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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Hi Sur,

Great update. Naina did the right thing with Steve and Alex. They deserved more than that. Wow!!! That was a great action scene.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Devraj and Karan were amused when they saw the tapes. Well, they ought to be.

So Karan wanted to drug and intoxicate Naina and then find out the truth about her. His sixth sense says that something is wrong about Naina. Well Karan, I support your gut feeling. Even I feel the same. Naina is trying a bit too much to impress Devraj and her cool, controlled and calm exterior give the signs of something very mysterious in her interior. Devraj is falling a bit too sonn for Naina. Stay away Raj, she may betray you!!!😑 But then humari Sur hai na!!! Sab sambhalne ke liye.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

So the moment Devraj came his eyes went towards Naina and he saw the bruise marks on her wrist. Lakshan ache nahi hai Raj bete. Tu toh gaya.πŸ˜†

Somebody has again attacked Devraj. Karan and Naina sprang forward to protect Devraj. Good.πŸ‘. But I would like to know what this Karan is upto.πŸ˜•. His silence is giving me a strange feeling.

Do update asap.

Love
Guglu
Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Hi sur,,,

Superb,mind blowing update πŸ‘

Naina ne kya pitayi ki .......just too good How dare they touch naina,samaj kya rakha hain ye log........ usne pehle warning bhi ki steve aur alex ko,phir bhi donon ne seriously nahi liya aur natija ek ko swollen eye,aur dusre ko bandage on head n limping πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

I just loved the whole scene ,the way she handled them cooly with out panicking ...... she made them fainted aur aaram se apni room mein chaligayee

Karan ,raj aur sabhi security aagaya ye awaz se socha koi gusgaya house mein lekin badh mein pata chala ye sab miss.naina roy ne kiya hai,when raj n karan saw the tapes they feel like entertained…….ab ye koi action sequence se kam tha kya...... aur raj ne bilkul sahi kaha that naina ne jo kiya wo tikh kiya ……karan ka poochna when did naina was wrong for u…….so true

To ye sab mr.karan ka idea hai....... he asked them to drug naina aur sach bahar nikalvawo ki wo kis maksad se aayi……….par galat admiyon ko chuna apne plan ke liye …..vaise naina itni jaldi haath main nahi anewali….are fic ke heroine jo hai, smart hai

Me also feel same like karan ki naina kuch jyadahi raj ko impress kar rahi hai aur wo bhi itni jaldi ,jabhi mein padthi hun ki naina stand there or sit there with boring face meri shak aur badthi ja rahi hai

Naina ne kafi investigate ki hai Ronald black ke bare mein kahi ye naina police wali hai kya….hehehehe…. ..i know meri ye guess kuch jyada hi weird lag rahi haina πŸ˜ƒ

Meeting mein aate hi raj ka pehla kaam naina ko dekhana n naina ki hand pe bruises dekh ke usko bahut gusa agaya steve pe………ummmmmm so much concern ,πŸ˜‰

Raj asked steve n alex to say sorry to naina n warned both of them………why this karan is so calm……is he planning something

In a short time only naina kitni khass jagah bana li devraj ki gang mein,he took her to the conference also along with karan n john

Ye hamla kisne kiya ……….hope raj ,naina aur karan safe ho

Its a beautiful update dear πŸ˜ƒ

n your choice of actors for karan n sam is so good ,πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
plz take rest n get well soon 😊
waiting eagely for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Hey firstly awesum pix....hehe. I always knew its Rajeev as Devraj but then a confirmation is always pleasant.😳 Well the part was gr8 as usual.....u describe everything amazingly. But just like Karan I dont Devraj to be so much impressed by Naina n trust her....I knw they r the pair here....but Raj's safety means the most. 😳😳

But then why am I worried....I knw my Sur....she'll never do anything bad to Devraj...right?πŸ˜ƒ

Pls continue soon dear.


