Adolescence of Love - Chap15/Pg136 (11/29)

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Lavender21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Hey. Ok where do i start. It waz awesome. LOved it completley. Now u have to update really quick plzzzz. Thnks for the PM hun!!!!!

Edited by jessica18 - 16 years ago

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Sunaina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

~reserved~

yayyyyyyyyy u updated!!!

*edited*

well..nj..a much awaited part and it was just awesome, superb,fantastic and much much more...

abhi coming up with that senior prank with juliet aka nikita..hmm..it was real fab..

and riddhima--the perfect romeo...omg..girl..abhi's revulsion at thinking that the guy was gay and riddhima coming up with a perfect-timed blush and coy-look...awesome girl...i was giggling uncontollably after that...

totally hilarious...and i like atul...cant pin-point a reason but he really seems a nice guy...

and the guys...loved the bonding between armaan and abhi...and armaan teasing abhi by quoting romeo and juliet lines...hehehe...and atul coming up with answers to the questions...omg..loved the foursome..

arman and abhi are a riot..them coming up the idea of dessert and all for spending the money...gosh..

the description of the foursome was awesome..actually they remind me soo much of sirius black, james potter, remus lupin and peter pettigrew...being a fan of the marauders couldnt help but notice the similiarities in the description...abhi and armaan the perfect sirius and james..atul the remus and sumit the peter of the gang..

the discussion between the girls abt the prank played by ridzie and abt abhi and atul as like really really good...and then riddhima's thoughts abt rahul and muskaan was sooo soo fab...well-penned... hmmm..love is in the air..oooohhh..um soo excited...

riddhima staring at 'that guy' and pointing out his features with soo much detail...and well um sooo guessing it armaan..wow..girl...awesome..the convo between abhi and armaan in the very end has made it even more interesting...

an brilliantly penned part once again...and i soooo very enjoyed reading it...

thanks a ton for the pm :))

awaiting the next part eagerly :D

Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago

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aravi

@aravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

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karan n u took me by surprize saath saath mein :) aahha rendezvous hmm i knew about pulse.... that for the med gang n fuchas i presume a mix of frshers n bacchas :D will cum bck soon

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DMG fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Nj,

Every FFof yours is something new.....with fresh settings and amazing character sketch. while reading you can imagine the whole scene as if happening in front of your eyes. Amazing!

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KASH_rocks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

that was awesome .......couldnt stop laughing my head out at what ridz did it was gr8 waiting for more fun......

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Sneha Desai

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

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Edit: Okieee firstyy, well I know umm sorta late but seriously was caught up with much stuff around for school, got three project submissions for Monday, and thought I'd comment after, but then I decided if I wouldn't today, then you'll finish updating the second part and I'll never comment....🥱

Again, I won't say something u know already obviously, but just for the beautiful way to put it: Aweeeesommmeee part!!... I knew from the intro itself that I'll be liking the story, but again, I guess sometimes its just the way you weave it all up... I lovee the way Armaan always had the all-great hero role of finding answers to each question, or solutions to each problem... The way you put up part by part of his character, his looks, his attitude.... Mind blowing!!....👏

Then, Riddhima, this wasn't something I expected to be truthful!!... The mischevious, daring waali Riddhima, something we've been missing for quite some time, in FFs in general, as well as on TV... Somehow the Riddhima we want to be opposite Armaan, not just in small nok jhoks but in equally embarassing public jokes as well... I just love that part of her... And I know she'll evolve and become more refined throughout the story, but just one request, don't kill that part in her... Its too enthralling to read, but far more exciting to see it all happening in the scenes of our mind.... 😆

This brings me to why I say I can't wait for their interaction in the next part.... And you'd better surprise us aagain!! Hahahaha.... The two of them together could rip apart emotions in one scene solely, and that's what am waiting for!!... 😳

About the rest, I love Abhi-Armaan together too... That dosti that we've seen growing btw Rahul and Armaan till now... Lets see how you put it up btw Armaan-Abhi this time round.... I know Rahul's not there yet, but he's bound to come for Muski right?? So lets see how that happens too... Amm waiting impatiently for the other couples's track too, though I know u'd be focussing mainly on AR or AN in the near future....Not that I am complaining....😆

With this, I won't get tooo long again!!... In short wordss.... Loved it!! I wannnnttt the next one fast fast fast now!!!.... 😉

Muahhhhhh
Sneha 😛

PS.... Thanks for clearing the misconceptions and confusions I had earlier on.... Got it all right in this update!!... 😆

Edited by sneha0601 - 16 years ago

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

wow.well worth the wait.and the nikki-ridzi act was awesome,were do u come up with such ideas.plz update soon this time.

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

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huh! me back to comment.

Romeo-Juliet part was the best of all. cld actually visualise the whole scene.. there you go again making the lead girl strong person. the awesome part here again is the description about the four guys and their bonding. so both the guys got their dates.. eagerly waiting to see all of them facing each other. thanks for the PM and continue soon.

Edited by Prasanthi - 16 years ago