~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

pheww.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! padh liye sare parts...par pata nahi tha ki end karte karte itniiiiiiiii achi good news milegi....nandini ne wo diary padhli...wowwwwwwwww....me so happy....ab sab acha acha hoga....yr nandini is such a cute shweet shweet bhabi...nt just bcoz of this reason....bt i was relly liking their relationship all thru.....

gosh....raj loves her so much...unconditionally....n i feel even she has a lot inside her...but ya she is hesitant....
ab bas nandini ji sari ummede aap se hai....sorry i mean aap se sur.....but plzz yr thoooda jaldi jaldi continue kara karo....tum ek kaam karo...tumhara koi personal sa contact number de do....jaha hum sab tumhe hamesha beeps dete rahe...'Sur, cont karo'...'Sur cont karo'....tht idea will surely work...hehehe...sorry...
chalo bye tc for now...bt will b waiting eagerly 4 next part...
luv
sana

wow ek baar me padh liye? great! hehe im glad u read that part...yeah even I like Nandini alot, shes very sweet nd caring...
aur ye jaldi cont karne wali baat to bas...sab yahi kehte rehte hai...jab bhi mai sochti hu is baar to pakkka weekly ud karungi, kuch na kuch gadbad ho jati hai. aur sabse badi problem yeh hai k mere har monday exam hota hai, to sunday ko mai likh nahi pati.but abhi vacation hai so i wil try my best!
aur mujhe aap bolna aur sorry bolna band kardo plz!!!
thanks a lot for commenting dear
Tc
Love
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey aap aise mat chillao! mai darr jati hu! lolz ...2 days pakka!

Love
Sur



Agar chillaungi nahi toh tumhe sunega kaise...??? ' Pls update soon' ko toh tum log ignore hi kar dete ho...😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sur sweety...2 days ho gaye....!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Sur sweety...2 days ho gaye....!!!

mai kya karu..na if khulta hai, na net chalta hai😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Great update Sur... thankuuuuu!

Finally Raj and Sur have met. Sur is so stressed... and Raj could feel her pain. yeah...

The hospital scene was so beautiful. She hugged him and didn't feel awkward about it. And Raj was happy just to see her a bit relieved after her father talked to her. Kya baat hai... khamosh zubaan... bolti dhadkan. Hum sabko pata hai, Sur ko bhi pata hai... bas Raj ko hi kuch dhang se nahi pata. im glad u liked the scene...hehe khamosh zubaan, bolti dhadkan...u know i usually find romance really funny....dunno how im getting away with writing this!

Sur Raj ke liye breakfast lekar aayi thi aur Raj uske kandhe pe sar rakhkar so gaya. How cute!!! Raj wrote in his diary about Sur... and what nice lines about that bloke.😆 😆 😆
😆 wo line mene bina soche dali thi...pata nahi that sabko itni achchi lagegi.
Now Nandini has found out everything. Hope she does something soon.
yeah, sure
Waiting eagerly for the next update. will try my best

Love
Guglu

thanku soooo much for the wonderful comment Guglu!

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sur HI Suhana

How r u??? fine, aap kaise ho???
Update was really gud...
Raj n Sur share a special bonding which has no name..They know each other too well.😛
Sur has feelings for Raj n he too loves her but both r afraid of rejection..
Raj is totally confused n so is Sur..Both r going through the same phase..yeah, its really tough to confess...aur ye kya? poem wala comment! yippeee...u know mai hamesha apke comments dekh k sochti thi k kya kabhi mujhe bhi poem walacomment milega? and see! i really love all of them you know! thanku!
"Have you ever been silently in love
With someone you can never have?
So close you can touch her hand
Yet, so far to feel her heart?

Have you ever lived in pretense
Quietly loving without any condition?
A feeling of love that's unknown
Hiding it, not knowing for how long.

Have you ever fallen deeply
Loving the person unconditionally?
So afraid to say what you feel
Acting normal, keeping things still.

Have you ever been hurt unintentionally
But put on a smile, pretended to be happy?
Deep inside you're in pain and suffering
But outside you're jolly and laughing.

