~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 24

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Posted: 15 years ago
thts bad...y u stopped here????
upst was gr8....luved it..:) :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome update.loved it.

everyone wants that sur come from there and stay here forever. but what happen to sur in her past.
continue soon dear.
thanks for the pm dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part...................so everyone wants sur to come back and stay with them...............glad that nandu told sur that raj loves her very much and what happened to sur????????????? her past????????????? and u have stopped at the nice point dear..................cont soon and u forgot to pm me dear..................
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Posted: 15 years ago
I want a serious improvement!!! Tumhe apni ye adaat badalni hogi yaar!!! Raj batane hi wala tha ki tumne rok diya....Sur bhi batane hi wali thi ki tumne rok diya....and Nandini bhi aa gayi par tumne UD rok diya.....sab kuch rok ke kyun rakha hai???🤢🤢

Anyways....I loved that hospital scene when Nandini was indicating abt Raj n Sur was feeling awkward in front of her father!! And then Raj came bak....and bechare ko free me daant padh gayi....but then his sweet sweet line....made her say another sweet sweet line which made Nandini clear her throat....😆😆😆.....how cute was that!!

And more than that....I was thinking abt Raj's expression when Sur dragged Nandini to the room....he was thinking it was sum girl talk....how cute he must hav looked na...😳😳

And then Sur n Nandini's convo...it was nice n touchy...but zyada touch nahi kiya....pata hai kyun?? Kyunki madam aap ne to kuch kaha hi nahi....ki Sur k saath kya hua tha...😆😆

And then her sweet convo wid Raj....😃😃.....main na Raj ka weardrobe k saath khare rehne wali scene imagine kar rahi thi....haii...he looked dam awesum!!! And the dialogues here were brilliant!! And specially when u said....turning away from his gaze is a sin....how true!!!

Pata nahi Sur...maine iss reply me kuch zyada hi taarif ki Raj ki....coz I was missing this Raj for soooooooooooooo long na....😳😳

Now dont make us w8 more....and aisi jagah pe chhorne k baad to bilkul nahi....pls try n UD soon dear....😛

Luv,
Sumi.😛
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful part....akhir Sur ke saath hua kya hai?😕 Raj really luves her soo much.hope ke sur apne atit ke baare mein Raj ko bata de..waiting for next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi
how could you stop at such a point.😒 Agar sur ke past ke bare mein iss update mein nahi batana tha....toh atleast raj ko toh apni baat puri karne deni thi.
Well the update was great. 👏Nandini and Sur are both happy to see their father recovering. Sur ke dad ne sahi kaha...she should come back now and start a new life. Sur refuses but when nandini hints towards Raj....sur becomes nervous. 😳
Raj finds it strange that sur is upset and so he tries to lighten the situation...but inturn has to face Sur's anger. But than when she tells him that he has the right to interfere in her life...sujal is pleasantly surprised and so in Nandini. Giving nandini a chance to say that she was right about Raj😉
It was very funny to hear of Raj's resoning that Nandini and Sur would be having some girl talk....poor guy has no clue that they are discussing about him.😆
Nandini tries to convince Sur that Raj really loves her and that she should give their relationship a chance. But Sur is afraid that after knowing the truth Raj and his family with refude her. The flashes of her past are very scary indeed...seems that something really bad did happen...and it was not just a failed marriage. Sur is addament that she will go away from Raj's life.😕
The conversation between Sur and Raj was very good. And the way in which he was standing was itsself enough to melt a girls heart...and after seeing in his eyes how could Sur stop herself. 😳
Raj points out that running away from a place does not solve the problem...her family has always been with her and have infact answered more questions than her. 😔
And now that you have stopped at such a point...please conitnue soon... cannot wait to hear Raj's confession. With Nandini playing the cupid😳....these two will come together.
Please update soon
Edited by dazzling_glory - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
gud update dear
feeling very very sad for sur!!!
hats of f to her itna kuch hone ke baad bhi khud ko sambhal paye hai wo
i hat e those people who made her life a living hell,but its gud dat she decided to tell everythg to raj now b'coz i also think its now or never matter so pls make her tell everythg to him and belive that raj will always be on her side
luv the family diccussion and bonding at the hospital room
also luv the bond of sisters shared by nandini n sur
nandini is also very gud person frm heart
pls cont so soon dear and make raj confess his luv to her
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Posted: 15 years ago
toh ab sab log milke Sur ke peeche pad gaye hai.acha hi hai warna ye madam kabhi nahi maannewali hai shaadi ke liye.vo toh waapas aane ke liye bhi tayyar nahi hai.kuch log itne ziddi hote hai ki unhe apne zidd ke aage apni bhalaayi nazar hi nahi aati.unke saath aisa hi karnaa chahiye.Nandini bilkul thik kar rahi hai.aur ab Raj bhi Sur ko rukne ko keh rahaa hai. dekhte hai ki Sur kya karti hai.aur ab toh vo Raj ko apni zindagi ke baare mein sab kuch batane jaa rahi hai.agar vo nahi batayegi toh Nandini toh jaroor kahegi Raj se.dekhnaa ye hai ki Raj ka kya reaction hoga iss sach ko jaanne ke baad?do continue soon yaar.................
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur
How r u??
Update was gud.
Why did u stopped at a crucial point???
Sur was abt to reaveal her dark past infront of Raj...Something really bad has happened to her..
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb part.pls jaldi cont karna ......

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