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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#141

Ok guys!!!

Done with the update. Now your work starts, please pour in your comments, And silent readers please press the like button. And Yogitha, hope this time the size of the update satisfies you and others as well. Take care all of you. And those readers who want a pm from me, please add me to your buddy list so that I can pm you every time I update.

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Guglu

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#142

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you for this....main last se shuru karu ya first se?? Gosh....all is tooooooooooooo well...hehe. Raj n Naina's grand entry....scoring 10 on 10.....reminded me of LRL....though that was Ritu....even then....abhi to Naina hai na....hehe. And BS k saath convo bhi mujhe bahut achha laga....like the one that said....dhamako k saath entry karne ki adat nahi gayi.....Raj to hai hi ek anokha dhamaka!!!

And the way Ritu n Huda were behing Raj n Naina....it was too much....but they successfully got out...n I enjoyed Aalekh n Neelu's comments....hehe. And then, Ali-Pooja....the way u described their following Rajveer out of habit....it was sooooooooo awesum.......bikul wo Rajveer Sir wala feeling aa gaya....of which I feel really proud!!! And then they danced very sweetly.....gr8!! But wo identity wali baat......hmm.....I hope it all goes okay.

And this Huda....always baaton ka ulta matlab samjahta hai......firstly usse pata nahi apna Raj kitna DARING hai....and secondly....pasand nahi ka matlab ata nahi kab se ho gaya?? Anyways, end me Raj ne bilkul sahi kaha....credit to Cadet Huda ko hi jata hai....but all these reminded me of LRL ball.....it was simply awesum Guglu.

Pls continue soon.

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#143

wonderful part.purane din iyaad aagye.loved the conversation between bs and rajveer.loved the conversation between raj,naina,alekh and neelu.

iye huda change nehi hoga.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#144

WooooooooooooooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

Fabuloussssssssssssss!!!

Wonderful Update dear!

This reminded me of LRL ball with with much nicer additions ofcourse!!!

RN ki grand entry and scoring full 10 and Raj's dial ki dhamake mera peecha nahi chodte was nice!! 😃

Then formal dance ke waqt Raj ka Naina ko stare karna...haaiiii😳

Aalekh Neelu and RN convo was nice...

and So was Naina ka Raj ko Ritu se door lejana 👏 👏 Woh is fic mein kaafi matured hai!! 👏

Pooja and Ali following Raj to the dance floor was funny as well as sweet! 😊

The song was awesome!!!

Raj didnt want to look away from Naina!! 😳

Aur firse Huda ne Raj ko challenge kiya!

The way you described dance was awesome!

Update soon!

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#145

Very nice Guglu...!!!!👏👏
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The last part reminded me of the LRL Ball...!!!!⭐️⭐️
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This Huda is sucha jerk....!!!!😡😡
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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#146

Rocking update👏

Naina and Raj make their grand entrance and as expected score a perfect 10. Ab evening ka best couple perfect score nahi kare ga to kon karega.😉

Raj enjoys formal dancing and loves it even more when his partner is Naina. He is proud of how well she has learned dancing from him. All he wants to do is hold her in his arms and get lost in her big eyes.😍

Alekh and Neelu have unique style....they compliment each other perfectly. Neelu knows when and how she can convince alekh to do what she wants. Alekh also surprises her with his awesome dancing skills.😉

Ritu and Huda are both irritating Raj and Naina. Raj is too polite for Ritu and so Naina comes to his rescue. ..which he appreciates completely.😆

Ali is as shy as ever and so RN decide to help him and pooja. Raj's trick to bring pooja and ali to the dance floor was brilliant. You are right...his cadets would follow Rajveer anywhere.

Ali finally asks Pooja for a dance and then curses him self for not doing it earlier.😃

Huda's plan to embarass Raj in front of everyone blows up in his face. Seeing Raj dancing on a bollywood song...he has won even more fans and appreciation.

Waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon.

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vvdn

@vvdn

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#147

Rocking update....! wonderful 😃

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

Vow,maza hi aa gaya update padh k.
Treat hi mil gayi readers ko is update me, pehle to Raj aur Naina ko full marks mil gaye looks me aur us k baad do do perfect dances, awesome dear.
Mujhe to Raj k LRL waale steps yaad aa gaye Gori Gori k, they were just brilliant. Jab Raj ne start kiya tha tab thoda doubt tha but baad me to us ne kamaal hi kar diya tha.
Alekh acche se jaanta tha kab kya possibilty hai isliye har jagah un ki bhavishyavaani sach sabit hue na. Huda ko Naina ne accha sabak sikhaya aur us k saath hi Ritu se Raj ko bacha liya.
Ab dekho Pooja aur ALi ko bhi acccha engage kar liya saath me Raj aur Naina ne. Raj ne bhi bahut cunningly dono ko stage pe le aaya, superb dance scene again dear.
Ritu aur Huda ka phir se jalan k maare bura haal tha. Pata nahi in dono ki problem kab khatam hogi. Huda ko ab samajh aaya hoga ki Raj ko challenge kar k us ne kitne badi galti ki hai us ne.
update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#149

thoda sa BZ hun...isiliye short comments karungi...plz naraz mat hona...

MINDBLOWING...

yaar...purani yadain taaza ho gayi...

raj ko 10/10 mile hain...milne hi chahiye ....bata aur koi option hai raj k liye...

BS ki baat sahi hai...raj jahan dhamaka vahan toh honi hi chahiye...

dance scene par raj ka naina ko aise dekhan...jast WOOOOOOOWWWWWW....love u for dis...whole scene...RN sath me romantic bhi lagte the...aur dono ka ek dushre k close hona...un se jyada toh mujhe achha lagta tha...he he he...

Ritu ka jealous hona samajh me aata hai...bichari kyoun nahi maan leti ki kuch chizain sahi hathon me achhe lagte hain...!!! jaise raj sirf naina k sath...

khair Huda toh Rachi k pagalkhane se bhaga hua praani hai...isilie raj se challenge laga liya...

raj ne bhi badhiya jawab diya...sara credit huda ko de kar...

arre yaar...bhul gayi...ali-pooja aur alekh-neelu k scenes bhi mast the...!!! bich bich me alekh ki commentry.... maza aa gaya really...

ok ab jaldi se cont karo...

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#150

hiii guglu
dekho mene comment kiya hua tha aur mein khud hi bhool gayi
isliye socha kuch aur addition kar di jaye hope u dnt mind that

raj and naina's entry was superb and no point in telling that they must have scored the highest points and naina was too right that agar huda aur naina ki jodi aayi hoti to best to nahin par worst couple ka award zaroor milta

loved their plan which make ali and pooja to come on stage nahin to wo dono to pakka vahiin khadhe reh jate aur ball khatam bhi ho jata

Huda pe to bahut gussa aata hai, he is just the limit...but loved the way raj, naina, neelu and aalekh dance.

now continue soon
luv preet

Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago

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