Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01)

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Natasha006

@Natasha006

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1001

Hi dear...

M a new member of IF... and a great fan of the serial Left Right Left. I was so depressed the way this serial had ended... Surfing through his site, I came across your fiction....and I have to say that it is superb........

The way you have continued with the script is fabulous. I have read a few parts and m yet to complete it.... but whatever I have read till now is just awesome.... you are such a gifted writer. WIll complete the story till part 25(I have read it by the way...😉...couldn't control my excitement regarding rajveer's entry....) and then give you proper comments....

Do continue soon...

See Ya....

Byeee...

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Natasha006

@Natasha006

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1002

Oh Yes....forgot the most important part.....

Best of Luck for your exams..........Do well.....

And what is this HAK and ST...H...??? If you don't mind...can you please let me know...

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1003

Hey read the new update and loved that. 👏 👏 👏

I wanted my RN to meet as soon as possible and u made the way of their meeting in this update. 😳 😳 😳

Naina you are really the true porteeg of Captain, you and your gang once again proved that why he trusts all of u so much. 😉 😉 😉 Captain Salve now what plan do u have for yourself? 🤔 🤔 🤔

Lala, Nair and Salve Company is terrified now. 😆 😆 😆 The plan of our super six worked really well and they made people (youth) convinced to join the Academy and now even Lala could not do anything. 👏 👏 👏

The PM asked him the explanation but he could not say anything & now the Academy is safe from being closed, forms are in sufficient 😉 😉 😉 . Roma too helped them. 😛 😛 😛

Raj recognized the voice of the lady that it is Shalu 😉 😉 😉 and i loved the way she spoke as being a Punjaban that she will get admit everyone in her home in Army. 😆 😆 😆

I had the doubt that may be Naina has met Raj when she was no where to be seen, even Lala could not kidnap her.😛 😛 😛 I loved each and every scene when she went to that accident spot in search of proof. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I liked the way she touched the soil and bathed in that soil,😭 😭 😭 as if she was smelling him in it.😭 😭 😭 Raj was observing each and everything and now he was unable to held himself from crying. 😭 😭 😭

So he is presented in the court & it's obvious after meeting her love Naina will be more than happy. 😉 😉 😉 Hope all things get cleared soon and no more need of Raj to go in jail untill the trial continues. 😊 😊 😊

Try to update fast dear.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1004

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Thanks !

mana ur name is preet too?? 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

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The Tilde Girl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1005

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

PART SIXTEEN :

hii mana.. pehli baat ye nandini kaun hai?? 🤔 aur jhoooooooothiiiiiiiiiiiiiii woh rajveer hi hai.. aur baki baat padhte padhte i forgot.. abb tu to janti hai ki part bht acha tha isiliye to mene padha.. aur baki sari tarif bhi tu janti hai isliye me nahi bol rahi abhi.. 1 baj gaye raat ke.. neeni ali hai mujhko.. 🥱 aur mujhe tujhe aur bhi kuch kehna tha par me bhul gayi.. 😒 plss tu jaldi continue mat karna.. mujhe abhi kafi parts padhne baki hai.. 😳 samajh gayi na?? 😊 (😈) 😊

tata gn tc sd..

love
Nandini 😃

edited : uffffffffffffffff kitna lamba likhti haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii itna skip krne k baad b adha hi ho paya.. abb 17 part phirse padhna padega kal muje.. mene socha tha skip krke khatm karungi par nai koi fayda nai.. n i knew keerti n shalini must b knowing each other.. 😆😆 (pg 90..😳)

ek b sentence ek dusre se connected nahi milega tuje.. aur mera reply padhke tuje andaza ho jaega ki me exam me answer kaise likhti hoon.. 😆😆 waise yeh uska 1% b nai hai.. 😆😆 gn sd.. 😆

edited : BTW its 1:25 am now.. 😳

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1006

nice part finally rajveer is in the scene.............