Why does holding her hand feel so right?
Your heart smiles everytime she's at sight
Hearing her sweet voice makes your day
Hope you can hug her in a special way."
u know itni achi tarah se maine nahi likha...agar mai puri ud ko is poem se substitute kar du na, to bhi poem better hai, I tell u!
its fantastic
thanx again
Thank God!!! Sur ke dad theek hain...every1 was really worried over him..
Raj was so embarrased to his head lying on Sur's shoulder...
Sur is afraid of relationships but she is not able to to stop Raj who is now constantly in her mind... Sur is yet to understand what is happening to her...
Nandini read Raj's diary n now she knows Raj's true feelings towards her sister..I think she will bridge the gap between the two n make dem1..
sure sure
Continue soon will try...thx a bunch for the comment!
Bye

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

pata nahi kyoun par mujhe yeh part baht chota laga... chota laga nahi, chota tha😆

khair...as usall main suru se suru karungi... gud gud


cute n beautiful... thanku!!!


raj aur sur dono ki hi situation baht painful hai...!!! hmmmm dono hi ek dushre ko le kar confused hain...yeh obvious hai yaar...!!! yup, pretty obvious... abhi tak sur apne past lyf se nikli bhi toh nahi hai...voh yeh bhi toh nahi janti ki us k past lyf k bare me jaan ne k baad raj ka kya reaction tha...!!! kyoun ki raj ne toh sab kuch ander hi chupa liya tha na...!!! yeah..poor guys


aur raj...voh bhi baht confused hai...!!! voh khud aage nahi badh sakta...jabb samne wale k dil me us k liye kya feelings hai nahi jaanta ho toh...!!! phir bhi voh dil hi dil me apne pyar se kitna pyaar karta hai yeh tum ne achhe se humain toh samjha diya hai...!!! par dekhna yeh hai ki sur ko kabb samajh me aayegi...??? Raj doesnt want hurt or lose her...aur chinta mat karo sab jaldi hoga


dono ka hug scene sahi tha boss...!!! meri toh dil se yahi dua hai ki zindagi bhar aisa hi hota rahe...!!! lolz thanx


hospital me sabhi rukna chate the...par raj ko hi rukna pada...!!! phir raj ka sur k kandhon par sar rakh kar sona...cute...... yeah...cute hai na?


par last scene sabb se jyada achha laga mujhe...!!! matlab in dono k silent love story k bare me kisi ko pata toh chala...!!! aur jiss ko pata chala voh hai bhi in dono k kareebi...!!! vaise raj ne kya sahi line likha hai sur k liye aur us k us so called husband k liye. vaise raj ko ek mauka milna chahiye...hai na...??? ab plzzz nandini k dimag me kuch aisa dalna ki voh sab kuch thik se setting kar saken...ok....??? Raj to shuru se hi samjhdar hai...aur Nandini bhi.


thanxxx for d beautiful ud... thanx for the beautiful comment!!!


ab toh sayad next ud tere xams k baad hi aayega... hai na...??? okkk...best of luck...padhai achhe se karna...aur hamara naam roshan karna...matlab main...hum RN fans k bare me bol rahi hun... thanku...yaar is baar to clear kar jau na, to bhi party dungi...
thanxfor commenting

Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

superb update.loved it.

too good part.
continue soon dear.
thansk for the pm dear.

thanx a lot for liking and commenting dear
will cont asap
Sur
Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

awesome part.........................

thanku sooo much for commenting dear!!!
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

so Sur is finally showing her feelings for Raj though discreetly.that's definetly some progress.but the stupid girl is still in dilemma and thinking about weird things.but i guess she can't help that.but now when Nandini actually came to know abt Raj's feelings for Sur,i do hope she do something to make Sur realise her true feelings.she definetly needs a push.n i wish she gets a good,hard one😉

pls ud soon yaar,waiting eagerly.................

hey Esha!
Yeah u r right she needs a gud hard push to move on...has been lonely too long u see.its not easy for 2 accept a normal life again.
i will ud asap.thnx for commenting
love
Sur
Edited by Sur_Singhania - 15 years ago

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