~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part

On seeing each other after such a long time, all Sur and Raj want to do is to hug each other. A clam and soothing feelings spreads over them by just seeing each other. Sur is worried to see Raj so weak and quite.

Sur breaks down completely when she sees her father in the hospital and once again she finds peace in Raj's arms. And and that moment all raj can think of is to protect her from all the sorrows.

Sur father is now out of danger and has regained consciousness. She is happy to see her father recovering

After all their protest Vishal and Sur leave to go home leaving Raj lost in her thoughts. He is very worried for her thinking that she has had to suffer so much. He thinks of all the things that Nandini and told him about Sur's life. He wants to bring all the happiness in her life by being a part of it. But is afraid that Sur might not like it and think that he was invading her privacy.

Raj wakes up to find himself sleeping on Su's shoulder and wishing that all his mornings would be like this. Sur wants Raj to go home seeing how tired he is. But Raj insists on having his breakfast with her to which she cannot refuse.

Later she threatens him that is he does not leave then Nandini would get angry....only to mocked that both the sisters were alike....strict.

Its good that Raj wrote all his feelings and thoughts in his diary...and even better that nadini ends up reading it. At first she is shocked to know that Raj loves Sure soo much but then she is thankful that Raj cares so deeply about Sur. She is confident that Raj could bring back happiness in Sur life that she deserves. She is even happy to know that Sur' past does not bother Raj at all. And decides that she will do everything to bring them together.

Waiting to know what happens next. Please continue soon

And....All the Best for your exams.

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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update.loved it.
too good part.
continue soon dear.
thansk for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
pata nahi kyoun par mujhe yeh part baht chota laga...

khair...as usall main suru se suru karungi...


cute n beautiful...


raj aur sur dono ki hi situation baht painful hai...!!! dono hi ek dushre ko le kar confused hain...yeh obvious hai yaar...!!! abhi tak sur apne past lyf se nikli bhi toh nahi hai...voh yeh bhi toh nahi janti ki us k past lyf k bare me jaan ne k baad raj ka kya reaction tha...!!! kyoun ki raj ne toh sab kuch ander hi chupa liya tha na...!!!


aur raj...voh bhi baht confused hai...!!! voh khud aage nahi badh sakta...jabb samne wale k dil me us k liye kya feelings hai nahi jaanta ho toh...!!! phir bhi voh dil hi dil me apne pyar se kitna pyaar karta hai yeh tum ne achhe se humain toh samjha diya hai...!!! par dekhna yeh hai ki sur ko kabb samajh me aayegi...???


dono ka hug scene sahi tha boss...!!! meri toh dil se yahi dua hai ki zindagi bhar aisa hi hota rahe...!!!


hospital me sabhi rukna chate the...par raj ko hi rukna pada...!!! phir raj ka sur k kandhon par sar rakh kar sona...cute......


par last scene sabb se jyada achha laga mujhe...!!! matlab in dono k silent love story k bare me kisi ko pata toh chala...!!! aur jiss ko pata chala voh hai bhi in dono k kareebi...!!! vaise raj ne kya sahi line likha hai sur k liye aur us k us so called husband k liye. vaise raj ko ek mauka milna chahiye...hai na...??? ab plzzz nandini k dimag me kuch aisa dalna ki voh sab kuch thik se setting kar saken...ok....???


thanxxx for d beautiful ud...


ab toh sayad next ud tere xams k baad hi aayega... hai na...??? okkk...best of luck...padhai achhe se karna...aur hamara naam roshan karna...matlab main...hum RN fans k bare me bol rahi hun...
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sur
How r u???
Update was really gud...
Raj n Sur share a special bonding which has no name..They know each other too well.😛
Sur has feelings for Raj n he too loves her but both r afraid of rejection..
Raj is totally confused n so is Sur..Both r going through the same phase..
"Have you ever been silently in love
With someone you can never have?
So close you can touch her hand
Yet, so far to feel her heart?

Have you ever lived in pretense
Quietly loving without any condition?
A feeling of love that's unknown
Hiding it, not knowing for how long.

Have you ever fallen deeply
Loving the person unconditionally?
So afraid to say what you feel
Acting normal, keeping things still.

Have you ever been hurt unintentionally
But put on a smile, pretended to be happy?
Deep inside you're in pain and suffering
But outside you're jolly and laughing.

