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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: i-love-dr.rahul

mansi that was simply great!!!👏 it's getting interesting part by part..lol and loved the way rahul encouraged her for atta by dinner thing!!!! he's soo sweet yaar!!! please continue soon..dying to read more<br>



Aww..thanks Deep!! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

wow mansi !!! kya bolu ..lovely part .....loved the atta wala scene so much ... ...and the diary ..i thought Rahul k haath lag gayi .....i like the way ur connecting and completing the story .......cool man ..i cant tell u how anxious i m am to read the next part..plz try to update soon... the story is really getting interesting. Thank you so much for the Pm ....

With Love
Saba



Glad you could read it thru that. :) Thanks so much dear:) Im so happy that finally stuff's working out. Some comments actually sent a shiver down my spine! :P But now its okay. Thanks for ur comments. :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
brilliant!!!! it was too good!!!
& new idea of teeling the story to Ridz & Nikki is also fundu...i wasnt confused this time......
Continue soon....
I am extremy sorry 4 late reply...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey mansi please continue soon i really can't wait to read the next part!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
achha mansi.....why i didn know about this FF......i don't now remember how i discovered this one, because after i started reading this, i forgot everything else.....i read ur previous FF too but then i didn know u....but now that i know u, it feels amazing...u r a fantastic writer....well many already have told u that right...
coming back to ur "Kismet Ka Khel", u know that i love anything about RM....but reading this one was like seeing it all thru my own eyes....we all know that rahul-muskaan knew each other from the beginning n were supposed to get married n then they didn, n for some reason turned into enemies....but u gave a wonderful insight into their previous lives that we didn get to see on the show....that was quite refreshing...n i know that its a bit too late to say this now, but even without the twist u added, ur FF was GREAT!!!....n now with the new turn of events, its even more ROCKING!!....kudos to u girl...u r an amazing writer.....
Note: now that i've started to read this, u'll letme know whenever u update....i'm waiting for the next amazing update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi I'm a new member, and I really like yur ff. I'm also a big RM fan. Update sooon please.
~ Sabreena
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Posted: 16 years ago
u didn update...😡
i was having such a great time....n came here running for the update.....
mansiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.....u said u r gonna be busy for the weekend.....
mansi....shona..please update....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Last part on Pg-20!😃
PART - 7
All of them reported for their respective duties. It had been a hard week with many new patients. Muskaan was stressed out. She had never worked like this in her life. Maybe that what meant being a doctor. She under- stood that day, After a cup of coffee she went inside the path lab where her next duty was. She relaxed for a while calming her brain. She arranged the chemicals properly for the next test. Her mind wandered over various thoughts. The peon there voluntered to help her out. So while he arranged the chemicals she sat down and rested her head on the chair. Thoughts gathered her mind so much..that irritated she closed her eyes..which drifted her off to sleep. After the peon was done he left not noticing Muskaan sleeping. She slept for almost 15 mins without any disturbance. Rahul too them came inside for his duty. He was excited as his duty was with Muskaan. He hadn't spoken to her for the whole day..and during lunch also she acted pretty wierd. It seemed strange the way she behaved sometimes. But as he hurried to the room..he found her peacefully sleeping on the chair. They had three cases to work on..which needed to be sumbitted as soon as possible..but then his heart didnt want hm to disturb her. But then work comes first than romance. he smiled. He started speaking to himself loudly.

"Yahan pe kitna kaam pada hai..aur koi to gehre neend main hai..bas yahan Dr. Keerthi ki hi kami hai..woh aa jayenge to bada mazza aayega."

Muskaan stirred for a second. Her eyes felt droopy when she opened them at first. She yawned thinking she was still at home..in her cozy bed. But when she came back to reality..she noticed that she was not on a cozy , fluffy bed..but a wooden chair. It was the path lab..and Rahul was just standing above her. She quickly got up and adjusted her hair. She rubbed her eyes to distract his attention..which was completely on her.

"Sorry..woh main..mere aankh lag gaye thi.."

