Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 102

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was SUPERB..FANTASTiC!!👏👏👏

Naina ka confidence aur defense ki arguments 👍🏼sun kar Capt. Salve ki bolti bandh ho gayi. She is definetely going to need all the good luck but unfortunately she is not going to get any.👎🏼

Naina aur uske doston ka plan successful raha aur jaisa who chahte the vaise....aaj ka youth KMA join kar na chahta hai. Aur Roma ki madat se media iss baat ko hot news bana kar dikha rahi hai.

Huda ki setting bilkul perfect thi...and this made it impossible for Lala and Nair to escape from the press. Unki chaal une par hi bhaari pad gayi.😉

You have covered all the different means of media TV/reporter/RJ/press in an excellent way. Everyones dialogue were just perfect and rocking.⭐️ And Sameera and Ali did a brilliant job to trick Lala infront of the press. And finally Lala had to take back his orders to close KMA.😉

Raj was very proud of his cadets..and most proud about Naina...she had managed to save his academy. Shalini's acting was too good...it finally brought a smile on Raj's face.😃

Even BC was very happy and proud of his cadets. They indeed deserve all the credit.👏

For a moment there i thought that Naina had been kidnapped😲..but then I shouldn't have been worried...with Raj back in Ambala, Naina ko kuch bhi nahi ho sakta tha.

The best part was when BC informed the Court that Raj was alive and was there for questioning.

Watching Raj alive....was the best gift his cadets could have got...their prayers had been answered...and this time they will prove him innocent at all cost.

But where has Alekh gone...hope that he is safe and will return soon😲

So Naina and Raj had met earlier. Both Raj and naina end up going to the crash site...and seeing naina break down so bitterly...how could he stay away from her...aur appne yahan par update rok diya...😔

It was a fabulous part😊...jisse padhne mein bahut maza aaya...Par phir bhi yeh toh kenha padega hi ki update toh RN ki mulkat ke bina adhura hai....so dear agla part please please jaldi se update kar dena....because Raj ke cadets ki tarah hum sab bhi ab wait nahi kar sakte.

Originally posted by: nihatri

wow breathtaking👏

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909

lovely part

all d best for ur nest exam n upd soon

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Reserved!!!!!!!!!!!

This part needs proper comments....will do it after my exams....

Originally posted by: Natasha006

Hi dear...

M a new member of IF... and a great fan of the serial Left Right Left. I was so depressed the way this serial had ended... Surfing through his site, I came across your fiction....and I have to say that it is superb........

The way you have continued with the script is fabulous. I have read a few parts and m yet to complete it.... but whatever I have read till now is just awesome.... you are such a gifted writer. WIll complete the story till part 25(I have read it by the way...😉...couldn't control my excitement regarding rajveer's entry....) and then give you proper comments....

Do continue soon...

See Ya....

Byeee...

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Originally posted by: Natasha006

Oh Yes....forgot the most important part.....

Best of Luck for your exams..........Do well.....Thanks hun ! 😊

And what is this HAK and ST...H...??? If you don't mind...can you please let me know... arey yaar y wud i mind?? ST...H ( Sirf Tum..HAmesha) and HAK ( Hamari Adhuri Kahani) are my other two RN fics...will PM you the links of them and my other OS if you want...

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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey read the new update and loved that. 👏 👏 👏

I wanted my RN to meet as soon as possible and u made the way of their meeting in this update. 😳 😳 😳

Naina you are really the true porteeg of Captain, you and your gang once again proved that why he trusts all of u so much. 😉 😉 😉 Captain Salve now what plan do u have for yourself? 🤔 🤔 🤔

Lala, Nair and Salve Company is terrified now. 😆 😆 😆 The plan of our super six worked really well and they made people (youth) convinced to join the Academy and now even Lala could not do anything. 👏 👏 👏

The PM asked him the explanation but he could not say anything & now the Academy is safe from being closed, forms are in sufficient 😉 😉 😉 . Roma too helped them. 😛 😛 😛

Raj recognized the voice of the lady that it is Shalu 😉 😉 😉 and i loved the way she spoke as being a Punjaban that she will get admit everyone in her home in Army. 😆 😆 😆

I had the doubt that may be Naina has met Raj when she was no where to be seen, even Lala could not kidnap her.😛 😛 😛 I loved each and every scene when she went to that accident spot in search of proof. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

I liked the way she touched the soil and bathed in that soil,😭 😭 😭 as if she was smelling him in it.😭 😭 😭 Raj was observing each and everything and now he was unable to held himself from crying. 😭 😭 😭

So he is presented in the court & it's obvious after meeting her love Naina will be more than happy. 😉 😉 😉 Hope all things get cleared soon and no more need of Raj to go in jail untill the trial continues. 😊 😊 😊

Try to update fast dear.

yummmmmy comment yaar !

khud toh alag alag words mein taarif kar rahi ho, par mere paas toh ek hi word hai na! THANK U !!! 😉😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Please continue soon

Originally posted by: ~~~~

mana ur name is preet too?? 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Originally posted by: ~~~~

hii mana.. pehli baat ye nandini kaun hai?? 🤔 aur jhoooooooothiiiiiiiiiiiiiii woh rajveer hi hai.. aur baki baat padhte padhte i forgot.. abb tu to janti hai ki part bht acha tha isiliye to mene padha.. aur baki sari tarif bhi tu janti hai isliye me nahi bol rahi abhi.. 1 baj gaye raat ke.. neeni ali hai mujhko.. 🥱 aur mujhe tujhe aur bhi kuch kehna tha par me bhul gayi.. 😒 plss tu jaldi continue mat karna.. mujhe abhi kafi parts padhne baki hai.. 😳 samajh gayi na?? 😊 (😈) 😊

tata gn tc sd..



love
Nandini 😃



edited : uffffffffffffffff kitna lamba likhti haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii itna skip krne k baad b adha hi ho paya.. abb 17 part phirse padhna padega kal muje.. mene socha tha skip krke khatm karungi par nai koi fayda nai.. n i knew keerti n shalini must b knowing each other.. 😆😆 (pg 90..😳)

ek b sentence ek dusre se connected nahi milega tuje.. aur mera reply padhke tuje andaza ho jaega ki me exam me answer kaise likhti hoon.. 😆😆 waise yeh uska 1% b nai hai.. 😆😆 gn sd.. 😆


edited : BTW its 1:25 am now.. 😳