆😆no he is not gud at all n voh sab se jyada bharosha karta hai karan par...!!!haan ab bhai koi na koi to hona hi chahiye na sach kahun toh mujhe yeh fic ek hollywood action movie ki tarah lagta hai...really???😃aur mere yeh😃 😃 😛 😛 😉 😉 xpressions dekh kar tum samajh hi gayi hogi ki mujhe yeh kitna achha lagta hai...!!!mujhe bhi mujhe bhi!!! actually tumhare itne pyare comm padh k mere bhi yahi expression hai😃 actually mere dimag me bhi hamesha action hi ghumta rahta hai...!!! same here! do din pahle maine apna action dikhane k liye ek pillow phaad diya...lol mom apna action dikhati...saari moms ka yahi kaam hota hai! bahar ladke action dikhate nd ghar pe aurate(spl moms)papa ne hero ban kar entry li aur main bach gayi...congo!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆...!!!

by d way ab no bakwas...nah its gud mujhe maze aate hai ye sab padhne me!

naina apne haar ek kaam me perfect hai...ya she is lekin mujhe us par thoda shaq bhi hai...!!!uska ilaaj bhi ho jayega voh Raj k diye hue kaam ko bhi ek dam perfectlly pura karegi...yeh mera dil kahta hai...!!! dil hamesha sahi hota hai!karan ka sawal bilkul sahi tha...'naina par shaq kar rahe ho ya phir chinta...???" smart guy i tell u👏 👏 👏

very nice ud.👏 👏 👏thnqqqqqqqqqqq agaaaaaaaaaaiiiiinnnnnn

cont soon.wil try my best

thanks a bunch for commenting!

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Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi sur,Hi Sanskruthi

Interesting concept 👏thanx...glad u liked it

Really good 👏again thanks😊

Finished reading all the parts

to raj i mean devraj is a don.............handsome don 😉haan ab Raj jo hai...handsome to kam hai uske liye

Why do I feel the guy who betrayed the girl in the prologue is devraj,n is naina in any way related to that girl?hmmm u think so?''''..i know it's a weird guess 😆keep trying

U described the characthers of naina n raj very wellshukriya again so much

The description of Rajs house n room is so beautiful 😊yeah kind of my dream house!!! full of mysteries!

Though raj knows well that beauty always conceals danger,he couldnot stop himself from getting attracted to naina 😳ab akhir hai to insaan hi na...but he is not a fool jo aise hi impress ho jaye!

Karan is a true friend for devraj n he is concerned about him, I think he is right that raj naina par thoda jaldi he bharosa kar raha haikya baat hai yaar RN se zyada fans to Karan ke ban gaye hai! seems lke everyone likes him!😆

Naina told that she does not want any one to follow her n when karan asked whats the problem if the man is from the gang whom she is working for ,nainas answer is she hate distractions'''some thing is fishyyaha sabhi sirfire hai dont worry they all are sunky types😆

I hope jaldi karan naina ke bare me pata lagaye'''''akhir kaun hai ye naina royu wil know in a few episodes

waiting eagerly for the next part😃

please do update soonwil try my best

thaks a bunch for commenting I wil try 2 live upto ur expectations.😃

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ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Hi sur!

Finally I finished reading all the parts of this fic. I loved the way u have portrayed Rajeev as Devraj and Pri as Naina Roy. But something is certainly fishy about her.
I agree with sanskruthi, even I feel that Naina is somehow connected with the girl u mentioned in the prologue and Devraj had shot her. Is Naina here to avenge that dead girl??? I hope the mystery is cleared soon.
I loved Naina's style of working. And Karan asked the right question- chinta kar raha hai. Devraj ne Naina par vishwas toh jaldi kar liya hai par ab kya karen, ye toh hona hi tha.
I loved the description of Raj's room. It is almost a palace in itself. Woooow.
I loved this story. Please update as soon as possible.

