FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Misfit_

@Misfit_

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#701

HI,

I accidently clicked on your fanfic last night, but boy am I glad I did. This is one of the best FFs I've read on here! It has a little bit of everything drama, comedy, romance, etc all in a very well written package. To be honest with you, I didn't even know who "mayur" and "nupur" were before I started reading, but that hardly mattered once I did...And thanks to your FF, i've become a MayUr fan, and have been watching all the epis from the beginning on youtube :) great work! keep it up, looking fwd to reading more!

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#702

Originally posted by: archieeps

Hey Sonia, thanks a ton for the review! :) Glad you liked it :) and of course, Neev will act like a lil kid, always thinking in the extremes...haha... :) I love Nups and Neev relationship as well..so cute!

And Mayank sick - haha...adorable yes, he behaved like a total kid :) Sigh...poor Nups, of course she couldnt resist him in such a vulnerable state...

@bold- uhh no one can resist him? hahaha

another thing.. like i said i went to sleep after reading ur update and i dreamt about neev and nupz...

in a weird way.. haha... i woke up and i was like... ohhkays... that was weird.. haha.. see ur making me even have dreams about this ff to see how obsessed i am

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#703

oh god poor poor mayu is ill

n nupur took care of him so sweetly

what is shilpa going to do now??????????????

i hate mysteries

pls pls update soon

n ya nupur is very very very very sweet

n they both lov each other so much

dumbos they won't tell each other

this is a double dan reallyyyyyyyy

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#704

hiii kainath...........i'm nikhila a.k.a nikki.......well.......i hv heard abt ur ff...many of my frnz had told me tht i must read this....bt i nevr got time........bt luckily as i ws free 2day........i read all the 20 parts in a go.......
pata hai i read almost all mayur ffs here.........n ur ff has bcome one among my top 5 mayur ffs.......
srsly agar aaj bhi main yeh nahi padti....toh i wud hv missd such a heavenly rockin ff.....u truly hv amazin rockin writin skills....d way u portray emotions....state of mind...monologues....sab sab perfect hai yaar......
i'm really in vry much loooooooooooove wid ur FF.........ab mein galti se bhi i wud nevr miss ur further updates...plzzzzzzz plzzzz add me in ur pm list...hv already send u frnd req...do accept it....
once again rockin fab superb updates the dear....plzzzzzzzzz continue soooooon.......😃

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archieeps

@archieeps

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#705

Originally posted by: hira5431
hey..loved ur ff..i stayed up till 3 last nite readin it..n this morning..first thing i did was check to see if u've updated..lol..plz add me to ur pm list..cant wait to see wat happens next

Hey thanks a ton! You stayed up till 3? Aww...that's sweet :) I dun think I can put it up by today but perhaps by monday! :D

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parisbynight

@parisbynight

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#706

oh please dont say this!
i waited till midnight yestd as u said u were gonna update and thiqs morning i ve been waiting for the last 3 hours !!
i thought it was ready just needed to be updated!!
please please update now!!
monday i wont be able to read it till next friday!!i cant wait that long!!
please!

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falak

@falak01

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#707

plzzz kainath,plz do update by tomorrow...i m getting goosebumps...i thought u will update today...but plz do try to update by tomorrow..plzzz plzzz...😃😃

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#708

aaaah...how will i last till monday..!!

I thought ke FF update se I'll pass my MJHT deprived weekend....but you're updating monday..>?

ohh try to update tomorrow at least na....if not today...?

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#709

hey kainath..needless to say gr8 update!! 😃
keeping this short n sweet cos i ve some net probs n wanna post b4 it goes off 😊
cheers to u!! 😃

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archieeps

@archieeps

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#710

Originally posted by: hgrhr

omg....you're already upto next to next chapter...!!😲

haila....i'll be on 7th heaven if you update twice in one day..!! 😆😆

you're really spoiling me..! 😆 NOT that i mind....its a big treat..!! hehe

do try to update by tonight...LOL...i'm getting greedy....😳

btw..if you don't mind me asking.....😳...i was just wondering what your username meant..?😳😛

is it inspired from the archie comics kya...? hehe....😆

Yes, my username is inspired from that...lol...and my update - i just proof read it and it isnt even complete yet...really sorry dear, but I will try my utmost best to update by tmr... :)