"Its okay Muskaan..relax. "

"Haan..main.." She went to the files on the oppossite side to rush through the chemicals..and the procedures. She immersed herself in the file not even wanting to take a look at him.

"Muskaan.." She looked up at him..and then quickly looked down.

"Kya hai?" She said her gaze still trying to read the file.

He walked to where she was. "Yahan dekhogi to bataunga na?"

"Kya?" She slowly looked into his eyes.

His right hand moved to her face..making her almost to tremble. He rubbed the black powder under her eyes. "Tumhara kajal smudge ho gaya."

"Oh." She turned away from him and tried to rub it away herself. When she was done. "Rahul..to hum kaam kare?"

"Hum kaam to kar sakte hai..leken pehle file to sedhi karo." He chuckled and put the file properly in her hands which was kept upside- down.

Muskaan turned red with embarssment. "Haan..main to bas wohi kar rahi thi."

Muskaan told herself to not act like a total idiot and make a fool of herself. She decided to be confident and do the work given. But then together working was like a cat and dog fighting. There hasnt been one day
where they had agreed on the same thing. They argued and argued on the chemicals to be put and what medication would be required. But Muskaan being the stubborn one did only what she thought was right.

"Rahul main bol rahi hun ke main sahi hun..matlab hun!" She was jus going to put the chemical in the solution. [Excuse..my chemistry is bad!]

He caught hold of her hand. "Nahin Muskaan tum sahi nahin ho! Please kabhi to meri baat suno!"

They started hand fighting..Armaan was passing by ..seeing them fight..in the path lab was almost worse.

"Guys tum dono kya kar rahe ho? Pagal ho gaye ho kya?"

With this Muskaan turned to scream at him and then a drop chemical went right inside Rahul's eye. "Oyye Armaan ke bacche! Phut yahan se." She screamed.

Armaan gave up and went off...and then Muskaan turned to see Rahul cursing her.

"Muskaan..you are such an idiot..tumne woh chemical mere aankh main dal diya!!" he said trying to open his eyes.

She was shocked. "Haiyyo Rabba maine?! Maine kuch nahin kiya..ye to woh..Armaan ne mujhe bulaya..is liye." She went close to him to see what happened. "Tum dekhao mujhe."

He went away from her.."Tum please mujhse dur hi raho..dusre aankh main dalne ke ka mujhe koi shauk nahin hai.." He said leaning against the wall.

But Muskaan didn't listen. She wet the end of her dupatta with water and rushed towards him. "Idhar dekhao."

"No..tum please dur hato."

"Chup! Aur kuch bola to ek chanta marunge." she said angrily showing her right hand.

He kept quite. She cleaned his eyes with the water..and then blew some air...she was so close that her lips touched his eyes. Its as if all the pain vanished..but he came back to reality and pushed her away a bit.

"Ab to theek hai na?" She murmered.

"Ya..Im fine..thanks."

The next few minutes were quite peaceful. They silently discussed what according to them was right..And after looking at the files..and patient history..they implemented both their ideas..and it was successful.

It was tea break and she promised Niki and Riddhima..that she would be there on time..to tell then another part of her story. And so they sat together patiently waiting for her to start.

"Okay..to phir kya hua?" Niki asked.

"Theeke.." Muskaan continued.

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Their vacation was over and it was time to return to Sanjeevani. When everybody came to know of their engagement..it seemed like a shock to them. But then nobody dare say anything to them. Days passed and life was pretty normal..duties..dinners with friends..everything kept happenning. Muskaan still drove home in her scooty..and she stated a reason..that now she was engaged..didnt mean she had Rahul to drop her on and off. She liked to be independent.

But once there was a huge storm followed with lighting. Rahul ordered that he would drop her home..and he wouldnt like any other comments. She eventually agreed. After he dropped her under her buliding..

"Oyye Rahul..ghar jake kya karoge? Uppar chalo saath dinner karte hai.."

"Tum dinner banoge..? Please..mujhe abhi marne ka koi shauk nahin hai." He screamed amongst the sound of the thunder.

