FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 69

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: debby

*reserved... going to read now*
Hugs to you for updating!!


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Mayank is ill..!! =( The description was so very vivid.. the whole fever and shivering... I recovered from a bad bout of flu about a month back and some of the aftermath still shows up in the form of eye and throat infections.. I am only glad that he is now better. Nupur took great care to ensure he recovers soon.. it was really touching seeing her like that. Also, sending Neev to his granny's was a good idea. The cute kid was so worried abt Daddy too.

His illness only compounded Nupur's feelings though.. I wonder what was Mayank's first thought when he saw her sleeping next to him. LOL

The soiree sounds interesting esp. since its Shilpa's. She is such a sweetheart - 'havent seen you in ages..' ha ha..

This was a shorter update though =( but never mind, it did come in quick like you said yesterday..
Wonderful as always but leaves me asking for more..like always, again. lol

Continue soon genius! :-)



Hey Debby! Thank you sooo much for the review! :) And yes, I used my own experience to describe the flu...apparently lot of ppl here were down with it too, so could relate to it and sympathize with poor Mayu....lol...and Neev was sent to Dadi's for a good reason..both of them needed some alone time :)

And Nups' life certainly got more complicated after that episode...well so did Mayank's actually...haha...

Initially I thought of writing about the soiree in the next chapter, but one more chapter before that! I'm working on it...maybe...just maybe though I might be able to put it up by tonight! :D

Thank you soooo sooo much for the awesome review :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
OH my gosh! Great update! I loved how Nupur and Mayank finally hug...in a sense. I absolutely CANNOT wait until Shilpa's Soiree! Pleeeeeease have that update soon!
oh and thank you for updating so quickly! and awesome job!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X

OH my gosh! Great update! I loved how Nupur and Mayank finally hug...in a sense. I absolutely CANNOT wait until Shilpa's Soiree! Pleeeeeease have that update soon!

oh and thank you for updating so quickly! and awesome job!



Thanks a ton! Well, Nups and Mayu have hugged before in this FF...but not in such an intimate way :) Shilpa's soiree will be next to next chapter...I'm writing it right now - maybe could update by tonight :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey..loved ur ff..i stayed up till 3 last nite readin it..n this morning..first thing i did was check to see if u've updated..lol..plz add me to ur pm list..cant wait to see wat happens next
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Posted: 16 years ago
did i read you will update tonight???

omg if this happens then i would be the happiest person on the planet !


will comment on this chapter and next on together...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: archieeps


Thanks a ton! Well, Nups and Mayu have hugged before in this FF...but not in such an intimate way :) Shilpa's soiree will be next to next chapter...I'm writing it right now - maybe could update by tonight :)

omg....you're already upto next to next chapter...!!😲
haila....i'll be on 7th heaven if you update twice in one day..!! 😆😆
you're really spoiling me..! 😆 NOT that i mind....its a big treat..!! hehe
do try to update by tonight...LOL...i'm getting greedy....😳
btw..if you don't mind me asking.....😳...i was just wondering what your username meant..?😳😛
is it inspired from the archie comics kya...? hehe....😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi kainath,i m commenting on ur ff for the first time,coz i read all the parts yesterday only and when i came today to comment one more part was up....😊
i m not much interested in reading but in last few days,i have changed a lot,and the credit goes to nidhi...
she suggested me to read this ff,and i gained my courage ,coz i had to read 19 long chapters...😆
but when i started reading,i started feeling some sort of bond with this story and i decided to read all the parts in one day...😆
its really a great story and the way u describe every scene is just awesome...i m in love with "NEEV"..he is such a cutie pie,i got soo much involved in the story that i dreamt abt it only...😳😳
i m loving this ff and this has become one of my favourites...😳😳
thanku soo much for updating it soo frequently,coz i think it wud be difficult for me to pass my day without any update...😃😃
FALAK😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: archieeps


Thanks a ton! Well, Nups and Mayu have hugged before in this FF...but not in such an intimate way :) Shilpa's soiree will be next to next chapter...I'm writing it right now - maybe could update by tonight :)

omg..u r going to update tonight??😲😲thank god i read this...😆
i will stick to my PC for it then...will wait for it..omg i have become sooo impatient....😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys, thank you ALL soooo much for your wonderful reviews...sorry to burst the bubble, but I dont think I can update tonight - an emergency arose! But I might be able to make it tmr...sorry for letting you down guys, really very sorry :(
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kainath, i edited my comment on pg.87

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