Naina (A story-Unseen) {RA} PART 2 PG2 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
#91

Curious about the next part !!

Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: togepe30

Curious about the next part !!

Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu

i'll continue asap di.

Originally posted by: kashishdabest

hey faizu sweetheart!!! sorry for the late comments. no problem di i am glad your feeling better. .

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u knw i was not feeling well so just come on IF...and thank u soo much 4 ure msg on ym...i got ure msg which brought a smile 2 my face....thanx dear 4 the prayers i'm happy my messages brought a smile on ur face i'm really really very glad that ur feeling better now.
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.just caught up with the previous 2 parts n loved them completely....fantastic parts thank u soo much di....
....so once agen he didnt get 2 see her face!!! awwwww damn but chalo koi baat nahin kamsekam dono ne baat ki and got 2 knw each other better...loved the convo between them...there's a sense of comfortableness between them now which is a gr88 start yes that comfortable feeling is very important for this ff and i'm happy that i was able to put it through well enough.
....and then ainun bringing a bowl of the dish she made for him and telling him 2 eat it as she made it was really sweet...n aman also eats it even though he was full...sooo cute...pyar mein kya kya karna parta hai....hehehe lol i comp. agree.
and my god i cnt beleive a fraud of 2 billion!!!! i know a very huge sum na? he problem...then comes the next part where they decide to go out....i liked the way amans mother was enquiring...hehehehe
seems like sumthing was going on in her mind....the place they visit was surely very interesting...it makes me think wot happened in the past....she seems 2 be hiding something deep in her heart....let me share a feelign with u..i dnt knw why but i have a feeling that something is wrong with Ainun's face...i dnt knw maybe she had an accident....but i just get that feeling....hpe i am wrong though....but lets see. i like the way you think di, i had a different story in mind but lets see if i can fit this in somewhere..😆
....and then Karan helping Aman awww how cute and him sayng she would make a lovely bhabhi...hehehe loooved it!!!....n they are al working 2gether 2 get her out of her worries!!!! cnt wait 4 the next part dear!!! do update soon....luv summi xxx
i'll update as soon as i can di.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....its too tough for Aman. But its sweet that Karan is there to help him. Hope nothing too bad cums up. Pls continue soon.

i liked the thought of Karan helping Aman and i'm glad you like it as well,.. and something bad always has to come up yaar....

Originally posted by: spvd

nice part...............wonder whats gonna happen.............cont soon dear.........

thanks yaar... i'll cont. soon don't worry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93

PART 11

Aman was trying to wake his brother up before it was too late.

Finally after a lot of hard work, Karan was up and ready to go to work, and the most unbelievable thing was that; both the brothers were leaving on time!!

" Surprising how you get up this late and still manage to leave on time Karan."

" I know bro,"

" Any way, Hemant said that he'd be coming to the office today, I want him surrounded, I don't want him leaving the office before I could say so."

" Right bro."

The brothers reached their destination and took their seats in their respective places.

After about an hour, Aman was told that Hemant had arrived.

Before he could give the news deliverer any further instructions, Aman heard a knock on his door.

" Come in." He said.

" Good morning sir." Said Ainun.

" Good morning. You may leave, send him in a few minutes later."

Ainun moved to let the helping staff member leave.

" You wanted to see me?"

" Me no, I did not." Said Aman. 'I did not want to see you from the professional point of view but seeing you anytime is ok with me.' He thought.

" Hi bro."

Karan had entered the room, disrupting any privacy that Aman and Ainun had.

" I wanted to talk to both of you and that's why I told Ainun you wanted to see her." Karan informed Aman and his future bhabhi, (who had no idea that this was actually running in Karan's brain.)

" What did you want to see us about Karan?" Asked Aman.

" Ainun, since you have all the proof we need to handle Hemant, I'm sending him into your room first, but I've fixed a camera on the left hand side wall which will start to function the moment Hemant steps into your cabin." Karan paused for a few seconds and then continued.

" The conversation will be monitored by us, as we will have it displayed on the comp in here, as it is easy for us to run down if need arises. Clear?"

" All clear Karan." Said Ainun. " But why such a big process, why not just come and take a seat in my cabin."

" Because Hemant will say nothing that will prove him guilty if he knows we are watching him, but to you he might say things he does not wish to."

Karan could see that Ainun had understood what he was saying.

