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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm.....Devraj n Naina.....nice entry. But I dont want any serious trouble for Devraj. Lets c where it goes. Pls continue soon.

Hey Sumaiya!
Mai tumhe PM karne hi wali thi....thnx a lot....U wil hav 2 wait nd watch wat happens...I wil try 2 ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interesting FF.. I dont see many sTV shows.. can u just tell on which show is ur FF based.. but really liked it..

Pm me next when u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: aati1429

interesting FF.. I dont see many sTV shows.. can u just tell on which show is ur FF based.. but really liked it..

Pm me next when u update

Actually its not based on any show....original story...thnx fr ur comment,wil cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Chapter-3
As Devraj ended his call with his man, he sat back in his car and motioned the driver to start driving. He always made sure he cross checked all his workers before he hired them. It was a routine procedure but usually his juniors issued the orders and took pains. He was more curios about Naina because he knew that beauty always conceals danger. He found himself strangely attracted towards this young lady who seemed very useful. He could sense that she had the ability to control people and one of them could be him. But playing with danger was his habit and profession.
The driver drove around, taking the longest possible route to reach the place called as home of Devraj. Devraj lived in a typical grand palace like place complete with swimming pools and private gyms. But it was more like a hotel. Since he was alone, without any family, some of his highly trusted men and security guards lived there in alloted rooms. There were no women except the ones who were called there for parties by his men. It had vast lawns to flank its doors, an open hallway and beautifully done interiors. But this beauty was just a distraction as visitors were unknowingly watched upon by laser cameras. The vast lawns were to ensure that nobody could sneak in. The house covered a bigger area than it seemed as it was in slight hills. The underground part was not visible to anyone, so it was hard to guess the actual size.Every feature was exclusively inspected by Devraj himself to ensure max safety. A security breach was possible in White House, but not in Devraj's house.

