FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 67

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*Edited*..Kainath, sorry for disappearing without even editing..lol..i just wanted to be the first one commenting..hehe..

Aww, Mayank is ill?! So so bad. poor guy. Waise, i must say, the way you described the illness, it looked as though i'm actually seeing it in front of my eyes..amazing descriiption.

Aww...as usual..Neev is such a cutie.."Daddy is going to die? LOL...i could expect something like that only from NEEV...adorable boy he is!

I loved the way Nupur took care of Mayank.."don't want to go to school?" hehe..he surely was out of his senses..But i found him so sweet in this part...And the best part was when Nupur slept with him on the same bed..that made me go all like this-->😍

Can't wait to see what happens at the Soiree...please do update soon..simply loved this update!

thank you thank you!! for updating..!!

heyy im seriously going to run out of adjectives to describe how i feel....superb update...!!!i mean seriously...their feelings are soon going to get the better of them 😉...neev is really a cutie pie...makes me feel like a kid aswell!!

looved it
they keep saying that they do not want to fall in love all over again but they never fell out of it in the first place........did they
no
just waiting for the S oiree
update soon
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: hgrhr

thank you thank you!! for updating..!!

i was having a really very bad day and then saw your PM about the update and now well....i'm quite cheered up now....! LOL

Fantastic chapter...like i said before i dunno how you always manage to make the new part my most fav....replacing the last one.! hehe

First off i just have to say that what a great description of the flu...i could just see him in front of my eyes in that shivering state....unable to move..!LOL😆😆

Nupur taking care of him....all of it....rushing to drop neev and come back, cleaning up, making him soup, sleeping next to him...!!

god that must have been the worst for her....sleeping next to him...but mayank was being so very insistent na...LOL.....that dialogues of his.." I don't want to go to school..." hehe....he really did lose his senses..!!

Neev was so cute...!! "is daddy going to die...?" by god....only kids can ask such questions..!!

I'm sorry i couldn't comment on the last parts....they were mind blowing...all the praise feels less when it comes you your FF...!!

hmmm...so something is going to happen at the Soiree.....i wonder what is it that would change them permanently...!!

can't wait to see...!!

awesome awesome update...!! LOved it...!!

do continue soon..!!

Hey Nidhi! Thanks a ton! :) I'm glad this chapter cheered u up! Keep smiling :)

And the flu - yup...actually just recently I was down with a bout of the flu, so just wrote down my own experience....apparently during my delirium I told my bf I hated him and wanted him out of my sight....LOL...poor guy....haha

And Nupur - poor thing, it really was tormenting for her...I feel bad now :( But anyway, happiness isnt toooo far away! I hope... :)

And Neev of course would respond like any child would - with the most disturbing of all conclusions... ;)

It's ok dear, you commenting on this part made up for it ;) And thanks you s ooo much once again! :D

I'll update...but dunno how soon!

Originally posted by: mari92

heyy im seriously going to run out of adjectives to describe how i feel....superb update...!!!i mean seriously...their feelings are soon going to get the better of them 😉...neev is really a cutie pie...makes me feel like a kid aswell!!

whats going to happen in the soiree???!\

ive never really been that good with dealing with suspense!

and this ff is my favourite..!!

Thanks a ton! And yup...you'll find out what happens in the next chapter! :D

Originally posted by: shinz

looved it
they keep saying that they do not want to fall in love all over again but they never fell out of it in the first place........did they
no
just waiting for the S oiree
update soon
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Thanks a ton! You're right...lol...they never got over each other :) You'll find out what happens next chapter! :)

wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!OMG i loved this part so much~!..........totally loved the way nupur took care of him and am really desperately waiting for Shilpa's Soiree.......please do update soon

luv
ananya

omg! what an awesome part.....

hey loved your update