I've read your story and I'm halfway through.
I need time to process the whole thing...so the space is reserved for now and once i'm done musing I will definitely comment :)
xoxo
Aanya
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To say that I'm an ardent fan of your writing, would be an understatement! I absolutely love the way you write, :)
Somehow, when I read your FF my mind sort of calms down? I don't know how to put it right. It's like, before I read the update, a thousand thoughts are buzzing in my head but once I read it they settle into a steady flow, something that makes me feel relatively at peace. Also, the questions you tackle in each update and the reasoning that you provide in their talks is delightful to read. No, seriously, I feel like I know 10 times more about the world than I did before :) I agree with Riddhima's point of view in most things but I'm nothing like her in real life. But I admire the Riddhima in your FF. She's completely okay with herself. I like that! I like it how her mind brings up questions that shake her views on the world but then she doesn't change her view, she just talks to Armaan and gains a better perspective on the other aspects of the question. I don't think she's emotionally distant though...she just has a different way of going abut things!
I also like Armaan :) This is by far the most unique portrayal of Armaan that I've seen and it's also one of my favorites :) I don't completely get him at times, but he's an engaging character nonetheless.
I love how you went about the progress in their relationship. It was natural and easy going and there aren't too many romantic nuances in your FF but still the relationship and bond that they share with each other is quite obvious. In the last two updates I think we saw more of them thinking of each other as a companion or as an intellectual soulmate. Seriously, I adore the way you write! :)
I can't wait for the Epilogue. Keep writing :)
xoxo
Aanya
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MY AR FF: Love Is.. - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1611044
MY AR MINI: Heartbeat - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1640957
MY AR OS - Ours - www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1686671
Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago