I Hate You For Loving Me RN FF ch15pg64

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PIX
Rajeev Khandelwal as Devraj
Priyanka Bassi as Naina
Hiten Tejwani as Karan
Hiten Tejwani as Karan
Arjun bijlani as Sam
p.s. thanx Shaina_b for d ideas😊

***PROLOGUE***

Wind was blowing in its full force. The neatly trimmed trees and bushes seemed to bow before an invisible force. Darkness was fast enveloping the place. Suddenly a screeching sound ripped the silence as a car raced down the wide road. Everything was still for a while until another car followed the first one. The driver of the first car was a woman who was sweating with fear, not of losing her life but the bag she was clutching to her follower. Her long hair was coming out of her ponytail. Her throat was drying out due to heavy breathing. She swerved the car around a bend and overtook a couple of cars from the wrong side while the car tyres screeched in protest. Her stalker never left her trail.

Finally she saw her destination- a tall glass building impossible to miss as it was the only one on the road. She looked back once before driving in the main gate. There a man was standing- person she was waiting for. She sighed in relief and ran out of the car to the man, clutching her bag.

"Thank God you are here..."she said hugging him.

"Don't worry..."he said hugging her back briefly.

"This is it? All the papers?" he asked in a businesslike voice.

"Yes" she replied

Just then she saw the car following her bend around the curve.

"They are here. Take this and leave. I'll try to divert them." She said stuffing the bag in his arms."Love you"

He took it but remained still.

"What are you waiting for? Leave." She screamed at him on her way back to her car. Her eyes nervously flitted to the car that was almost at the gate. It skidded to a halt blocking the gate.

"Oh no" she muttered. She moved towards the man and took out a gun from her the inside pocket of her coat. The man didn't move an inch.

A burly man got out from the back seat. His driver and assistant tagged along.

"Hello officer" he smirked at her. She pointed a gun at him.

"Don't be stupid dear. You are alone. One against four." He said calmly.

She stared at him confused.

"We are 2 if you might not have noticed." She said gripping the gun tightly and glancing around at her accomplice who stood rock still.

"He is right." He said calmly moving over to that man and handing him the bag while the lady stared in shock.

"You..." she stammered in astonishment.

"Yes" he continued smoothly.

"You betrayed me" She said more to herself than him.

"I was merely doing my job" he said remorselessly

The woman was now shaking with disbelief. Her follower and the traitor eyed her with an amused expression. She closed her eyes to balance herself. When she opened her eyes she was on gunpoint. It didn't surprise her. She looked at the burly man calmly and said softly "You got me."

"Yes" he replied a triumphant smile spreading across his face. The other man merely stared at her his gaze calculating. She sighed and stuffed her hands in her coat pockets.

"Any last wishes?" the big man asked as he loaded the gun.

"Yes" she said slowly looking at the other guy intensely. "You will shoot me." She said pointing at him.

He was taken aback but took the gun offered to him by his boss. He calmly took the aim as his target smiled. The gunshot echoed through the silent place unheard by anyone. She slumped on the ground dead.

So dat was d first glimpse...if u like it...please tell me and only den I wil cont...or atleast press d like button...cuz replys k bina likhne ka mann nahi karta na...

Luv

Sur

INDEX
CHAPTER 1 PG-2
CHAPTER 2 PG-3
CHAPTER 3 PG-4
CHAPTER 4 PG-4
CHAPTER 5 PG-6
CHAPTER 6 PG-8
CHAPTER 7 PG-15
CHAPTER 8 PG-19
CHAPTER 9 PG-26
CHAPTER 10 PG-31
CHAPTER 11 PG-39
CHAPTER 12 PG-43
CHAPTER 13 PG-47
CHAPTER 14 PG-58
CHAPTER 15 PG-64
There is something else I had to do a very long time back, but it slipped out of my mind as I faced some problems. Yogitha/Sanskruthi made an awesome VM on this fiction. its really loads better than the story itself. Do watch and comment on it guys.
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ETq-P7tSl0c[/YOUTUBE]

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Wow....its really different. And I must say it was really captivating. i was totally engrossed in it. Wud luv to read further. Pls continue soon.
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Hey di,

really a nice work....👏.
continue soon........

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow....its really different. And I must say it was really captivating. i was totally engrossed in it. Wud luv to read further. Pls continue soon.