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1007

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness
reserved....

abhi tak PM bhi nahi mila...😆

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haan yeh sach hai ke main chahti thi ke tu 'sirf tum...' ya 'teri...oops hamari adhuri kahani' ko ud kar...par MS ka yeh ud bhi ZABARDAST tha yaar...!!! ya phir yun kaha jaye...toh ek PERFECT ud tha...ab tujh se kitni inspire hui hun voh toh maine tujhe fone par hi bata diya tha...hai na...ha ha ha...!!! toh phir aage badhte hain... Tere inspiration ki toh tu baat hi matt kar !! huh !!😡

pahli baar lag ke yeh ud tune long bheja hai...!!! matlab is baar koi complaine nahi hai length ko le kar aur na hi font size ko le kar...dhanya bhaag hamare !! 😆

capt salve ki naina ne BAND baja di...!!! aur us BAND ki awaz mujhe yahan tak sunai de rahi thi... ha ha ha..😆 😆 uss billi ka mujhe bada gussa aata tha ! lagta tha Naina ko bolu are yaar aisa kar waisa kar...isski band aise baja...parrr....khair... toh socha yaha apna baldla nikalu...😉

kya plan banaya hai sabhi ne...!!! naye applicants...aur yeh news unhone Roma ki help se...bade achhe se karwayi...!!! tune na court scene...tv...reporter...press...sab kuch ek dam perfect likha tha...!!! main toh kahti hun part tym na tu likhna suru kar de...dekh tere books dhada dhad bikenge...yeh lo !! ab yeh mujhse kaun keh raha hai !!! jo already kisi script writer se kam nahi !!!

maza aaya jab nair aur lala khud ko bachane ki koshish karr rahe the...par tere rahte voh aisa kaise kar sakte hain...kyoun ki un ki kishmat ko toh tu type karr rahi thi...

finally tune KMA ko bacha liya...!!! huda ka part maza aaya padhne me...par ali n sameera ne jo kiya voh bhi mast tha...bichara lala..apni frnch cut dhadhi khich raha hoga...jis ke bare me tu likhna bhul gayi...kyunki mujhe pata tha, ek baar uske dadhi ke baare mein main bhool sakti hoon, par tuuu...naah...tu kabhiiiiiii nahi bhulegi ! 😛😆

shalini...voh toh hamesha se hi aisi hai...!!! raj ke face par mushkaan lane ka kaam hamesha vohi toh karti hai...!!! ek baat aur achhi thi...pahli baar BC ko aise dekh kar achha laga...

awwwwwwwww...mera fav part suru hua BC se jab us ne bataya ke RAJ zinda hai...!! par alekh kahan chala gaya...!!! arre haan batana bhul gayi...ke ek tym me aisa laga ke yeh naina ko kya ho gaya...par phir yaad aaya ki tu naina ke sath kuch bura nahi karegi...varna tujhe pata hai yahan par kitne achhe achhe log ahin teri band bajane ke liye...

RN mile...aur voh bhi itne dur...aur phir naina ro bhi rahi thi...aur tune UD rok di...!!! ab dekh main kya karti hun...!!! kaha na tujh se inspire hun...

ud kab karegi...!!! mujhe pata hai tera next part ready hai...hai na...??? toh phir jaldi kar...aaj karr hi deti hoon...

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1008

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid
Haiiiiiiiiii....kitna badhiya part mujhe dedicate kar diya!! Thank you thank you ....you deserve it sweety !!

Mere dimag bhi filhaal tarah tarah ke songs aa rahe hai.... like "Mera Piya ghar aya oh ramji" "Sajan ji ghar aye" "Ayega.....Ayega....Aane wala....Ayega"...🤣 I mean seriously...U finally made him return!! 😍 he he he !! sumiiii !! YOU ARE GONEEEE !!!! 🤣😆😆

Waise....tumne mujhe thoda confoose kar diya yaar....I mean...the return scene is in flashbak....he has actually returned...in the courtroom....so he is there!! But then...in the flashbak...he still hasnt met Naina....whereas in the present scene....he has!! 😆😆 So mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha hai....main gussa karu....as to why didnt u complete the flashbak portion....or shud I let it go....coz actually in the present they hav met!! 😆😆 he he !! I told you na...you're gone !! ab kya kare 'RAJ -effect' hi aisa hai ! 😉 koi gal nahi ! tum bass aage padhti jaao...😃