P.S. I'm sorry for keeping it short...but am in a hurry dear. I knw u understand.😳
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
kya ud tha yaar...just mindblowing...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘!!! vaise bhi mujhe actions baht pasand hain. khaash kar k jab ek girl yeh sab karti ho na...toh main kuch jyada hi xcited ho jati hun. personally main bhi kafi action scenes karti hun(real lyf) na...toh isiliye mujhe baht achha lagta hai...!!!
phir se ek baat siti maarti hun phir is ud k bare me batati hun...!!! yaar kya mast fight ki naina ne...!!!too gud...too gud...too gud...!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
naina ko pata tha ki voh ba***** us k sath kya karna chahte hain...toh us ne kitni sujh bujh k sath un sab ko line me le kar aayi...!!! bichare zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge ki ek phoolan devi se hi in ka pala pada tha...!!! ab toh aqal aa hi gayi hogi un dono me...!!! vaise sach kahun toh jis tarah se tumne voh fight scene likha hai na...dat was awesome yaar...!!! main sach me baht enjoy kar rahi thi. naina ne pahle warning di phir us k baad bina detergent k dhulai kar di aur bhi apne hath aur pairon se ...vahan par washing machine bhi nahin tha...!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
phir un dono ko dirty cloths ki tarah zameen me phenk kar appne room me bade aaram se chali gayi....jaise kuch hua hi nahin tha. par karan aur devraj ne sara mazra jana...aur devraj toh pahle se hi us ki hunar ka kayal tha...ab toh voh us par thoda baht fida ho hi gaya hoga...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
toh yeh sab kiya karaya mr karan ka tha. well pahle mujhe is karan par gussa aaya. par aage padha toh laga karan ne kuch galat nahin kiya tha. us ne toh bass un dono ko sachhai bahar nikalwane ko kaha tha. par voh dono toh peet kar hi mane...!!! karan...raj ki care karta hai aur us k liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha tha...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
par naina ne jis tarah se us gangstar k bare me information di...us se koi bhi impress ho sakta hai. matlab Ronald Black ki sare safed kaale sabhi chiz us ne bade hi achhe se samjha diya raj ko...!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘
mujhe lagta hai ki raj ab naina par trust karne laga hai...!!! lekin ab koi aur raj ko marna chahta hai...!!! ab naina n karan k hote hue...yeh sab toh nahin ho sakta hai. phir bhi dekhte hain ki tum kya karti ho next ud me...!!!πŸ˜‰
main first page abhi bhi open nahin kar pa rahi hun...!!! tabhi maine tumhare intro k bare me comments nahin kiya tha...virus aa raha hai yaar...!!! aur main un pix ko bhi dekh nahin pa rahi hun.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
ab jaldi se ud karnaπŸ˜ƒ. sare RN fic writers ki tarah late mat ho janaπŸ˜›. lekin is ud me jo tumne action scene rakhe hain na naina k us k liye itni dur se aur kuch toh post nahin kar sakti phil haal mere jadu k jhappi se kaam chala lena...πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
ab tumhari tabiyat ko kya hua hai...??? jaldi se thik ho jana...main wait kar rahi hun...!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
love ya
bye
pppppp....Priya(ha ha ha...SRK style)πŸ˜†
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi Sur,

Great update.Thnx a lot... Naina did the right thing with Steve and Alex.ye dono hai hi aise! They deserved more than that. Wow!!! That was a great action scene.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Devraj and Karan were amused when they saw the tapes.yeah...dey like such things Well, they ought to be.

So Karan wanted to drug and intoxicate Naina and then find out the truth about her.plan to yahi tha par ab nahi raha!!! His sixth sense says that something is wrong about Naina. Well Karan, I support your gut feeling.yaar jis hisab se log karan ko like krte hai, i think i shud change d fic title 2 karan fic... Even I feel the same. Naina is trying a bit too much to impress Devraj and her cool, controlled and calm exterior give the signs of something very mysterious in her interior.u think so? Devraj is falling a bit too sonn for Naina. Stay away Raj, she may betray you!!!😑 But then humari Sur hai na!!!thnx fr da confidence dear! Sab sambhalne ke liye.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

So the moment Devraj came his eyes went towards Naina and he saw the bruise marks on her wrist. Lakshan ache nahi hai Raj bete. Tu toh gaya.πŸ˜†bhai yahi to prob hai, jaha koi acha laga, wahi se barbadi shuru!

Somebody has again attacked Devraj. Karan and Naina sprang forward to protect Devraj. Good.πŸ‘. yaar Devraj Naina ko iski pagar deta hai...But I would like to know what this Karan is upto.πŸ˜•. His silence is giving me a strange feeling.

Do update asap.i wil try dear

thnx sooo much fr ur precious comment


Love
Guglu

thanx a lot guglu comment nd appreciation k liye!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi sur,,,Hi Yogitha!

Superb,mind blowing update πŸ‘I m glad u liked it, thnx.

Naina ne kya pitayi ki .......just too good How dare they touch naina,samaj kya rakha hain ye log........ vahi to....gadhe kahi ke! usne pehle warning bhi ki steve aur alex ko,phir bhi donon ne seriously nahi liya aur natija ek ko swollen eye,aur dusre ko bandage on head n limping πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†naina ko pata tha na ke ye pite bina nahi sudhrenge...