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really a nice work....👏.
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hey that sounds interesting
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Originally posted by: prerna1

hey that sounds interesting

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***CHAPTER 1***
New York Police station
A phone rang in the police station. The officer picked it up, listened to the call for a few minutes and replaced the reciever.
"Everyone be ready, we have to leave, someone's dead"He announced. His juniors quickly obeyed their boss and within 15 minutes they were at the site of murder. They didnt feel too sorry for the dead man as they themselves had been looking for him for past few months. His name was Robert D'Souza, a rookie drug dealer. He had been shot in the head and left in his hall. There was no proof left by the murderer.
"It seems he had a tiff with his boss. I m damm sure "said officer Samarth Saxena, or Sam as he was known as bcuz the americans could never get his name right. He observed the scene and called up his headquarters.
"Goodevening Sir...No Sir no problem..Actually Sir 1 problem has been removed.... Cut out the name of Robert D'Souza from our hitlist...somebody else did the job for us....Yes Sir he is dead... Shot ..no proof left Sir.....Yes Sir this work is ofcourse done by our all time hero....Devraj..who else..he was working for him recently...probably angered him in some way...I dont think Devraj would himself bother to come and kill him Sir....Its too ordinary for him to be personally involved...I will inform you if I get any details....Goodnight Sir"
Sam cut the phone and looked around despareately where the forensic guys were trying to get some evidence. He knew it was useless because Devraj trained his men in such a way that there was never a trail left behind...Unless they wanted to leave it.
"Devraj....where the hell are you...ek baar mil jao....bas 1 baar....jaan se maar dunga"Sam said to himself as he stared out into the night from the window of the flat...out on the road where several cars reduced to the size of small flashlights zoomed....perfectly aware that one of these can be carrying the person he hated the most in the whole world.
And of course he was right....Devraj, the man in demand sat in his BMW working upon his laptop when his phone rung. He recieved the call and a voice on the other end said.."Work done Sir"
He nodded and said "Get your fees from the bank."
As they passed a well lit building, Devraj's face was illuminated. He was a very handsome man of around 30, with fine features that could make millions of girls faint, deep set stone eyes and a thin mouth. One could pass him off as any young talented man living a perfect life in some bunglow with his girlfriend or wife.But something in his eyes said that he was not"any man". His cool eyes had nothing in them...no emtion...neither happiness nor sadness. His body language was never threatening...but a smart man could tell that when he spoke, it was suppossed to be followed as he was born sanctioned to rule. He was tall, gracefull and dangerous as he owned one of the largest illegal empires in the world. His name was never tracable from the million dollar companies he had created to cover up his black market trade. People said that he once worked for a restaurant in India. How he made his journey from being an orphan in slums to the richest part of the world was a fragmented tale doing rounds. Only he himself knew what he was. Initially he started a delivery business from where the illegal deliveries started and slowly his empire spread in the world like a web. He owned software companies, Hotels, casinos, discos, estate projects, drug business and what not. And even at this post, every thing was controlled by him not just for the sake of name but in action as well.
He reached his destination...a party where all the dons were supposed to meet for a birthday celebration. He got down from the car flanked by 2 bodyguards. He smoothed his Armani jacket, looked around and moved inside the posh hotel. It was Samuel Wellington's birthday bash another man competing with Devraj for top postion in wanted list. He was stout and wore his trademark fedora. Devraj walked in and everyone turned to look at him. Samuel turned to face him and said "Welcome my friend"
"Many happy returns of the day, Wellington"Devraj said in a smooth voice that sent shivers down the backs of people.
He shook hands with the other people in the party and gifted Samuel a 9mm gun made on order. It was engraved with his logo-A lion carrying a sword. Samuel accepted it thankfully. To be gifted by Devraj was not a small thing. Dancers dressed in skimpy clothes danced around at the party and Devraj watched them uninterested. He himself sometimes felt that he didnt know what else he wanted in life. But then his aim...to overthrow his enemy....Maxwell from his power position. He never wanted an accomplice unlike his fellow dons who were married or kept changing girlfriends.
Suddenly a bullet shot was heard and woke Devraj up...The party is over he thought grimly as he pulled out his gun.
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Dat was all for 2day guys..lemme know if u like it nd i shud cont or not....and pleeeez leave comments if u read..or press d like button...it really helps.
Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Guysplz comment to chodo.....acha nahi laga kya?😭

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