TERA MERA SAATH{RN FIC}PRT11/PG44 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey guglu...sorry yaar late rply k liye. par main thoda busy thi. No problem dear. Chalta hai. Ab to kar diya na.😊

beautiful ud dear...👏 👏👏 👏 Thakksssssss

raj n naina ka dance scene...!!! tum ne purani yadain taaza kar di...par thoda sa change kiya tha...tum ne un dono ka convo. vaise bhi yeh fic dj's ka thode hi hai...yeh toh tumhara fic hai na.par un dono k bich hui sari batain baht hi achhi thi...aisa klaga jaise voh dono ek dushre ko aur bhi gahrai se jaan na chahte hain.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Bilkul. Janna chahte hain. Actually, serial me situations alag the aur mere fic me alag hain. Serial ke adhiktar scenes hain to sahi isme, par sequence alag hai. Aur dusra mai flashback me chal rahi hun, toh abhi wo scenes hai jinhe Raj yaad kar raha hai. Uske baad Naina ki baari hai sapne dekhne ki.😆

toh raj ne jab naina ko kareeb se dance sikha raha tha...naina k jahan me utha rahe har ek feeling...har ek sawal aur sath hi me un sawalon k confusion se bhare hue jawab jo naina k dil me aa rahe the...un sab ko tum ne baht hi achhe se describe kiya hai...just beautiful n awesome...👏 👏 👏 Thankss again.

us k baad raj ka hairan hona ali aur pooja ko le kar. yaar sach kahun toh main bhi hairan hun...main toh yeh sch rahi hun ki pucha kis ne hoga...ali ne ya phir pooja ne...??? obviously pooja ne hi pucha hoga...ali agar puchne ki koshish karta toh use bas apna gala thik karne me FB khatam ho jata.😆 😆 😆 Very true.😆 😆 😆 Yehi sawal agle part me Raj Naina se puchne wala hai. Tab Raj ke saath tumhe bhi pata chal jayega.😊

naina yeh soch rahi thi ki raj reetu ko date kar raha hai...??? tabhi voh FB k liye interested nahin thi. par jab raj ne us se kaha toh voh thodi si hairan bhi hui aur maan bhi gayi. us ka dil kahin na kahin yehi chahta bhi toh tha na.😉 😉 😉 Haan, kyunki maine pehle hi kaha hai, Raj aur Naina ek alag hi tarah ke bandhan me bandhe hain. Aur yahan Naina ka character LRL se thoda alag hai, isliye situations wahi hone ke bawajood reactions alag hai.

aur raj n reetu ko le kar us k dil me jo kuch bhi ull-jalul khayal the...voh sab bhi dur ho gaya finally. par raj kya main bhi hairan hun huda aur reetu ko le kar. sahi kahte hain raam milaye jodi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Bilkul, mere muh ki baat keh di tumne.😆 😆 😆

reetu naina ko maarna chati hai...??? is ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai. voh bhul rahi hai ki voh vamp hai is fic ki toh voh kabhi nahin maar payegi naina ko, balki rajveer use jhadu se peet peet kar us ka haal behal kar dega.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Vamp chahe jitni bhi koshish kar le, hero heroine ko kuch nahi ho sakta. 😆

aur huda raj se badla lena chahta hai...is ki sach me khishak gayi hai...!!! bichare ko muh k bal girna padega...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 Wo bhi kuch nahi kar payega.😛

ab intezar hai FB night ka. chal ab jaldi se cont kar.😃 Bilkul, jaldi update kar dungi.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey very nice update !ni just remember the old days...keep updating.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hey very nice update !ni just remember the old days...keep updating.

Originally posted by: aneeshadgr8

loved it..!!! Thankssss

their dancing session...coffee session..."rajveer" session😆 he he he😆

u r an awsum writer..:).... Thanks dear!

m sorry for the super late reply...i have beeen very busy wsith studies...:( No problem. I can understand. Better late than never.😊 😉 😆

love,aneesha love you too ..............

Originally posted by: sania_58

awsome fic

too good

very nice

loved the fic

very interesting

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Loved every part of the update...!!!! RN dancing.. their convo...Raj understanding Naina...Naina thinking of him as "Rajveer".... EVERYTHING...!!!! ⭐️

Waiting for the next part...!!! 😃

Originally posted by: danish1

happy diwali..........
awesome update yaar.
very lovely written especially the dance sequence.
i loved it.
thanks and take care👏 👏