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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 6

The night was calm that brought with it peaceful dreams and relaxation.

The sun's rays through the windows decided to wake Aman up before he actually intended to.

As the rays fell on Aman's face he was brought back to reality after long hours of dreaming and seeing Ainun, with her concealed face in them.

The moment he opened his eyes, Aman expected like all other fellow dreamers in love to see Ainun's face, but was nearly given a cardiac arrest with what he saw.

" I'm sure your happy." Said Karan, his face inches away from Aman's

" Not with you right in front of me and scaring the living day light out of me!!" Aman said as he pulled himself up, because seeing Karan that close to him, he fell back on his pillow.

" Don't lie bro, what would it have done to cover up for me yesterday?"

" Nothing actually, but I wanted you to learn your lesson. And Karan have you?"

" No!! I'm just angry you did not cover up for me."

" You know Karan, I've been covering up for you all these years, its time now that u either learn to cover up your own self or don't do anything that needs covering up. And my advice go with the second." Aman said as he rubbed his eyes, to drive away the sleep in them.

" Hey Karan, by the way what's the time?"

" Its 5."

Aman's eyes opened wide as his brain interpreted Karan's words

Aman got up and said, " Get out, get out of my room, and don't you dare step back inside until 8.I'm not getting up until 7 and Karan please get some sleep and allow me to sleep for the next two hours IN PEACE".

" Fine bro, I'm going, but listen, wait for me today, because of you, I'll be working with you at office today."

" There goes an entire day filled with work down the drain."

" You said something?"

" Did you hear anything?"

" No."

" Then I did not say anything and now leave."

" Fine, good night bro." Karan said as he left, and as a huge smile of satisfaction crept up on his face, the satisfaction of waking his brother from sleep.

" Good ten minutes of my sleep, ruined!" Aman said to himself as he tried to get back to sleep, in which he succeeded in no time.

Then when his alarm rang, he woke up fresh and dynamic like never before, showered, and before no time he was getting down for breakfast.

" Hi bro, your on time for breakfast."

" I am very hungry, come lets eat."

" No let mom and dad come, I want all of us to eat together."

" Why is it something important?"

" Yeah, the breakfast, Mr. Aman Kapoor that you will be tasting shortly, was prepared by me." Karan said, his voice filled with pride. " My ' punishment' from yesterday."

" I think I'll skip breakfast today."

" Why?"

" Karan I want to get to work, not to the hospital, where is exactly where I will be going, if I eat what you have made."

" Shut up and eat your breakfast bro." Karan said with a smile that said, ' now you know whose punishment it is.'

Soon their parents were down and served.

They had aloo ke parathe that morning.

Aman tasted his and said, " Mom, has the prices for potatoes gone up?"

" No, but why do you ask Aman?"

" I don't find any aloo in my aloo ka paratha." Aman said with his eyebrow raised, and his eyes pointing straight at Karan.

Karan almost spat out the juice he was drinking.

" I knew I was forgetting something, thanks bro, from now on I'll remember to be sure that there is aloo in the parathas."

The entire family started laughing, and their breakfast ended with a happy note.

Aman and Karan left together in Aman's car towards work.

" Karan do tell me where were you yesterday?" Aman asked on their way.

" Sorry bro, no can do. I'll answer this question when time comes."

" Are you sure? You might need my help if you get into trouble, which I am sure you will."

" Chill brother, there's no trouble and there won't be."

So the rest of the way the brothers spoke to each other about things they always liked, like sports, the government, movies and so on.

Once they reached their work place, Aman parked the car and Karan went right on inside.

Aman showed Karan his room and what work he will be doing and telling him that he will have to do it with interest and has to do it correctly.

After giving all the instructions, Aman went to his own room to look after some interviews.

An hour has passed and no candidate had been selected.

Then it was the last candidate,

" May I come in sir?"

" Sure."

Aman was busy with his laptop that he did not look up at the candidate.

" Sir, my name is Ainun Hasna."

Aman's fingers that were moving rapidly over the keyboard stopped instantaneously and looked up at the girl right in front of her.

As usual her face was covered, she had used her duppata for the job, and she was dressed in a very pleasant color of black.

Hey eyes were just as lovely as ever, and they were the center of magnetism.

" Yes Ms.Ainun, tell me more about yourself." Aman went on in a very professional voice, which he always used.

" Sir, these are my files and I'll give more info on myself once you have gone through them."

Aman took the file from her and went through it page by page.

Aman looked into Ainun's eyes before he started reading the file, and in them he could see genuineness, honesty, and the determination to do, not a good, but a great job.

Ainun, he discovered is a CA and has got the best of experiences from a lot of different but high rated companies.

" I've gone through your file, and no additional information would be required, but do tell me what are your expectations about the salary."

Aman and Ainun continued discussing the salary and the amount of it, and to Aman's surprise, Ainun was not in a mind set to demand for more, on the contrary it was Aman that tried to boost her salary, because he knew she deserved more than he demanded.

" Its all set Ms.Ainun, you can start working here from tomorrow."

" Thank you sir." Said Ainun as she got up to leave.