I just loved the whole scene ,the way she handled them cooly with out panicking ...... she made them fainted aur aaram se apni room mein chaligayeehehe she never panics u see...

Karan ,raj aur sabhi security aagaya ye awaz se socha koi gusgaya house mein lekin badh mein pata chala ye sab miss.naina roy ne kiya hai,when raj n karan saw the tapes they feel like entertained''.ab action sequences kise pasand nahi ayenge?ab ye koi action sequence se kam tha kya...... aur raj ne bilkul sahi kaha that naina ne jo kiya wo tikh kiya ''karan ka poochna when did naina was wrong for u''.karan samjhdar hai...so true

To ye sab mr.karan ka idea hai....... he asked them to drug naina aur sach bahar nikalvawo ki wo kis maksad se aayi'''.par galat admiyon ko chuna apne plan ke liye '..vaise naina itni jaldi haath main nahi anewali'vo to hai hi...agar sahi admi chune hote to pata nahi kya hota.are fic ke heroine jo hai, smart haivo to hai hi!!!

Me also feel same like karan ki naina kuch jyadahi raj ko impress kar rahi hai aur wo bhi itni jaldi ,jabhi mein padthi hun ki naina stand there or sit there with boring face meri shak aur badthi ja rahi hai aisi hi hai vo...ab kya kare?

Naina ne kafi investigate ki hai Ronald black ke bare mein kahi ye naina police wali hai kya'.hehehehe'. ..i know meri ye guess kuch jyada hi weird lag rahi haina πŸ˜ƒpaidayashi detective hai

Meeting mein aate hi raj ka pehla kaam naina ko dekhana n naina ki hand pe bruises dekh ke usko bahut gusa agaya steve pe'''ummmmmm so much concern ,πŸ˜‰ab agar hero ko heroie ki chinta nahi hogi to story kese agey badhegi bhai?

Raj asked steve n alex to say sorry to naina n warned both of them'''why this karan is so calm''is he planning something mr gadbad krne ki mood me hai

In a short time only naina kitni khass jagah bana li devraj ki gang mein,he took her to the conference also along with karan n john vahi to!

Ye hamla kisne kiya '''.hope raj ,naina aur karan safe ho vo mujhpe chod do dear

Its a beautiful update dear πŸ˜ƒthnx again so much

n your choice of actors for karan n sam is so good ,πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
glad u liked it...
plz take rest n get well soon 😊 thnx 2 ur wishes nw im back in action!!
waiting eagely for the next part

thnx soooo much fr commenting yogitha..its really encouraging!
love
sur😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hey firstly awesum pix....hehe.hey thnx glad u liked it I always knew its Rajeev as Devraj but then a confirmation is always pleasant.😳mujhe pata tha rajeev ki pic dekh k koi khush ho na ho tum zarur khush and lal ho jaogi!! Well the part was gr8 as usual.....shukriya dear u describe everything amazingly. But just like Karan I dont Devraj to be so much impressed by Naina n trust her....I knw they r the pair here....but Raj's safety means the most. 😳😳ek aur fan karan ka! now i wil surely make him the lead...hehe just joking

But then why am I worried....I knw my Sur....arre wah thnx fr d confidence!she'll never do anything bad to Devraj...right?πŸ˜ƒmeri itni mazal k sumi se panga lu! no way !!!

Pls continue soon dear.i wil try


P.S. I'm sorry for keeping it short...but am in a hurry dear. I knw u understand.😳hehe dont b sry yaar im glad k tumne comment kia, chota bada doesnt matter,

thnx a bunch fr reading nd commenting sumi dear, u r a real swetheart!
love
sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

kya ud tha yaar...just mindblowing...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘!!!thanx sooo much pppp priya!πŸ˜† vaise bhi mujhe actions baht pasand hain.i know yaar, me 2... khaash kar k jab ek girl yeh sab karti ho na...mai bhi mai bhi!toh main kuch jyada hi xcited ho jati hun. personally main bhi kafi action scenes karti hun(real lyf) na...r u a stuntwoman? no seriously batao!πŸ˜‰toh isiliye mujhe baht achha lagta hai...!!!