Achha achha...I knw....this doesnt really make sense....but then u hav to understand...Rajveer takes my senses away!! ☺️ Pata hai....meri aankhein kab bari bari hui?? 😳😳 Batao batao!!....Khair chhoro...main hi batati hu....the moment I saw HIS NAME!! Hotel room me baithke...he laughed out....hearing Shalini..😍....do u knw he looks mesmerizing while laughing!! 😍 yeahhh !!! I know....! 😍

Ahh...getting back on track....I loved the Raj scenes...for sure...but apart from that...I laughed out when I read "Gunny switched on the radio" 🤣

Waise...I must compliment u Mana....I mean...the way u hav portrayed everything...right from the words of the reporter/the RJ/the headlines/the janta ki rai...and all....it was all very beautifully done by you...and it actually felt very real...😆😳😉.... I mean...I was enjoying every bit of this part....⭐️⭐️⭐️ And pata nahi kaise...aise badhiya parts mujhe dedicate ho jate hai....😆😆😆 Thanks a ton dear !😃

Waise...tumhe to pata hoga...am w8ing for the next part....ever more eagerly!! Ab tumne apni image se hatke...'bada' part to post kiya nahi (🤣)....to main bhi kaise image se hath jau?? Mujhe bhi chahiye hi chahiye....arre...chocos ki baat nahi kar rahi hu...am talking abt the literal and actual RN meet!! Hero mafik...😉😉 jarooor !! tum kuch maango aur hum na de? aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya?

And yeah....apna bhashan khatam karte hue kahungi...ki....I'll be trying my best to UD Droplets....for you....Hopefully I'll be able to do so...😳 luv u for this dear...😊

Chalo ab bye....tum kab tak ek hi reply padhogi...chalo wear a fastrack watch and move on!! 😉😆 soooo....when are u gifting me one?😉

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1009

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome part. loved it.
update soon.

Thanks !!

Originally posted by: Puri_2711

Yipppieee raj is back🥳' the bestest thing of the whole part'😳😳😳 ab toh naina wud be really happy ..& case toh jeet hi jayegi'😛😛😛 .afterall raj pahunch gaya where he was needed the most 😛😛😛😛 ab dono milkar nair aur lala ka and bajenge 😆😆😆😆'all the best to them👍🏼

The news clippings were too good'😆😆😆😆 guess now KMA will not shut down '😛😛😛

Naina visit to that site was emotional'😭😭 raj was also there lets se how there reunion was in next part '😉😉😉

So continue sooner this time..😛😛😛

Thanks puri...😊

Originally posted by: sweta2005
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap

thanks sweta...

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1010

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Mana

It was a really long update and I was just enjoying reading it..😊 and do i need to say it was just perfect👏👏👏

Ms.Salve definetely needs gud luck coz Naina will not leave her😆😆

Their plan is a hit...So many new applicants in KMA and Lala and Nair r unable to do anything..Huda has done his part really well..Media is giving so much publicity to this case and Lala has no where to escape now..

He even had to take back his orders for closing KMA because of political pressure.

Raj was so proud of his cadets and specially Naina..he recognized Shalini too..She is really too much..Mrs.Khullar's part was really amusing in this whole update..😆😆😆 agar unki chale to sriously sirf unki hi family KMA mein hogi..🤣

Initially I thought that Naina has been kidnapped by Lala but thankfully it didn't happen and the biggest surprise of this update was Raj being back in action..😃 He is now in court to proove his innocence in front of the whole world.😊 all his cadets were just so happy ..His Naina had made this day possible.where has Alekh gone???

So Raj has already met Naina and u have stopped updating at that point only..WHY?????? U writers love to torture your readers😆😆😆

He cudn't control his feelings seeing Naina like that..he cud feel her love and pain both at the same time while she was missing his love and strength at this point..she was remembering all the moments when Raj has expressed his feelings towards her in not so many words.😭😭

I hope their meeting will b a memorable one 😃

Pls continue soon

Bye