Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
awesome part! please continue soon!

Avanti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Reserved :)

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🤣 ridzi is jus too much😆 lol poor abhi!!!😆 nd aaahhh engineering!! 'fuchha'! sir! ragging!! leg pulling! fests! dj nyts!! wowwwwww...m so so so luving it naseem....nd m so lvin how u r building up!! d friendships! d attraction!! d characters!!👏 nd yo rahul a DJ...woww kuull!!! god i so wish nw my colg 2 reopen asap!! missing all d fun sudnly more dan i already ws!!!

thnx for d pm :) cont soon :)

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Edited by pal_279 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah NJ🤗 its mind blwoing one⭐️superb😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"A Just Friend says..hi,..hello, ..bye, and walks away.
A Best friend always stop by your side & asks how r u doing ??

A Just Friend has never seen you cry.
A Best friend has shoulders soggy from your tears.

A Just Friend thinks the friendship is over, when you have an argument.
A Best friend knows that it's not a friendship, until after you've had a fight.

A Just Friend hates it when you call, after he has gone to bed.
A Best friend asks you . why you took so long to call.

A Just Friend, when visiting, acts like a guest.
A Best friend opens your refrigerator and helps himself.

A Just Friend jealous about your romantic history.
A Best friend wonders of your love story.....

A Just Friend expects you to be always there for any help.
A Best friend is always there, wherever you require any help."

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With Luv: ~
Nidha🤗
Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
I swear! I just logged into the FF just now :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65

Hey nj!!!!!!

Thanks 4 d pm! Really sweet of u. will definitely read the other two as well and get back with my comments. Btw I was a science student till 12th but shifted to economics in college.

Coming to this fic, m already in love with it!

I see what u mean when u say that this is one of ur better ones. I could see the difference in the way the story unfolds and the characters present themselves. The intro was amazing! It transported me to the magical world of theatre and I could almost imagine myself as an audience. Beautiful description of the ambience of a theatre!

The whole ANR scene had me in splits!🤣🤣

Have read that bit quite a few times now but just can't seem 2 control my laughter each time.

Quite liked the interaction b/w AAAS and AAMN, reminded me of my fun filled clg days! Eagerly awaiting next part!😊

Love

Smriti

p.s. can u plz add me 2 ur pm list hun. Thanks!😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay u updated!!! :D
ohh gosh u have no idea how stocked i am after reading the first part nj! im sooo excited for this ff! just after one part im sold...i love it already :D
this is so natural and easy...i feel like im reading my own life as a uni student...can really relate to it. its carefree and mast...just hanging out with your closest buddies, going to events, partying, flirting, having fun! these are the best days of life!!!
the characters are sooo great...their individual characters as well as the way they bond with each other. i paticularly love the close friendships! im really looking forward to getting to know each character in more depth!
hahaha the romeo/sir scene was awesome! what a way to start nj, really great! this is going to be the basis of how the girls meet the guys! like what a first encounter hahah i was in splits! cant get over how cool this is!
riddhimas entry was something else...cant beat that entry! and now armaan meeting her, knowing her as the "gay romeo" lol this should be interesting! i cant wait!!!!!!
as u can tell im pretty excited, i enjoyed this part so much, had a lot of fun reading it actually! really looking forward to the next one...lets see if the "girls" make it into the club on their own, or will armaan get himself and abhi their dates ;)
continue sooon nj please!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow honey as always amazing update..luvd it.. continue soon..cant wait 2 read more..
thanx fr PM..
luv ya...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG not fair I never got a chance to comment on the intro darn! Well will do so with this review. Will be back during my lunch break Nij!!
Ok back here is my random bantering about the part

Ah, Naseem what can I say…I absolutely loved it!!!! This is a complete contrast to Unleashing; which according to me was a mature and subtle love story with shades of grey. I loved the intro though I was slightly confused (confusion is gone now) re: the Romeo and Juliet sequence. I was surprised to now see Rahul with the gang of boys but now that question is answered too!

