Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29) - Page 8

d intro was captivating enough but part 1 made sure that i'll be hooked up to ur new fic as well.. 😳 m sure it'll get more interesting with each part.. must say looks very different from two fics by u i've been reading earlier.. and that makes it nonetheless more fascinating.. 😃
btw, m slightly confused with one fact, how Riddhima Gupta is sister to Rahul Grewal? or r they cousines? perhaps i missed something and should read it with more leisure..!!😕 but anyway great fic.. wud be looking forward to latter parts..😃

SPIDY...check out my commento! nitey!

reserved for nutterz :)





@pebbz.. yes terribly late you are, and your excuses, the ones you justify without mentioning stand good for the latter part of the delay, it could have been much more prompt to never get there hmph! and the part :D nij and you talk alike in commenting at least... and well thats the whole challenge :D we'll see how far abhi nikki get into better books... and when you say you like rahul better, is that rahul versus abhi here or rahul verses abhi on the show???

n the being in LITTLE love :D zia, you need to be spanked and hung upside down, till your brain finally comes home :D muahzzz!!... nij had a time asigning me a new form of that word :D

@hinu.... i suddenly realized, you guys can be my 'teen deviyaan' for the fics... nij would be the merchant fem of course... and zia would be SK :D:D:D but you cant be juhi... so you can pick between malaika and prabhudeva :D the bit about the part coming easy... actually, very strangely, it isnt... i guess mostly because this isnt my usual style of writing, wherein i blend scenes into a fic... thats what i have in my mind, a whole array of scenes and they have to become one single fic... its very random, and going into so much dialogue instead of playing safe with description :D trust me, this really isnt my forte :D but its still fun, i like doing this one :) lets see... how far and where... RM... were a very spontaneous decision, i had nothing in mind, planned for them two :D.. yet that is, and they popped in way too soon :)

@nij... yeh... hinu says it... you are missy, my fav critic :) for the good essays too, but much more for the ones either i dont get or never get aptly :) and then, trust you to point 'abhi' vs 'abimanyu' :D hahahah... yeh i reckon it wasnt the obvious to point out :D and then.. you serious about seeing RM come??? i'll be freaking honest, i did not... NOT IN THE LEAST... :D it just happened when i sat to write the girls scene... but it seemed best to not have to deal with so many just interracted to fall in love couples :D and the rest, will just tumble into parts along the way... dont ask what or why not cause i want you to read but this time i dont know :D btw, the colors in he comment :D and the very ingenious kissy from my missy ... *smookkzz* back :D

hey NJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey nj..gr8 part..as i said u have a classy way of writing..😉..keep it up..! ..n i seriously think ure a real writer..! ..n yeah hnx 4 d LONG part..!

you had me in splits....encore plz and soooon!!

oki plz cont soon realy interstin. cant wait to read the next part plz pm if u dont mind thanx xx

Updated my khaali box on page 8 (Lolzz).... Have a look NJ!!... ;))


Muahhhh,
Sneha

Spectacular FF, NJ! 👍🏼

You've got me hooked...I usually don't comment on fanfics, but I simply had to comment on this one! The concept is great, and I really like the way you've conveyed the relationship between the guys. [To be completely honest, I love way you've portrayed Atul in particular...He's such a cool guy - playing on his cell phone while the M-V-M discussion was happening, LOL!]

Riddhima's entry was fabulous...Loved it! Hats off to Ridz and Nikki for that awesome act! 👏 I can't wait to see how their Romeo and Juliet act will help them again (then again, they're not going to get past Malik and Modi, are they?)

PS - I'm not a huge AR fan...I prefer the "satellites" (especially Atul-Anjali, as if that isn't obvious enough, LOL!). But...I'd be very very foolish not to read this story! I really hope you won't stop showing the satellites (and their love stories, perhaps?) when the AR romance starts brewing...*prays*