FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 68

YAY! You updated, a great start to the weekend and a great ending to my day..

Hey kainath what is a spring soiree? I have never even heard about it before and what would happen to neev, would he going with them or would he be staying back with Dadi, what about the inspections. What would DMP do or say, if they would leave neev behind wouldn't that be considered as a negative point. I am just having too many questions jumping in my mind man. I guess maybe i am thinking too much, i don't even know that what is a soiree to begin with.

i must say tht ths is one of the best fanfic i hve read in ages...keep updatin..u r a wonderful writer...another fanastic part...

nice update....thanx 4 d pm....do pm wen u next update.....

Hi kainath

Again an amazing, super-duper , fantastic update.

I know these word are now common 4 u.

But i m helpless.

Nupz concern about Mayank was really nice.

The way she helped him, kept him warm,I m speech less

It's a proof of true love of nupz for Mayank

I hope Mayank realizes her love soon..

And neeve,he is jiust a sweet boy and one of the main attractve character of this ff.

i love him soo muchhhhhhhh.

I already read it twice .

Every line of this part was just addicted me 2 read ur ff more and more..

Thanx, tnax a lotttttttttt 4 ur nice update.

And really eagerly waiting 4 ur next 1.

Faria

Originally posted by: raveenamc

omg! what an awesome part.....

i cant wait for tht party thing

oh wow... im dying to know wht happens in the next one..... especially with the ending that you gave with this one....

plz plz pzl pdate soon!

Hi Thanks a ton! I'll try to update soon...maybe by tonight :)

Originally posted by: zoya_me

hey loved your update

poor nupur she had to sleep in the same bad as him.

and idiot him to ask her about it so bluntly...

i loved neev as always

wen are those idiots stop trying to pretend they dont lve each other

i feel like murdering them wen they say those things....so very annoying

but hopefully they will realise soon....oh plzzz say they will realise soon.

plzzzzzzz update soon

Thanks for the review! yup, both are such idiots, i swear...lol...haha....I'll try to update soon...maybe by tonight :)

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

YAY! You updated, a great start to the weekend and a great ending to my day..

: )

This part was again awesome, i loved the starting.

Mayank sick was just adorable...in a weird way, hehe. Nupz looking after him was soo sweet of her, and i don't think even if she tried she could have not helped him...

Neev was ADORABLE! he was soo worried for his dad, and did the pinky promise thing to Nupz.. just really cute. the relationship between Nupz and Neev is very cute.. truly just like mother and son... i love neev.

Amazing work again Kainath!

Thanks so much for the PM

xxSonia

ps. am waiting for ur comment on my FF

:P

Hey Sonia, thanks a ton for the review! :) Glad you liked it :) and of course, Neev will act like a lil kid, always thinking in the extremes...haha... :) I love Nups and Neev relationship as well..so cute!

And Mayank sick - haha...adorable yes, he behaved like a total kid :) Sigh...poor Nups, of course she couldnt resist him in such a vulnerable state...

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey kainath what is a spring soiree? I have never even heard about it before and what would happen to neev, would he going with them or would he be staying back with Dadi, what about the inspections. What would DMP do or say, if they would leave neev behind wouldn't that be considered as a negative point. I am just having too many questions jumping in my mind man. I guess maybe i am thinking too much, i don't even know that what is a soiree to begin with.

Kainath i lovedddddddd this update man, it will always remain one of my favourites man. You have some magical writing power man. I know how it feels when one gets sick, only recently i recovered from a terrible flu and it sucks to feel helpless and weak man. I could sooo well relate to mayank and his condition man. But mayank is very lucky to have nupz to take care of him, i had to take care of myself.

I loveeeeeeeeeee nupur, i respect her like anything, she is one selfless, compassionate and the most wonderful person ever. I loveddddd how she took care of mayank and neev. Neev is such a darling, i loveddddd how he came barging in mayur's room asking that why is daddy not up and the way he made nupz promise that she will take care of mayank was the sweetest thing ever.

I thoroughly enjoyed the nupur and shipa's brief interaction and how they discussed about mayank. nupz poor dear couldn't hide her concern and worry for mayank, from shilpa. Or maybe shilpa is a mum and she knows everything like all mums do hehe.

i lovedddddddd how mayank was acting like neev and how he asked nupur to not leave and made her promise. Oh gosh could mayur ever get more realistic and adorable than this, no way but then again kainath you have pleasantly surprised me again and again.

I loveeeeee how mayank wanted nupz to be with him and how he later on forgot that hehe. Nupz is such a darling. i am sooo eagerly waiting for the next part, you have no idea. Or maybe you know by now how crazy i am hehe.

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING update man. Keep it up.

Hi! thanks a ton for the looong and awesome review :) All your questions will be answered in the next chapter - hopefully...ahah...and Neev will stay with Dadi....And a soiree is actually an evening party - an old term for a get-together....actually now the soiree will be in the next to next chapter, initially i'd thought of putting in the next chapter but one more chapter before you find out what happens :))))

And Nups is indeed a commendable personality, I agree :) and Mayank acting like a kid - i absolutely looved writing that part...it's not everyday where you get to see his vulnerable side :)

I'll try to update by tonight! :)