" And Ainun, don't worry, if need arises, we both will come up there to handle the situation."

" Not to worry about that, I don't think that will be necessary, but who's idea was this?"

" Bro's." Answered Karan.

" Nice idea." Said Ainun to Aman.

" Now guys lets get to work, let operation CATCH- THE-THUG begin." Aman announced.

Ainun was in her cabin, Aman and Karan in Aman's.

Outside the door hung a 'DO NOT DISTURB' sign and

Aman and Karan had their eyes fixed on the computer screen that showed them the exact happenings in Ainun's cabin.

A few minutes later, a man maybe in his late thirties entered Ainun's cabin.

He stopped dead in his tracks when he saw her sitting there, and Aman could not help but notice Ainun's eyes widen up.

As quickly as he had stopped, Hemant continued towards Ainun.

" So we meet again." He said.

" We meet again."

Aman and Karan eyed each other and then forced their eyes on the computer screen.

" So, I'm here because of you right?" Asked Hemant.

" Yes you are."

" And what have I done this time?"

" Don't try to act innocent," said Ainun who could feel her voice increase with anger.

" Don't you raise your voice with me Ainun."

" Don't you forget that you are in my territory right now, and I have every right to scream."

Hemant got up from his chair,

" Sit back down if you don't want a commotion made." Commanded Ainun.

Hemant obeyed.

" We both know why you are here, your bank accounts have shown an increase of about 2 billion rupees, and it can't be a coincidence that the same amount is missing from the company's accounts."

" I did no such thing and you can't prove it."

" You want a bet on that? You left a wide enough trail of me to follow and you think the police won't be able to follow it?"

" Ok, I have taken the 2 billion dollars, now dear will you prove that for me?"

" Bulls eyes!!" Screamed both the brothers together.

" I don't have to, you just did. You said it your self that you have taken it."

" So?"

" So either you pay that money back or …"

" Or what?"

" Here is an arrest warrant with your name on it, I have given you a warning from the companies side and you have 24 hours to let me know of your decision."

" You are no one to boss me around, you're just like your sister."

" You have no rights to talk about her." Ainun's voice was now as high as it could go.

" Don't I?"

Ainun stood up and so did Hemant.

" No you don't."

" Says how? Its because of you that she…"

Thud.

She slapped him right across the face, hard.

" You have no right to say anything about her. Get out of here this instance and I want the money by tomorrow, or I have double the reason to take you to court."

" Lets see you try."

" You know me well enough to not challenge me, now get the hell out of here."

" You'll pay for that, you filthy little…"

Another thud, another slap.

" I said out."

This time Hemant obeyed.

He left Ainun's cabin and along with him few private detectives got busy.

" What was all that about bro?"

" I have no idea."

" It seems Ainun and Hemant have known each other for long,"

" Did you know that Ainun had a sister?" Aman asked.

" No, now that you mention it, I have never seen or heard of her."

" God knows what's hidden in that girl's heart. Let's find out."

As soon as Ainun's cabin was deserted, Aman and Karan entered.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
Hmm....Nice part !!
Who was that guy??
Is he responsible for doing sumthing to her face?
Is he her sister's husband? Did he kill her sister?
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow very nice part..................aman n karan have gone into the detective business.....................so hemant n ainun know each other n their terms or not so good..................think aman will come to know abt ainun much closer......cont soon dear.............
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hmm nice part. Aman came up wid a gud plan. And this also helped to knw a lil more abt Ainun. Hope Aman n Karan find out soon wats actually going on.

Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
Nice update..
Aman is still looking for a chance or excuse to see ainun's face...but it looks like he will have to wait..
Aman's mom tries to tease him about him and ainun going out for a ride..
Aman is surprised to see that ainun had taken him to see ruins...but this helps him understand ainun better.Even ainun is surprised about how well aman has described her feelings and thoughts.It is nice to see a freindship develop between them.
Aman is happy that Karan has accepted ainun as his to-be-bhabi....and aman is willing to take all help that karan can give.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey faizu gr88 part n completely mysterious!! loved it completely....so much mystery behind this part n its left many questions unanswered....i'm intrigued 2 knw bout hemant and ainun...hw do they knw each other...from there talks it seems like somethign 2 do with ainuns sister...but i wonder wot the stroy is behind that....i hope aman finds out soon...anyways do update soon...luv summi xxx

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