Originally posted by: sweetangel_25
O GOD sur...wht have u written...I was reading all parts in one go and thought of commenting only after all parts were done...but i was just forced to comment here...the 9th part i guess...when raj was hurt....sur...I wont say that u have written very well...ya...very creative of u...i think this was real...very much real...plz dont feel offended...but i feel jaise ye pura incident ek real story hi hai that u have just copied...waisa ki waisa hi likh diya...n if this was only ur talent n imagination...thn...just hats off 2 u...i will bow down n say...that ur r amazing...tumne itne perfectly ye emotions kaise likhe yr...raj ka har ek scene...har ek emotion...dialogues...action...its all so real...evrything was so perfect...wo bolte hai na...not a hair left undone....felt like d entire movie was going on in front of me...pure surroundings n all k saath...
ye kitna hota hai na real life me....bt its so unbearable...raj's heartbreak...all those emotional turmoils...u gave life to them...aur in sab ke baad jab pata chala ki sur had purposely done it...i was like...yyyyyyy....i just hit my head....no i dint curse her...i like...understood...kitni baar v have to deliberately hurt some1 close to us...special to us...for reasons v cant overcome...i cud understand what she wud b going thru even...
chalo ab bohot hua...i am overflowing...ab thoda aage padhu...ye part khatam hote hi i hit d past reply button n started off....n dear plzz dnt feel offended from anything i said...it jus t came straight from inside...
ab thts it for this part....d rest of d story till now was also great...very well written....n plzz add me to ur pm list if u dnt mind....
tc
luv sana
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