Thanks for the explanation of the events and settings, trust me I was so very lost. The max I studied at an Indian school was through grade 2nd and trust me 15 years ago even that was a different scenario.

The title hasn't clicked with me yet but I am sure you will work your magic and I will soon come to understand the reasoning behind it.

Coming to part one it was hilarious!!!!!! The Abhi-Ridz-Nikki scenario had me in splits. I could so picture everything, poor Abhi but honestly he deserved it hence I offer no sympathy!

I am beginning to see the couples that will eventually form but what about poor Sumit? Will he be a loner or will he play Riddhima's admirer? I know already jumping ahead of myself but seriously can you blame me? Curiosity always gets the best of me.

Nj I am actually jealous of you and your chars my college/uni life is so boring L I envy those who actually enjoy their Uni/college years. Unfortunately I might never be able to do that, but I still have my hopes on Law School! I am hoping to move at least out of the city and attend school fulltime! My best bud is in Med school down in the Caribbean and I can't tell you how jealous I become when she send random pictures. I felt the same stab of jealousy when I read the part about the gang heading to RDX.

Colleges/Unis in India are always fun if I stand corrected it's like school that you attend fulltime unlike the US when you have classes accommodating to your needs of work and family. There are pros and cons to everything eh?

Anyways coming back to the part, it was just brill I am so excited about this one; I seriously am. Can't wait to read more and see how you unravel everything.

Good to see you back NJ and as always love ya!

Sim

Edited by simran1285 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
hey nj,
lovely part.
riddhima as romeo. lolz. i totally cracked up at his, errm her liners. lol
loved the bond shared by both the groups.
pls. cont soon. eager to read abput armaan and his date.
and, as usual, pls pm me\]
sakshi
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
@ jessica... glad you liked it hun!!

@sunaina... you will be surprised but the marauders connection occurred to me after the scene was done... i looked back at it and wondered how it had become unintentionally so... :D and yes, i have been as much a fan of them... i always said, after her 5th book specially, even after the 3rd but very persistently after the 5th, that she ought to do one book as a prologue work, covering that particular generation! i still think it would be a seller!! lolzzz coming back to the fic though, i dont have a specific mind to take it like that, its... like i said, alot of what i saw or knew in my own undergrad and you wont be surprised that we did, at least i did, name some of my closest buddies, guys :D. after rowling's chars!!! :D oh well... no ... wont be taking it quite there, mostly one cause, sumit is still... erm.... :D and between abhi and armaan i would never know who's potter and who's black!... :D glad you liked the part :) and the fun, AND trouble, has only just begun!

@aru ... :) whenever the dilemma subsides, ill wait for you to show up!

@ RT di... i'm glad you think so! its not my exact intention, creating the stark difference i mean... just... happened!

@KASH_rocks, @naini893... thanks a bunch! glad you enjoyed!


@ nutterz... and im the one always delaying :S with one exception this time, she who's usually very on time and the only one, and has a valid reason, you both are no better than me :D

@aria, @sneha... will be waiting!

@prasanthi... yayyy! i'm glad something in an attempt of humor actually came out funny, i was telling hinu, i read it so many times for everytime i got back to doing the part, that after a while i was pretty just whatever kinds about it!!... will update asap!

@suvarna... haha! yeh... glad you think so! i ceased to find the humor after like a few re reads while doing the part!

@mar-, @avanti... thanks a bunch! glad you both liked it!

@palnika... *smiling wide* ... im going to keep lookin forward to your comments hun! ... delhi better keep you glued!

@ nidha... thanks dear, and those are some cute quotes!

@natz... i think i make a record with how many times the reserves on my threads exceed the comments :D kidding, i know what you're busy with, and this is also to remind you 24 hours are coming to an end :D

@smriti.. welcome dear! that was very prompt! glad to have you here, and yeh, i think ive grown with the very fond readers giving me a constant feedback... its been the up kick!
Edited by spln - 16 years ago

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