"Piddhe..hum bahar se kuch manga lenge..main nahin banane waali kuch bhi." she replied angrily.

"Well..in that case..im having second thoughts..I dont mind.."

"To chalen..??"

"Okay.." He shut the car engine and rushed to the other side. He was completely drenched. When they reached her house..Muskaan realised that there was no current in her house.

"Lo ! ..is buddhu current ko bhi abhi jaana tha?" She said fumingly while searching for candles.

"Buddhu..aur current? Muskaan tum bhi na."

"Oyye tujhe kya karna hai."

"Whatever..tu candle dhund..main neeche watchman se light ke baare me puch ke aata hun."

"Okay.." She said amongst noises of dropping stuff in the dark..in search of candles.

Rahul had gone since five minutes..Muskaan was still searching for candles..and was in no luck. At that time she heard footsteps in the balcony..It couldnt be Rahul coz he had just gone down from the door and
hadnt returned. She trembled with fear..Already it was so dark..she walked a bit near there..mumbling..

"Rahul..tum ho kya..kahan ho tum..Rahul please mere saath ab koi mazak mat karna...main tumhe chodungi nahin." She felt somebody standing behind her..a shadow..and she screamed and screamed and plopped down on the sofa..her eyes close still screaming.

"Muskaan..main hun!!" Rahul said putting his phone light on her face.

She angrily got up and started hitting him..

"Arre mujhe mar kyun rahi hai.."

"Tu to neeche gaya tha na? Phir mere peeche kaise aa gaya?"

"Kyunki main neeche gaya hi nahin..kyunki mujhe ye yaad aaya..ke candles maine uss room main dekhi thi." He said pointing to two candles in his hand.

"Candles mil gaye?!" She snatched them from his hand.

"Haan..tujhe sharam nahin aati..mujhe pata hi tere ghar main candles kahan hai."

But she wasnt listiening. She happily started walking as if she was strolling in a park with a melody in her mind...and then she dashed the table so hard.

"Aaa..Rahul..mujhe lag gaye!!" She cried holding her leg..

"Muskaan..tere aankhen hai ya button..andhere main tujhe apne ghar ke baare main kuch nahin dikhta to shaadi ke baad mere ghar..." and then he stopped.

Muskaan couldnt see him properly..just his shadow. She smiled to what he said. They was an awkward silence.

"Muskaan tu theek to hai na?"

"Haan..main candles jala ke aate hun. Tu pizza order kar dega?"

"Ya..ill call.."

He went towards the land-line to call. He ordered the food and drinks..as he was about to hang up..Muskaan came rushing..

"Ek second mujhe do...hello..manager aapka naam kya hai?"

"Muskaan ye tu..?"

"Haan..to aap batiye ke pizza kitne time main aa yega? 45 minutes? acha theeke..agar ek minute bhi late huya na..main ek rupee nahin dungi. Samjhe..koi bahane nahin chalega." She said ignoring his comment.

"Muskaan!!"

"Chup..acha theeke..main phone rakhti hun. Yaad rakhna haan." and she hung up. Rahul kept on saying but she didnt listen..and again started strolling and all over again she dashed the table and this time she fell down.

"Very good..you deserve it!!"

"Rahul..!! Chup kar..aa mummyji mere per.." she cried.

With Rahul's help she got up and he odered her to sit down on the chair quietly. He lit the candles and sat oposite her. They remained quite for sometime..Rahul was glued to his phone...and Muskaan was bored.

"Rahul..yeh tu kya kar raha hai? Please rakh na..mujhe bore mar raha hai..aur waise tu kya kar raha hai?" She asked inqusitivley.

"Woh..kuch nahin..bas ek forward padh raha tha?"

"Kaisa forward..mujhe bata?" She moved her hand to grab the phone..but he moved it away.

"Bachon ke kaam ka nahin hai.."

"Main bachi nahin hun!!" She said angrily.

The last thing in the world was she reading his messages..

"Chod na Muskaan.."

"Agar tu aise behave karega..to mujhe tujhpe shak hoga.." She said staring at him.

