MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10

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HEY GUYS
I AM NEW TO IF AND AM AMAZED BY THE PACE THE WRITERS ARE PROGRESSING AT


HATS OFF TO U👏👏👏


WELL GUYS I HAD AN IDEA AT THE BACK OF MY MIND SO JUST THOUGHT TO SHARE IT WITH U😊

GUYS I HAVE NOT WRITTEN A FANFIC BEFORE BUT TRIED TO DO IT THIS TIME


I NEED UR SUPPORT TO CONTINUE


ONE MORE THING THIS WONT BE A CONTINUOUS STORY BUT WOULD BE WRITTEN ON DIFFERENT PLOTS WITH 3-4 PARTS IN EACH


PLS BEAR WITH ME


SHALL I START???//

KAVYA

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EPISODE 1
PART 1 PAGE 1

PART 2 PAGE 2

PART 3 PAGE 2

PART 4 PAGE 3

PART 5 PAGE 5

PART 6 PAGE 5

PART 7 PAGE 7

PART 8 PAGE 8
PART 9 PAGE 9
PART 10 PAGE 11

PART 11 PAGE 13

PART 12 PAGE 15

PART 13 PAGE 25

PART 14 PAGE 26

PART 15 PAGE 32
PART 16 PAGE 36(PM'z WUD BE SENT LATER)

PART 17 PAGE 47(PM'z WUD BE SENT ASAP)

PART 18 PAGE 52(PM'z WUD BE SENT ASAP)
PART 19 PAGE 60
PART 20 PAGE 64,65
EPISODE 2
DREAMS OR REALITY
PART 1 PAGE 76
PROMO 1 PAGE 82
PROMO 2 PAGE 84
PART 2 PAGE 86
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY THIS IS THE FIRST PART

Episode 1- It's all in him

Part 1

Ridhima sat there taking support of her bed with knees folded upto her chest. She held tight onto them just when a tear more beautiful than a pearl rolled down her cheek upto her neck. Anjali caressed the dress ridhima was supposed to wear.

Anjali: mom riddhima kitni sundar lagegi na ye pehenkar.

Padma: meri riddhma to aise hi itni sundar hai ki isse bina pehne hi dulhann se kam nahi lagti

For the first time in the evening her eyes rolled up. She saw the stone studded lehenga. The blue stoned reminded her of the immense love in his eyes. The shine of zardozi resembled the gleam of his face but there was something missing. His dimple, yes it was what gave her assurance that she can win anything in this world. She dressed up andagain attained that position.

She remembered their meeting this afternoon when she could easily spot the pain and fear of losing his love in his eyes. She was amazed at this quality of his eyes that no matter what they always reflected his heart. He explained to her

Armaan- Ridhima vo tumhare papa hain , vo tumse itna pyyar karte hain ki vo kabhi tumhe chot nahi pahunchne denge

Ridhima-armaan anjaane mein hi sahi chot to unhone itni gehri pahunchai hai ki use bharne mein zindagi ka safar lag jayega.

Armaan- but ridhima he loves you

Ridhima-and you, don't you love me armaan

Armaan-ridhima that does not matter,what matters is ki aaj tum apne ko sahil ke naam kar dogi, tum humesha ke liye usi ki ho jaaogi

Ridhima-it matters to me armaan ,ye meri zindagi ka sawaal hai aur tumhe koi hak nahi ki tum meri, apni aur sahil teeno ki zindagi ke saath khelo

He lost it now. He thought he would have a major nervous breakdown.

Armaan- par tumhare papa ko to hak hai na

Ridhima-armaan tum samajhte kyun nahi ki jo aanchal tumne khushiyon ke phool se bhara usme gham ke kaaton ke alava sahil kuch nahi dega. Mera dukh sehen kar paoge tum. Agar kal ko main khush na hui to

Armaan-to ridhima bas itna yaad rakhna ki duniya mein ek aisa insaan bhi hai jo tumhaari khushi ke liye apni jaan tak de de

Ridhima turned not satisfied

She thought to herself: aaj to sirf engagement hai abhi shaadi mein 10 mahine hain. I have to make papa believe ki armaan has all in him to be an ideal son in law, husband, brother in law, son, most of all the best father and what not.

She hoped that only if her dad could have realized the intensity of his love he would have saved 3 lives. As a doctor he has saved many lives but the satisfaction which decision would get to him was unimaginable

He knew how much he loved her but he also knew that shashank would never accept him as a son in law and he did not wat ridhima to lose so many relations for the building up of one and more of all he knew how stubborn and egoistic shashank was. If his self respect is attacked he will not survive. So he thought it was best for him to incline ridhima towards sahil so that she can easily forget him and he himself decided that he will play the brides best man. The secret still disclosed to ridhima was that he had spoken about his transfer after the wedding and also that he would never love again leave alone the question of marrying.

He just wanted her to be happy in order to keep himself haapy. He knew that he would be nothing more than a living dead body after losing her but then her father would surely die of grief.

He knew that somehow his memories would be there to support him but purposely ignored the fact that it would be those memories which will kill him each second.

He knew that there would be photographs of her in his album but he ignored the fact that those photographs might be blurred photographs but those in his heart would be fresh as ever.

He knew that he needed ridhima but believed that he didn't deserve her.

He knew that he was heartbroken but ignored the fact that it could never be mended by anyone but ridhima

He knew that he was doung this for her happiness but ignored the fact that he was unwantingly hurting her

He knew he wanted to see her family happy but overlooked the fact that he was giving them happiness at the cost of his own .

He knew all this and yet ignored it

She knew nothing but wanted to get deep inside it

She wondered that how can one love so purely that love exists not just for the beloved but also the people she loves

She wondered how can one build up a spirit of sacrifice at the cost of not just his own happiness but life

His love for her each second increased,her hatred for him each second decreased

They walked in different directions to be with each other and they walked in the same direction for each other

They were opposite but this was what attracted, they got attracted but the problem was that they were opposite.

This ignorance and wondering lead to the purest relation which formed in them a close bonding of love

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HEY GUYS MY STORY MIGHT HAVE MANY SRK DIALOGUES AS I AM CRAZY ABOUT HIM AND HIS DIALOGUES VENTURE AT THE BACK OF MY MIND AND SOMEHOW TRAVEL THEIR WAY TO MY FINGERS. IT MAY ALSO CONTAIN SMALL ADAPTIONS FROM HIS MOVIE.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY PLS REPLY IF U READ

Edited by dmg_fanatic - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy kavya
But all i want to say that your update was really good
Poor armaan and riddhima
Please do continue soon
and thanks for the pm
Edited by aliyaha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey,
great story...looved it..pls add me to ur pm list...pls continue siooon,
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice concept ....poor souls hope she can convince shahank....plz do pm on ur next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz continue soon its very intersting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Kavya.. I'm Rucha..
awesome start..

-Rucha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nice update do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for ur response
here is the second part
pls reply

Part 2

Ridhima dressed up much more decked than a fairy but the lack of her magnificient smile made her look dull.

She stood in behind of her father who was gazing in another direction.

Shashank: ridhima main bahut khush hun ki tumne apna faisla badla aur meri baat maan li. I am proud to be your father

Ridhima: papa aap se ek baat puchun sach bataiyega

Shashank :haan beta aaj jo puchna hai puchlo mera dil tumhare saamne ek khuli kitab ki tarah rakh doonga

Ridhima :papa kya aap mujhse bhi utna hi pyaar karte hain jitna anjali di se ya phir main sauteli beti hun ye samajhkar mujhpe ehsaan karte hain

Shashank : beta mere dil ke aaine mein jhaank ke dekh ki teri jitni saaf surat aur kisi ki hai hi nahi

Ridhima :papa agar anjali di ko kisi se pyaar ho jaata to aur aapne unki shaadi kahin aur teh ki hoti to kya aap apni ego aur self respect ke baare mein na sochkar unki shaadi usse karate

Shashank :ye kaisa sawaal hain ridhima

Ridhima :papa aap mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakte ..haan ya phir na

Shashank :haan beta main to sirf tum log ko khush dekhna chahata hun uske liye apni self respect khona to bahut choti keemat hai

Ridhima:to papa aap mujhe mere pyaar ke paas jaane se kyun rok rahein hain

Shashank:ridhima tumn samajh kyun nahi rahi ho ki armaan tumhaare liye theek nahi hai

Ridhima: kya main jaan sakti ho ki aapko aisa kyun lagta hai

Shashank: beta he does not deserve you

Ridhima:aap sahi keh rahe hain papa he does not deserve me , he deserves much better

Shashank:jo bhi hai vo ladka tumhaare liye theek nahi hai

Ridhima: papa main jaanti hun ki aap bhi jaante hain ki armaan se acha ladka mujhe kya duniya mein kisi bhi ladki ko mil hi nahi sakta bhale hi teeno lok mein khoj lo

Shashank: agar aisa hi hai to jaake tumse better ladki dhoondh kyun nahi leta

Ridhima: usse ladkiyaon ko dhundhne ki zaroorat nahi padti uske piche to itni ladkiyan hain ki naam likho to zindagi nikal jaaye, ab usme uski kya galti hain ki uska dil mere ko deewano ki tarah chahata hai aur uski isi deewangi pe mera dil bhi aa gaya

Shashank:agar itna hi pyaar karta tha to ladta apne pyaar ke liye,chup chap tumhari shaadi dekhte huye na dekhta

Ridhima:majboor tha apne pyaar ke liye duniya se ladneko tayyar tha par aapse nahi kyunki vo aapko pita maanta hai aur apne se badon se ladna ya unse misbehave karna uske sanskaaron mein nahi hain, hum sab jo soch sakte hain usse kahin behtar hai vo. Vo kya jaane ki jiske chehre mein vo apne papa ko khojta hai vo insaan to uski parchain se bhi nafrat karta hai. Kal tak to armaan bahut acha tha lekin usne sirf ek gunah kar diya-aapki beti ko pyaar karne ka,use palkon par baithane ka, uski wish ko pura karna, uske maange begair hi duniya ko uske kadmon ke neeche rakhne ka, uske ek aansoon par apni ruh tadpaane ka, uske sapno ko is duniya mein sajaane ka, uske parents ko apne parents maan ne ka,uski saari baat maane ka, kaash vo uski aakhiri baat bhi maan leta kaash

Shashank:abhi to tumne kaha ki vo tumhaari saari baat maanta hai to phir kya hua

Ridhima: vo jaankar aap kya karenge

Shashank:mujhe bhi to pata chale ki meri beti ki aisi kaun si choti si wish thi jo vo pura na kar paaya

Ridhima:aap ye hi jaana chahte hain na to suniye aapki is beti ne ek aisi demand ki thi jo aap sehen nahi kar sakta, usne kaha tha ki mujhe bhaga kar le chalo armaan, papa kabhi bhi mujhe tumhara nahi hone denge, to usne sirf apne hothon pe choti si muskaan laate hue kaha ki ridhima bhaaga to parayon se jaata hai apno se bhaag kar kahan jaaogi.

Shashank:ridhima uska bachav karna band karo

Ridhima: aapme sach sunne ki taakat hi nahi hai papa, agar hoti tab aap jhoothe rishte na banwaate

Shashank:sach sunna hai na tumko to suno sanjeevani ek bahut bade financial crisis se guzar raha hai aur usme se sahil ke dad humein nikal rahe hai

Ridhima:matlab main sirf ek business deal ban ke reh gayi hoon, usse jyaada meri koi value nahi hai,dad aise to di badi hain to shaadi bhi pehle unhi ki honi chahiye to aap unki shaadi sahil se kyun nahi kara dete

Shashank:beta kyunki main chahata hun ki tum jyaada khush raho

Ridhima: phir jhooth, vo aapki sagi beti hain isi liye

Shashank: ridhima tum to anjali ko jaanti ho na ki vo kitni ziddi hai vo kabhi meri baat na maanti

Ridhima: to iska matlab yeh hain ki main seedhi hun to meri khushiyon ki bali chadha di jaaye.

Shashank: ridhima enough tum bas yeh samajh lo ki sahil hi tumhaari zindagi hai

Ridhima:papa agar aap ye mujhe pehle kehte to aapke liye to aisi sau kurbaaniyan khushi khushi de deti lekin meri zindagi mere paas ab hai hi nahi.aap hi kehte the na ki main aapki gudiya hun, jab main naaraz hokar kehti thi ki gudiya to katputhli hoti unhe jaise chahe dhaal lo, aap sahi kehte the. Ab is gudiyan ki zindagi uske haath mein kathputhli hai usne jo kaha maine kiya, usne jo chaha maine diya, vo jo kahega main vo karungi. Ye engagement bhi mai uske kehne par kar rahi hun nahi to abtak main vahan hoti jahan aapme se koi mere paas na aa paata, is duniya se bahut bahut doorlekin agar agle dus mahine mein aapne apna aur usne apna faisla nahi badla to phir is katputhli ki dor humesha ke liye toot jayegi, dor to aapke haath mein hogi lekin katputli gir jaayegi aur jitna aap pakadne ki koshish karoge vo utna hi door jaayegi, aur uske baad jahan jaayegi humesha humesha ke liye vahin ke rangon mein lipat jaayegi, ye ridhima aapki nai rahegi balki apni marzi ki ho jaayegi

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