He made his way to his room, climbing the carpeted stairs. When he arrived to his room, he pressed his finger against the screen and entered a code. The machine took a second to verify them and the door to his suite opened. It was a breathtaking view. The wall opp to the door was almost completely made of glass from where moonlight was puoring in. Despite the lights being switched off, the whole place shone brightly. A beautiful view of mountains was visible behind the glass. There was a heated swimming pool in the centre of the room. One one side, a king sized bed ws placed and on other side a sofa set made of velvet and leather. Behind this there was abar conter graced with finest wines of the world.One corner was taken up by a writing desk and other by a walk-in wardrobe.There were priceless antiques to decorate the whole room..if only such a large place could be called a room. Devraj moved inside and removed his coat. He hung it in the cupboard, took out his bathrobe and went for a hot water bath in his jacuzzi. It completely relaxed him. He dried himself and made himself a strong drink. He dropped on his couch and closed his eyes, taking a long swig from the glass, feeling it burn away his throat. As he threw his head back, Naina's face came in front of his eyes. He smiled but then suddenly opened his eyes. He did not know why but she reminded him of something he was not too willing to remember. Closing his eyes again, he slipped into a comfortable position. Again he saw a face...This time not Naina's but of another girl, with an innocent smile, soft brown eyes and locks surrounding her pretty face. He jumped out of shock and opened his eyes. It was a minute before he could calm himself again. He was breathing fast and beads of sweat were visible on his forehead. He wiped them off and a single thought came to his mind
"Itne saalo baad bhi....kyu"
Then he gripped himself from getting too emotional. He finished his drink and took the whole bottle and drunk it in one go. Dropping it on the floor, he got up and made way to his bed, swaying because of the drinks. He reached the bed and fell into deep sleep.
This used to be a routine for Devraj to get these nightmares until sometime back ago when they almost stopped and then disappeared. But tonight, again the same thing was troubling him.... The only thing Devraj was scared to face in his whole life.
Next morning Devraj reis his normal routine, Inspecting tasks, solving problems and devising loopholes for newly devised laws. This was his life, power packed and never dull. And he loved it that way... Where he had uncontrollable power. He literally ran the city of New York.
After a few days he recieved a file in his office marked as "NAINA ROY". Excited, he opened it and started to read her biography. Hardly ant information was available about her background and childhood.The only thing mentioned was that she was an orphan living alone in an orphanage in Mumbai where somebody once offered her some illegal work. From there she started smuggling, continuing it for years and never got caught. She collected money and came to Las Vegas, where the luck favoured her and she won a lot of money in casinos. At that place Samuel Wellington noticed her talent of blacking out people with her beauty and charm and hired her. Devraj finished reading and was impressed. He was satisfied and sure that this girl was the key he had been searching for many years. The perfect dedicated worker who would take him to new heights. He checked his schedule and found that he was supossed to go for a deal with man called Black. He hated that guy because he was practically a fool. He got up and left for the designated place. Along with him, his most trusted hitman, Karan accompanied him. Karan was the only person he had brought along from India. He was his sole what one could call as friend.
Arriving upon there, he found Samuel twitching his fedora and Naina seated in the passenger seat of his limo. He felt happy to see her over there. Black, a short stubby man arrived at the hotel and their meeting commenced. Devraj took his place in the conference room. Naina sat opposite to him. Their eyes met and they exchanged a formal smile. All through the meeting Devraj could feel his gaze constantly flitting to Naina who sat looking bored. His eyes moved from her face to the collar of the crisp white shirt she was wearing, down to her perfectly ironed black suit. A part of his mind said she looked gorgeous. Suddenly Naina looked at him and he averted his gaze.
After the meeting was over, and Devraj had all his terms met and got control over the area he wanted, he rose to leave. He stopped near Samuel who bowed his head in acknowledgement.
Devraj:"Goodafternoon Wellington
Samuel:"Goodafternoon Devraj...How are you? What can I do for you?
Devraj:I want a favour from you...
Samuel:"Yes..What do you want?
Devraj:"Naina
Naina who was standing beside Samuel looked up sharply. Devraj ignored her reaction."
Samuel:"What do you mean Devraj?"
Devraj:"Yesterday Naina saved my life and I am really impressed... I want to hire her. I asked her but she said she was working for you... So you are her master... I know she is a gem of your collection and I am willing to pay any price for her...Anything you ask.. Just give me this girl."
Samuel stared at Devraj as he took in his unusual request. He himself was very fond of Naina and would have refused anyone but Devraj didnt fall into the anyone category. At first he didnt react then looked at Devraj who was waiting politely and at Naina who stood there expressionless. Then he cleared his throat and said
"Ermmm....fine...you can take Naina...I must say Devraj in one meeting only you have guessed her worth... I dont want a price for her.."
Devraj smiled:"Thankyou Samuel....So Naina will you work for me? Lets settle terms.."
Naina gave him a chilling smile and said
"Sure...It will be a pleasure working with you Mr. Devraj"
End

So guys aj ke liye itna hi... I know ud kafi late ho gaya par kya karu humari sari teachers talwar leke piche pad gai hai...Gharwale comp pe baithne nahi dete....Ab me ud kuch weeks k baad hi kar pau shayad cuz xams hai na...please dont forget my ff...ye meri jaan hai...khair, temme ye kaisa tha..dialogues kam the par agey kafi sare honge...and silent readers, one comment....chota sa...please likh diya karo na...acha lagta hai....
Love
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Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow it was awesum. i luved the way u described Devraj's palace n room which itself seemed like a palace. Mindblowing!!! Bur seriously I am not liking Devraj getting so much into Naina....I knw she is not gud for him....and the nightmare....it must be related to the incident mentioned in the first part. But then thats just my wierd thought....hehe.