"Sha..shak? Cmon Muskaan..acha woh sab chod..pata hai haan karne se pehle to maine tera interview bhi nahin liya.."

"Interview?" Her eye-brows shot up...but he was happy he changed the topic.

"Haan..interview.." He leaned on the table.."Jab ladka ladki ko dekhne aata hai..tab woh you know..sawal-jawab karta hai.."

"Oh..." She wondered that he had that much guts to ask her.."Tujhe mera interview lena hai.." she said sweetly..but in a mean way...

"Ya..kyun koi problem hai?" he trembled.

"Chal..lele..tu bhi kya yaad rakhega.." She said chirpily.

He was suprised at her behaviour.."Okay..to hum aise behave karenge ke hum bilkul unkonw hai..okay?" She nodded.

"To mera pehla question..aapka naam kya hai?"

"Mera naam..okay..Muskaan Chaddha.."

"Hmm..kuch khaas nahin hai..but no worries..baad main to change ho hi jayega..."

"Oyye rukja..!!"

"Kya hua?" he asked in a confused state.

"Acha..huye ye baat samne aayegi..main kuch clear karna chahate hun.."

"Clear.?"

"Haan..shaadi ke baad main apna surname..nahin change karungi.."

"Leken kyun?"

"Kyuuuuuuun? Chup kar..bachpan se mera yahi naam hai..aur mujhe ye pasand hai..to main kisi aur ke liye kyun badlun?"

"Hey..but thats not fair.."

"Interview lena hai na aage?" she questioned.

"Okay fine..mera next question..umm..aapki hobbies kya hai?"

She smiled.."Mere hobbies na badi intresting hai.."

"Really..?? Jaise??"

"Baatien karna..magazines padhana..picturen dekhna..aur romantic gaane suna.." She said excitedly.

"Oh wonderful..mujhe laga aap..cooking..aur cleaning n stuff bolenge.."

"Mr. Rahul Garewal..Apko biwi chaiye ya kaam waali bai?"

"Okay..to mera next question..apko cooking me kya aata hai?"

"Cooking..usme to mujhe bahut kuch aata hai.."

"Ya?"

"Haan..omlete banana..chai banana..boiled ande banana..papad sekna.."

"Itna kuch ? Wow?" He said sacrarstically. She gave a proud smile. "What was a waste you are Muskaan..tumhe khana banana bhi nahin aata?"

"Oyye..itna sab kuch to aata hai?"

"Haan haan..actually tujhe gas chalana aata hai..woh hi bahut badi baat hai.."

"Gas..? Main ye sab gas main nahin banate.."

"To phir?"

"Microwave main..button kholo..plate main dalo..aur 30 seconds pe rakho do..garama-garam chai..papad..omelete sab ban jata hai..easy way main.." She acted the procedure and showed it to him.

"To tum sab kuch microwave main banate ho?"

"Koi problem..??"

"Nahin no problem.." he lied.

"Acha..waise tum chai peoge? Main banau?"

"N..no..thanks"

"Acha..waise tumne mera interview le liya..ab meri baari.."

"Tum mera interview kyun logi? Main ekdum normal hun.."

"To kya main abnormal hun?"

"Maine aisa kab kaha.."

"Chado..okay..to ye meri list hai..jo maine bahut pehle banaye thi..main padthi hun.." She took out a long list from the draw.

Shaadi ke baad surname nahin change karungi..woh to anyways clear ho gaya.

Har mahine tum mujhe apna credit card doge..shopping ke liye.. "What kyun?" But she ignored him.

Hafte main teen baar main bahar khana khuange.

Main ghar ka koi kaam nahin kaungi..mujhe to naukar chaiye hai.

Tum mujhe har hafte ek picture dikhaoge.

Mere saath super-market chaloge..

"Hold on..hold on..mazak band bhi karo Muskaan.."

"Mazak kaun kar raha hai?"

"Main kahan mazak kar rahi hun...main to bilkul serious hun!!"

"What.....??" But he was interrupted by the door bell. "Pizza is here! Finally."

