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Posted: 15 years ago
Cool part Guglu...!!!

Nice RN moments...Love the way Naina is around Rajveer...!!!!

And its so nice when Naina addresses Rajveer as Rajveer inspite of him being only her teacher yet...more like friends...!!!

And this Huda deserved this....!!! He is an a**hole...!!!!

And no problems where you stopped...of course RN deserve a whole update to themselves...!!!

So update soon......!!!
Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Both Raj and naina cannot help but admire each other...both of them are looking their best.

Ali needs to relax a little. He needs to understand that he holds a special place in Pooja's heart. He needs to show his feelings for her.

Naina finds it very easy to talk with Raj...she even does not realise when she calls him Veer. And hearing this...raj cannot help but blush.

The mystery man has warned raj that he is completely prepared to create chaos...and more

Naina now knows that Bunty is actually helping raj in his mission. Raj is already set up strong surveillance so that he can catch any mischief

Waiting to see what happens next...and you are right RN need a grand entry...also the thrill that you have created is very intriguing.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiiii guglu….

Wow!!!!! Superb part dear…….whole update main mere raj aur naina chah gaye …….mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya ye ud

Pooja tikhi kehrahi thi raj naina ko aisa dekhega to behosh ho jayega…jab naina ne kaha pooja ko dekh ke ali to bholna hi bhool jayega…maine bhi tikh pooja ki tarah hi socha ki ye usool bhai bolta hi kab hain…..pooja ko dekh ke ali ki to hosh ud gaye….accha hota agar usool bhai jo kuch bhi apne mann main socha wo pooja se kehpata….but no worry pooja to samaj gayi the flood of the emotions in his eyes……raj to bahut tease kar raha hain ali aur pooja ko…..par janab ko ye nahi pata ki jab wo naina ko dekhga to uska bhi yahi haal hoga jo kuch dher pehle ali ka tha

Mujhe bahut accha laga jab raj ne notice kiya ye baat ki naina is feeling conscious n to ease her he gave his hand to her n waited for her to place her palm in his n the way he asked chalen ….... its so cute n sweet of him ......n i loved the way how they talked freely with each other

Its really a fun to watch that stupid huda n ritus faces when they saw naina n raj together

I liked it when naina baton baton main called raj veer ….ye X kaun hain??? N this one is awesome when raj said to naina… I trust u

Dr.shalini is BS s date for the ball….raj n naina r surprised to see this…

totally rocking ud dear...n i agree with u that RN deserves a whole ud for their entry..... plz u update the next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rocking part.......RN r sooo damn cute.
par ye suspence kya hai...plzzz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice update. 👏 👏 👏
Raj aur Ali dono k hi hosh gum ho gaye hain apne partners ko dekh k, so cool. Pehli baar Ali ne vo sab kaha Pooja se jis ka intezaar na jaane kab se tha Pooja ko, Naina ne sahi kaha tha.
Yahi baat kaafi had tak sahi jaati hai Naina k liye bhi, us ko bhi compliment mila par jara hat k. Raj ne Ali n Pooja ko embarrass kar diya aur mauka dekh k accha chauka maara .
Naina ko bhi vishwaas nahi ho raha tha ki Rajveer ne us ki aise tareef ki. Ab to Naina kobhi tareef karni hi thi Raj ki aur vo to accha lagta hi hai. Raj se accha koi lag hi nahi sakta na formal attire me.
Waiter pe mujhe doubt fauran ho gaya tha aur Raj ne fauran chit paa li aur yaad aa gaya ki pehle bhi mil chuki hai chit us ko. Naina ko ye bhi pata chal gaya ki Bunty Chaubey ki asli pehchaan kya hai.
Ye dono bhi har jagah eye lock me busy ho jaate hain. Chaubey ko vapas laana pada dono ko dreamland se. Ab dekhna ye hai ki in ko kitna score milta hai baaki logon ka to sahi mila hai.
BS n Shalu vaala incident kaafi funny tha.
continue soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiii Guglu...