Love
Guglu

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Chapter-5
Naina walked towards her bedroom which was last in the corridor. She was nearly midway when she sensed some movement behind her. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw Alex and Steve. She could feel some trouble coming up but continued to walk, ignoring them.She wasnt afraid but wanted to avoid trouble.They came closer to her, walking with uncoordinated steps, clearly drunk. Alex overtook her just before she reached the door of her room.
"hey beautiful"He said grinning sheepishly.
Naina:"Get out of the way Alex if you dont like hospitals"
Steve rounded up on her and said"Cmon such a sweet gal and such stingy words...all da gals over here do this,tonight in my room"
Naina:"steve I am NOT your call girl" but they ignored her.
Alex:"Come babes..."He pulled Naina's hand and wrapped his arm around her slender waist. Steve grabbed her other hand and they begun to pull her towards steve's room. Naina didnt oppose them and let herself being steered away by them. They realised she wasnt fighting and loosened their grip to open the doors to Steve's chambers when Naina saw her chance and slipped out of their reach. They both turned back, surprised. Even though the alcohol had slowed down their reactions, they both were big, burly men with a lot of muscle. Naina knew she had to use her brains to fight them...after all they were Devraj's men, the best in the underworld. Alex roared in anger and advanced towards her, a strange madness in his eyes. Naina backed off against the corridor wall and waited for him and when he was close enough, shove her knee hard into his abdomen. He howled with pain and jumped back. Then she kicked him in his face and he fell down.Steve came to her from her left side before she had time to react and pinned her against the wall. She relaxed for a moment and then Steve was howling too...she had stamped his foot with her high heels. His grip slackened and she punched him hard in the eye. He also stepped back a few paces. Grabbing the opportunity, she picked up a long glass show piece and smashed it on his head. She went to Alex who was recovering and banged his head against the wall. Both Alex and Steve fainted. She dropped the glass piece, flipped back her long hair and said softly"I warned you"
Hearing the glass break Devraj and Karan, who were both talking in the hall looked up. Security guards ran past them to check and they followed. when they reached, Naina was gone and both the men were lying in the corridor, bleeding a bit. everybody was shocked and their immediate reaction was that somebody had broken into their house. The guard called up camera room and heard something and cut the phone relieved. He turned to Devraj and answered his silent question"They tried to force Miss Roy to sleep with them, so she did this"
Devraj supressed his amused smile and looked at the men. He ordered him to take them to their rooms and attend to their wounds, if necessary. He nodded and with the help of 2 other men dragged Steve and Alex away. Devraj looked at Karan who raised his eyebrows quizically.
Karan:"Ye sab kya tha? Chalo camera room me chalke dekhte hai"
Devraj:"Chalo"
They went to the camera room and saw the action replay of the whole fight. By the end of it, Karan and Devraj were both feeling highly entertained.
Karan:"Fools, both of them...I never thought it would be so easy for her"
Devraj:"In dono ko aisa nahi karna chahiye tha...Mujhe pehle se hi unki niyat par shaq tha...I think Naina ne jo kia wo sahi kia"
Karan:"Haan, tumhe kabse wo galat lagne lagi...par kuch zyada nahi ho gaya?"
Devraj:"Haan par uske baare me kal subah baat karenge"
Karan:"yeah I would love to see her reaction"
Saying this, Devraj left and Karan went to Alex who was coming around by now. He walked to his bedside and slapped him hard. Alex looked up confused.
Karan:"I asked you to drug her and interrogate her, not try to rape her"
Alex:"I am sorry I was doing that only but Steve said lets have some fun so..."
Karan:"You are a useless scoundrel...keep drinking like this and you will be on the post of watchman of the mansion soon...and dare to tell anyone that I asked you to do this and you yourself wont realise what will happen to your corpse."
Karan left to sleep fuming, as his plan had backfired. He had asked Alex to accompany Naina for a drink, drug her and then try to make her speak. But the idiot fell for her beauty, got drunk and beaten up by a woman. Karan knew it was useless now to try something else with the help of these guys as Naina would be alert. But he was still determined to rip off that composed look from her face. He had an odd feeling that Naina was trying to impress Devraj with her so called unassuming behaviour. He wanted to save Devraj at any cost and he knew very well that Devraj was not an emotional person on the surface, but even he had some points, if pressed correctly, could lead to his downfall. And he was the only man who knew where these points were. He was secretly glad that Devraj was single because most of the gangsters owed their downfall to their mistresses.
Lost in his thoughts, he walked into his room and laid down on his bed and fell asleep without changing.
Next morning, Devraj called the meeting to discuss their plan. Everyone knew that this mission was a reply to Maxwell for his attack on Devraj at that party, but nobody dared to speak it aloud. They knew that forgiveness was not there in his dictionary.
