Naina (A story-Unseen) {RA} PART 2 PG2 - Page 8

Wow strange turn of events !

Nice part

hey faizu sweetehart amazing part once agen!!! , loved it completely!!!lolzzz awww poor Aman phirse chehra dekh nahin paaya....koi aur bahana dhundna hoga usse!!!hehehe but loved the part...so she is really hardworking...waqt se pehle aana aur itni dedication ke saath kaam karna....but i have a feeling ke accounts mein koi gadbad hoti rahi hai which Ainun has figured out.. am sure she will sort things out.....aur yeh kya lunch at Ainun's house...kya baat hai hai...ab tho Aman pakka ghar waapis aajayega...after all lunch kiske ghar hai...lolzzzz...do cont soon jaan!! cnt wait 4 the next part....luv summi xxx

PART 8

Aman has to reach work early to start early and so he was the first one to enter the office.

A few minutes later, one by one, all the employees entered and started to take up their share of work.

Aman and Karan (who arrived later) were busy that day and since they had to leave before time they were working extra hard to terminate a day's work in half the time.

AROUND 12

" It's time to leave Karan." Said Aman as he asked his brother to leave his room fast, " we've have just got to get home in another 30mins or we might as well prepare ourselves for a long lecture."

" What is the problem with mom bro?" Karan asked as he quickly followed his brother out, " when I don't want to work everyone forces me to and when I do want to work, everyone forces me not to." He said in a voice that clearly showed his irritation.

" That's life Karan." Aman said smiling.

" Give me the keys while I start the car, go get Ainun. I don't want to be a hindrance."

Aman raised his eyes and on seeing the satisfied feeling in Karan's, he just said, " That would be nice."

And as Aman anticipated the satisfaction in Karan's eyes lost most of its fascination.

As Karan went towards the exit, Aman entered Ainun's cabin after knocking of course

" Lets go." He said as he stared into the most magnetic eyes he had ever seen. Though Ainun always had her face covered, her eyes had enough charm to compensate for her act.

" Where?" Asked Ainun.

" If I'm not mistaken, we've been invited to your house for lunch."

" You not mistaken sir, but I'm not coming home till later."

" Why not, I was told to drop you off along the way."

Ainun got up from the chair se was sitting in, looked Aman right in the eyes and said, " Thank you so much for the concern, but I'm a big girl now, I can take care of myself, and I never give room for situations about which people may have fun talking."

Aman was really happy about the Ainun's school of thought and he agreed with her thinking.

" I think your right, I'm leaving for now, and I'll see you later." Saying this Aman headed towards the door.

" Sir." Ainun called behind him, " I have a file that I want you to go through. Its very important."

" Ainun right now I just have to leave how about I see it tomorrow?"

" It can't wait that long sir."

" Fine, bring it along with you, I'll have a look at it in your house."

Ainun nodded.

" Thank you once again." She called behind Aman as he left and Aman stopped, turned, smiled and then continued on his way out.

Aman felt a little sorry that Ainun would not be coming along with them as he had planned, but he knew that the reason for her absence was a justified one.

On the way to his house, Aman narrated to Karan the reason why Ainun did not want to join them, and like Aman, Karan was highly impressed.

When they reached home, their mother was ready and gave them no longer than 10 minutes to change, and before they knew it they were waiting outside Ainun's house, waiting for the door to open.

It did and a woman escorted them inside, Aman reasoned would be Ainun's mother.

Introductions were made and the woman was Ainun's mother and she was indeed very happy to meet Aman, Karan and their mother.

" What's so special today?" Asked Aman's mother to

Ainun's.

" Nothing really, but since its been a long time that we have not seen each other, this might be a good idea."

" You sure are right, by the way where is your daughter?"

" Ainun? She's upstairs in her room."

' She leaves after us and reaches before us, I would love to know who she does that.' Aman thought to himself.

Karan too may have had the same thought for he too was checking his watch.

" It's a lovely name Ainun." Continued Aman's mum as the brothers felt that this was a waste of precious time.

" Thank you, we'll talk after lunch." Said Ainun's mum as she led them to the dinning room.

It was only then that Aman noticed how neatly and smartly the house was maintained.

" You've maintained the house really well aunty." Said Aman.

" Credit goes to Ainun, she does most of the work, and I help out."

" Well she's done a great job at it." Said Karan before Aman could reply.

They sat on a well-polished and lustrous table and lunch was being served.

" Where is Ainun? Is she not accompanying us?" Asked Aman's mother.

Aman had his mind filled with the same question, and felt relieved when his mother spoke his mind.

" No she won't be, she's fasting today and she will not be able to eat anything till sunset."

" Hmm, any reason why?"

" Not really, Ainun doesn't eat much and if she is fasting no one can question her on that."

Aman's mother just shook her head and all four lunched happily together.

At the end of the lunch, when the ladies where having their round of talking, Aman said,

" Aunty, Ainun said that there was a file that I needed to take a look at, and she'd bring it here, so if Karan and I can go up to her …"

" Leave me out of this bro, enough of work for today. After such a lovely lunch its only you, who can think of work."

'Work is secondary my dear brother.' Thought Aman

" Lovely lunch aunty, but I'm going to go home and relax now aunty, thanks again for the lunch." Said Karan as he took the car keys from his mother and headed out the door.

" Sure Aman, you can find Ainun in her room, go upstairs and first room to the right."

" Thanks aunty."

And sure enough Aman found Ainun exactly where her mother said she would be.

Ainun was praying though, seated on the prayer mat, her back towards Aman, hands raised towards her face.

Aman could see only from the side, that Ainun had not covered her face, and he could also hear, what he thought were sobs.

But he dismissed the idea at once.

' Maybe today's the day I have been waiting for, Today, I feel I am going to see Ainun's face.' Aman prayed.

A feeling from deep inside supported this thought of Aman's. This feeling was never common, but when they presented themselves, he knew they were right.

Originally posted by: nm16

pls cont soon

hey faizu sweetheart!!!! awesome update simply amazing!!! i was waiting for this one!!!!and it was just wowww.....so ainun didnt accompany them as she doesnt want ppl talking...well her reason was justified like aman thought....that was quick...she got home before they reached her house...amazing....and then the whole dinner scene was explained really well...i liked how ainuns mum got a long with aman and karan....so ainun was fasting....and then the moment we were waiting for...he almost saw her face...damn i am waiting for the next part like anything...i soo hpe he gets 2 see her this time....and i wonder why she was sobbing...it seems there is more 2 it...i get taht feeling...well faizu do cont soon...cnt wait 4 the next part....and awesome job!! ure a gr88 writer....luv summi xxx

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. But Aman went to Ainun's home without her. Well the reason was really gud n justified n Aman understands dat well. Lets c if Aman can c her face or not. But I think its really hard 4 Aman to impress Ainun, coz she seems to b really mysterious. Well, I just wish Best of luck to Aman.

Pls continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM.

Nice part

nice part..................hope aman gets to c ainun's face................cont soon..........