kaisi ho...???
FANTASTIC ud dear...
Ali n pooja... he he he...dono kabhi nahi badal sakte...!!! naina ne sahi kaha tha ki pooja se ki Ali use dekh kar bhulna bhul jayega. aur pooja ka rply bhi sahi tha...vaise Ali baht kam bolta hi hai...
par pooja ne bhi sahi tease kiya naina ko...!!! pata nahi yeh Ali kab tak apne dil ki baat aise hi chupata rahega...!!! mujhe na Ali par bilkul bhi bharosha nahi hai...par tum par hai...isiliye mujhe pata hai ki tum in dono ka chakkar chalane k liye kuch na kuch toh karogi hi...!!!
raj ne achhi khinchai ki Ali n Pooja ki...!!! par Pooja ka kahna sahi sabit hua...jab raj ne naina ko dekha toh dekhta hi rah gaya...!!! aur main imagine karti rah gayi ki kaisa hua hoga voh scene...
mera fav scene tha...jab raj ne naina ki taraf hath badhaya aur kaha 'chalain'...it's soooooooooooooo cute...yaar...
RN ko sath dekh kar Huda ka chehra dekhne layak tha...maza aa gaya...
naina ne anjane me hi sahi raj ko sahi naam se pukara...!!! mujhe un dono ka convo sab se jyada achha laga...!!! voh batain ek teacher ya students ki nahi thi...balki do aise insaano ki thi...jo ek dushre par khud se bhi jyada bharosha karte hain...!!!
raj ne naina ko'i trust u' kaha...aur mujhe laga is ek hi sentence me raj ne kitna kuch kah diya naina se...!!! toh naina ko pata bhi chal gaya ki bunty raj ki help karta hai...!!! vaise bunty bade kaam ka hai...RN jab bhi ek dushre ki ankhon me kho jate the...voh apna farz nibhata tha...he he he...
BS aur Shalu...he he he...funny tha yaar...
aur tum ne sahi kaha hai ki RN k liye ek pura Ud toh hona hi chahiye...!!! par yaar EK...tum ise aur DO TEEN aur bhi jyada uds me badha sakti ho...kyoun ki koi bhi RN lover tumhe complaine nahi karega...agar tum sirf Rn k upar Uds likhogi toh...he he he...
chalo...ab jaldi jaldi ud post kar do...
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hi dear.....I was abt to say Raj n Naina ki entry kyun nahi kii....but ya they need a complete part for that.....so am willing to w8....loved the UD....specially Raj n Naina's frndly convos...and she didnt realized that she called him Veer....how cute n funny!!! But I hope Raj jaldi se iss 'X' ko dhund le....pls continue soon....and yes....sorry to keep the comment short....but am in a bit hurry. Bye n take care.

Thanks Sumi for your comments. Even M hoping ki Raj jaldi se X ko dhund le. M glad you liked RN convo. Dont worry abt the short comment. It will do. Will be continuing soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Cool part Guglu...!!!

Nice RN moments...Love the way Naina is around Rajveer...!!!!

And its so nice when Naina addresses Rajveer as Rajveer inspite of him being only her teacher yet...more like friends...!!!

And this Huda deserved this....!!! He is an a**hole...!!!!

And no problems where you stopped...of course RN deserve a whole update to themselves...!!!

So update soon......!!!



Hi Dhara,

M glad you liked the way I have changed the situation. Yes, Naina here is more matured, different, she is always around Rajveer just as Rajveer is always around her. And Huda surely deserved a lot more than this but got only this much. I'm done with the next update. Will post it once the reservation ends. Till then take care.

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Both Raj and naina cannot help but admire each other...both of them are looking their best.

Ali needs to relax a little. He needs to understand that he holds a special place in Pooja's heart. He needs to show his feelings for her.

Naina finds it very easy to talk with Raj...she even does not realise when she calls him Veer. And hearing this...raj cannot help but blush.

The mystery man has warned raj that he is completely prepared to create chaos...and more

Naina now knows that Bunty is actually helping raj in his mission. Raj is already set up strong surveillance so that he can catch any mischief

Waiting to see what happens next...and you are right RN need a grand entry...also the thrill that you have created is very intriguing.



Thanks for such a wonderful reply darling. Yes, both Ali and Raj are completly mesmerized with each other. But while Ali thinks Pooja is still brooding over Rohit, Raj knows that there is nobody in Naina's life till now. Naina has come to know a lot of things about Raj and his mission and also about Bunty. And they will be making a grand entry in the next part. M glad u found the thrill intiguing. It satisfies me as a writer. Thanks a lot.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiiii guglu'.Hi Yogitha

Wow!!!!! Superb part dear''.whole update main mere raj aur naina chah gaye ''.mujhe bahut bahut pasand aaya ye ud Thanks darling. Chalo tumhe pasand toh aaya.

Pooja tikhi kehrahi thi raj naina ko aisa dekhega to behosh ho jayega'jab naina ne kaha pooja ko dekh ke ali to bholna hi bhool jayega'maine bhi tikh pooja ki tarah hi socha ki ye usool bhai bolta hi kab hain'..pooja ko dekh ke ali ki to hosh ud gaye'.accha hota agar usool bhai jo kuch bhi apne mann main socha wo pooja se kehpata'.but no worry pooja to samaj gayi the flood of the emotions in his eyes''raj to bahut tease kar raha hain ali aur pooja ko'..par janab ko ye nahi pata ki jab wo naina ko dekhga to uska bhi yahi haal hoga jo kuch dher pehle ali ka tha Haan, wo thodi na kuch kam hai Ali se. Janab Naina ko dekhkar bolna hi bhul jaate hain.

Mujhe bahut accha laga jab raj ne notice kiya ye baat ki naina is feeling conscious n to ease her he gave his hand to her n waited for her to place her palm in his n the way he asked chalen '.... its so cute n sweet of him ......n i loved the way how they talked freely with each other Ab kitni der sikud kar rahenge. She is his date after all

Its really a fun to watch that stupid huda n ritus faces when they saw naina n raj together Very true.😆 😆 😆

I liked it when naina baton baton main called raj veer '.ye X kaun hain??? N this one is awesome when raj said to naina' I trust u Thanks again.

Dr.shalini is BS s date for the ball'.raj n naina r surprised to see this' Anybody would be.

totally rocking ud dear...n i agree with u that RN deserves a whole ud for their entry..... plz u update the next part soon Sure darling.



Thanks for such lovely and detailed comments Yogitha. Will be updating the next part soon.

Love
Guglu

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