But Muskaan looked straight to the wall clock.

"Yes. Pure 20 min late."

"Kya?"

"Tum ruko..main kholte hun.." She went and opened the door. "Aaye..finally aap gaye.."

"Ji madam..ye liye jiye apka pizza.."

"Bhai sab aap pure 20 min late hain."

"Ji madam woh baarish ki wajah se traffic......"

She cut him. "Main koi bahane nahin sune waali hun..maine apke manager is pehle hi baat kar li thi..main ek rupee nahin dene waali."

"Muskaan..ye tu kya keh rahe hai..traffic hogi..is liye late ho gaye." Turning to the man. "Kitna huya.."

"Sir..Rs. 445."

"Nahin Rahul mat do..ruko.." She called up the manager.

"Dekhiye sir..main Rahul Garewal ki taraf se bol rahi hun.."

"Ji kaun..jin hone abhi order diya tha.?."

"Ji haan..maine aap se baat ki thi..aur kaha tha..ke agar ek minute bhi late huya to main paise nahin bharunge.."

"Madam..aap baat to samjhiye.."

"Kyun samjhun main apki baat..dekihye aap anpe baat se mud rahe hai." she shouted.

"Muskaan kya kar rahi hai..bas kar.."

"Oyye Rahul..chup re na.."

"Par.."

"Haan..ji to main kya keh rahe thi..main paise nahin dene waali.."

After much argument.

"Acha theeke madam main apko 25% free kar deta hun."

"Acha ji..sirf 25% kyun? Mujhe pura bill free chaiye..aap apne upar koi aadmi ko dijiye.."

Rahul felt helpess looking at the poor delivery boy.

"Bechare mere bacche kabse bhuke behte hai..aur aap aise nakhre kar rahe hai?"

"Bache?" Rahul echoed. The pizza boy tried to look around..but Muskaan stopped him.

"Acha madam..aap please pura bill free le lejiye.."

"Ye huye na baat..chaliye ab aap apne admi se keh dijiye."

"Dekho tum suno..ye madam ko bill free dedo..samjhe." The manager said to the delivery boy.

When they left..and it was all okay..

"Muskaan..pata hai..tum pure ki pure pagal hai!!!"

"Oyye maine tumhare Rs. 500 bacha diye.."

"Aur woh tum kya bachon ki baat kar rahi thi..to woh admi andar dhund raha tha.."

Muskaan glared at him..and both started giggling.

"Woh kya hai na..sab bacho ki baat sun kar pighal jaate hai..leken tumhare alwa..hmph!"

"Tum agar dusron se bachon ki baat karogi..to koi bhi bache pasand karna chod dega..kisiko cricket team nahin banane.." he chuckled.

"Par maine to sirf paanch bache bola tha..tuna kameena..itni gandi si baten karta hai..cricket team..matlab gyarha [11] tujhe main chodungi nahin.."

Rahul burst out laughing. "Gyrah nahin 16 with substitues!!

"Rahul!!" She screamed.
He started running around the house.

Their cat and mouse chase continued..until by mistake..they ran out to the open balcony where it was still raining.

Rahul immeditaley came inside..but Muskaan stood there getting drenched.

"Muskaan..kya kar rahi hai..bheeg jayegi.."

"Rahul..main to already bheeg chuki hun..Tu bhi aa na bhar.."

"No thanks..par tum please andar aa jao.."

After much on his insistence she came and sat next to him on the steps..they shared light moments together..Though they remained quite..some how after a long time their hearts spoke..the dark..the rain..had made their lives turn in to a total new side..which brought them even more closer.

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Nikita and Riddhima remained quite..they actully just smiled..seeing Muskaan lost in her own world. But she back to reality when Rahul waved at her...................

OMG..it became too long..anways enjoy! =D
Edited by -Mansi- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow!! a Looooooooooooooong update!! 😳 Thnx!! 🤗

P.S. it's not my comment.. that will come later.. 😆
Edited by rapi_c - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Mansi, thanks for updating, not readed it yet, but will comment soon after reading.

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