And teachers to peeche pad hi jate hai....nothing can be done...hehe. Will be w8ing till ur next UD.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
thnx a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chapter-4
Naina joined the gang of Devraj in a position where evryone dreamed of working. She shifted in the next day and was alloted the room directly opposite to Devraj. Devraj noticed that the magnificent beauty of his mansion failed to draw a reaction from her. She was interested in locating secret cameras and security measures and this impressed him. He required such people.
On the first day Devraj introduced her to his other employees.
"Today we have the pleasure of having a new member amongst ourselves,Miss Naina Roy. Miss Naina please meet Karan, my most trusted counterpart,as you already might know..he is my right hand... Steve, he manages the north wing, Harry, he takes care of south areas,Alex, security incharge, and John, my manager." He spoke in a cool voice.
Naina nodded and shook hands with everyone. Everybody was shocked to see a woman being included in their ranks on an equal basis as their Boss seldom trusted them. But her beauty was enough for them to feel happy. Steve, who was an Indian exchanged glances with Alex and they both grinned and fixed their gaze over her slim waist, waiting to grab her. But there was one person who felt that something was wrong-Karan. He had a bad feeling about Naina and felt that Devraj was hurrying into things. But still he had great trust in him and his abilities.
"Now"Devraj "Miss Naina your work- you will assist me in my next project. We are planning to take over the western area of the city under our drug traffickers from Maxwell's. I want you to doa full survey and update our information so that we can suitably and systematically disable their network. what do you say?"
Naina thought for a while and said"I think that we should do this quickly Boss as right now their position is weak. 3 of their major operators are in the lock up and will be released within a month. Once they resume their power it will be very tough for us to reach them. So we can start by finishing these 3 men. After that comes Ronald Black, the current mafia. I will gather some information about this man as he has top level security...a tough nut to crack but nevertheless, nothing is impossible"
Devraj smiled and said"Good thinking I must say...So we have to finish this work within a month and.."
"Quickly before Ronald Black becomes wary as once these 3 are executed, he will be on his guard" Karan finished. Devraj nodded and ordered
"Tomorrow we meet again to discuss the final plan. Steve ready your best shooters who are familiar with the area.Breaking into the police station is not an easy task. I dont want any survivors...any questions?"
"No"came the reply in unision and he signalled them to leave. Everyone turned to go but Karan came to him witha concerned look on his face.
"Haan Karan kuch kehna hai tumhe?"Devraj asked. Karan was the only one besides Naina who understood hindi. Devraj treated him as friend rather than a junior..his only friend in the whole world who knew every chapter of his life. They had grown up together and seen the ups and downs of life together
"Dev ye Naina..." Karan began.Devraj looked from his blackberry where he had been checking records.
"Kya hua usey?"Devraj asked as he shut his phone.
Karan:"Tumhe nahi lagta ke tum ispar thoda jaldi bharosa kar rahe ho?"
Devraj:"Well..mai kisi par jaldi bharosa nahi karta par hume is ladki ki zarurat hai...sike contacts, iska kaam..I have seen her previous record and its really impressive...wo humara kya bigad sakti hai? Wo khud mere samne un 2 logo ki jaan le chuki hai..aisa koi professional hi kar sakta hai."
Karan:"Yahi to mai keh raha hu ke isnt everything too perfect? Usne pehli hi mulakat me tumhari nazro me aisi jagah bana li aur ab itne se waqt me humare main gang ki member..mujhe kuch thik nahi lag raha Dev..I trust you aur mai janta hu ke tum bahut professional ho magar is ladki se door rehna..She is too smart.. Aur pehli baar mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke you are being carried away by your emotions.."
Saying this Karan patted Devraj's shoulder and left him pondering over his words.He sat down on the sofa and started thinking about Naina and he was doing..He had caught himself thinking alot about her...But then from his point of view she was useful..He decided to test her and control himself in the next few days.
He got up and went to his room and there he came face to face with her as she was exiting her room. She smiled at him and he returned the smile.
"Kahi ja rahi hai aap?"he asked casually.
Naina:"Doing my job...apkne jo kaam dia hai bas wahi kar rahi hu"
Devraj:"Acha hai..kabtak kar logi and exactly app karengi kya?"
Naina:"Kisi bhi insaan ki koi na koi kamzori zarur hoti hai..jo apni kamzoriyo ko chupana aur dusro ki kamzoriyo ka fayda uthana janta hai, jeet usi ki hoti hai.. kal tak Ronald Black ki har kamzori ka pata apko chal jayega Boss"
Devraj:"I like your confidence...just dont get yourself killed..or worst,caught"