Everybody arrived at the right time. Devraj was the last to arrive along with Karan. He observed Naina carefully.She was dressed in black trousers and a short sleeved shirt and was going through the file she had brought along with her. Her left wrist had deep blue bruise marks. A small voice in Devraj's head said that he wanted to murder Steve for that but he shut it down and looked at Alex and Steve. Alex was still sporting the black eye and a swollen temple. Steve had limped to the meeting hall and was wearing a bandage around his head. They were looking very uncomfortable and comical as they tried to avoid the questioning gazes around them. Every time their eyes flitted to Naina, a shiver passed through their spine. Amused, Devraj started the meeting.
Devraj:"Goodmorning gentlemen...and Miss Roy.I hope you all have made some efforts towards the tasks assigned to you. Miss Roy?"
Naina looked at him and passed him the file"Boss, I went to some trusted contacts of mine and we followed Ronald Black for sometime. This man is very cautious and never travels in the same car twice in a month atleast. His visits are random and hold no particular pattern. But every week, on Thursday, if he is in the town, he goes to this casino bar for gambling. Its a small place, nothing special near the outskirts of the city. But there too, he is accompanied by his guards and plays in a separate room made for him only. He never goes into that place without sending his guards first. After they have checked every corner of the place, only then Ronald Black enters. New members are not allowed to go in there so first one of our men have to become a member of this casino club and win over the trust of these people. This can take a lot of time and surpass our one month deadline so we have to think of another way..."
Devraj looked at the file carrying the details thoughtfully and said"Good work Miss roy". He got up, took round of the conference table and sat back on his chair.
Finally he spoke "I think we have to do this simultaneously...This thursday that is tomorrow Harry, your informer will keep an eye on this casino club and note down the timings of of arrivals and departure of Ronald Black and his men. After that has been verified, Steve send your shooters to the 3 lock ups...wait a second, arent these men going to be released on Thursday?"
Karan:"Yes"
Devraj's face lit up with his famous dangerous smile and he threw back his head and said
"All said and done then. We will shoot these 3 men when they are being released along with Ronald Black. Release timings are 5 in the evening and at that time Ronald Black will enter his club. This is a one time mission...Steve get your very best men on the job, no newcomers. Naina you can assist him...infact, you take up Ronald Black, Steve you go for those 3 men. shoot them just as they step out of the lock up. And no body should survive...Try not to kill the cops,but go ahead if you have to. no civilians are to be targetted.Do I make myself clear?"
They all nodded and were again signalled to leave.
"Alex, steve and Naina, please stay back"Devraj said in a light voice. Alex and Steve froze as though Devraj had announced their death sentence. Naina simply looked curious.
Devraj walked upto them and said"I think its pretty obvious why I have called you...What happened to you Alex and Steve?"
Alex and Steve exchanged glances and steve spoke"Ummm boss actually we...uh"
Devraj raised his eyebrows and said in a chilling tone"I know very well what happened and let me warn you, this is for the first and last time I am tolerating your behaviour. If in the future you tried any thing like that, you know what I do to miscreants. I would have punished you myself but it seems Miss Roy has done better than me. Apologise to her right now."
Alex and Steve hung their heads and turned to Naina who stood looking bored as usual and she said
"Dont bother cuz I wont forgive them... You guys are sick...you wont get any complaints in your work boss, I have worked with worse men than these 2... but never ask me to befriend them."
Devraj:"Thats your personal problem...Nice moves by the way"
Devraj turned to Naina and said"Get ready, I have to leave for a conference meeting with the corporate heads of my companies. You and Karan will come with me along with John."
Karan was unusually quite that day. They nodded and within 5 minutes, both of them were standing near the Gates waiting for Devraj. He arrived and Naina got in the car, in the passenger seat, while Devraj and Karan sat in the back seat. 2 cars followed them and 2 lead them giving Devraj a complete cover. The meeting was to be held in a 5 star hotel. They reached there and went in towards the venue.
In the meeting Devraj discussed his companies' Annual reports and marked new profit targets. After it was done, they came out and and just as they stepped out of the hotel, Naina and Karan suddenly sprang in front of Devraj to protect him as they saw a bullet being fired from a gun. End

I know as usual ud late ho gaya par kya kare, I was not well.

ab jaldi jaldi comments likho taki mai naya ud karu...jitne zada comments ayenge utne jaldi ud karungi...

AND YES CHECK OUT D PIX I HAV POSTED ON 1ST PAGE....

love

Sur😊

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago