MY INTERPRETATION OF A FAIRYTALE-UPDT-PG 99-3/3/10 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
hey guys here is part 8
i know i made you wait a little longer and you will also feel like beating me up after this short and meaningless part but i felt that since i have not shown atul and anji till now so i should include a part with only AA
here it goes

Part 8

Anjali sat there thinking to herself moving her index finger tip through the entire circumference of the glass kept in front of her and some thoughts entangled her mind so much so that she felt silence all around her and just the spirit of friendship talking to her. She involved herself deep into these thoughts to analyse whether what was done was right and if not then why is it ridhima and armaan who are suffering: dad ye sahi to kar rahe hain na,I mean ridzi loves armaan and armaan is not that bad a guy afterall, infact he is the best dad can find for ridzi and he understands ridzi better than anyone of us. He knows it so damn well. He loves her more than anyone of us does. He can even sacrifice his own life just for her fake smile to reach her eyes. He can feel her when she is not ven near him but in another corner of the place. Dad ko lagta hai that love is just not enough for one to lead a good life, one needs more so how can one make him understand that armaan has it all .infact dad hardly knows ki his so called material things and money matters are just sweet nothings for armaan. He is worth much more than all dad owns . Be it ridzi's wish for the smallest thing on earth or the most expensive thing existing he fulfills them all. It always seems like her wish is his command. He knows when ridzi is unwell or when she has missed sleep for a case study even before we do. He understands her cravings for chocolates and icecreams which she definitely has like no other. He knows that she is one person on this earth who has a lot of girlish moodswings. At one moment she wants to have a chocolate icecream and the other her wish is for something which has mouthburning spices. He is the one to fulfill all her wishes,he knows that she loves icecreams infact she can just hog on them and he also knows her love for fresh flowers, soft toys and chocolates. He feeds her with as many icecreams as she wants and he loads the house with chocolates and fragrant flowers whenever she is feeling sad or sounding down and just leave all this to add more he has the perfect sixth sense which can tell him where, when, what and how of everything concerning ridhima. He spends hours with her on the phone trying to console her sniffs and sobs which usually even iritate me and sometimes disturb dad and then even get a scolding from his seniors for not completing his case study. Even after being on that end of the line he can always make out ridzy's expression and can even guess when I mischeivously attend his call on ridzi's account and try to let out the same sigh which ridzy always lets out when attending his call and that totally turns him on. Is it not love? I mean simply anyone can guess it. And how can ridzi be ever so sacrificing I mean though I haven't confessed to atul yet if dad would have asked me to do similar thing like ridzi I never would have. I mean how can one just live without true love. And I am all the more shocked with armaan's behaviour, I thought him to be a brave man but he is even more sensitive than ridz. How can he be so respectful, selfless and caring to a man who is stealing away his life, hats off to him. I will need to talk to dad about it. And dad he has never acted as coldly, I mean how can he be just so rude about armaan, what's wrong in him, he is nowhere close to perfection instead he is perfect. Such caring feelings over which one can go all crazy, damn chisseled body with the perfectly curved muscles , looks no less than a greek god and sense of humour can leave even the greatest grave of this planet in splits of laughter. He can definitely leave any girl jaw dropped asking for more. Such bright sharp features that he is like every girl's dream, girls don't need to be after him they need to run after him and he is crazily in love with ridzy which I don't know why no one can realize. Anyone can fall for him. Even I would have if I would not come to know about ridzi's relationship with him at the right time.

Here comes our champ, atul

Atul: hey anjali, tum itni udaas kyun lag rahi ho

Anjali:hey atul, comeon have a seat, vo na main kuch pareshaan thi

Atul:anjali kyun kya hua tum jaanti ho na ki mujhe ekdum acha nahi lagta ki tum pareshaan ho

Anjali: I know atul but this is just too serious to be discussed

Atul: I understand anjali, acha anjali main sirf tumhaare liye ek gaana gaun

Anjali was about to refuse but she just couldn't instead she nodded in a yes

Atul: kabhi kabhi anjali zindagi mein yuhin koi apna lagta hai

Kabhi kabhi anjali vo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagya hai

Aise mein koi kaise apne aansuon ko behne se roke

Aur kaise koi soch le every thing's gonna be okay

Anjali: she lightly caressed his cheek with her palm

Anjali: how sweet atul, tum mera kitna khayal rakhta ho, you really are a very good friend, I hope duniya mein sabke paas tumhaare jaisa sweet sa friend hota.

Atul: don't worry anjali tumhaara ye friend tumhe chodkar kabhi nahi jaayega aur vaise bhi maine to sabki care karna armaan se sikha hai . vo kabhi kisi ko dukhi nahi dekh pata na aur sab yahan tak ki tumbhi use itni impressed rehti ho.

hearing this anji got all the more pestered to talk to her dad as she knew that counting armaan's good qualities was impossible but still she might have to list up some in front of her father to convince him

Anjali: chale atul

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The difference between silence, smile and speaking is that when you speak you solve many problems in seconds, when you smile you forget many problems for seconds and when you are silent you avoid many problems for seconds
thanx all of u for your wonderful replies
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Amazing update
Love the way he understands her
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

thnkx 4 da pm shona nd ya plz dnt say dt ds part ws short nd meaningless it ws compltly superb nd ya in da next part i thnk u r gonna gve us a big treat ri8?