Why does holding her hand feel so right?
Your heart smiles everytime she's at sight
Hearing her sweet voice makes your day
Hope you can hug her in a special way."
Thank God!!! Sur ke dad theek hain...every1 was really worried over him..
Raj was so embarrased to his head lying on Sur's shoulder...
Sur is afraid of relationships but she is not able to to stop Raj who is now constantly in her mind...
Nandini read Raj's diary n now she knows Raj's true feelings towards her sister..I think she will bridge the gap between the two n make dem1..
Continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great update Sur...

Finally Raj and Sur have met. Sur is so stressed... and Raj could feel her pain.

The hospital scene was so beautiful. She hugged him and didn't feel awkward about it. And Raj was happy just to see her a bit relieved after her father talked to her. Kya baat hai... khamosh zubaan... bolti dhadkan. Hum sabko pata hai, Sur ko bhi pata hai... bas Raj ko hi kuch dhang se nahi pata.

Sur Raj ke liye breakfast lekar aayi thi aur Raj uske kandhe pe sar rakhkar so gaya. How cute!!! Raj wrote in his diary about Sur... and what nice lines about that bloke.😆 😆 😆
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Now Nandini has found out everything. Hope she does something soon.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
O GOD sur...wht have u written...I was reading all parts in one go and thought of commenting only after all parts were done...but i was just forced to comment here...the 9th part i guess...when raj was hurt....sur...I wont say that u have written very well...ya...very creative of u...i think this was real...very much real...plz dont feel offended...but i feel jaise ye pura incident ek real story hi hai that u have just copied...waisa ki waisa hi likh diya...n if this was only ur talent n imagination...thn...just hats off 2 u...i will bow down n say...that ur r amazing...tumne itne perfectly ye emotions kaise likhe yr...raj ka har ek scene...har ek emotion...dialogues...action...its all so real...evrything was so perfect...wo bolte hai na...not a hair left undone....felt like d entire movie was going on in front of me...pure surroundings n all k saath...
ye kitna hota hai na real life me....bt its so unbearable...raj's heartbreak...all those emotional turmoils...u gave life to them...aur in sab ke baad jab pata chala ki sur had purposely done it...i was like...yyyyyyy....i just hit my head....no i dint curse her...i like...understood...kitni baar v have to deliberately hurt some1 close to us...special to us...for reasons v cant overcome...i cud understand what she wud b going thru even...
chalo ab bohot hua...i am overflowing...ab thoda aage padhu...ye part khatam hote hi i hit d past reply button n started off....n dear plzz dnt feel offended from anything i said...it jus t came straight from inside...
ab thts it for this part....d rest of d story till now was also great...very well written....n plzz add me to ur pm list if u dnt mind....
tc
luv sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
pheww.......!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! padh liye sare parts...par pata nahi tha ki end karte karte itniiiiiiiii achi good news milegi....nandini ne wo diary padhli...wowwwwwwwww....me so happy....ab sab acha acha hoga....yr nandini is such a cute shweet shweet bhabi...nt just bcoz of this reason....bt i was relly liking their relationship all thru.....
gosh....raj loves her so much...unconditionally....n i feel even she has a lot inside her...but ya she is hesitant....
ab bas nandini ji sari ummede aap se hai....sorry i mean aap se sur.....but plzz yr thoooda jaldi jaldi continue kara karo....tum ek kaam karo...tumhara koi personal sa contact number de do....jaha hum sab tumhe hamesha beeps dete rahe...'Sur, cont karo'...'Sur cont karo'....tht idea will surely work...hehehe...sorry...
chalo bye tc for now...bt will b waiting eagerly 4 next part...
luv
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
Waiting for the update
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
are dear
yeh kya
phir se gayab hogayi aap
pheww pata nahi raj aur sur ke bheech mein sab dhik karne ka aapka irada kab banega
lagta hai bahut wait karna hoga hume
pls dear thoda sa taras hi khalo hum jaise raj ke dewano par
par pls cont soon wit this fic of urs........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello guys!
dekho ab mujhe marne mat daudo sab mere final xamz chal rahe the jo abhi adhe ghante pehle khatam huye hai, aur ab mai 2 hafto k liye azad hu jiske baad i will b in 12th(hopefully...). ab mujhe thoda time dedo i will type a ud nd post it really soon!
Cheers
Sur

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