Naina smiled "Meri jaan lena itna asaan nahi hai...kafi kaam poore karne hai abhi mujhe...aur jaha tak pakde jaane ka sawal hai, ye aap bhi jaante hai aur mai bhi ke mujhe ajtak kisi ne nahi pakda...I think itna to pata laga hi liya hoga aapne?"
Devraj was surprised and said"Very smart...best of luck Miss Roy"
He extended his hand. She took it and said
"Thankyou so much Boss"
Naina left and Devraj watched her descend the stairs with a smile when Karan's words came back to him. He quickly wiped the smile off from his face and called for Harry.
Harry:"Yes boss"
Devraj:"Miss Naina just left the mansion...follow her and help her if she needs it. understood?"
Harry:"sure Boss"
Devraj opened up his laptop and started to check his profits- legal and illegal. He was sure that if his this plan worked, he would be very close to defeating Maxwell- his closest competitor and enemy.
It was night now and Naina had still not returned. Devraj called up Harry to check and found out that he lost trail of her hours ago and was now trying to trace her. Irritated, he flung the phone away and walked to the window. This seemed very fishy as he couldnt decide whether Naina shook him off or he himself was stupid enough to get lost.
when Harry returned he was literally shaking with fear as he would have to face Devraj's wrath.But devraj dismissed himwithout a word and this amazed him.
"Boss I followed her to the highway till she parked her car to meet a goon type of guy but then she didnt return from the building and I grew suspicious and I went in but they said she was already gone-"
Devraj:"Enough..You may leave"
Harry thanked his stars and went to his room while Devraj sat thinking. Karan came to him and offered him adrink which he accepted.
Devraj:"Naina abtak nahi lauti..something is wrong.."
Karan:"Kya hua Dev, Naina par shaq kar rahe ho ya uski chinta?"
Devraj looked up shocked into his smiling face. If somebody else had dared to say something like this he would have been dead by then. But Karan sat staring at him casually.
Devraj:"Kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum...maine harry ko uske piche bheja tha par wo-"
"Kho gaya"came a voice from the doorway where Naina stood looking a bit disshevelled. She walked in and stared at Devraj coldly. Devraj stood up as well and said
"A gai aap...it was late to mujhe laga ke maybe you failed or someting"
Naina:"Nakamyab hona meri kismat me nahi hai Boss...aur agli baar kisi ko mera picha karne mat bhejna..I hate distractions."
Devraj:"Mai sirf ye dekhna chahta tha ke tum kya karti ho"
Naina:"ab dekh liya na?"
Devraj laughed and nodded.
"where is the report?"
Naina:"Kal mil jayegi apko...kuch kafi dilchasp baate hai mere paas apko batane ke liye.now if you would excuse me please..goodnight"
"Miss Roy" Karan said as she turned to leave. She turned and looked at him quizically."Apko itni takleef kyu ho rahi hai agar koi ap par nazar rakh raha hai wo bhi ye jante huye ke wo admi humara hi tha?"
"Maine kaha na...I hate distractions...Mai apne kaam apne hisab se karti hu... result jo aap chahe, tareeka jo mai chahu...sleep well"
saying Naina drifted away to her bedroom.Devraj looked after her and shook his head. Karan looked disapprovingly.He felt as though his worst fears were coming true.He looked at Devraj who was now drinking and then back at Naina's retreating back and decided to prove that he was right... This girl was more than she was pretending to be. Meanwhile, Steve and Alex peeped out of their rooms as Naina advanced, ready to take advantage of her being a woman.
End
K guys dats all fr 2day..sorry fr d short nd late ud but xams u know..abhi lamba break hai so i will try 2 ud again quickly...till den bye bye
and pleezz comment guys me depress ho jati hu
love
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Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey nice part dear. But seriously I dont want Devraj to be so much involved in Naina. An Karan ko to main ashirwaad dungi ki wo jaldi se pata lagaye iss Naina ka raaz....I just dont want Devraj to be in any trouble. I hope Karan can do sumthing ot may be u let him do anything.šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

And Sur....I understand it must be really difficult for u to UD amidst the xams. So take ur tym dear. An thank u even for this sweet short part. 😃
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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for chap 1
beautiful n awesome work Sur.šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
d way u portrayed Rajeev as Devraj...awesome...!!!
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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chap2
naina ki entry ek dam dhamakedar thi...aur voh kisi aur ki BG hai...bt now i just wish ki voh abhi Raj (main Devraj ko Raj hi kahungi...hope ki tumhe bura nahin lagega) k liye kaam kare...!!! ab toh raj bhi us ki chanbin karne laga hai...!!! tumhe pata hai mujhe sab se jyada koun sa part achha laga...jab naina ne raj ko bachaya n all d stuff btwn RN...dats really gr888...!!! Priyanka n Rajeev in a new avtaar...!!!
awesome work Sur...for ušŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

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