Kismet Ka Khel -RM FF-Part 15- Pg52(31/12) - Page 20

Originally posted by: anastasia21

reserving this one...coz i'll comment after reading...thanx for keeping ur word...love ya....

Edit:

so it starts on good note, with medical things, which besides other things, i love about this....them working, disagreeing, then fighting n sorta making up.....is the basic essence of RM.....u alwaz maintained that in all ur parts....

Yeah..Sonia says that too! Thanks!😳

this part has no low-points...i read it in one go, n by the end of it, i had a big smile on my face😃Oops..i read HAD low points..but m glad it didnt!😉

😃.....there r some particular lines of rahul, that made me fall in love with rahul all over again...

1.He walked to where she was. "Yahan dekhogi to bataunga na?"

2.His right hand moved to her face..making her almost to tremble. (adore rahul for having such an effect on muskaan) true!😳

3."Hum kaam to kar sakte hai..leken pehle file to sedhi karo." He chuckled and put the file properly in her hands which was kept upside- down.

4."Muskaan..tere aankhen hai ya button..andhere main tujhe apne ghar ke baare main kuch nahin dikhta to shaadi ke baad mere ghar..." and then he stopped (😆😆😆) Eee..i loved this line personally too!!😛

absolutely loved when....."She cleaned his eyes with the water..and then blew some air...she was so close that her lips touched his eyes. Its as if all the pain vanished.."

n the final one should be.....

"Bechare mere bacche kabse bhuke behte hai..aur aap aise nakhre kar rahe hai?"

"Bache?" Rahul echoed......

....."Par maine to sirf paanch bache bola tha..tuna kameena..itni gandi si baten karta hai..cricket team..matlab gyarha [11] tujhe main chodungi nahin.."

Rahul burst out laughing. "Gyrah nahin 16 with substitues!!.....

u have an excellent comic-sense......i was never bored for a single moment.....u kept me wanting for more....n though it was a long update...it finished in a flash😕....

Im suprised got this part was still incomplete..i wrote it in a hurry..but im glad it turned out to be pretty okay..😳😛

i have a question though, its about the chronology....the part where muskaan breaks the engagement, is yet to come na??? Yes..im gonna drag it like a chewing gum!! Lolzz!

otherwise, love it, love it, love it......please update the next part soon....no pressure though....lolz....

PS: am curious about the forwarded msg that rahul refused to show to muskaan....what was it???It was random..an adult msg..thats all..Rahul doesnt want Muskaan to knw he gets such msgs!😉

n secondly, i never knew, omlette could be cooked in a microwave.....mine turned out a disaster....n boiling eggs are also a strict no-no for micro.....i guess...i'm sorry...coudn refrain...😛😛😛

Okay..so this is a blooper..coz im a total veggie..I was sure abt omelete n papad n chai..nt boiled eggs..sorry!😳

ANd finally thanks so much Ari..i usually never reply to comments..but now you made me too!!!!🤗

Originally posted by: sweetsugar

Mansi fristly THANK YOU so much for updating ...i was actually getting so bored studying economic and i signed in praying to god tat let someone update their FF today ..and after few mins of signing in i c ur PM .....awwwwwwwww ur such a sweetheart🤗

Aww..thanks!!🤗

coming to the part ....man really every time i read ur update u leave me wanting for more n more ...just cant get enough of it ......some parts were really hilarious eg. Bechare mere bacche kabse bhuke behte hai..aur aap aise nakhre kar rahe hai......totally unexpected i was laughing holding my stomuch.🤣....16 with substitutes lol 😆that was nice hehehe.......

Thanks!!😳😳

Chup! Aur kuch bola to ek chanta marunge - i like the way she ordered him ...and he actually sat back quite haiiiiii 😍...her dhamki apparently worked lol..Rahul is like that!!😉

really lovely part👏 ......i m feeling so refereshed after reading ur update dear thank u so much

Thanks so much for the awsome comment Saba!!😳😃

Originally posted by: Sab93

thanks for the PM and update!

i read the part, and I loved it, soo cute when rahul got the chemical in his eye, and muskaan was like lemme help, soo adorable.

''Rahul burst out laughing. "Gyrah nahin 16 with substitues!!

"Rahul!!" She screamed.'' that was succhh a funny part.

omg, the precap, makes me wanna kno wat happens next soo bad.

well thanks again, and keep up yur wonderful writng!!!😊

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey mansi it was awesome!!!!!!

Heyy Mansiiii😳 Sucha a Marvellous update Luvd it loadzzz 😳 Pizza scence was Just hilariously funny Mukaaaan Bhi nahh soo Ziddi 😆 😆 😆