MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: dmg_fanatic

IMPORTANT NOTE:-

HEYY GUYS I AM VERY VERY SORRY
I WONT BE ABLE TO UPDATE REGULARLY NOW SINCE MY CLASSES HAVE STARTED BUT I WILL DEFINITELY UPDATE ONCE A WEEK AND I PROMISE TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE AND AS MANY PARTS POSSIBLE BUT A PROMISE OF JUST ONE PART A WEEK
DMG_FANATIC
KAVYA

hey kavya itz compltly ok.😉bt plzz try 2 make da part a bit longer as u ll b upda8ng once a week.
-luv anu😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72
Its alright Kavya... We completely understand and yah.. will wait for that one part every week.. Keep going dear and All The Best!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
hey kavya
its ok we understand
ur classes come first
good luck in them and don't worry
about the ff we can wait😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
reserved.....will comment soon...:)...give me time to read it k .....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
hey guys i know long time but i am seriously sorry as i had injured my right hand finger and was not able to write at lengths but finally i am updating here goes part 9 and i would update the next part definitely by sunday
THIS IS A SHORT PART BUT THE NEXT ONE WOULD BE LONGER

She is still feeling him all around her

He sends a chill down her spine

She just cant resist him and that is a great problem

She can smelll his cologne even when he is nowhere in sight

She can see him when nobody knows his whereabouts

She can hear him even when he speaks in a mere whisper between crowds of millions

She can feel him when he is not even in close proximity with her

Her whole life is out of her control now, she can do anything for that man even take a step which is wrong and just because it is for him that she will never regret even if she performs something which is not morally right specially for indian girls. She knows she cant resist him. She finds pleasure in his arms. All her tiredness goes away by his mere touch this is a magic no one before has performed on her and today when someone has then she cant be his.

She is now determined to be his and she has to prove to her family members that it is all in him. She wants to win him because she knows that there can no better choice than him.

Once again she thinks of him and his loneliness and feels his pain. She does not want him to break. She wants him to feel loved because that is the only in which he will reciprocate and take out the tons of love inside him.

She picks up her mobile and texts him: "hey I forgot your name can I call you mine and in case you forget mine which I badly hope you can call me yours"

His cell rings and he picks it up to see who sent the text as he was in no mood to reply now but it could be important.

As soon as he sees her name a smile forms on his lips as a reflex action flashing his dimples. This girl can do wonders for him. Her name brought a smile on his face when

He was upset over his life.

His thumb automatically fell on the key which showed the message after reading which he smiled all the more brightly but soon to get a dull face

He surely loved this small gesture of hers but he is not sure whether it is right. He definitely never was the guy who would think seriously oversuch matters but this is what madness in love is called.

More than you care for yourself you wonder whether the other person would not suffer because of it.

He wanted to type a reply but remained without it. He knew she was emotionally weak and she needed him but what if he actually could not fulfill his promise and ridhima has to marry sahil, he did not want to sound pessimistic but then he knew that this is life and in life we need to put forth all the conditions that can come our way so that we do not get a backdrawl anywhere.

"We never get what we want, we never want what we get. We never like what we have, we never have what we like, still we live, still we love, this is life"

HEYY SORRY IF U DONT LIKE IT PLSS PLSS COMMENT
LUV U ALL
KAVYA
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Edited by dmg_fanatic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76
heyy dear,
nice part.
but i am confused the SMS which Ridds has send is Armaan right.
do update when ur hand is good.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
hey loved it
continue soon
pm me if u can
thnx
Love Reshma
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
That was superb Kavya.. liked it alot..
btw how is your hand now.. do take care dear
thanks for the PM and continue whenever its possible
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
it was GREAT hope ar
get together soon loved the line
that ridz had sent to armaan well
can't wait to read more😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
Hey ...i read ur whole FF in one go...thank u for PMing me ....
i lik UR FF...n the best part u upd everyday ...i lik the lil saying u leave at the end...the SMS type....
very nice...i will read part 10 and comment so that soon...
n plz donot say it is boring here and there....
atta gal..keep it up...
Love Steffi

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