Aman looked into her eyes and he saw approval in them, and he deduced it that he had made an impression on her.

" Mission accomplished." Thought Aman.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. I just Aman n karan's scenes. Aman's waking up scene was really funny. And I can completely understand how it feels to be woken up so early widout any valid reason......lol. And the breakfast scene was rocking. I was laughing like hell when read dat Aloo ka Paratha has got no Aloo in it. Thats the funniest thing ever.

And finally, Ainun is at Aman's office. N our hero thinks he has made a gud impression. Well lets c wat happens. W8ing to knw more abt Ainun as she is quite mysterious. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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faizu that was very interesting..now the hero heroine working together.. i know this surely is something to watch out for.. very well written... keep up the good work going...👏 please do continue soon..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey dear that was really a very wonderful part.................... i just loved every scene every word............. the morning karan aman scene was the best highlight................ oh my god i couldnt stop laughing.................... they were the best.................. awesome................... and the breakfast scene too mind blowing.......... finally ainun has joined aman's company............. oh how i really wish to see her full face................. cont soon dear............ great part..................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW...AMAZING...FANTASTIC update.
Poor Aman...i can understand how irritated one would feel to be woken up at 5 in the morning by ones younger brother to listen to his complaints. but the scene was very funny.
But the best scene was the one at the breakfast table...where karan realises that he had forgotten to add aloo to his aloo-parathas. It was just to funny.
So Ainun has joined Aman's office and he can see that she is worthy of the work that has been assigned to her. He is happy that things have worked out this well. Now our hero will not have to look for reasons to pass by Ainun house to catch a glimpse of her.
Please continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome fic loved it. cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: nm16

awesome fic loved it. cont soon

thank u soo much.

Originally posted by: togepe30

gud work......nice part !

thanks di

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

WOW...AMAZING...FANTASTIC update.

Poor Aman...i can understand how irritated one would feel to be woken up at 5 in the morning by ones younger brother to listen to his complaints. but the scene was very funny.
But the best scene was the one at the breakfast table...where karan realises that he had forgotten to add aloo to his aloo-parathas. It was just to funny.
So Ainun has joined Aman's office and he can see that she is worthy of the work that has been assigned to her. He is happy that things have worked out this well. Now our hero will not have to look for reasons to pass by Ainun house to catch a glimpse of her.
Please continue soon.

thank u sooo mcuh, and i'm over joyed that ur enjoying this.

Originally posted by: spvd

hey dear that was really a very wonderful part.................... i just loved every scene every word............. the morning karan aman scene was the best highlight................ oh my god i couldnt stop laughing.................... they were the best.................. awesome................... and the breakfast scene too mind blowing.......... finally ainun has joined aman's company............. oh how i really wish to see her full face................. cont soon dear............ great part..................

i'm glad that u like my writing.. if i'm making you laugh now, maybe there is a catch later on???!!😆 thank u for likeing it soo much.

Originally posted by: sun_423

faizu that was very interesting..now the hero heroine working together.. i know this surely is something to watch out for.. very well written... keep up the good work going...👏 please do continue soon..😊

thank u soo much di... sure ur right this is something to watch out for, but not for long 😉

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part. I just Aman n karan's scenes. Aman's waking up scene was really funny. And I can completely understand how it feels to be woken up so early widout any valid reason......lol. And the breakfast scene was rocking. I was laughing like hell when read dat Aloo ka Paratha has got no Aloo in it. Thats the funniest thing ever.

And finally, Ainun is at Aman's office. N our hero thinks he has made a gud impression. Well lets c wat happens. W8ing to knw more abt Ainun as she is quite mysterious. Pls continue soon.

thank you soo much for liking it and i am even more happy that ur enjoying it.
Edited by Arshie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 7

" Wait a minute Ainun," Said Aman, " I have not seen your face and neither has anyone else in this office so how do we know that its you and not someone else trying to take your place?" Asked Aman, trying his good fortune to see Ainun's face, for him, Ainun could be effortlessly recognized by her eyes.

" You have not seen my face sir, and I think I will like it to remain that way, I had this trouble previously and the way to solve it is that I'll sign my name right now in your office and use the same sign when I enter every morning." She said in an I-KNEW-YOU-WOULD ASK ME THIS- kind of a tone.

" That seems to be a good idea." Said Aman, his efforts going down the drain.

" So I'll sign something and you can hand that over to the person up front so he can check it everyday."

Ainun signed a piece of paper and as she said it was handed to the person in the reception and Aman went along with Ainun to show her, the cabin that she would be occupying.

Ainun's cabin was not very close to Aman's, but not very far either.

Aman knew how to keep his personal and professional lives spaced out.

A few hours later Aman decided that he should take a look on Karan, just to see how things are going.

On his way to Karan's cabin, Aman had to pass Ainun's, and there he could she her fast at work, and a few people surrounding her, and answering her questions as she asks them.

" Not bad, without a formal introduction, she has got friendly with other people, it will be a pleasure to have her around." Aman said to himself as he entered Ainun's cabin.

" Everything all right here?" He asked as he entered.

" Yes sir, I was just getting to know the employees here and also the business you run."

" You're a part of it now, and you can correct your self by saying 'our' business, from today you are an equal part of the profits and losses." He said.

" Yes sir."

" Ainun if you can step out I'll give a formal introduction so it will be easy for you and the others."

So she does come out and Aman introduces her to all the employees and they seem happy to meet her, well at least a few of them.

Aman further instructs them to co-operate with her and give her all due respect, (for respect is a word that none of the employees have in their dictionary). After that Ainun heads back to her cabin and Aman continues towards Karan's.

" What are you doing?" Aman asks Karan as he takes a seat opposite to him.

" Nothing much bro, just going through the files that we have on our US project, I feel that some improvements can be made."

" That's good, I'm happy you are taking interest now."

" Interest and me? Bro, I had no better work to do and this was the only file that I could find interesting."

" Well, continue to read that file and give me your ideas later. And listen, we have a new CA, anything related to accounts will be approved first by her and then by me, keep that in mind."

" Yeah bro, don't worry and who is the new girl?"

Aman told Karan about Ainun and he could see a wicked smile crawl up on his face.

" Isn't she the same girl you saw in that marriage?"

" Yeah."

" So now I know the reason why she has been hired."

" No you don't." Said Aman, " she has all the qualities a good CA should have and she has the best of experiences."

" Say what you want bro, but I think I know why."

" I can't help you there Karan" said Aman trying to control his smile and left Karan's cabin.

THE NEXT DAY:

Aman left home with Karan and they reached their office a little late because of the traffic.

But when they entered, they saw that the office was scarcely occupied, even though the brothers were a little late, and one person was busy with work, Ainun.

She was hard at work and was really giving her full attention to what she was doing.

Karan and Aman parted ways, and headed towards their respective place of work.

LATER THAT DAY:

" May I come in sir?" Asked Ainun as the sound of her knock died down.

" Yes." Said Aman.

" Sir, I've been given quite a few files about the companies expenses and income," she said as she walked advanced forward, " are there any more with you?"

" Let me check."

Aman started digging around his desk, which was a huge mess. Aman could not believe that he had such a mess and Ainun did not want to wait any longer.

She came forward, stacked up all the files at one place, the books the other, and everything seemed to have a place on Aman's desk.

" Now sir, do you have any more." Ainun asked waiting for a reply, leaving Aman thunderstruck.

" No, I don't think I do, and thanks a lot for the tiding up, I really needed that." Aman said smiling

Ainun's eyes narrowed, like how our eyes do when we smile, and Aman took it that she was smiling as well.

" Why did you ask me if I had more files Ainun?"

" The amounts just don't tally, there should have been a lot more than what seems to be here." She said, her voice ringing with nervousness.

" What do you mean?"

" I'm not going to say anything at this moment, but after I re-check what I have done, you will have your answer tomorrow."

" Why do you seem so worried?"

" You will too when you hear what I have to say, but I need a day's time for that."

" Sure."

" Thank you sir." Ainun said as she turned around and left the cabin.

" She sure is hard working, and I hope she has good news for the company not bad."

Aman started home along with Karan at the end of a very hard day.

Ainun had already left, if she was early to work, she was early to leave as well. She knew what she was doing. She was well within the rules of the organization so no one could question her about her actions.

Dinner was served and the topic discussed today was the fact that Karan had actually paid attention in work, and done the company some profit.

" I'm proud of you son." Said their father to Karan.

"

Hey what about me?" Asked Aman, pulling his brother's leg, " I am the cause he even started working."

" And I am even more proud of you."

And thus the dinner ended with both the brothers' allowing no opportunities of fight back slip.

Tired from a hard day at work, Aman was heading towards bed.

" Aman." Called out his mother.

" Yes mom."

" There has been an invitation from our neighbor, we are invited to lunch with them tomorrow."

"Mom, but I have work and I can't take a day off."

" Don't take a day off, just take half-a-day off."

" Mom, that still is not possible."

" You will bring your brother and that girl, what's her name, yeah Ainun, along with you tomorrow."

" Karan ok, but why Ainun?" Aman asked suddenly sensing all his tiredness vaporize.

" Its at her house that we have the invitation from."

" Hmm, in that case fine I'll be here, but at what time?"

" Lets say around 12:30- 1."

" Right mom, I'll be here."

" That's good and inform Karan about it as well."

Aman headed towards his room, and kicking Karan out of his head, he brought out his permanent resident.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice part.................... aman and ainun convo going better and this karan is too funny........... the reply he gave aman that he didnt find anyother work more interesting was too awesome.................it always makes me to laugh whenever these 2 brothers converse.............. so lunch can say lunch date at ainun's place........ hmm.. something should happen..........atleast aman gets to see her face and v too.......😉...... cont soon dear.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part. Firstly I was kinda tensed how Aman was answered by Ainun regarding the recognising problem. I thought if she has caught him or not. But then I guess everything went really well. Karan is a really sweet bro n I always like Aman's family convo while eating 4 example this tym the "Proud" thing.

well, Aman has got lunch invitation at Ainun's home. thats a really gud thing. I think this can help him to knw more abt her.

Anyways, pls continue soon.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago

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