-luv anu

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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Hey gud part..
hope Shashank jaldi maan jaaye..
plz AR ko aur matt rulao..

nd thanx for the PM..😃

-Rucha
Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
hey kavya,
amazing part..loved it ..thanks 4 the pm..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
thanks 4 da pm kavya
n a brilliant part
love ur ff
sanaya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

hey kavya nice part loved the atul and anjali scene can't wait to read more continue soon😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
amazing update:)
thanx for the pm
plz update soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

HEY GUYS

I THOUGHT TO UPDATE THIS ROMANTIC AND SENSUOUS EPISODE AFTER THE DEPRESSION OVERTAKING THEIR LIFE😊
PART 8 GOES HERE
Part 8

In the engagement ceremony

Beautiful decoration is done all around with ridhima's favourite colours red and white (I hope you remember that all arrangements were done by armaan). There are beautiful chandeliers and the flowers are all mixed roses, orchids and lilies. Everything was out of this world just following the trend was ridhima's mind which was also out of that world. She was lost somwhere in the depth of his eyes. No , he was not there but the problem is that ridzi is seeing dreams with open eyes.

Sahil's mom and dad who were definitely the softest people in the whole place noticed this dullness on ridhima's face but decided to seek the clarification later

The ring ceremony was to take place after almost an half of an hour but that time to ridhima meant the costliest because it she was almost going to climb the first step of the ladder which didn't exctly reach her destiny instead took her away from it

She stood there shoulder to shoulder with sahil but did not feel comfortable, she moved away till she was in no physical as well as emotional touch with sahil and then she could not have guessed a situation worse than this in even the craziest nightmare, she again saw his reflection staring at her wide eyed and trying to catch a glimpe of hers. She wanted to pull herself out of this so she moved forward towards anjali but not before looking at him from the corner of her eyes. She imagined him once more

More she ran from him, more he puller her towards him and finally that made her stop, she wanted to turn back, to hug him and lose herself in his arms but was refrained from doing so by her thoughts, suddenly his passionate husky voice echoed in her ears

Jaanam dekhlo mit gayi duriyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she saw him walking towards her)

Music

(she imagined her self dancing with him)

Jaanam dekhlo mit gayi duriyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

Jaanam dekhlo mit gayi duriyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(he was again pacing towards her and was finally in close proximity with her)

Kaisi sarhadein kaisi majburiyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(he slowly yet affectionately and most of all out of possessiveness pulled upthe sleeve of her blouse which was slightly out of place and was revealing not much but to his eyes even that slight inch and revelation of her white skin was unbearable)

Tum chupa na sako gi main vo raaz hun

(she moved forward and raised her hand affectionately on his cheek making the others wonder what she is doing and then finally broke into an embrace)

Tum bhula na sako gi vo andaaz hun

(she felt his hand exploring her bare shoulder and back of neck and a shiver ran down her spine, which made her run forward blushing)

Gunjta hun jo dil mein to hairaan ho kyun

(she is looking all around her trying to find him and also wondering why all eyes are fixed on her)

main tumhaare hi dil ki to aawaaz hun

(she slightly raises her palm and caresses her heart and feels his arms on her shoulders hugging her from back and the words said right into her ears)

sun sako to suno dhadkanon ki zubaan

(she feels his arms snaking down her waist from the back and she was so close to him that she can hear his heartbeats)

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she looks all around her and all she can see is him in different poses)

Music goes on for sometime and there is a pause on the words

Finally the exchange of ring is taking place

Kaisi sarhadein kaisi majburiyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she sees him walking upstairs towards her room and his eyes summoning her)

(after the ring ceremony she just follows his footsteps)

Main hi main ab tumhaare khayalon mein hun

(she feels him pulling down her blouse shoulders and placing kisses and love bites all over making her gasp with every touch)

Main jawaabon mein hun main sawaalon mein hun

(she feels him all around her and exploring her perfect curves)

Main tumhaare har ek khwaab mein hun basa

(He slowly wraps a bedcover shoulder down and picks her up, she caresses his cheek)

main tumharee nazar ke ujaalon mein hoon

(he carries her to the washroom where the jacuzzi is perfect for a hot bath filled with milk and roses of various colours)

dekhti ho mujhe dekhti ho jahaan

(he settles down beside her in the jacuzzi her head resting on his bare chest)

main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(he is playing with tendrils of her hair)

Jaanam dekhlo mit gayi duriyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she feels him carrying her in his arms in a towel and then making her stand in her room near the candles which were the only source of light in the room at that time and they filled the entire room with a passionate, sexy, desirable and addictive aroma.

Kaisi sarhadein kaisi majburiyan

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she finds him zipping up her blouse and leaving a final peck on her shoulder while she just desired to pull him in a kiss)

Main yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan hun yahaan

(she rotates all around and wherever her eyes wander she can see him and only him)

(she sees him going away and looks at the leaving figures until it is completely out of sight)

I THOUGHT THAT THIS UPDATE WOUD BE LIKED BY TOU PEOPLE AS AR ARE TOGETHER THOUGH IN A DREAM

I HOPE YOU LIKE IT
A VERY BIG THANX FOR ALL THE WONDERFUL COMMENTS
KAVYA
DMGFANATIC😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww dat was soo cute!!!
really loved it,,hope they get together soon
i dont even know whats going to happen..its soo unpredictable and i love that
is arman goin to just let her get married and then years later they meet or is he going to stop the wedding???
thanx for an update soo soon and thanx for the pm
~anjie

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