phir se ek baat siti maarti hun phir is ud k bare me batati hun...!!!bahut achi siti thi, very gud!!! yaar kya mast fight ki naina ne...!!!too gud...too gud...too gud...!!! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thnq thnq thnq...i was wondering k mene zada exagerrate to nhi kar dia?
naina ko pata tha ki voh ba***** us k sath kya karna chahte hain...yaar ab itni akal to hai hi usme...toh us ne kitni sujh bujh k sath un sab ko line me le kar aayi...!!! bichare zindagi bhar yaad rakhenge ki ek phoolan devi se hi in ka pala pada tha...!!!lol...sahi kaha ab toh aqal aa hi gayi hogi un dono me...!!! vaise sach kahun toh jis tarah se tumne voh fight scene likha hai na...dat was awesome yaar...!!!thnx again main sach me baht enjoy kar rahi thi.im glad naina ne pahle warning di phir us k baad bina detergent k dhulai kar di aur bhi apne hath aur pairon se ...vahan par washing machine bhi nahin tha...!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘vo khud kisi machine se kam hai kya?
phir un dono ko dirty cloths ki tarah zameen me phenk kar appne room me bade aaram se chali gayi....jaise kuch hua hi nahin tha.ab batao aur kya karti wo waha? jhadoo pocha lagati? par karan aur devraj ne sara mazra jana...aur devraj toh pahle se hi us ki hunar ka kayal tha...ab toh voh us par thoda baht fida ho hi gaya hoga...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒflat hone hi wala hai Devraj Naina pe bas thodi der me!
toh yeh sab kiya karaya mr karan ka tha. well pahle mujhe is karan par gussa aaya.haan yaar karan to darr k bhagne hi wala tha par mene samjha bujha k rok liya...lol par aage padha toh laga karan ne kuch galat nahin kiya tha. us ne toh bass un dono ko sachhai bahar nikalwane ko kaha tha. par voh dono toh peet kar hi mane...!!! karan...raj ki care karta hai aur us k liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha tha...!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊xactly!ab to bechare ko maaf kr do!
par naina ne jis tarah se us gangstar k bare me information di...us se koi bhi impress ho sakta hai. yeah...matlab Ronald Black ki sare safed kaale sabhi chiz us ne bade hi achhe se samjha diya raj ko...!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ab uske lale padenge...
mujhe lagta hai ki raj ab naina par trust karne laga hai...!!!hmmmm really...ab story agey badhani hai na! lekin ab koi aur raj ko marna chahta hai...!!!very bad ab naina n karan k hote hue...yeh sab toh nahin ho sakta hai.bilkul nhi,mai hoo na! phir bhi dekhte hain ki tum kya karti ho next ud me...!!!πŸ˜‰wait nd watch!!!
main first page abhi bhi open nahin kar pa rahi hun...!!!aaawwwweee tabhi maine tumhare intro k bare me comments nahin kiya tha...virus aa raha hai yaar...!!! aur main un pix ko bhi dekh nahin pa rahi hun.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭link bhejti hu tumhe ruko
ab jaldi se ud karnaπŸ˜ƒ.i wil try my best sare RN fic writers ki tarah late mat ho janaπŸ˜›.sorreee lekin is ud me jo tumne action scene rakhe hain na naina k us k liye itni dur se aur kuch toh post nahin kar sakti phil haal mere jadu k jhappi se kaam chala lena...πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—i hug u back dear!!!
ab tumhari tabiyat ko kya hua hai...???hua tha..ab thik hai... jaldi se thik ho jana...main wait kar rahi hun...!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒi m rocking yaar dont worry
love ya love ya 2 dear
bye
pppppp....Priya(ha ha ha...SRK style)πŸ˜†

hey Priya thnx a bunch fr commenting...pata hai, meri poori fic 1 taraf aur tumhare comments1 taraf...i just love them! kitne entertaing hote hai! kabhi comment krna mat chodna!
love
sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting prologue!!!!!

What was there in the bag the girl was carrying??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The girl loved the man but he betrayed her!!!!

Who was that girl??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Is she related to Devraj or Naina??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The girl asked her lover to shoot her and he calmly did!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

This scene reminded me of Khaakee where Akshay asked to be shot by Aishwarya after she betrayed him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Who was guy who shot the girl??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Was it Devraj??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Or was it Karan??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Is Naina here to avenge the girl??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The concept is really different and captivating!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Interesting prologue!!!!!thnks so much

What was there in the bag the girl was carrying??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The girl loved the man but he betrayed her!!!!

Who was that girl??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Is she related to Devraj or Naina??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•wait karo jaldi hi sab bata dungi....

The girl asked her lover to shoot her and he calmly did!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

This scene reminded me of Khaakee where Akshay asked to be shot by Aishwarya after she betrayed him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊lol dats my bro's fav scene

Who was guy who shot the girl??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Was it Devraj??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Or was it Karan??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”hehehe...keep guessing

Is Naina here to avenge the girl??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The concept is really different and captivating!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thnx again. glad u liked it


Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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